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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: minidixit

Aksar sochte hain kis kis line ki tareef ki jaaye

Saara post hi hota jo hai kamaal apka

Kahin laajawab hota hai koi sawaal to

Kahin hota hai bemisaal khayaal apka'

Yeh thoda zaada filmi ho gya to lets get to the point'.

Kunaal effect!!😃

Yeh kuch lines hain jinhe humne superlike kiya

Jaane Govt ne fir LPG ka price kyun hike kiya

(Wah Taj..!!)

👍🏼

ab mein apne munh kya mian mitho banoon
jitna aboor aap ko hai, mujhe itna hasil nahin
aap aise shabdhon mein meri tareef karen
yaqeen jaaniye mein iss qaabil nahin
Funny lines ko sahi pick kya, aap ka taste bahut acha hai
Ab mein aisi baatein kyun na likhon. dil toh abhi bacha hai
Edited by SlingShooter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: pritirays

These are my fav. lines! 😆

Thanks for running home and reading it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mindblowing...I m speechless of your way of writing !!
Having so much fun to read this amazing piece !! 👏😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: princess1

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Mindblowing...I m speechless of your way of writing !!
Having so much fun to read this amazing piece !! 👏😳😳

Thanks your highness. Ye bhi Gulaal ka kamal hai. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Swarley

Slingshooter ji kya kehne aapke, le aaye phir kavita nayi
Kavita mein likh daale aapne episode ke minute details kai
Roti Gulaal ke crow feet par diya tha humne bhi dhyaan
Zikr kar diya kavita mein iska, aap hain shayar mahan.

Gulaal ne acting ki do cheezen ki master,
How to move your hands while shaking your head faster.
Uski phati aakhen taktaki mein aisi thi jami,
Mahishasur ka vadh kar deti, bas trishool ki thi kami.

(for your reference:
http://www.westbengaltourism.gov.in/application/Img_Maint/uploads/6/Durga_10.jpg

and

http://i893.photobucket.com/albums/ac135/AbeerLeher/album2/MozillaFirefox300244815-21-06.jpg )

Kesar ki bhi samajh na aaya kaise kare woh emote,
Phenke pane haath pair ya kapkapaye apne honth.
OMG kya karoon main, Gulaal ko kaise behlaoon,
Kandhe pakad ke jhinjhodoon usko ya gale se lagaoon.

Apne mata pita ka Kesar ko nahin hai zara bhi khayal,
Isliye CVs ne bheja Reva ko karne unki dekh bhaal.
Tambakhu chabati hain PaanBa, baat karte nikalta hai MotaBha ka dum,
Baithe hain andhere mein bhookhe pyaase, baanten apna gham.

Soch vicjar ke Kesar Gulaal se bola, har dukha mein tera main saath doonga,
Pehle phenkoonga nadi mein, phir CPR bhi main hi doonga.
Kis khajoor mein atak gayi hai soch zara O Gullu,
Hit mein tere yahi hai, bacha le is nadaan se apna pallu.

Thanks.
Aap toh mujh se bhi 2 haath agay hain.
Dhyaan se, yeh meri zulf nahin, topi ke dhagey hain

Kesar got a chance to give Gulaal CPR when she drowned, but instead he turned her on her stomach. He is into different stuff I guess. 😲

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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: docnuss

Agar mein woh sab na kehta, aur chup rehta
Toh abhi iss show ke aur 100 episode reh gaye hotay

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kamal ki shairi ki hai aap ne...kia baat hai...
or title tou khub hee rakha hai aap ne...
maza aagaya parh kar...😉

Thanks. 😊
aapko parh ke mazaa aya, zahey naseeb
magar iss mazay ke paise nahin hain
hum aur bhi shair keh dainge muft mein
kyun ke hum Raman jaise nahin hain 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: SlingShooter

Thanks.
Aap toh mujh se bhi 2 haath agay hain.
Dhyaan se, yeh meri zulf nahin, topi ke dhagey hain

Thanks for replying.

Zulf nahin topi ke dhaage hain?
lagta hai ganj chhupane ke iraade hain,
Khan ma khwan yoon sharm na kijiye,
Hair weaving ka sahara le lijiye,
Saare heroes no kiya is raste drive,
doobte careers ko kiya revive.


Kesar got a chance to give Gulaal CPR when she drowned,
Was he the one who tossed her in? 😊 Sorry for my lack of knowledge.
but instead he turned her on her stomach. He is into different stuff I guess.
😲
To each his own. As long as they are fine with it. 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
ye aap ki narazgi ka izhar hai
kuch likha bhi nahin kuch kaha bhi nahi
hum toh iss intezaar mein sookh ke rahey gaye
abhi tum tareef karo ge humari, tum ne chaha hi nahi 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by SlingShooter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: SlingShooter

ye aap ki narazgi ka izhar hai
kuch likha bhi nahin kuch kaha bhi nahi
hum toh iss intezaar mein sookh ke rahey gaye
abhi tum tareef karo ge humari, tum ne chaha hi nahi 😃



Sabse akhir mein jawab diya woh bhi 2 din baad,
aur main naraaz hoon, yeh kar rahe hain fariyaad?
Tareef to nahin ki humne kam,
par mila nahin editor mein cancel button,
to bhej di morse code mein aapke liye daad. 😃

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