A Stone's Throw Away - *complete* Pg 14 - 02/01

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: JZephyr

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without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

^^ 🤣 Oh Piyu, you're one whacko here!

btw - I really like that line in your signature space 😳

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: JZephyr
^^🤣Oh Piyu, you're one whacko here!

btw - I really like that line in your signature space😳

Bole to 😲😲maine itni mehnat se itna serious reply diya..and you calling me a whacko😭

Jzee hui..haste haste lot pot

lagta hai teri niyat mein hai khot😡

BTW I will share a little secret with you..The signature line I churofied from my mum's diary...who has this habit of collecting quotes..and has a whole khazana of her diaries...Well that line is inspired from the kshanbhangurwaad philosophy of buddhism..which says that..every thing is changinfg..nothing is everlasting or permanent..so we should not be proud of beauty..it is not long lasting..thus detachment from worldy pursuits even while living in this world..makes your life worthwhile

dekho..main kya gyaan de rahi hun

This is also very well explained in saint Kabir's dohas...where he says that one should not be proud of youth and beauty...coz they are shortlived..just like the flower of palaash or tesu..which blooms only during phalgun..ie..in spring season..near holi...Its flowers...are bright orange and are used for making organic gulaal..its bloom is shortlived and for the rst of theyear..it looks barren even without leaves...So one should not boast about beauty and youth..coz they are not longlasting...

Phew..itnagyaan mujhe shobha nahi deta

Jzee ne kaha mujhe whacko

koi mere dil k andar bhi jhaanko

is mein bhi hai thodi si sensitivity

lagati hun full stop..band karti hun ghatiya shayari ki creativity🤢

Edited by manzilmukul - 14 years ago

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alanta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

You have amazed me always with your excellent and unique writing style, I hope I could guess you from any of the literal works of you in future.

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Gman

@Gman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

JZephyr, It was brilliant post and thoroughly enjoyed it as I have watched this scene over and over again and know the lines by heart, honestly.😳 Sometimes I can shock myself. 🤢 I did not have difficulty to understand this post probably for reason above mentioned.

Amazingly your description to Kesars' expression are so well matched. and beautifully expressed. Will wait your post for next scene.

Thank you dear.😃

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prachurya

@prachurya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Oh God, I relived that scene again through your writing! I always thought that this particular scenes had so many emotions and you just described each and everything I cud make out of it watching it over and over again plus somethings which were not visible to me. Thanks Jzee, I feel the warmth of Gulsar's chemistry.

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Bole to 😲😲maine itni mehnat se itna serious reply diya..and you calling me a whacko😭
Jzee hui..haste haste lot pot
lagta hai teri niyat mein hai khot😡

Arrre!! Ni! That was in the good way yaar! Kya tu bi! Meri niyat mein khot nahin hai (Gulaal style) 😆

BTW I will share a little secret with you..The signature line I churofied from my mum's diary...who has this habit of collecting quotes..and has a whole khazana of her diaries...Well that line is inspired from the kshanbhangurwaad philosophy of buddhism..which says that..every thing is changinfg..nothing is everlasting or permanent..so we should not be proud of beauty..it is not long lasting..thus detachment from worldy pursuits even while living in this world..makes your life worthwhile
dekho..main kya gyaan de rahi hun
This is also very well explained in saint Kabir's dohas...where he says that one should not be proud of youth and beauty...coz they are shortlived..just like the flower of palaash or tesu..which blooms only during phalgun..ie..in spring season..near holi...Its flowers...are bright orange and are used for making organic gulaal..its bloom is shortlived and for the rst of theyear..it looks barren even without leaves...So one should not boast about beauty and youth..coz they are not longlasting...

Thanks for sharing that beautiful history to the siggie liner Piyu, like I said, I really liked it! While it can be interpreted just the way you're explaining, the amazing thing about simply profound lines is, they can always be perceived subjective to situation. This one, I shall remember!
Phew..itnagyaan mujhe shobha nahi deta
Jzee ne kaha mujhe whacko
koi mere dil k andar bhi jhaanko
is mein bhi hai thodi si sensitivity
lagati hun full stop..band karti hun ghatiya shayari ki creativity🤢

^^ And comes another 😆 your stock is endless *bows* 😆

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: alanta
You have amazed me always with your excellent and unique writing style, I hope I could guess you from any of the literal works of you in future.

Could you Alanta? That would be interesting. Everyone does tend to have characteristic style of writing, but variation is definitely a trick to pick! We did have a grade class one term which involved a month long assignment with weekly due reports over analyzing typical writing characteristics which distinguish some of the most popular authors.

Thank you for the comment - I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, and appreciated the writing 😳

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Gman
JZephyr, It was brilliant post and thoroughly enjoyed it as I have watched this scene over and over again and know the lines by heart, honestly.😳 Sometimes I can shock myself. 🤢 I did not have difficulty to understand this post probably for reason above mentioned.

Amazingly your description to Kesars' expression are so well matched. and beautifully expressed. Will wait your post for next scene.

Thank you dear.😃

@bold - Gina, on the other hand, the fact that you've seen the scene so many times over and still like the piece makes me very happy! Words are not always the best replacement to expressions - especially when the latter have been as well executed as in our show... I'm glad you could connect the expressions and the description the way you say!

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: prachurya
Oh God, I relived that scene again through your writing! I always thought that this particular scenes had so many emotions and you just described each and everything I cud make out of it watching it over and over again plus somethings which were not visible to me. Thanks Jzee, I feel the warmth of Gulsar's chemistry.

It was undeniably hard to write. I sat at it quite a few times dishing out few lines a time, but the final draft that I have posted is nothing from the initial drafts, I scraped them all and did this one in a go ... and realized that the flow served my purpose whether! Not only are these characters complex, and their emotions and expressions sometimes impossible to word - but the brilliance of the scene execution just sets expectation so high! I'm happy you liked it even more hence!