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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta

phir se surprise..Thaaankks but😭

but matlab..? 😭 sorry yaar...main saare res ek saath unres kar rahi thi..issliye chotu ho gaya...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
kirthi dear..thanks a lot for the reply..Ok yaar i am happy with anything...but I my self felt that it might have not lived to your expectations and so just said..ithna tho bantha hein na😳
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I too dont want to hurt Kesar in any way..but kya karu??honi ko kaun taal saktha hein
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Alanta...aisi baat nahi hai yaar...me love ur DS very much yaar...waiting for ur next update yaar...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Woow 😲 what a lovely chapter 😆
pls do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago


Adeet ka Saaya

[In the morning Kesar opened his eyes to find himself laying comfortably on the bed under the blanket, he woke up, bit shocked and confused and he felt a slight ache on his left arm as he spent more than half the night in an uncomfortable posture, as he started gently massaging down his shoulders, he was reminded of the previous night and a lovely smile ran across his face, Suddenly he noticed that Gulaal was standing at the door and he swiftly jumped out of the bed with the blanket, Gulaal entered the room]

Kesar:(a little nervous, started jibbrishing):Mein ..woh... Gulaal, meine ...mera matlab..kal patha nahin chala ki kab aankh lag gayi aur mein aise sogayi dhi yahaan...aur mein ..anjaane mein..(helpless tone)muje galath mat samachna..
(Gulaal struggled hard to control her laugh and got hold of the blanket..Kesar was calmed by seeing Gulaal is comfortable..and he leaves the blanket to her..as Gulaal begins to fold it Kesar walked 2 steps further and came back with a mischievious smile, stood behind her and bent towards her ear and hold her shoulders)
Kesar(whispered in her ear): Waise pichle kuch dino se muje bahut dara diya tu ne..
(Gulaal turned her face confused, and it brushed with his due to their proximity, meanwhile Paanba came their calling out her name)
PB:Gulaal...(and on seeing them she suddenly stopped her way at the door as she felt embarrased on intervening in such a moment b/w the two and some how she manged to speak looking here and there)
PB:Beta ..wo..zara pooja ghar jaakar dekhna ki ..wahan sab teek hein..kal subah samay nahin milega aur ..mein aur Jamuna rasoi mein honge..
(Gulaal was breaked from the closeness as soon as they heard Paanbaa's voice)
Gulaal:Ji Paanba (Paanba swiftly left)
(Paanba..was encaged in a monologue on her way to the kitchen)
PB(hits her head):Mein bhi kithni be akal hun kabhi kabhi..darwase par khatkhatana tho chahiye tha na muje..(and smiles)
(Sudha in the kitchen was amused to see her like this)
Sudha:Ap khud hi kyun muskuraa rahe hein??
PB:Arey kuch nahin kuch nahin(laughs it off) beta tu zara pooja ghar jaa na..Gulaal hogi waha..uski matat kar lena..mein aur Jamuna milkar yahaan ki kaam sambhal dethe hein
Sudha(smiling):Ji (she leaves)
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[Gulaal was sitting in the pooja ghar and arranging things there..as she saw a similar picture and atmosphere her mind tranced to her nightmare..and the words echoed in her mind]
Kise dund rahi ho??Kesar ko??(laughs) mat dundo na..nahin milne waala
Mein??Mein wahi hun jo teri zindgi ko tujse cheen ne ko aaya hein..
(Sudha called out her and only then she woke from the trance with a shock)
Sudha(teasingly):Lagtha hein tera mann yahan nahin hein..
(Gulaal tried to squeeze out a smile and resumed her work)
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[Dushyanth was about to leave for the factory when he recieved a call in his phone and confused to see a strange number]
Dushyanth:Hello(confused)
(He was shocked to hear the voice at the other end and tried to clear his doubt)
Dushyanth(in disbelief):Kaun ho thum??
Voice(taunting):Mein??arey ithni jaldi bhul gayi??Mein hi hun Dushyanth tera sab se khareebi dosth(tauntingly laughs)
Dushyanth(still couldnt believe:Tum??Tume tho iss waqt..(the voice interfered)
Voice:Tum shaayad bhul gaye ho ki mein apna kaanoon khud banatha hun..milthe hein bahut jald hi..
(cuts the call and it was none other than Durgesh while Dushyanth was shocked out of his wits)
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Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

Alanta...aisi baat nahi hai yaar...me love ur DS very much yaar...waiting for ur next update yaar...


Thanks dear. updated
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kesar04

Woow 😲 what a lovely chapter 😆

pls do update soon

meine ithni emotional chappi laya aur tuje lovely dikh rahi hein😆
Thanks Kesar. updated
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it but it is small.want a bigger episode.the small moment between Kesar and Gulaal was nice😳Panba became the KMH unintentionally😆so who is that calling Dushyant and why is he scared?please write a big chapter next time😭enjoyed it a lot.please update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minizz

loved it but it is small.want a bigger episode.the small moment between Kesar and Gulaal was nice😳Panba became the KMH unintentionally😆so who is that calling Dushyant and why is he scared?please write a big chapter next time😭enjoyed it a lot.please update soon😊

Mini thank u so much dear but tune pura chappi nahin pada???.phir se pad ke dekh and small chapter because now I have to rush for the weekend classes..next time pakka ME dungi..
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
arre I missed it.sorry about it😆thanks😊

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