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Originally posted by: Keithuu

alanta...i loved it...😳

but romantic scene mein break...kab continue hoga..?

tu jhankana ko bhi wapas laaing...haha...but very nice...i lubb the way u write...😳

ab dushy ko bhi sukoon milega...😃

kesu irritate ho gaya...waah...m loving it...😳

yaar..jaldi update kar...warna main tujhe danda maarungi...mujhse intezaar nahi hota...😳

Originally posted by: arti07

oh wow seemed like watching actual show .It means a lot dear that too from you..gulaal will be galool exactly and kesar is now irritated good for him we get some push pull only wen he is irriated i think we will see some nok jhok or ahem ahem in next chapii and the girl for dushyant 😲i never knew there was a girl for him jhankana is Duggus sis and she loved him will watch the show now to understand panba and motaba character is intact so good to see it and JK turns a good mother is such a relief...

very nice chapii alanta and now where is part two😳

Originally posted by: Kesar04

wow alanta that was amazing just loved it 👏

thank you for adding more 🥳

it is very well written extreamly possessive

yeah its just like waiting for harry potter and the deathly hallows part 2 😆

just like they say sabar ka phal meeta hota hai⭐️

sorry ive got to go my triplet brothers wont let me live in peace they are like this all the time😈😈😈

please do update soon👏

Originally posted by: minizz

yay ...update.was just about to log out saw this😃

Just finished reading.loved the exclusive Gulaal-Kesar episode.Kesar's letter writing continues even now 😃but I loved the letter.so emotional😭He understands her so well.He knows something is bothering her and she is keeping it from him.loved it.

Gulaal,bechari she is scared of loosing him.She has already lost Vasant now if she looses him she will lose her will to live as Daiba said.you have expressed her fear so beautifully through that nightmare.loved the comforting scene and Talli ka influence😆 -"Kesar Tu bahut bura hain"but its so sweet in this situation and the way he teases her.ver cute.loved it.please update soon😊

Originally posted by: MR21

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Alanta...ohh lovely update yaar...kesar n gulaal scene is so realistic...waiting for the next update dear...

Originally posted by: bioinfo

fear of loss part one and two both are lovely updates 👏, loved them alanta 😃kesgul scenes are so realistic😃

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Alanta very beautiful chappi 👏and very emotional too.😭.Keep going dear desperately waiting for the update🤗

Originally posted by: Keithuu

alanta...superb chappies dear...👏

sorry for the chotu comment..tu jaldi se next chappi update kar...😳

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

wow alanta wow wow wow lovely yar, i m dumbfounded now, superb scenes u have written yar, i love them, ahhh again i say kaash aise scenes serial men hotay per no prob, tu likh rahi hai na hamare liye 🤗 love u dear, excellently written, ab next scene kab update karegi 😃

Originally posted by: arti07

what a lovely chapii i could really imagine it happening infront of my eyes y the show ended so soon y cant we have such sweet moments there😭😭

really this DS just looks like original show i love it to core lovely chapii alanta 👏👏👏