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sauris

@sauris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Alanta u write really well,par yeah kya chappi shuru hote hi khatam ho gayi,yaar thoda bada chappi dede aur kesar gulal pe jyada time de.ab jaldi se update kar

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

nice chapii so durgesh is back i guess😛 gulaal smiled thank god and PB was all blush blush how cute lovely update alanta

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Sree

@Katyayani_devi

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

short n sweet chapter. oh the voice is durgesh 😈 so wats next updt soon

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MR21

@MR21

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Alanta...Durgesh is back😲...loved the morning scene between gulaal n kesar😳...PB is KMH😆...nice update...waiting for your next update...

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Alanta.🤗.The morning scene between KG was so nice😳...Loved it..👏Par I demand more KG scenes.😭.mujhe bada wala chappi chahiye.😭.pleeezzz..😛Aur Duggu wapas aya kya...Oye I just lubbed his character par show axe ki jaldi mein kya kiya😡..aur sara time original show par Talli kha gayi..😡

Lubbed the update..👏dear par I want bada wala chappi now😭

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prachurya

@prachurya

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Sorry was ghayab for 2 days! Read both the updates. Both of them were superb! I love the fact that Kesar is still writing her letters as he once himself admitted that he cud express himself better through letters. He keeps his dilemmas and questions aside so that i cannot trouble Gulaal . I loved the morning scene, it was too cute! So, durgesh is back! Now what is he after? Lets c Kesar never saw Durgesh so awaiting his reaction if he sees him😆. Lovely write up, Atlanta. Do update soon!

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: minizz
arre I missed it.sorry about it😆thanks😊

ithna bada fact tune kaise miss kiya...😆you are always welcome..

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: sauris
Alanta u write really well,par yeah kya chappi shuru hote hi khatam ho gayi,yaar thoda bada chappi dede aur kesar gulal pe jyada time de.ab jaldi se update kar

Thank u so much sauris..sorry yaar I was a little busy today..next time bada wala hi hoga pakka