O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26 - Page 11

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Part 12

After poonam’s unexpected talk all becomes silent amd the twolovers where were lost in each other

Guddan- lagta hai koi yaha ho kr bhi yaha ni hai kyu Dr. Akshat

Akshat (with shock)- ni ni esa kuch ni main toh vo bus

Guddan- relax why are you behaving like this, hum toh in do ke baremain baatkr rahe hai and she signals towards poonam and angad

Akshat (in relief)- oh haan yeh dono

Guddan pats poonam’s sholders and and asked akshat to do the samewith angad and like an obedient child he do so but after taking some selfieswith them without making a noise

Guddan- vase agar tum chaho toh aj bhi date pr ja sakti hain mausumbhi acha hai aur aunty ki fikr mat kro hum aunty ko koi excuse de denge

Poonam- kya yaar guji tum bhi na

Guddan- arey ab humne kya galat bola hai ese humare saath ho kr bhitum dono humare saath ni ho toh isse acha toh tum akele hi kahi chale jao na

Akshat(in mind)- aur hume bhi thodi der akela chod do

Angad- arey ni Dr. Guddan vo toh hum bus yu hi…

Guddan- bus bus ab hume explanation dene ki zarorat ni hai saying this she starts laughing with the three and like this their chit chat was continue and she was enjoying her coffee with ice cream and some of the icecream was their near her lips which she didn’t notice

Poonam- so my dear guji if you are done toh kya hum ghar chalen

Guddan- haan humare toh ho gaya tum dono apna batao…

Poonam- guji plz stop it na ab bus bhaut o gaya

Guddan- ok baba ab ni bolungi ab chalo

Guddan was picking her bag and about to go when

Akshat- aahh Dr. Guddan vo tumhare chere par ice cream lagi hai

Guddan- kaha

Akshat- right side pr

Guddan (wiping her face)- ab thik hai

Akshat- ni thoda aur niche

Guddan- ab

Akshat- thoda thoda left

Guddan tries but she didn’t get his signal so at last he offer her help to which she forwarded him the tissue and akshat wipe her face in this process his hands touches her lips both where lost in each other but soon get back to the reality when Akshat’s phone starts ringing it was angand who was calling him from outside

Guddan (hesitantly)- hmm thanks, ab hume chalna chahiye

Akshat- yep after you

After their way to hostel akshat was totally lost in her and same was with guddan she was also some where lost in him she drop poonam to her house and went to her home in that way only then her thought was broke by some lady’s scream and she realised that she hit an old lady with her scooter she immediately stop there and come to help her and was shocked to see the lady.She help her and asked if she is ok she then drop her to her home also and thenwent to her own house this time in all her sense

At night Guddan calls poonam

Poonam- haan guji bol

Guddan- vo actually tum se ek help chahie thi

Poonam- haan bol na tere liye toh kuch bhi kr sakti hai yen poonam soni tu bus bol kya chaiye tujhe

Guddan- vo tumhe Mrs. Madhu Bhatnagar Ma’am yaad hai

Poonam- vo humari high school ki hindi ki teacher

Guddan- haan haan vahi aaj hum mili thi vo

Poonam-kaha kese aur kyu

Guddan- kamla park ke pass mili thi mili kya unka accident ho gaya tha humari scooter se

Poonam- kya kese

Guddan(ab kya baten kese)- vo achanak se samne aa gayi thi

Poonam- acha toh ab kesi hai vo thik hai na

Guddan- haan vo thik hai unhe jayada chot bhi ni ayi hai infact hum khud unhe unke ghar drop k ke aye the, arey ghar se yaad aya jis kaam ke liye call kiya tha vo toh bataya hi ni

Poonam- haan aur koi kaam tha mujhe laga tum mujhe yahi batane ke liye call kiya hai

Guddan- vo kya tum Dr.Akshat ko call kr puch sakti ho ki kya vo Friday k sham ko free hai

Poonam- hainnnn kya kya kya… kya kaha tumne tum thik toh ho Matlab tum Dr. Akshat se…

Guddan- shut up panda apne dimag ke ghode ko thoda control kro unse bolna ki hume ek ghar mila hai agar vo friday ko free hai toh aa kr dekh sakte hai aur phir Saturday ko hi shift bhi ho sakte hai

Poonam- toh yeh baat tum khud kyu ni bata deti ho

Guddan- ni vo hume kuch kaam tha isiliye tum bol dena baat mai

Poonam- arey baad mai kya hota hai ruko ek min main unko conference pr leti hoon

Guddan- arey ni panda sun toh… but it was late she already call him

Akshat- hello

Poonam- hello Dr. Akshat disturb toh no kiya iss waqt call kr ke

Akshat- arey ni ni bolo kya huwa

Poonam- main ni guddan ko ap se baat krni thi ek min haan use bhi add krti hoon, hello guddan lo Dr. Akshat bhi aagaye ab tum directly inse hi baat kr lo

Akshat- hello Dr. Guddan kahiye kya baatkrni thi apko

Guddan- vo main yeh puch rahi thi kya ap Friday ki sham ko free hai

Akshat- arey ap kahe toh hum toh hum abhi bhi free ho jayenge, vase irada kya hai apka

Guddan- very funny kabhi koi baat seriously ni kr sakte na ap, hum toh is liye puch rahe the ki hume ek ghar ke bare mai pata chala hai agar apko koi problem na ho toh ek baar ap chal kr dekh lijiye baki phir jasa apko thik lage

Akshat- ohh itni jaldi ghar dhoodh bhi liya not bad haan

Guddan- toh hum Friday done kr de

Akshat-Friday kyu hum kal bhi toh chal sakte hai na

Guddan- thik hai phir kal college ke baad milte hai bye good night

Akshat- my night was already become good after talking with you

Guddan- what??

Akshat- good...good night, good night bol raha tha

Guddan- good night… in her mind bade hi ajeeb hai

Next day after college they went to vist the house

After looking the house

Guddan- toh kesa laga apko yeh ghar

Akshat- perfect jisa socha tha usse kafi acha hai thank you

Guddan- thanks abhi ni ghar milne ke baad kahiyega vo bus ate abhi ate hi honge

Just then the owner of the house comes and it was none other her school teacher and her husband Mr. and Mrs. Bhatbagar, guddan greets them both and took theirs blessings by touching her feet

Mr. bhatbagar- arey bus kro beta yeh sab kyu

Mr. Bhatnagar cut her husband in mid and tell him – yeh esi hi hai bachapan se, vase guddan kya yahi hai vo jiske bare mai tum bata rahi thi

Guddan- ji ma’am yeh Dr. Akshat hai humare senior abhi hostel mai rahte hai

Mr. Bhatnagar- toh hostel kyu chod rahe hai kahi hostel se nikaltoh ni diya

Before akshat say something she defence him

Guddan- ni sir esi koi baat ni hai he is very sincere and humble actually vo hostel ke rule hai toh sabhi final year ke students ko hostel khali krna padega ap tension mat lijiye inki behaviour ki guarantee hum lete hai

Mrs. Bhatnagar- agar tumhe isk pr bharosha hai toh hume tumhare bharose pr pura bharosha hai beta aaj se is ghar ka upar wala kamra tumhara huwa jab tak chao yaha rah sakte ho

Guddan- thank you ma'am thank you so much

Mr. Bhatnagar- arey phele inse puch toh lo inhe ghar pasand aya bhi ki

Akshat- ji bhaut hi acha hai actually maine Dr. guddan se bhi yahi kaha ki jesa main chata tha yeh ghar usse bhi acha nikla

Mrs. Bhatnagar- thank you toh batao tum log kab shift kr rahe ho hum room ki shafai krwa denge

Guddan- its ok ma'am ap tension mat lijiye room ki shaf shafai hum log khud hi kr lenge

Mrs. Bhatnagar- pr beta tum kese

Akshat- plz ma'am

Mrs. Bhatnagar- acha thik hai

After talking all the other formalities how to complete them and some basic rules to live in the house explained by Mr. Bhatnagar to Akshat they handover the duplicate keys of the house to him

Mr. Bhatnagar- tum jab chahe yaha rahne aa sakte ho

Akshat- thank you ma'am thank you so much main toh aj ke aj hi shift ho jaun pr yeh ek din ka kaam toh ni hi aur phir hostel mai bhi inform krna padega toh main saturday ko ata hoon us din college bhi off hai toh jaldi ho jayega aur jo kaam rah jayega vo sunday ko kr shakte hai

Mr. & Mrs. Bhatnagar- thik hai jaisa tum he thik lage

Guddan- ok ma'am ab hum chalte hai ab apse saturday ko milte hai bye

Then both of them went to their respective places

After two days,

Angad- bhai mana padega jo kaam hum log ek mahine mai ni kr paye Dr. Gupta ne toh ek hi din mai kr diya

Akshat- hmm baat toh bilkul sahi kahi tumne

Angad- vase usse itni jaldi ghar mil kese gaya

Akshat- ab sari inquiry yahi kr loge ya chaloge bhi vo dono vaha humara intezar kr rahe honge

Angad- arey haan main toh bhul hi gaya tha sorry haan ab chalo chalte hai

End of Part

So this is the next part plz ignores the typos and grammatical mistakes

Up Next - moment of unknown love❤️

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Kuch romance bhi add karo na plz

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Hayyeeeawesome part❤️

Plz update soon...jldi jldi update kro w8 krna hr update k saath mushkil hota jaa rha h ❤️

Thanku for keeping ur promise...❤️❤️

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Your wait is going to over in few mins

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Hayyeeeawesome part❤️

Plz update soon...jldi jldi update kro w8 krna hr update k saath mushkil hota jaa rha h ❤️

Thanku for keeping ur promise...❤️❤️

Your welcome dear😊

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Kuch romance bhi add karo na plz

Sure I will try my best😊

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Amazing

Dono ek dusre ke khayal mein doobe hue hai

Continue asap

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Nice update

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Plz update this..waiting

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