Journey From Khadoos Jindal to Romantic Jindal {Completed} - Page 27

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Posted: 6 years ago
Viren is such evil man 😡
Good AJ beaten him blue and black and now Kalyani should also be beaten
Nice update
Please update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ohh yeah viren tha...
Aj Rock Kya dhulai ki hai...
Mujhe laga viru Bata Dena kallu- k bare me but nahi bola
Let's uska raaz kaise khulta hai...
Hope she get punished for her deeds ..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Power packed update...
Hope kallu- get punished for her deeds ...
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Amazing update
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Kalyani should be punished severely
Hope nimi will do the honours of punishing kalyani
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Shaan ... honestly speaking mere ko na achcha Nahi Lagta jab koi hamari guddu ko itna tang Kare...or Yaha to ek Baar Nahi balki balki do do Baar uski Jaan pe ban aayi ...
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Pls ab isko ek update me hi aise set Kar do na ki guddu b thik ho Jaye or Kalyani ki b band baj jayeee ...

Pls 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 25

In the morning nurse comes to check guddan.

Nurse: sir aap bahar baithiye. Aapki wife uth jaayegi then she will react like yesterday.

AJ: ok

Both families come to meet guddan.

Maa: guddan ab kaisi tabyat hai.

Revti: di dard to nahi ho raha hai

Papa: Tu jaldi se theek hoke ghar aaja ab

Guddan: bas kitna bolte hain aap log mujhe bhi to bolne dijiye. Main bilkul theek hoon aur mujhe please jaldi se ghar jana hai. Maa nimi ki tabyat kaisi hai.

Maa: wo bilkul theek hai. Aana chahti thi wo bhi lekin maine mana kar diya.

Guddan: haan maa acha kiya

Nurse: aap log ab bahar chaliye. Patient ko aaram krna hai.

They all leave only aarti stays back.

Guddan: aaru tere bhaiya kahan hain

Aarti: wo bahar baithe hain. Should I call him.

Guddan: nai nai main to bas pooch rahi thi.

It's been a week since that accident and today guddan will be discharged.

Dr: Mr. Jindal she perfectly fine now bas inhe time to time medicine deni hai aapko and alternately dressing b krni hai. You can do that on your own because Wound to theek ho gaya hai bas just to prevent the infection.

AJ: ok doctor. Anything else.

Dr: bas thats it. Mrs. Jindal aap bhi apna khayal rakhiye and dont exert yourself too much.

Guddan: yes doctor.

In this one week AJ was always there with guddan during the night but whenever she was awake, he wouldn't be their. Guddan felt weird and thought that he was distancing himself from her. On the other hand AJ never wanted to leave her alone but he feared that she might again panic due to his touch so he stood away from her.

Now they reached home and their aarti was done and they sat on sofa.

Angad: bhabhi ab aap batao exactly hua kya us din.

AJ: angad let her rest. Shaam ko baat karte hain. Aarti, revti tum log zara guddan ko leke upar jao.

They take her upstairs and come down. In the room guddan thinks he doesn't want to be with her anymore and cries. She goes to the washroom and cries her heart out. Unknowingly her hand Touches the shower button and it turns on. She sits under it and cries profusely thinking that she is not worth him anymore. After sometime AJ enters the room.

AJ: aarti guddan ko kis room main rakha tha.

Revti: jiju wo to apne he room main hai.

AJ: revti wo yahan nahi hai. Kya bakwaas kar rahe ho tum dono.

Aarti: abhi to bhabhi yahin thi.

They start looking for her and finally AJ checks the washroom and is shocked. He shouts guddan. Everyone comes to his room. He lifts her and places her on the bed.

Maa: ye sab kaise hua

Revti: didi Kya hua. Aap aise??

Guddan: I am fine. Sorry to bother u all.

AJ: aap log rehne dijiye. I will talk to her myself.

They leave and AJ bolts the door.

AJ: ye lo change kar lo. Phir i need to talk to you.

Guddan: ye kiska hai. This is not my night suit. I don't wear trouser and shirt.

AJ: Maine laya hai Dr said you would be more comfortable in this. Please change.

Guddan: (thinking in washroom) he is not my akshat. Usne to abhi tak daant daant k meri halat kharab kar di hoti. Inhone mujhse kuch bhi nahi poocha and she again cries.

AJ: (thinking in room) why does she always have to put herself in pain.

He hears her crying in washroom and goes to knock but the door is open so he enters.

AJ: guddan Kya hua hai tum kyun ro rahi ho(hugging her from behind).

Guddan: aap door rahiye na mujhse jaise pichle ek hafte se thay. Main to ab aapke layak he nahi rahi.

AJ: (still hugging her and placed his chin on her shoulder) ye tum kaisi baatein kar rahi ho. Kya hogaya hai tumhe.

Guddan: mujhe kuch nahi hua hai aap badal gaye hain. Is ek hafte main aap kabhi aaye mere paas. Did you talk to me even once. Talk to bahut door ki baat hai aapne to mujhe haath bhi nahi lagaya hai. Aap ek kaam kijiye just drop me at my fathers house and leave me forever.

AJ: bas tabse sun raha hun tumhari bakwaas( holding her elbow). Why are you doing this? What do you want?

Guddan: ask yourself this. Aapko to lag raha hoga na ab viren ne mere saath ye sab kiya so ab main aapke layak nahi rahi (crying). Isi liye you have been distancing yourself from me.

AJ: I did not distance myself from you. Please listen to me. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Don't think like that.

Guddan: to phir kaisa hai akshat. Why don't I see my old akshat in you. Why do I feel ye koi aur hai (putting her head on his shoulder).

Before AJ could say anything to her, his hand unknowingly touches her wound and he feels wetness in his hand. He sees its blood. He makes her stand straight and sees the wound is slightly bleeding.

AJ: guddan jaldi chalo. Dekho kitna khoon aaraha hai.

He makes her lie down on the bed and is too panicked.

AJ: ye first aid box kahan gaya mil kyun nahi raha (looking through the drawers)

Guddan: akshat vahin pe hai relax. Aaram se dhoondo mil jaayega.

AJ: tum chup raho and finally he finds it.

He goes to her and sits by her side. He lifts her shirt and slowly removes the adhesive tape from the bandage.

AJ: dard horaha. You ok should I do this or should I call the doctor.

Guddan: nai u only do it. It's nothing.

AJ: (slowly removing the bandage and blowing on the wound) he cries seeing the wound. I am so sorry guddan.

Guddan: shhh relax. Don't do this please. Mujhe bahut takleef hoti hai is se you know it.

AJ: he bends down and kisses her wound and his tears fall on her stomach. I am so sorry for this. Please mujhe maaf kardo. Tumhe kitna dard hua hoga.

Guddan: akshat please nai kijiye aisa. Please.

He does her dressing very delicately. And once he again kisses the wound and straightens her shirt. She gets up and hugs him tight.

Guddan: (rubbing his back) bas kijiye ab. Please. You don't have to be sorry for anything. Ye jo hua it was not your mistake but my Carelessness.

AJ: (still hugging) Maine is ek hafte tumhe bahut takleef Deena tumse door rehkar. But main majboor tha guddan.

Guddan: matlab (sitting straight).

AJ: you were too much traumatized by whatever happened. So is liye main jab b tumhara paas hota tha ya tumhe choota tha to tum bahut darr jaati thi and he narrated the hospital incident to her.

Guddan: I am so sorry Maine kitna galat samjha aapko. Mujhe laga you don't trust me anymore aur aap mujhse nafrat krte hain.

AJ: aisa kabhi b nahi ho sakta. Never. Ye sab chodo mujhe batao ye sab hua kaise. Us din kya hua.tum kahan gayi thi pooja said koi reunion tha he nahi. To phir tum us jagah pahunchi kaise. And y did you say ye tumhari carelessness ki wajah se hua hai.

Guddan: main aap ko sab bolungi but you will listen to me calmly (holding his hand).

AJ: I will try to

Guddan: us din kalyani aunty aayi thi mere paas juice leke. She said ye nimi ne bheja hai. So i drank it. Then she told me that pooja was calling on landline and told me about the reunion. So i went. But when I reached there no one was there. Then I started feeling dizzy and I fainted. Phir jab mujhe hosh aaya wahan viren tha aur phir and she hugs him tight and cries profusely.

AJ: shhh bas ab rona band. Viren ko uske kiye ki saza mil rahi hai. He is in jail. Aur ab bas ek insaan bach gaya hai to usse B. Tum kuch nahi bologi. Maine tumse last time he kaha tha guddan ki ab main koi galti maaf nahi karungi. Aur aaj galti nahi gunaah kiya hai unhone.

Guddan: akshat, lekin nimisha?

AJ: jitna main nimisha ko jaanta hoon. She too won't agree to your thinking.

Just then there is a sound outside there room. AJ goes to check and sees Nimisha standing and a tray has fallen from her hands.

AJ: nimi tum theek ho (taking her in).

Nimi: i am so sorry bhaiya. Sab meri mummy ne kiya. Please muje maaf kar do.

Guddan: (getting up holding her wound) nimi aisa kuch bhi nahi please. Do not blame yourself.

Nimi: didi mujhe nahi pata hai aap kis mitti k bane ho lekin main Akshat bhai ki baat se agree karti hoon. Aur haan ek aur baat bhaiya app aisa kyun keh rahe thay ki ab ye galti aap maaf nahi karenge. Mummy ne kuch aur B kiya hai.

AJ: nahi nimi aisa kuch B nahi hai wo to bas.

Nimi: please mujhe sab sach bata dijiye. Please.

Guddan: nimi jaane de na kya farq padta hai. Hum sab theek haina.

Nimi: didi aap rehne dijiye. Bhaiya please.

AJ: wo jo last time guddan ko zehar diya tha wo B kalyani aunty ne he diya tha.

Nimi: aur bhaiya aap jaante thay aur apane kuch nahi kiya.

AJ: guddan ko mana nai kar paya. She convinced me.

Nimi: lekin ab nahi. Ab bahut hogaya. Bhaiya you call the police.

Nimisha goes downstairs to her mother's room. AJ takes guddan along and follows Nimisha.

Kalyani: nimi kahan le jaa rahi hai mujhe.

Nimi: vahin jahan aapki sahi jagah hai.

Maa: nimi ye kya kar rahi hai.

Nimi: wahi jo mujhe bahut pehle kar dena chahiye tha. Bhaiya aapne police ko phone kiya??

Kalyani: tera dimag to theek hai. Kya bakwaas kar rahi hai. Police kya police.

Nimi: main aapki beti hoon na. Phir aapne kisi aur ki beti k saath aisa krne ka socha bhi kaise.

Angad: nimi tum kya keh rahi ho.

Nimi: aur kya kahun angad. Mujhe inse darr lagta hai ab. Jab ye didi k satah aisa kar sakti hain phir mere saath bhi kuch kar sakti hain.

Kalyani: pagal to nai hogayi hai. Tere saath kya karungi main.

Maa: koi mujhe bolega yahan ho kya raha hai aur kalyani ji ne ab kya kiya hai?

Nimi: maa main batati hoon. Didi ko jo zehar diya tha wo mummy ne diya tha. Us viren k saath mummy mili hui thi

Maa: kya????? Kalyani ji par aapne aisa kyun kiya.

Kalyani: maine aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya hai. Nimi ye guddan tujhe meri khilaaf badhka rahi hai aur tu iski baat maan bhi rahi hai.

Nimi: didi ne mujhe kuch bhi nahi bola hai. Wo to maine inki baatein sun lee warna ye log kisi ko kuch batate he nahi.

Kalyani: iske bol dena se sab sach ho jayega. Kya saboot hai maine isko zehar diya hai. Ye to baanjh hai aur ab khud ki izzat bachaane k liye kuch bhi bol rahi hai.

AJ: bas Kalyani Agarwal bahut bol liya tumne aur bahut sun liya maine. Guddan k khilaaf ek shabd nahi sunuga main. Pehli galti maine nazar andaz kar di lekin ab nahi. Saboot main deta hoon aapko.

He plays the footage and all are shocked.

Kalyani: ise ye kaise saabit hua ki maine zeher milaya tha.

AJ: koi baat nai hai Viren to police station main hai he aur aaj nahi to kal wo bata he dega aapka naam. Phir usse bada saboot to kuch bhi nahi hai.

Nimi: mummy aapko meri kasam hai batao sach kya hai. Aapko mere hone wale bache ki kasam.

Kalyani: haan kiya maine ye sab. Lekin sirf aur sirf tere liye. Tujhe is ghar main izzat dilaane k liye.

Nimi: main bahut khush hoon apni zindagi main. Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.

Guddan: lekin aunty viren se aapka kya connection.

Kalyani; kuch bhi nahi. Usse maine 2, 3 baar ghar ke bahar dekha tha tumpe nazar rakhte hue. Phir maine us se baat ki and we joined hands

AJ clenched his fist but guddan held him back.

Nimi: bhaiya aapne police ko phone kiya ya nahi.

Kalyani: ab tu apni he maa ko police k hawale karegi. Guddan ye tumne bilkul sahi nahi kiya.

Guddan: nimi bas kar. Kahin aisa na ho ki tu kuch galat bol de apni mummy se. Aur aap police ko phone nahi karenge.

Nimi: didi please...

Guddan: meri baat suno inka naam Jindal parivar se juda hua hai is liye akshat aapko aur nimi jo karna hai aap karo lekin is ghar main police to bilkul nahi aayegi.

Nimi: mummy dekha aapne didi ko abhi bhi aapki he side le rahi hain.

Kalyani: ye sab natak karti hai

AJ: bas bahut hogaya ab.

Nimisha goes to her mother's room.

Guddan: angad nimi k paas jaa.

AJ: theek hai police ghar nai aasakti lekin ye bhi is ghar main nahi rahengi. I dont want to take any risk with your life.

Guddan: ek baar Nimisha k baare main to sochiye.

Nimi: (with luggage in her hand) main bhaiya k faisle se bilkul sehmat hoon. Ye raha aapka samaan. Please leave. Is se pehle main apna mann badal doon. And she takes her to the door.

Kalyani: ye tumne bilkul theek nahi kiya guddan.

Nimisha closes the door on her face and goes to hug guddan.

Nimi: i am so sorry didi. Aap ne kitna kuch saha aur phir bhi aap chup rahi.

Guddan: bas ab is baare main koi baat nahi hogi. Aur tu koi stress nahi legi. Angad lunch k baad nimi ko bahar leke jaoge tum.

Angad: as you say bhabhi.

Guddan: chaliye lunch krte hain muje bhook lag rahi hai (holding her stomach). Aarti aur revti kahan hai.

Nimi: aarti ka kuch project tha so revti uski help kar rahi hai. Wo shayad library gaye hain.

Post lunch nimi and angad leave. Maa goes to her room. Guddan is climbing the stairs but is unable to. AJ reaches the room and looks back to see guddan on 2nd stair only and rushes to her.

AJ: Kya hua dard horaha hai. Thak gayi.

Guddan: mujhse nahi chada jaa raha. Thoda dard ho raha hai.

AJ: ruko. He lifts her and takes her to the room and makes her lie down on the bed. Theek ho.

Guddan: haan i think i will rest i will be ok.

AJ: acha main office jaa raha hoon. Kuch bhi hoga do give me a call.

Guddan: is waqt???

AJ: bahut kaam Pending hai. This week no work has been done. I will come shaam Ko. Tum dawayi lena and i will ask aarti and revti to stay here.

Guddan: wo project k kiye library gaye hain. I dont need anything. I will sleep for now. Aap jao aaram se.

He kisses her forehead and leaves.

Edited by Akshan5148 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Finally Kalyani is caught but again Guddan saved her not good
Akshan scene was nice
Please in next update please give Cute Akshan romantic scene after all this fiasco
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Loved it❤️
Akshan scenes
Update ASAP
Edited by Sobiya153 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful update dear
Loved it
Finally kalyani is kicked out but I feel she will again try to harm guddan
Please do continue soon

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