Journey From Khadoos Jindal to Romantic Jindal {Completed} - Page 25

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Posted: 6 years ago
Sooo...i hv been meaning to tell you this for quite a few days but your story has me checking the forums every few minutes😆
I like the whole family concept of your story. And the fact their is no durga and saraswati involved😛
And AkshAn development has been really subtle too👏
Vese is the kidnapper Rahul?!🥱 that dude who Guddan rejected in her friends mehendi party, i guess😕
Update soon and kalyani ki dhulai karwana ache se⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice chapter
Kalyani is so disgusting lady
I think that peraon is the same person who has came to the akshan party and later guddan revealed he had proposed her earlier
Hope guddan is safe
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb update
Who's that guy?
Plz continue soon 😊
I m worried kbhi AJ guddan p doubt n kre😭
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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 23 (Small One)

In morning, maa goes to mandir and sees AJ sitting in the mandir but is sleeping. She puts her hand on his shoulder.

Maa: lalla Tu yahan he tha kya raat bhar.

AJ: (with a jerk) guddan aagayi kya.

Maa: nahi lalla kahan aayi. Mujhe bahut fikar ho rahi hai. Mujhe lagta hai uske ghar walon se baat kar leni chahiye.

AJ: aap kar lee jiye main nahi kar sakta. Aur main Commissioner(C) se milne jaa raha hoon. Ab to hadh he hogayi.

Just then there's a knock.

AJ: (running) guddan aagayi tum.

Inspector: good morning Jindal sb. Hume commissioner sb ne bheja hai.

AJ: kuch pata chali

Inspector: aapne jo Mrs. Jindal ka number diya tha wo to abhi bhi band hai but humne uski last location check ki hai. Hum vahin jaa rahe hain. commissioner sir ne kaha hai aapko b saath le jaayein.

AJ: chaliye jaldi.

Maa: lalla ruk. Angad jaldi aa akshat k saath jaa tu bhi.

They leave for the location.

Angad: bhai relax kijiye aap, bhabhi bilkul theek hongi.

AJ: i hope so.

They reach the place. It's a desolated tall building. They climb the stairs and start looking for guddan. AJ reaches a room and shouts guddan. All rush towards him and are shocked at what they see.

AJ: guddan guddan please hosh main aao please. (He tries to remove the knife from her stomach)

Inspector: jindal sb dont take that out. Is se bahut zyada blood loss hojayega and we can recover finger prints from it.

AJ: angad doctor ko bula jaldi. Why isn't she responding.

Angad: bhai ambulance aa rahi hai. Hum tab tak bhabhi ko neeche leke chalte hain.

AJ lifts guddan and takes her downstairs. He makes her lie down in the ambulance and sits besides her holding her hand.

Angad: hello aarti, hame bhabhi mil gayi hai lekin unki halat theek nahi hai. We are taking her to the hospital. Tu ghar pe sab ka khayal rakhna. And disconnects the call.

In the hospital

Dr: inka to bahut khoon beh chuka hai aur inhe ye chot bhi bahut time se lagi hui hai.

AJ: Dr aap please kuch bhi kijiye bas inhe theek kijiye.

Guddan is taken to OT and AJ sits down thinking what could have happened.

AJ: angad guddan k saath aisa kaun karsakta hai.

Dr: Mr. Jindal we have started the operation. Luckily internal organs are safe but we need blood asap. She hands the knife to inspector.

AJ: theek hai i will give her blood. She is my wife.

Dr: no no we have given her blood from blood bank. You just need to donate it back to blood bank.

AJ: wo theek to ho jayegi.

Dr: dekhiye abhi kuch bhi kehna mushkil. Internal injury to nai hai but there are some external injuries.

Just then maa and aarti arrive.

AJ: maa hamesha meri he khushi kisi se bardahst kyun nai hoti. Hamesha guddan he kyu sab sehti hai.

Maa: bas kar lalla. Tu dekhna guddan ek dum theek ho jayegi.

SUSPENSE????
GUESS WHAT DID JUST HAPPEN?

Edited by Akshan5148 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
beautiful update dear
loved it
ohh no guddan is again harmed
this time kalyani shouldn't be let gone she should be punished badly
and what is the suspense
please do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Itna der aur itna chota update
Plz update soon and this time a bit longer
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Posted: 6 years ago
Itna chotu sa update 😭
Waiting for the next update
Plz update ASAP
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Posted: 6 years ago
Plzz update the next part soon...interesting story👏 suspense Kya hai???kahin AJ ne yi tho na maara guddan ko koi misunderstandings ke wajaha se 😉😉😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
Oh no Guddan ke saath phir kuch hadsaa hogaya
Please Guddan Ko jaldi thik kar do aur iss Baar jisne yeh Kiya hai usse Akshat se pitwao
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ab to had he ho gayi...
Jisne b yeh Kara hai uae jaldise expose Karo plz
Aur ab guddu ko koi harm mat karna yaar
Aur kallu- auntyka boriya bistar bandh do ab bahut hua...
Update soon dear and now plz bigger one ...

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