Journey From Khadoos Jindal to Romantic Jindal {Completed} - Page 26

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Chapter 24

Flashback To The Previous Night

Guddan is tied to the chair and she is gaining consciousness.

Guddan: kaun hai yahan aur mujhe aise bandh k kyun rakha hai.

Person: ohhh to tumhe hosh aa he ga ya. Kabse wait kar raha tha main.

Guddan: kaun ho tum. Kya chahte ho??

Person: bas tumhe aur kuchh bhi nahi.

Guddan: mere saamne aane ki to himmat nai ho rahi tumse

Person: aapko kaise mana kar sakte hain madam. Chaliye aa jate hain tumhare saamne.

Guddan: tum??? Lekin viren tum ye sab Kyun kar rahe ho.

Viren: kyun kar raha hoon ka kya matlab hai. Tumhe sharafat se pyar se propose kiya tha lekin tumne kya kiya mujhe reject kar diya. And slaps her hard.

Guddan: Viren tum pagal hogaye ho. Kya krna chahte ho? Dekho agar Akshat ko pata chala na to wo tumhari jaan le lenge.

Viren: (laughs) kise bewakoof bana rahi ho, khud ko, kyunki main to sab kuch jaanta hoon wo Akshat Jindal to tumhari taraf dekhta bhi nahi hai. (And touches her lips).

Guddan: (resisting his touch) dekho mujhe haath mat lagana main bata rahi hoon.

Viren: haath kya, guddan abhi to mai ne kuch bhi nahi kiya hai. Abhi tum dekhti jao main tumhare saath kya kya krta hoon (and tears both the sleeves of her shirt).

Guddan: ( tears flowing from her eyes) please dont do this viren. Please. Tumhe kya milega ye sab kar k.

Viren: ro lo jitna rona hai yahan koi nahi aane wala kyunki tumne to aate waqt dekh he liya hoga ye kitni sunsaan jagah hai (holding both her arms).

Guddan: please...

Viren: (again slaps her) band karo apna ye natak. Main jaanta hoon tum bhi yahi chahti ho to phir ye dikhawa kyun (throws her dupatta away).

Guddan: ek baar bas ek baar tu mujhe khol de. Phir main dikhati hoon main kya chahti hoon.

Viren: (laughing hard) tumhe main pagal lagta hoon jo tumhari baat maan lunga (while cupping her face).

Guddan: (irked by his touch) kicks him hard and falls down.

Viren: tune mujhe maara. Ab main dekh kya karta hoon. Socha bahut aasaan karunga tere liye sab lekin tu is layak hai he nahi.

With that he cups her face and is about to kiss her but his phone starts ringing and he goes out to attend it. Guddan starts scanning her surroundings and spots a knife near her. She takes it and with much difficulty cuts the rope and opens her hands. She stands near the door to hear who viren is talking to.

Viren: haan kya hai. Beech kaam k kaha tha na mujhe phone mat krna.

Kalyani: wo maine batane k liye phone kiya hai ki yahan sab ko pata chal gayi hai ki guddan missing hai aur ye log police main jaane ki baat kar rahe hain.

Viren: jaane do. Jis k paas jana hai inhe jaane do kyunki jab tak wo Akshat Jindal mujh tak pahunche ga tab tak guddan us k layak nahi rahi hogi.

Guddan: thinks iska matlab Akshat mujhe dhoond rahe hain lekin viren kis se baat kar raha hai?

Viren: chal rakh phone ab. Meri guddan mera wait kar rahi hai.

He enters and guddan frightens by his sudden entrance and drops the knife.

Viren: Tu meri baatein sun rahi thi while pinning her to the wall. Tu soch rahi hogi main kis se baat kar raha tha (while tracing his finger on her cheek). Chal main he batata hoon waise bhi tu yahan se jayegi B to teri baat pe koi yakeen to karega nahi. Main teri us kalyani aunty se baat kar raha tha(and starts laughing).

Guddan is crying still in his hold and he wipes her tears but guddan jerks his hand away.

Viren: (holding her by her chin) samjhti kya hai tu khud ko. Kis baat ki akkad hai tujh main apni is khoobsurati ki. Waise bhi aaj k baad wo to rahegi nai and pushes her hair to one side and is about to kiss her on the neck.

Guddan remembers how Akshat had kissed her on the neck the other day and smiles through her tears and pushes viren back.

Viren: bas bahut hogaya ab.

Guddan tries to run but stumbles and falls down. Viren is quick to get up and pins her on the floor.

Viren: ab kya karogi while hovering above her. He touches her inappropriately.

Guddan spots the knife by her side and takes it and points it towards viren.

Guddan: peeche hat. Dekh mujhe ye use krne main zara bhi time nai lagega.

They both get up and she points the knife towards him.

Viren: dekho guddan ye koi khilona nahi hai. Lao mujhe do ab chot lag jaayegi.

Guddan: kya hua darr gaye. Ab kahan gayi tumhari mardangi.

Viren: dekho ye idhar do.

Guddan: peeche hato mujhe waise bhi apne haath gande nahi krne hai tumhare gande khoon se.

Viren: tum kehna kya chahti ho.

Guddan: guddan akshat jindal par pehla aur aakhri haq sirf aur sirf akshat jindal ka hai samjhe tum. And saying this she stabs herself.

Viren panicked seeing her in pool of blood and runs away.

Flashback Ends.

Meanwhile operation is over.

Maa: Dr guddan kaisi hai

Dr: operation successful tha. Filhal she is unconscious and under observation. Mr. Jindal aap mere saath cabin main chaliye.

In the cabin

AJ: Dr sab theek to haina. Aap mujhe aisa yahan kyun

Dr: dekhiye Mr. Jindal kuch baatein hain which as a husband I think you should be knowing. Aap baithiye.

AJ: please boliye kya baat hai.

Dr: Mr. Jindal, Mrs. Jindal k saath zabardasti krne ki koshish ki gayi hai and she has resisted it way too much jis ki wajah se inhe kaafi external injuries hui hain.

AJ: kya aap ye kehna chahti hain ki guddan k saath...

Dr: no no Mr. Jindal we have run some tests but Mrs. Jindal k saath kuch bhi galat nahi hua hai.

Inspector: (entering the cabin) Dr kya hum Mrs. Jindal ka bayan le sakte hain.

Dr: bilkul bhi nahi. She is still unconscious aur immediately unse baat krna theek B nahi hoga. She might be under some shock we don't know yet. We have shifted her to the room but lets just wait jab tak Mrs. Jindal ko hosh aata hai

AJ: inspector sb mujhe wo insaan jald se jald jail main chahiye. And leaves the cabin.

Maa: lalla kya bola Dr. ne meri bachi theek haina

AJ: haan maa guddan bilkul theek hai. Ab bas uske hosh main aane ka intezaar hai. Angad main yahin rukta hoon tu maa aur aarti ko leke ghar jaa.

Angad: theek hai bhai.

It's been an hour since AJ is sitting with Guddan holding her hand. Guddan starts moving. AJ realises she is gaining consciousness and gets up with a jerk.

AJ: (placing hand on her forehead) thank god tumhe hosh aagaya. Tum theek hona.

Guddan: (pushing him) door raho mujhse. Mujhe choona mat. Stay away from me and with that she takes out the drip and gets down from the bed.

AJ: (moving behind her) guddan meri baat to suno. Kya hogaya listen to me.

Guddan: maine kaha door raho mujhse. Mujhe haath mat lagana. She sits down on the floor holding her stomach ahhh and faints.

AJ: rushing to her guddan, guddan kya hogaya tumhe (lifts her and places her on the bed). He then goes to call the doctor.

Dr: Mr. Jindal exactly kya hua.

AJ narrates the whole incident to her.

Dr: nurse inhe sedative dijiye and re-stitch the wound. Mr. Jindal aap mere saath chaliye.

AJ: Dr ye guddan ko kya hogaya hai. Why is she reacting like this. Usne mujhe apne paas aane he nai diya.

Dr: Mr. Jindal mujhe isi baat ka darr tha. She is under too much trauma. Wo bahut dari hui hain. Wo abi bhi recover nai kar payi hain jo bhi unke saath hua. She needs you the most at the moment but she won't at the same time.

AJ: Dr aap kya kehna chah rahi hain mujhe kuch samjh nai aaraha.

Dr: Mr. Jindal she has become sensitive to any male touch. We still don't know ki us insaan ne in k saath kya kiya hai jo ye itna zyada traumatized hai. She needs your support but she would resent it. So you need to create a balance.

AJ: i understood and goes to guddan.

Guddan: murmuring akshat aap kahan hain mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai.

AJ: holds her hand main yahin hoon with tears in eyes. Just then his phone rings.

AJ: hello inspector sb kuch pata chali.

Inspector: jindal sb come to the police station i think we have found some clue.

AJ: i will be there in 15 minutes. Ye jo bhi hai guddan jisne tumhari ye halat ki hai, i will not spare him (kissing her forehead). He then calls aarti. Aaru Tu hospital aa mujhe police station jana hai.

Aarti: g bhai main aarahi hoon.

He reaches the police station.

Inspector: jindal sb aagaye aap, hume aapko kuch dikhana tha.

AJ: kya

Inspector: hum us jagah gaye thay jahan Mrs. Jindal thi and we found a CCTV their and its working. Aap dekhiye you might recognize the person.

AJ: show me.

Inspector plays the CCTV and AJ is shocked he clenched his fist. He feels so helpless when he hears guddan akshat jindal par pehla aur aakhri haq sirf Akshat jindal ka hai. Tears form in his eyes. He bangs the table.

Inspector: please calm down Mr. Jindal. Aap mujhe batayi kya aap is aadmi ko jaante hain while he focusses on Viren's picture.

AJ: nai main ise nahi jaanta. Ek minute phir se dikhaye. Ye to viren hai.

Inspector: kaun viren.

AJ: ye guddan k saath university main tha. Inspector kya mai iski picture le sakta hai.

Inspector: sure.

He takes the picture and leaves. He reaches the hospital and goes to guddan.

AJ: aarti Tu ja ab.

Aarti: bhai kya hua kuch pata chali.

AJ: nahi abhi police dekh rahi hai.

Aarti: theek hai main chalti hoon.

The moment aarti leaves. AJ rushes to guddan and hugs her tight and cries.

AJ: i am so sorry guddan tumhe kitni takleef hui hogi (kissing her forehead). I promise you main usse zinda nahi chhodunga.

On phone

AJ: hello detective X main AJ bol raha hoon.

Detective X: haan sir boliye kya kaam tha.

AJ: main ek photo send kar raha hoon. You need to find him asap.

Detective X: main dekhta hoon.

In evening, Dr. comes to AJ.

Dr: Mr. Jindal ab inka sedative ka asar khatam hojayega she might be conscious anytime. I think Aap ghar se kisi aur ko bula lee jiye. Warna jo din main hua wo phir se na hojaye. Inki stitches abhi bhi bahut sensitive Hain.

AJ: theek hai doctor i will call someone. Aarti Tu hospital aaja.

Aarti: g Bhai aati hoon.

Aarti goes to guddan and AJ sits outside. Guddan is awake now.

Aarti: bhabhi aap theek hona.

Guddan: nods her head. Ghar pe sab kaise hain (with difficulty).

Aarti: sab theek hain. Aap rest karo main yahin hoon.

She sleeps again because she is very weak. At 3 a.m. AJ receives a call.

Detective X: AJ uska pata mil gaya hai. I will forward you.

AJ: jaldi. He receives the address and leaves.

Detective X: wo raha iska flat. Andhera kar rakha hai aur tala bahar se hai taaki kisi ko pata na chale ye wahan hai. Here is the duplicate key.

AJ: (opens the lock and enters). Viren, viren kahan ho tum.

Viren: Maine tumhe kaha tha na itni raat ko khana leke mat aana while turning on the light... Tum? And runs upstairs.

AJ: (drags him down the stairs) himmat kaise hui teri meri guddan k saath aisa krne ki. Tune kya socha mujhe pata nahi chalegi.

Viren: dekho akshat Maine kuch nahi kiya hai. Haan maine usse kidnap kiya tha lekin chaaku usne khud ko khudi maara hai.

AJ: (clenched his fist) tune socha bhi kaise tu guddan ko takleef dega aur main tujhe zinda choddunga. Inhi haathon se tune guddan ko haath lagaya and beats him blue.

Viren is bleeding profusely but AJ does not stop. He drags him to the police station.

AJ: inspector sb ye lee jiye aapka gunehgaar. Aur is se sakht se sakht saza milni chahiye.

AJ heads back to the hospital and sees guddan sleeping. He kisses her forehead sorry jab tumhe meri zaroorat thi main tumhare paas tha he nahi. He holds her hand sleeps like that.

Edited by Akshan5148 - 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinlora

Plzz update the next part soon...interesting story 👏 suspense Kya hai???kahin AJ ne yi tho na maara guddan ko koi misunderstandings ke wajaha se 😉😉😉


AJ is a non violent person😉😉
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Amazing mjhe pehle hi pta tha ye viren hi hga this time kalyani should not be spared i wish is baar uski beti nimi hi usko accha sabak sikhaye
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Awesome update dear
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Oh god guddan gone through this pain
Ek criminal is caught now kalyani should not be spared she deserves severe punishment
Please do continue soon
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Beautiful update😳
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Amazing😊
Next part aj hi update kr dena can't wait😛

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