Journey From Khadoos Jindal to Romantic Jindal {Completed} - Page 23

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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow ...yeh Aj to jaan he leke rahega ek din apne is romantic andazse...
Ufff yeh kalyani aunty...
Bhej do na use wapas she is so annoying now...
Aru is such naughty girl ...
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
AkshAn's romance was ☺️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Caring Jindal sahab😳
I'm craving for some Akshan romance ☺️
Update soon😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing
Plz update next part soon and that too a longer one😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi Akshan first of all I just wanted to say I have read all your updates in one go...😆😆
N I loved the way u have changed AKSHAN relationship ... The way Akshat has started caring n loving guddan is just a dream come true ...we hope we are gonna see this in the serial soon...


But what I most liked about the story that u r increasing the proximities between them in a very natural n a beautiful way ... N I just wanted to say thanks to you for such a wonderful story... 😳😳

P.s. my name is Kavya ...n I m a student of second year so may I ask u what should I call you...😃😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi
Waiting for update😒
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Aaj ka update nahi aaya 😭
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Hi Akshan first of all I just wanted to say I have read all your updates in one go... 😆😆

N I loved the way u have changed AKSHAN relationship ... The way Akshat has started caring n loving guddan is just a dream come true ...we hope we are gonna see this in the serial soon...


But what I most liked about the story that u r increasing the proximities between them in a very natural n a beautiful way ... N I just wanted to say thanks to you for such a wonderful story... 😳😳

P.s. my name is Kavya ...n I m a student of second year so may I ask u what should I call you...😃😃




Thanks much for the appreciation.
You can call me Shaan😊😊😊
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Chapter 22

Next morning AJ is getting ready.

AJ: guddan kahan ho tum yaar mujhe bahut late horaha hai.

Guddan: aagayi. Kitna shor karte hain aap. Ye lee jiye coffee. Kya hua tense lag rahe hain.

AJ: meri aaj bahut important meeting hai. I might get late. So tension nai lena.

Guddan: ok, suniye

AJ: Kaho

Guddan: best of luck and kisses his cheek.

AJ: thankyou so much. Bye tc.

Post lunch in guddan's room

Kalyani: guddan ye lo juice nimi ko diya to tumhare liya b bheja nimi ne.

Guddan: thank you aunty.

Kalyani: aur haan landline pe kisi pooja ka phone aaya tha. Maine tumhe bulaya tha par shayad tum so rahi thi.

Guddan: kya keh rahi thi wo.

Kalyani: keh rahi thi aaj kuch reunion hai tum logon ka 6 baje is address pe (handing her a paper).

Guddan: acha main usse abhi phone krti hoon.

Kalyani: nai nai wo keh rahi thi us k phone main kuch problem hai wo PCO se phone kar rahi thi. Aur usne kaha wo tumhe wahin milegi.

Guddan: chaliye theek hai phir aunty main tayar hojati hoon.

Kalyani: theek hai.

Guddan thinks Akshat ko phone krti hoon but then remembers he has a meeting. So she gets ready.

Guddan: maa main chalti hoon.

Maa: kahan jaa rahi hai.

Guddan: wo pooja ka phone aaya tha aaj kuch reunion party hai.

Maa: theek hai jaa. Waise b bahut dino se ghar main he hai tu. Thoda change hojayega.

Guddan: maa akshat ko phone nai kiya maine Unki koi important meeting thi. Aur haan wo aaj shayad late honge.

Maa: theek hai ja tu. Khayal rakhna.

Kalyani: (on phone) Maine apna kaam kar diya hai. Ab tumhari baari.

Guddan reaches the address and thinks what sort of place is this. She starts feeling dizzy.

Guddan: ye mujhe kya horaha hai. Pooja, pooja, kahan ho tum sab. Koi hai yahan and with that she faints.

Somebody picks her up and Ties her to the chair.

Person: ab finally aagayi tum mere paas. How I missed this.

In office the meeting is done and AJ has cracked the deal. He thinks to share the news with guddan and calls her.

AJ: ye guddan ne phone reject kyun kar diya. Shayad so rahi hogi. Chalo ab ghar pe he bolunga.

Person: (on phone) ae kalyani tune guddan ko kitni goliyan di thi. Ise hosh he nahi aaraha hai 6 se 11 baj gaye hain.

Kalyani: Arre nai nai jitna tumne bola tha utni di hain. Aa jayega hosh. Tumhe b kya jaldi hai. Tumhare he paas to hai. Waise b is sab k baad AJ to usse apne ghar main kadam b nahi rakhne dega.

Person: chalo theek hai main dekhta hoon mujhe kya krna hai

Maa: angad dekh na itni raat ho gayi hai na lalla aaya aur naahi guddan. Mera dil ghabra raha hai.

Angad: maa main abhi bhabhi ko phone karta. Shayad party lambi chali hogi aur bhai k saath waapas aarahi hongi.

Maa: zara jaldi kar.

Angad: bhabhi ka phone off bata raha hai. Bhai ko karta hoon.

AJ: kisko phone krna hai (from the door)

Maa: aagaye tum log mera to mann itna ghabra raha tha.

AJ: maa kaun log?? Main to akela aaya hoon.

Maa: kya matlab akela? Guddan kahan hai

AJ: wo to ghar pe he hai. Mere saath kyun hogi. In fact Maine din main phone kiya tha but usne kaat diya.

Maa: wo nai hai yahan. Uski kuch reunion party thi. Tujhe phone nai kiya tha usne kyunki teri kuch meeting thi.

AJ: party thi to abhi tak aayi kyun nai Aur agar late horaha tha to kisiko phone kar k bataya kyun nahi. Ajeeb ladki hai.

Nimisha: bhabhi itni irresponsible nahi hai agar late horaha hota to wo definitely phone krti. Wo hamesha krti hain aisa.

Maa: lalla mera jee ghabra raha hai. Jaldi se meri bahu ko leke aa.

AJ: kis k saath gayi hai kuch to pata hogi. Kuch to bola hoga usne maa aapko.

Maa: haan kuch keh rahi thi pooja ne bulaya hai reunion k liye.

AJ: Mr. Khurana sorry itni raat ko phone kiya wo mujhe pooja se kuch urgent baat krni thi. Aap please mujhe uska number dijiye.

Mr. K: theek main forward krta hoon.

AJ: ( calls her) hello pooja, main Akshat bol raha hun.

Pooja: jiju aap itni raat ko sab theek to hai. Guddan theek haina

AJ: kya matlab wow tumhara saath nahi hai.

Pooja: nahi, is waqt wo yahan kyun hogi.

AJ: wo ghar se bolke nikli hai ki tum sab ka kuch reunion hai aur abhi tak nahi aayi wo ghar.

Pooja: jiju hamara koi reunion nahi tha. Aap relax kijiye main kisi aur se baat krti hoon. Shayad kisi ko kuch pata ho.

AJ: lekin please thoda jaldi. I am waiting.

Pooja: ok.

AJ: ye guddan achanak aise kahan chali gayi. Pooja ne kaha unka koi reunion nai tha. Phir guddan kahan jaa sakti hai.

Pooja: jiju Maine sab se baat ki kisi ko kuch b pata nahi hai.

Maa: lalla mera mann shaam se he bechain tha. Pata nai meri guddan kahan hogi, kis haal main hogi.

AJ: maa kuch nai hoga guddan abhi aa jaye gi. Phone discharge hogaya hoga.

Angad: bhai mujhe lagta hai hume police ko inform kar dena chahiye.

Kalyani: beta is main police ko involve krne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Choti bacchi nahi hai guddan jo kho jayegi. Apni marzi se gayi hai aa rahi hogi.

AJ: ( clenched his fist) yaad rakhna Kalyani Agarwal agar mujhe pata chali is sab main tumhara haath hai to guddan ki kasam khaa k kehta hoon main tumhe nahi chhodunga. And goes to his room.

Angad: mummy ji bhai kya keh rahe thay.

Kalyani: beta wo thode gusse main hai is waqt. Baaki koi baat nahi hai.

AJ: (on phone) commissioner (C) sb main Akshat Jindal bol raha hoon.

C: haan jindal sb boliye. Itni raat ko kaise yaad kiya.

AJ: dekhiye meri biwi ghar ghar waapas nahi aayi hai wo ghar pe bol k gayi thi reunion hai lekin i called her friends but they said koi reunion tha he nahi.

C: jindal sb i think we should wait till morning. Maybe wo kisi kaam main phas gayi hongi.

AJ: jee nahi aisa nahi hai. she always calls agar aisa kuch bhi hota hai.

C: jindal sb i understand your concern but 24 ghante se pehle hum kuch nahi kar sakte and moreover wo apni marzi se gayi hain.

AJ sits down on the floor holding his head.

Maa: lalla kuch pata chali

AJ: nahi maa kuch bhi nahi. Maa mere saath he kyun hamesha aisa hota hai ( placing his head on her lap). Ajeeb si gabrahat ho rahi hai. Guddan theek to hogi na.

Maa: lalla mann to mera bhi bahut ghabra raha hai. Lekin dekhna Kanha ji sab theek kar denge.

Where is Guddan and with whom????

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Posted: 6 years ago
Is she with perv???
I think so...
Hope she is safe ..
Kalyani aunty tu to gayi abhi...
Update soon dear...
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