||Secrets & Lies||- AkshAn SS (Part 16 PG 41) (27 May) - Page 23

Created

Last reply

Replies

320

Views

45.1k

Users

26

Likes

361

Frequent Posters

nish_vir thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

Nice update nish

Thankz😛
Saru chorni ke saath aisa hi hona chahiye that
Chorni ab chudail banne wali hai😆

Flash back was really sweet and cute
You mean it?!😉 thanks😳

Guddan ki baat sach ho gayi jindal sahab pad gaye uske pyar main

Continue soon nish

( Sorry di ki marriage main busy thi to comment nahi kar payi thi)
Its cool😃 we all have responsibilities to bear which are way moreimp

nish_vir thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 6 years ago

Part 11 Poles Apart

As Akshat hurried towards the pool, he found Guddan flailing her hands helplessly. An absolute feeling of horror dawned as he realized that she couldn't swim and he could end up losing her. Without thinking for another second, he jumped into the pool and swimming towards her quickly, caught hold of her hand and pulled her close.

GK looked on confused as her so-called-husband patted her cheeks almost desperately. His voice was panicky and his actions were almost feverish. She had actually forgotten how it felt to be cared about.

"Guddan...are you alright? Akshat asked scared.

"I am fine, Mr. Jindal! GK replied amused as Akshat sighed in relief and before she could realize what was happening, he had her tucked into his embrace.

She couldn't make head or tail of the situation. She could feel the man's shoulders shaking as he buried her face into his shoulder.

The water was cold so was the weather and yet...

It felt warm.

The eyes that had fluttered close flew open as her brain registered the words that had emanated from depths of her being.

"You seem to be enjoying yourself! I am not sure if I feel the same way... GK spoke as Akshat withdrew from her and looked at her confused.

"Your hands... GK signalled pointing to his hands over her bare back as he looked at his hands and then examined her to see her covered in nothing but lingerie.

Shocked, he snatched his hands back and covered his eyes, "Sorry! He shrieked, embarrassed.

"You should be! GK retorted rolling her eyes as she started swimming towards the edge of pool.

As she swam past him, realization dawned and disbelief seeped in, "You can swim?! He shouted.

"Of course, I can! GK replied turning around to face him as he turned his face away flustered.

"Jab itni sharam aati hai Mr. Jindal toh chance par dance maarne ki koshish kyun karte hain?! GK asked as she slid the bathrobe over her shoulders and tied its string.

"I wasn't trying to do anything! He shouted in his defence as he stepped out of the pool and caught the towel, GK threw in his direction.

"You should never judge a book by its cover! Upar se toh aap kaafi seedhe lagte hain but andar se... GK teased as Akshat removed the towel to defend himself, yet again.

"It isn't like that! I just thought that...

"I was drowning?! GK completed appearing right in front of him as Akshat nodded.

"You see, I had developed fear of water when one fine day in my childhood, I fell into a pond and was almost on the verge of dying. I carried that sinking feeling with me for quite a few years until I decided to conquer it. It wasn't easy...every time I stepped into water, I felt someone dragging me down but I resisted till that day came. Someone pushed me from behind into the pool and I didn't die. I emerged from the depths using the very water. Four years, Mr. Jindal...It took me four years to crush that sinking feeling with my very own hands

Someone pushed me from behind...'

What did she mean? Why would someone push her?

"And when I had finally decided to accustom my muscles to their favourite exercise, you went and spoiled it by thinking that I was drowning! I don't know what your eyes saw but I was just enjoying water's embrace or maybe Jayce isn't the only one you are jealous of... GK trailed purportedly as she started to leave.

"Who pushed you? Why? He asked as GK paused and turned her neck, to meet his eyes.

"Who? I don't know...there are just a lot of names to remember! Why? No clue either coz there are a lot of reasons to !

Before Akshat could ask her anything else, she disappeared into the refines of their room. He followed suit only to find her appearing out of the bathroom and start inspecting the big tub of ice cream kept on the table.

"You got a sweet tooth, hubby? GK enquired, drying her hairs.

"No...it's for you, He replied smiling.

"For me? GK enquired incredulously as Akshat nodded.

"Forget ice cream, I avoid sweets altogether, GK replied sliding the tub back on the table.

"Par tum toh... Akshat trailed remembering the countless times he found her stuffing her mouth with ice cream.

"Haven't I told you?! Guddan was a lie that lived in the past and I believe in facing the reality GK replied in a sombre tone as she lay down on the bed and turned her face away.

Flashback:

"Kitna meetha khaegi Gudiya?! Daant par keede lag jaenge, A woman in her early forties chided the child on catching her red handed with a cookie in one hand and ice cream in another.

"Par mama! Eating sweets make me really happy!! The girl expressed her happiness by flailing her hands.

Chuckling at her innocence, the woman sweeped the girl off the kitchen counter and started tickling her, "Badmaash bachaa!!

And with that the duo broke out into a fit of giggles that lightened up the entire atmosphere.

"Why mom? Why? GK whispered keeping her arm over her eyes. "Why did you leave your Gudiya alone?

Akshat clenched his fist as he saw her shoulders rocking lightly. As she moved her hands and their eyes met, quickly she pulled the quilt over her head and turned the light off.

~*~*~*~*~*~

"Who are you people!!? What do you want?!! A woman shrieked in desperation hugging her daughter close while a group of masked men closed in on them.

The girl hugged her mother tight as a man in white mask pulled out a revolver from his back pocket.

"Y-Ye aap...kya... The woman stammered as she pulled her daughter behind her back, "Kya chahiye aapko?! Bataiye!! M-Money? I'll give it t-to y-you...

With clammy hands, the woman started scrounging her purse and soon her palm surfaced out of the purse with a bundle of notes. As she forwarded it in their direction, they started chuckling.

"Oh! You have got cash! The man in white mask stepped to the front and started tapping revolver against his chin thoughtfully, "In that case...

It all transpired so quickly. The muzzle of the revolver was aimed at the woman and before she could make sense of anything, the sound of bullet echoed across the sky as the clouds opened up and the woman went still.

"...you should curse your origins because they spelled your demise! The man shrugged nonchalantly.

"Mama! The girl peeked from behind her mother as the woman dropped to the ground like a paper weight with a bullet pierced through her forehead.

"Mamaaa!! The girl started crying as she patted her mother's cheeks but to no avail. Her pupils were frozen in a state of shock.

"M..ama... The girl's palms started shivering as the weight of her mother's dead body in her lap outweighed the roaring rumble of thunder.

"Don't worry! I will send you to your mother too where you can both live in peace and the way of our employer is finally cleared, The white masked man cooed as he kept the gun against her forehead.

She looked on with scared eyes as another ear piercing sound echoed.

"Nooo!!

Akshat snapped out of his sleep as a blood curdling scream rang from inside their room.

GK continued to stare into the space with horrified eyes as sweat beads trickled down her forehead. Her heart was beating loud enough to be heard over the silence of the room.

"Guddan?! Akshat rushed inside the room worried as their eyes met and for the first time, he could see fear in her eyes.

Without wasting a second, he was by her side as he pulled her into his embrace and started massaging her back in an effort to soothe her.

"It's alright! It's alright! I-I am here! It's fine! He placated her as GK managed to snap into the reality and nodding her head, clutched his kurta tight.

And soon the rhythmic beating of Akshat's heart managed to lull her into sleep while a peace depraved Akshat looked at her worried.

Only 4 days left...how can I stop you, Guddan? How?!


I am early in update! Am I not!!😆

Consider it a compensation for the late and irregular updates and also an advance sorry in case if these updates end up becoming even more distant and irregular🥱

Because the exam sharp sword is hanging right over my neck and I've got to survive! You get the gist? Don't you!!😕

I'll try to update the other two stories too asap that is whenever it is!!😃

Hope you enjoy reading it! Do share your views!⭐️

Kajal21 thumbnail
6th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
Guddan can swim i was also shocked like Aj
Guddan cant forget about her mother's murder Gk is scared for the first time and Akshat was consoling her
Only 4 days are left and Gk have no memory with jindal family as guddan
Update soon
Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago
plmzaq thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon
Angelsanvika08 thumbnail
6th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
Nice chapter nish
Gk ne kya dialogue maar chance pe dance

Gk ki nightmare bahot scary hai

Uss par kya beeti hogi apni ma ki maut apne akho ke samne dekh kar

Jindal sahab kuch na kuch kar hi lenge guddan ko rokne ke liye

Update soon nish
nish_vir thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Guddan can swim i was also shocked like Aj

Yeah😆 she as Guddan had just forgotten her skill
Guddan cant forget about her mother's murder Gk is scared for the first time and Akshat was consoling her
Everything has a reason and every reason has a background. That's where gk comes from🥱
Only 4 days are left and Gk have no memory with jindal family as guddan
Update soon

Fly_high thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 6 years ago
Nish awesome super se bhi upar damn flashback was scary and tragic traumatic even no wonder why GK has nightmares and needs medication for it anyone can go crazy after experiencing something like that. What would have little innocent Guddan must have gone through AJ who was a grown up and couldn't handle Antra's death which might have been purely accident watching her mother being murdered shot dead right infront of her eyes then being attacked and surviving it that would have been way more painful then anything else. Wonder what would be Jindal Sahab's reaction after realising it the person who can't bear a single tear in her eyes or a single scratch on her that gudiya of his has gone through something like this and much more it's not going to be easy for him top it with realisation and guilt of mistreatment she met with him and his family boyyyhh. Heck every family members reaction would be worth seeing. Flashback with her mother was adorable too. GK can swim to be honest when AJ thought she can't swim and jumped in to save her was more surprising because in previous update I thought she must be swimming here comes another surprise for you Mr.Jindal but later with Mr.Jindal shocked and GK rocked I enjoyed it. 😆 Does it makes me a sadist if I say I enjoy hairan-pareshan Jindal Sahab from his wife😆 and no Jindal Sahab you won't be able to stop her but worry not I know you would end up going Dubai pichu pichu to your wifey😆 oops shhh let's not talk more😉..

PS Nish want to know where does Rawat uncle and AJ's brother fit into all this ???and how much of the story have changed?? Did the Christmas party incident with Bhushan ji happened or not?? Bcz if yes then sabka hisab hoga otherwise I will keep wondering how much of the Insaaf is going to happen here.
Edited by BhataktiAtma. - 6 years ago
nish_vir thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.

Nish awesome super se bhi upar

Awww😳 thanks...
damn flashback was scary and tragic traumatic even no wonder why GK has nightmares and needs medication for it anyone can go crazy after experiencing something like that. What would have little innocent Guddan must have gone through AJ who was a grown up and couldn't handle Antra's death which might have been purely accident watching her mother being murdered shot dead right infront of her eyes then being attacked and surviving it that would have been way more painful then anything else.
That's right, that one inncident years back changed who she was. She could only watch helplessly as her mother was killed and later in life, she realized that it was a planned killing so it intensified the pain and transformed it into anger.
Wonder what would be Jindal Sahab's reaction after realising it the person who can't bear a single tear in her eyes or a single scratch on her that gudiya of his has gone through something like this and much more it's not going to be easy for him top it with realisation and guilt of mistreatment she met with him and his family boyyyhh. Heck every family members reaction would be worth seeing. Flashback with her mother was adorable too.
Yup😛 and it was necessary to show how much she changed after her mother's death. Every happy memory became a reason for pain.
GK can swim to be honest when AJ thought she can't swim and jumped in to save her was more surprising because in previous update I thought she must be swimming here comes another surprise for you Mr.Jindal but later with Mr.Jindal shocked and GK rocked I enjoyed it.
I had to do it to show Guddan and gk's difference😆 jindal saab went and made popat of himself😆
😆 Does it makes me a sadist if I say I enjoy hairan-pareshan Jindal Sahab from his wife😆
In that case, we are birds of the same feather😆
and no Jindal Sahab you won't be able to stop her but worry not I know you would end up going Dubai pichu pichu to your wifey😆 oops shhh let's not talk more😉..
Spoiler~~~~😆

PS Nish want to know where does Rawat uncle and AJ's brother fit into all this ???
They won't be finding their space here🥱
and how much of the story have changed?? Did the Christmas party incident with Bhushan ji happened or not?? Bcz if yes then sabka hisab hoga otherwise I will keep wondering how much of the Insaaf is going to happen here.
Talking bout that, lets just say I haven't thought that far and also gk's memory is almost gone and till now, whatever she had recalled of her memories in jindal house had been related to Akshat and his ukhda bartav.
And the other info like durga's and saru's mistreatment was passed onto her by someone (I'll let you guess that~😉)
So yeah, this story won't have fighting for her parents ki beizzati and such, it will be about her,her past, Akshat and their messed up present
BUT nonetheless, I'll try to give you some jhatak doses that won't be probably as extreme as kaushalya ki dhulai but will still try my level best😃

nish_vir thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks⭐️
nish_vir thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Continue soon

Thanks⭐️

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".