Apology-TS[Akshan] chapter 9 last part updated on 4 march - Page 20

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

No Saanu use realize nahi feel huaa who kehte hai naa jab tak chot nahi lagti tab tak dard ka ehsaas nahi hota. So the same goes with this.

Use Antara ke bare main sun kar toh nahi but when someone says her 2nd in AJ s life then surely use hurt hota hai remember when Durga told her that she will always be second woman in AJ's life. her eyes literally spoke her heart out.

Even I could feel how much hurt she was..

Yeh toh Ved raj uncle jaane as for here I have ended it.

Thank you so much Saanu as this time I surely need it.

As mujhase kuch padhai ho nahi rahi and this is getting me more frustrated hence I wrote this to change my mood Yaar ghanto baithne ke baad agar ek pge bhi naa ho toh bohot frustration hoti hai

and upar se this is the last chance as final semester hai.

So band toh bajne waali hai

Thanks!

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Awesome

Thanks For The PM

Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

I know yar exam tension mera bhi final semester hai pressure bhot jyada meri bhi same situation😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

I know yar exam tension mera bhi final semester hai pressure bhot jyada meri bhi same situation😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Chit15

Awesome update

I loved the way Akshat realised the pain Guddan would have gone through Antara Jaap and the way he asked different punishments was adorable

Ending was awesome

Thank you for beautiful story

All the best for exams

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Matlab

I know I stretched it alot as I thought this will take 3 shots but it took 9

Thanks!

Even I want but I want AJ not to realise he should feel what must Guddan going through because of his Antara jaap and then he ends it.

Keep loving! As your love is the reason I am here.

What? and if you genuienely wants me to write more so atleast you need to tell me some plot or expectations don't worry I have 2 to 3 more stories and there are many half baked.

Thank you so much dear as this time lagta hai luck ki bohot zaroorat padne waali hai as I haven't touched my books yet and kal thoda liya toh kuch ho nahi paaya.

So band toh iss baar solid bajne waali hai.

Even I was so frustrated so to change my mood I wrote it and I think this was Okayish as you loved the ending..

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Nhi yr jyada bara nhi tha i enjoyed and loved it...stories me guddan jab ghar chor k chali jati h and aj is missing guddu badly aur vo apne ghar pe v nhi h us track me ek story plz likna plz

yr same condition mra v h exam pass me hai and i havent touched my book yet isliye i can understand ur situation isliye once again bst of luck.

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Thank you so much and keep loving it.

Ohh you are requesting for the track main soch rahi thi aisa serial main kab huaa...

When I read it again tab samajh aaya.

Well honestly even I want to write on this track but the problem is mere dimaag main reh reh kar who Jab we met waala track aa raha hain if something different strikes my mind then surely.

Aww that's so sweet of you. All the best to you too Well main kaafi dinon se Os likhna chaah rahi thi and even some random scenes are in mind of holi So kyaa karu?

Needed a suggestion...

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Nhi yr jyada bara nhi tha i enjoyed and loved it...stories me guddan jab ghar chor k chali jati h and aj is missing guddu badly aur vo apne ghar pe v nhi h us track me ek story plz likna plz

yr same condition mra v h exam pass me hai and i havent touched my book yet isliye i can understand ur situation isliye once again bst of luck.