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Chapter 9

As Akshan's cuddly hug got disturbed from the sounds of claps as the whole hall was appreciating them. They aparted from each other Guddan's eyes got lowered in shyness as they both were indeed caught red-handed.but still she blushed.

Kabir and Divya who were witnessing all this left the hall in rage.Everyone congratulated Akshan and even Akshan took leave from the party.

As they were out ofhall Guddan ran towards car and Akshat was behind her.She was left shy and as soon she reached near cae she holded it's door tight. Her hearbeats were high.Akshat reached there he placed his palm on her shoulder to which she smiled as now she is familiar to his touch,his warmth, her husband's warmth.

He placed his palm on her shoulders and turned her back her eyes were still low even her face was low.He catched her chin in between his thumb and index finger and lifted her face up.He was so lost in her.His eyes speaking his heart out.Both's heartrate were so high and both of them were so close that they both could even listen each other's heartbeats.

Akshat lifted her face up and bend closed towards her.As his lips approached her's he stopped in between when he was just a cm away from it...

Guddan who felt weird to this as she knows him very well.He is not the one who would shy,or bother about getting caught or is embarrassed whenever they are caught red-handed while romancing. Infact he is the one who lefts her with no option to give him what he wants irrespective of time and location.So, now what happened to him? Is he alright? Why did he stopped in between? Such innumerous questions filled her mind.

She was back to senses by his voice.

Akshat- Chalo Guddan.

He said in his typical authoritive voice.

Guddan- But

Before she utters

Akshat- I said get in the car Guddan we have to reach home.

With this she knew she has no option ,she nodded and sits in the car.

He drove the car to Mansion.In between the way he didn't even utter a single word and even drived fast which he doesn't generally.With his cold behavior Guddan was left scared.

And when she tried to ask he played the music player and made it's volume full so she couldn't ask...

At Jindal Mansion -

The trio of Lakshmi,Vardaan and Saraswati was having fun with their home party while playing cards.Akshat stood out of car and went to his room directly.As guddan was following him the trio catched her.

Saraswati- Kyaa Saasu maa,abhi abhi toh aap AJ ke saath enjoy kar ke aayi hai thoda bohot humare saath bhi enjoy kar lo.

Guddan- Not now Saru bahu,we will have fun later.

Vardaan- Not fair Guddan maa,you always discriminates between papa and us. I mean it's Ok that you both loves each other and your both's first priority should be each other, but don't forget that we are your kids and some attention should be given to us too.

Guddan- No Vardaan ji,It's not like that.

Vardaan- No it is like that whenever papa wants he takes you to party,tour,conclave anything and even you doesn't show tantrums but when we wants to spend time with our mother cum friend we are always told to wait.Why should we always wait?

To this Lakshmi and Saraswati too defended Vardaan.

Guddan helplessly- What you all want me to do now?

Lakshmi,Vardaan and Saru- Nothing much now just couple of game of cards with us and along chit chat session.

Guddan knew she can't disobey them as indeed they have always been her second priority after Akshat and due to her first priority i.e. Akshat she does not donate as much time she should give to her sons as Akshat always manages to keep her busy in another things.

And the complain of her Son is valid and his demand is not either big or unfair that he wants to spend some quality time with his family and especially his mother.

Guddan agreed and four of them played couple of games. The whole group of four enjoyed the game and even had chat about party.

After knowing that Akshat himself proposed her to dance 3 of them couldn't believe but When Guddan swore on Dadi,they agreed.

Lakshmi- Look,Seekho kuch Vardaan apne papa se, AJ is so romantic even in this age.

Saraswati- Sassu maa AJ se kahiye naa ki kuch tips wo mere Rahul ko bhi de de romance ke.

Vardaan- Shit! We missed this Kaash hum sab bhi wahaan hote to witness this side of papa.

To this Guddan's cheek were red but thank God Durga came there as her savior,she is always her savior from this wicked 3 as they always succeeds in taking out their Couple romancing Secres from Guddan and is on the hell to tease her.

Durga- yeh achha hai AJ ke saamne toh tum logon ki daal galti nahi,unke saamne toh tum kuch nahi kehte but you are always besided Guddan.

Lakshmi,Vardaan and Saru- But Durga di,Bhabhi.

No

Durga shut them up and concluded the game to be over.

After they all 3 went to their respective rooms.

Guddan thanked Durga.

Guddan- Thank you Durgaji you always come as my savior.

Durga- It's OK Guddan,now go in your room and take some rest.Thak gayi hogi and Aj too must be waiting for you she winked at her last line.

Guddan- Kyaa Durgaji ab aap bhi.

Durga- Sach main and don't forget tomorrow you have our trust's function and the responsibility of all the arrangements is on your shoulder.and as the trust is on AntaraMaaji's name AJ won't tolerate even a single mistake.

Guddan- Placing her hand on her hand

Aree baapre yeh toh hum bhool hi gaye the Thanks Durgaji for reminding.

Durga- Now are you gonna take rest or yahi khade rehne ka iraada hai tumhara? As tommorrow's day is gonna superhectic for you.

Ok bye Durgaji and even Durga and Guddan left towards their respective rooms.

In Akshan's room-

As Guddan entered her room she saw Akshat sleeping peacefully on bed.

Guddan kamal hai inhohne change bhi kar liya and so bhi gaye. Thak gaye honge after all even he has hectic schedule in restraunt too and upar se yeh party,kal programme.

She went to closet took her night clothes out, changed and went on bed, before going to sleep she waved her hand through his hairs and kissed on his forhead and whispered Thankyou Akshatji for all the happiness you brought with you in my life.Thankyou so much! And I love you!!

After this she switched off the lamp and went to sleep.Akshat turned towards her he stared her with teary eyes. And tried to sleep but couldn't.

In the morning

When guddan woke up she didn't find Akshat in room.

Guddan- What has happened to him? Why is he behaving such? Yesterday he stopped in between, then went to sleep before me and now without note without informing me where do he went? Aakhir baat kya hai please akshatji kuch toh bataiyee atleast hume iss layak toh samjhiye ki hum aapki problems share kar sake.

She got ready and went downstairs. As she came downstairs Guddan asked Durga about Akshat.

Durga told her Aj has some important work so he left early and will directly join us in programme.

Guddan- Ok!

Durga- Now get ready as the ladies of trust is waiting for you.

Guddan smiled and she got superbusy in arrngements as she doesn't want her Akshat to let down.

In the evening the function took place.the function was at grand succssess even Aj was mesmerized he knew his Guddan won't let him down but itni precised arrangements everyone congratulated her. While she was taking appreciation her eyes searched for him but he clapped in crowd and left from there before she goes behind him she was again caught in crowd.

When she reached at home she went straightly to her room so she could have an final faceoff with him but as like yesterday he was sleeping peacefully.

Guddan- No I should not disturb his sleep.

Guddan changed and as usual kissed his forehead and whispered.

What is bothering you Akshatji?Please give your problems to me.Aapke saare dard hume de dijiye please. I can't see you like this.

And she slept holding his hand As she slept he again opened his eyes and stared her this time his tear took placeof trust,love and guilt in it. He tried to remove his hand from her hold but as she was holding it too tightly his move would had break her sleep and he has to face her.So he didn't.

In the early morning as in her deep sleep her hold on his hand loosened he sucssessfully managed to take his hand out. When her eyes opened he was wearing his tie.

Guddan- Kyaa ha! Huaa kya hai aapko? Why the hell you are not talking to me.

Akshat- Abb yeh tumse kisne keh diya.

Guddan- What's the need to tell?

Bataiye naa aap naraaz hai kya humse? Humse koi galti ho gayi?

Akshat- nahi Guddan.

Guddan- Then why are you avoiding me saying this she almost bursted out in tears.

He wiped some tears Aisa kuch nahi hai Guddan mai tumse naraaz nahi hun.

He turned his face.

Akshat in his mind Ab kya batau isse,mujhe hua kya hai and why the hell main isse naraaz hunga?

Guddan placed her hand on back of his shoulder and turned him before he utters. Someone knocked the dooe.

Knock!! Knock!!

He opened the door it was Saraswati.

Kahiye Saru bahu

Looking at the tensed atmosphere in the room Sorry agar main galat time par aayi hunt oh but who actually I came here to inform Saasu maa that the ladies of trust has come and waiting for her in living room as the payments are to be cleared out today itself and all the receipts and bills are with Saasu Maa.

Akshat- You don't need to be Sorry Saru bahu.Aapne sahi kiyaa, Just tell them that Guddan will join them in 10 minutes as she has just wake up as she will freshen up tabtak you 3 of them attend them.

Saru- OK AJ.

Akshat went towards Guddan holded her hand Guddan stop crying and trust me I am neither furious on you( naraaz nahi hu main tumse na hi kisi problem main hoon).

But Guddan we have guests at our home and they must be treated well and aking them wait is not good So get ready and join them even I am getting late for restraunt..

She agreed and he went to office.

She got ready and went with the ladies to cleat the payments.

In the night when she entered the room she was completely amazed as her room was completely decorated with red and white ballons a beautiful chocolate cake was placed on the small side table.and besides it her loving husband was standing holding his ears.

" I am extremely Sorry Guddan.

Akshat said in a firm voice. Guddan smiled shockingly as she couldn't get his apology.

Why is he apologizing?Instead it shoud me who should apologise. What's the matter and such innumerous thoughts occupied her mind.

As she stepped forward she watched towards the cake.

"Jitni bhadaas nikalni hai nikaal lo the way you want this reminded her their first meet where she smashed cake on his face.

Nahi Ok then what punishment will you give me ? Akshat said.

Guddan was looking at him questioningly. Before she understands anything.

Akshat started to unbutton his shirt.

He removed his shirt and as he was about to remove his vest she grabbed his hand.

Guddan-What are you doing? She asked furiously.

Akshat- my punishment he replied calmly. Don't you remember you punished that shopkeeper who chorbazaarwaala...

Guddan- Oh! Aap saza mang rahe hain yaah mauke pe chauka huh!

Akshat- What Guddan ek toh I am seriously apologizing and tum iska mazaak bana rahi ho.

Wait Did you have any new punishment for me?

Guddan- holded his hands Akshat Akshat Akshat calm down calm down just tell me why would I punish you.I can't. And why are you apologizing?

Akshat- No Guddan I should be,I deserved to be.

Guddan- Ok Ok I will but let me know what you havedone and based on it I will unish you OK!

Akshat- I am so Sorry Guddan I never realized through what you must have gone through whenever someone talks about Me and Antara.i always took you granted. I never even tried to realize it.

Guddan- No Akshat it's not your fault.

Akshat- It is Guddan, I agree you never said but atleast I would have tried to understand. Yeh tumhara badappan hai that you neither complained nor made any issue over it.Even mai bhi many times ended up comparing you with Antara and I always forgets that you are not Antara you are a completely different person and has your own uniqueness.

Thanks to that reunion agar nahi jaata tohI would never have realized when people or someone talks about Me and Antara our memories what you must be going through. How hard or tough it becomes for you.

Akshat's eyes became teary

Guddan came forward wiped his tears out,cuped his face and said No it never hurted me Akshatji.

Each person every sinle moment of your's is special for me as it isyour's and why would I feel bad when I know that at present and for the future you are completely mine.

Akshat- Phir bhi guddan in the party jantaa toh main bhi than aa that you are completely mine and how much you loved me.

Still I feel weird it was not jealousy it was such other feeling that I even had no word to express it but was so weird when people talked about you and Kabir.I completely understands it was your past and you have completely moved on. You love me so much and I was completely unaware what you must be going through each time someone says about Antara.

Guddan- No Akshatji!! It's not your fault.

Guddan- Rahul ke bacchee I am not going to spare you.

Akshat- Why?

Guddan- What Why? After all he hurt feelings of my only husband. I wn't spare him that easily.

Akshat- No Guddan it's not about Rahul.

Guddan- Then kisi aur ne aapse kuch kaha?

Akshat- nahi

It was just people were chanting about your's and Kabir's memories and to whom you will punish.

To this Guddan bursted into laughter.

Guddan- holding his arm and resting her head on his shoulders I knew aisa hi kuch hoga that's why I was resisting to go to party.

Akshat- Tumhe pata tha.

Guddan- Umm.

Akshat-but how?

Guddan- Look me and Kabir were in long term relationship and when we broke up it was end of our college so many of them must not knowing about it. And they were going to talk about it and I Knew my husband very well that he is gonna take it by other side. I had complete faith on my husband.

But aap toh aap hai apni zidd manwaa kar jo rehte hai.

Akshat Ohh Sorry toh ab punishment bhi dedo I am waiting for it.

Guddan- Ok! She asked him to sit on his knees and close his eyes.

Akshat- What?

Abb tum mujhse aankhe band karwaa ke kyaa karne waali ho.

Guddan- Just close your eyes and don't open it till I say.

Akshat- OK fine and closed his eyes.

She came near him bend down cupped his face tilted her face and gave a peck on his lips.Even he reciprocated and they had an intense liplock.

They both parted as now she can't breathe.

Akshat- not bad Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal.Infact this was too good.

And did you notice it's forst time when youhave initiated...

Guddan- grabbing her breath so What should I do? I had to complete the task which my husband left in between that day.

Akshat- Ohh If this is the thig then...

He stood up and bent near her he pushed her hard she landed on bed.

Guddan- Ouch! What was this.

He removed his vest and came close to her.

Guddan- Whispered scaringly What are you about to?

Aap kya kar rahe hain he leaned closer to her and whispered in her ear after biting it

"mauke pe chakka mar raha hun.

To this she smiled and pulled him more closer.

He covered both of them in blanket and sheded his love on her.He showered his everlasting love,his passion on her intensely and she cosnumed his love his passion which was for her only for her...

The End!!

So here is the end of the story I know it's long one but I had to complete it in this single part.

As there are my exams and today my data pack is exhausting then don't know when I would be able to post So ended.

Sorry if this is not upto expectations but I tried.

As I thought this to end in 3 parts it got too stretched that it took 9 parts thanks for bearing.

And do tell was it upto your expectations.

Waiting for all of your's priceless feedback!

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Originally posted by: manali9796

It's beautiful

Continue soon dear

Thanks!
But it's already heading towards end.
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Posted: 6 years ago
khatam v ho gya
beautiful ending akhir kaar Aj ko samjh aya apna antra jaap to band kiya i hope show me v aisa ho
loved it
do write more
and best of luck for ur exams
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice ending dear
Akshat ko akhir realize to hua ki antra jaap se guddan ko kya feel hoti hogi

I am sure show main bhi aisa hai guddan dikhati nahi hai par usse bhi bura lagta hoga apne pati ki 1st wife ke bare mian sun sun kar

Pata nahi yeh antra jaap kab stop hoga show main

Best of luck gayu for your exam

Keep writing and give us such lovely stories
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Beautiful ending
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Awesome
Thanks For The PM
Edited by nahtani88 - 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

khatam v ho gya

beautiful ending akhir kaar Aj ko samjh aya apna antra jaap to band kiya i hope show me v aisa ho
loved it
do write more
and best of luck for ur exams

Matlab
I know I stretched it alot as I thought this will take 3 shots but it took 9
Thanks!
Even I want but I want AJ not to realise he should feel what must Guddan going through because of his Antara jaap and then he ends it.
Keep loving! As your love is the reason I am here.
What? and if you genuienely wants me to write more so atleast you need to tell me some plot or expectations don't worry I have 2 to 3 more stories and there are many half baked.

Thank you so much dear as this time lagta hai luck ki bohot zaroorat padne waali hai as I haven't touched my books yet and kal thoda liya toh kuch ho nahi paaya.
So band toh iss baar solid bajne waali hai.
Even I was so frustrated so to change my mood I wrote it and I think this was Okayish as you loved the ending..
Thanks!
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Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

Nice ending dear

Akshat ko akhir realize to hua ki antra jaap se guddan ko kya feel hoti hogi

I am sure show main bhi aisa hai guddan dikhati nahi hai par usse bhi bura lagta hoga apne pati ki 1st wife ke bare mian sun sun kar

Pata nahi yeh antra jaap kab stop hoga show main

Best of luck gayu for your exam

Keep writing and give us such lovely stories

No Saanu use realize nahi feel huaa who kehte hai naa jab tak chot nahi lagti tab tak dard ka ehsaas nahi hota. So the same goes with this.

Use Antara ke bare main sun kar toh nahi but when someone says her 2nd in AJ s life then surely use hurt hota hai remember when Durga told her that she will always be second woman in AJ's life. her eyes literally spoke her heart out.
Even I could feel how much hurt she was..

Yeh toh Ved raj uncle jaane as for here I have ended it.

Thank you so much Saanu as this time I surely need it.
As mujhase kuch padhai ho nahi rahi and this is getting me more frustrated hence I wrote this to change my mood Yaar ghanto baithne ke baad agar ek pge bhi naa ho toh bohot frustration hoti hai
and upar se this is the last chance as final semester hai.
So band toh bajne waali hai
Thanks!
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Beautiful ending

Thank you and keep loving!

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