Apology-TS[Akshan] chapter 9 last part updated on 4 march - Page 17

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Waah bahut shi andaaza lagaya but how did u know?

No points for guessing!

Beautiful update dear

Chapter 8

As Sunaina asked Guddan to introduce her with their (Guddan and Rahul's) friends Guddan agreed and both left the place leaving Akshat and Rahul alone. Kabir who was standing behind them smiled evilly and gulped the whole glass of Rum.

Rahul who was still embarrassed with his behavior doesn't knew what to say and he remained silent making sure not to make any eye contact with Akshat. After few minutes Akshat noticed the silence and finally asked Rahul.

Akshat- What happened Rahul? Are you alright?

Rahul- No, Nothing Mujhe kya hoga.

Akshat- If this is true,then why are you stealing your gaze from me? Tell me ki Mujhase nazare kyun chura rahe ho?

Rahul stammeringly Woh Mr.Jindal I am actually Sorry, I swear I didn't have any idea about Guddan and Kabir. I wouldn't have said it if I would have any rough idea.

" Mujhe zara sa bhi ilm hota toh main aisa kabhi nahi kehta.

Akshat smiled and replied.

Akshat- It's Ok Rahul no one will do it deliberately and it's not your fault at all maybe I would have done the same thing, reacted the same way as you reacted if I would have been at your place. I can completely understand it.So you don't need to get embarrassed at all.

At this breaking his hesitation Rahul said. Really?

Akshat- Offcourse.

Akshat opened his arms and invited Rahul to hug him. Rahul hugged Akshat happily.

Akshat and Rahul enjoyed each other's company for long time. Guddan and Sunaina were still busy in their girl gang.

After sometime Rahul's friend came and asked him to join their college friend's group.Rahul denied looking at Akshat but Akshat insisted him to join.After Akshat insisted him alot Rahul asked Akshat too to join them but Akshat refused as he was new and he knows it was their friend's time and joining a new guy can make them feel hesitant.

So Rahul too left now Akshat was getting bored alone.His eyes searching for Guddan as he looked around he didn't find her and when he turned he noticed Kabir infront of him just an inch away.

Kabir- Guddan ko dhund rahe ho?

Akshat ignored him and tried to leave but kabir blocked his way.

Kabir- Aise hi hai woh, apnea age kisi ki fiqr nahi,kadar nahi, she doesn't value her partner's feeling.

Akshat with a chilled freezed smile on his face whispered in his ears.

Akshat- She never valued your feelings as your feelings weren't pure. And she values and entertains only pure and true feelings as like she is, but you won't understand it as you are far away from purity. He tapped his hand on his shoulders and went from there.

This drove Kabir crazy. He was so angry that he broke the rumglass in his hand.

In his anger he murmured.

No Kabir no you can't loose to that bluddy Guddan's husband,Never be cool Kabir cool,just chill and you will definitely find a way out.

After few seconds he smiled evilly and went towards DJ of the party. He whispered something in his ears and gave around 5000 to him.Instructing him to do his work.

Akshat whose eyes were desperately searching Guddan could finally catch a glimpse of her.he smiled looking at her but she didn't noticed as she was busy. Akshat was busy staring her constantly his eyes followed her.Kabircame and standed back in his friend's group which was just some distance behind Akshat.

He signaled DJ to execute his plan,DJ nodded in yes

And music began to play.

Haan ankhiyaan nu ankhiyaan ujad lagiyaan.

Kabir smiled evilly. As Guddan listened the song her expressions changed.

Guddan- What the hell is this, Kisne kiya hai yeh ghatiya Mazak?

Sunaina who was still with Guddan asked her about the matter.

One of the boy from Kabir's gang taunted Kabir.

Boy- hey Kabir,isn't it the same song which you used to sing for guddan.

Kabir smiled and replied- ohh actually it's the same I didn't noticed it.

Akshat who was overhearing it managed to stay calm

Boy- I still remember the way you both used to dance n this song.Remember we used to call this song as your's Kabir and Guddan's.

As guddan hasn't yet replied to Sunaina's question.

Sunaina asked her shakingly- guddan.

Guddan- Wooh before she could utter an old friend of Guddan came and said.

Hey Guddan isn't it your favourite song.I remember how much you oved the song when it was in it's initial days, Kabir especially learnt this song to propose you and he proposed you by singing this song bending on his knees playing guitar and singing the song.

I still remember you both used to dance on this song and Jo sama tum dono baandhte the na...

Now guddan got angry look but before she answers her she heard a familiar voice and turned back.

She was amazed to see Akshat opening his one hand and one hand back. He asked her to dance.

Akshat- may I have the privilege to dance with the most beautiful girl in the universe.

Guddan could not still believe her eyes.

Guddan thought "Am I dreaming,I must be dreaming. Akshat and that too asking for a ance. No he hates dance Woh toh sometimes he dances for her happiness and that too after forcing a lot. And he asking for a dance.

Akshat- guddan and sigalled her to place her hand in his,happily.

And they both started to dance.and they both danced heavenly with each other. To this Kabir also asked Divya to join so he could compete them and beat Akshan.

Haan ankhiyaan nu ankhiyaan ujad lagiyaan

Kab tak tera rasta main

Haan yunhi takiyaan

Haan ankhiyaan nu ankhiyaan ujad lagiyaan.

Ho tu jeene ka sahara

(mere yaara oh yaara mere yaar)

Ho tu jahan se pyaara

(mere yaara oh yaara mere yaar)

Tu jeene ka sahara

(mere yaara oh yaara mere yaar)

Ho ho tu jahan se bhi pyaara

(mere yaara oh yaara mere yaar)

Ho tere intezaar mein hoon

Tere khumaar mein hoon

Ab meri har dua mein,rehta hai tu

Yeh jan le ke hai

Tu, mohabbat hai

Tu,inaayat hai

Tu,tujhi se main hoon

Oo.

Tu,meri aadat hai

Tu,meri chahat hai

Tu,tujhi se main hoon(tujhi se main hoon)

Haan ankhiyaan nu ankhiyaan ujar lagiyaan

Kab tak tera rasta mein

Haan yunhi takiyaan

Kabir whose attention was full on Akshan missed Divya's hold and dropped her and both got lost while our Akshan were lost in each other's eyes that they didn't even noticed that Kabir dropped Divya and both had won.

Divya was supermad on Kabir she didn't say it but her gaze told Kabir a lot without even uttering a single word and both watched Akshan's dance with embarrassment,anger and frustration.

Haan yunhi kahin,gum hua mujhse mera pata

Haan jagi jaagi ankhon mein hai,bas tera khwaab sa

Saazishein yeh lamho ne kar ke,humko mila hi diya

Dheere dheere dil mein mere,bin kahe keh diya

Ho anjaana tha jo armaan,tumse hi maine jaana

Tumko jahaan bana ke,ab mein jiyeun

Yeh jaan leke

Tu,mohabbat hai

Tu inaayat hai

Tu,tujhi se main hoon

(tujhi se main hoon)

Haan chede mujhe saansein meri

Deke tera raasta ho

Haan chori chori bann ne lagi

Teri meri daastan

Khushiyon ke bahaane sabhi tumhi se hai milne lagey

Ho oh pyaar ki nayi raahon pe

Hum saath chalne lagey.

Ho shamil hua tu aise

Dil mein sabar ho jaise

Phir besabar mein hoke

Kaise jeeyun

Yeh jaan le ke hai

Tu,mohabbat hai

Tu,inaayat hai

Tu,tujhi se main hoon

Tu,meri aadat hai

Tu, meri chaahat hai

Tu,tujhi se main hoon(tujhi se main hoon)

Ankhiyaan nu ankhiyaan ujad lagiyaan

Tujhi si main hoon

Kab tak tera raasta mein

Haan yunhi taakiyaan

Tujhi se main hoon

they were in a cuddly hug.Both came to senses by voice of clapping of all those present. Guddan shied and parted away from him.While Kabir and Divya just left staring.They all complimented them and called them a pair truly made for each other in heaven.

They met all guests, friends and as party was over took leave.

Sorry as I actually intended to finish the story but nahi ho paaya. It will take 1 more part and sorry as maybe it will be short.Sorry but I promise I will soon complete it.

Tab tak ke liye Good night and don't forget to notify me.

Thanks!

O tere intezaar

Originally posted by: kusharberry

Beautiful update dear

Loved it

I really wish AJ do BBB of That Rahul

Ab kya karneh wala hai Rahul

I hope he doesn't create any mess for akshan

Do continue soon

👏👏 finally my reader is back.

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

No points for guessing!

Aise karname chote hi karte hai as younger one usually uses gadgets of their elder sibilings

Same badi behen hone ka dard as my brother usually uses my phone even more than me.

Sometimes I couldn't understand that Is the phone mine or his?

Sorry pata nahi kaise padhna chuut gayi thi abhi padhi else I won't have left you so curious..

Wow akshan dance

Fantastic

Guddan being proud of her choice was so sweet

Superb update