Apology-TS[Akshan] chapter 9 last part updated on 4 march - Page 15

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Continue soon

Thank you so much @ plmzaq
and keep loving as you have always.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

Awesome update dear

Loved it
Ab AJ ki samneh Woh ladka neh guddan ki barreh mein Ulta seedha bolega AJ uska huwa nikalega
Please do continue soon

thanks lina and keep loving or should I say keep bearing me.
Ohh from most of the comments I can figure out that almost every next reader wants to teach Kabir a lesson by Akshat

Haay lagta hai ab phir kuch naya sochna padega.

Let's see kya nikal ke aata hai.
But keep loving it.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Naa naa you and lina won't feel it lengthy it was for others.

Thanks and nice profile pic I loved it.
Btw why did you changed your user name.

Thanks Actually this is my sister's karnama she was using my id and changed my username😆 now i have to wait for one year to change it again

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Thanks yashi and what are you doing here.

Though I can't express my happiness to see you here but still I will advice you to study as time nikalne ke baad we could just regret.

All the very best for your exams dear.

Aap just padhai karo thode din stay away from Akshan as from now it'sonly matter of 2 months
uske baad toh hai hi.



Glad u care so much 😳⭐️
Yes Di...😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Thanks Actually this is my sister's karnama she was using my id and changed my username😆 now i have to wait for one year to change it again

Aww so sad
zaroor choti behen hogi.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Aww so sad

zaroor choti behen hogi.

Waah bahut shi andaaza lagaya but how did u know?
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan



Glad u care so much 😳⭐️
Yes Di...😊

Care ware nahi.
Actually I regret on my boards marks.
So I don't want you to go from the phase I went bass isssiliye..

Sorry agar irritating or frustrating lga ho toh

As my brother too has boards and use kuch bolo toh he gets irritated.
So it was just my concern
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Posted: 6 years ago

Sorry as I knew I am superlate in updating but what to do as last week was bit busy and I must admit that I am too lazy but as I am having holidays for couple of days will try to make it up.As after the holidays may be I will be on a long break.

Flashback-

Akshat has somehow managed to take Guddan in party.Akshat heard words of kabir and is in his angry mode,while Guddan is completely unaware of this and is proud of her own choice of choosing Akshat as husband as her juniors drooled on him.

Chapter 7-

Guddan was coming out of washroom while in her way she heard acouple of girls talking.

Girl 1- Did you looked at the man in pink,Isn't he hot?

Girl 2- Yaah, and don't you eye on him he is specially reserved for me.

To this Guddan's expression changed as she thought it was about Akshat..Abhi baatate hai inko,Samajhti kya hai,reserved for me huh!..

As she took couple of feets in there direction. A thought stopped her. But what if they are talking about some other guy.No I shouldn't do anything without being sure and even if they were talking about Akshatji this shouldn't affect me as I knew he is mine.

She turned her direction and tried to move further where she listened another group drooling on her husband.

Girl 1- Just look at him,pointing towards Akshat, How can he be so hot?

Girl 2- and pink is making him look more hot?

To this Guddan's mouth flew open.

" Yeh achha hai,shirt hum select kare and hot yeh baakiyoon ko lageShe passed an glance towards him and after staring him for few minutes. " Well they were actually right, He is actually looking damn hot in this shirt. Guddan looked towards her both sides as there was no one, she patted her own back.

"Well done Guddan,perfect choice,I knew that my choice was best but watching girls younger than me drooling on my own husband tells how good my choice is. I have made the best choice of choosing Akshatji as a life partner. I wouldn't have got better than him.

She came towards Akshat who was still waiting for her. She stared him completel with a constant smile but as he was still in rage with Kabir's words he didn't notice it.

Guddan patted her feet on floor slowly but still he didn't paid any attention as he don't want to let Guddan know about the incidence.

Akshatji Guddan called making a cry face.

Akshat- Trying to make normal face infront of her and hide his anger, gave her an irritated look,

Now What happened Guddan?

Before Guddan could complain,his phone rang and he excused himself.

To this Guddan got more annoyed.

" khadus the,khadus hai aur hamesha khadus hi rahenge. Yeh nahi ki jab biwi itne pyaar se taak rahi ho toh do chaar romantic baatein karle usse .

As he went outside and was attending call his gaze left constant on her but she couldn't recognize it as she got busy in talking with her old friend.

As he was constantly staring at her a genuiene smile automatically replaced his anger.Kabir who was passing nearby saw Akshat staring at Guddan.

Kabir- Don't look at her,she is already taken by someone.

This triggered Akshat's anger. As he passed an deadly gaze towards kabir.

Kabir- really,... and even she wouldn't have she wouldn't have even let you!...

Now Akshat clutched his fist trying to control his anger.

Kabir- You are understanding what I am telling na, she is not of that types and trust me she is zero when it comes to it.

Now Akshat couldn't tolerate he holded Kabir's collar in anger and was about to punch him.

Akshat- You even don't know how good she is.

Kabir- Wooh control young man why are you getting so hyper,she is your nothing, so take a chill pill Ok!

Now Akshat just was to punch him where suddenly Divya came in between.

Divya- What's happening here?

Kabir swiped Akshat's hand out ofhis collar and smilingly said nothing baby,,, Let's go in he holded Divya by her waist and went in.

As he took entry in party along with Divya the smile on Guddan's face faded and Akshat who was watching her away noticed it.Iski toh main..

But suddenly Guddan's eye met with his as she tried to look away from them and she smiled.

Akshat came in party. Thouh Guddan was taken by her friends they both had constant eye on each other and their eyelocks doesn't remained unnoticed by kabir.

Reminding the incidence which just took outside hall He asked one of his friends...

Kabir- Who is he?

Friend- Don't you know, he is Mr Akshat Jindal no 1 chef in India,the multibillionaire and one of the richest business tycoons in the country.

Kabir passed an gaze towards him as likehe really don't care.

Kabir- Strange a man so successful and having an eye on that clumsy,jhalli Guddan, What an joke...

Is he out of his mind.

Friend2- Wait bro, it seems like you still has not recognized him. If he won't eye on Guddan then on whom will he eye?

And if he eyed on any other girl won't Guddan kill him?

Kabir- What do you mean,Just clearly say it.

Friend2 Bro, he is Guddan's husband so if he won't eye on his wife then who will eye?

Kabir- Ohh toh that's why he was behaving with me in that way.

And he cooked something in his mind.

Now guddan made an excuse to her friends and was with Akshat,everybody came and greeted them. Suddenly Rahul came along with his wife and introduced his wife to Guddan.

Rahul- Hey! Hw are you guddan?

Guddan- I am fine Rahul and what about you?

Rahul-Best, meet Sunaina my wife.

Guddan- Oh hello I am Guddan Aksh..

Before she could complete

Rahul- Didn't I told you about Guddan and kabir .

Sunaina- Ohh the couple which were madly in love,right.

Rahul- right.

Main bhi naa I didn't even asked about Kabir, Where is he and how is he?

Guddan looked towards Akshat who was beside her with an hesitation on her face.

He smiled and suppressed his hurt successfully but Guddan knew what he must went through.

As Rahul was completely talking about Kabir and Guddan the whole time.

Guddan was left with no choice but to interrupt him.

Rahul,Me and Kabir are no more together. This shattered Rahul completely

Rahul- What?

Guddan- yes we parted our ways long back and moved further.Kabir is engaged to Divya and

Holding Akshat's arm like an typical wife she introduced Akshat to Rahul

Guddan- Meet Mr Akshat Jindal,my husband.

Rahul-Oh Sorry I didn't knew.

Hello, Mr Jindal I am Rahul.

Akshat- Hello Rahul, glad to meet you.

Akshan- It's OK, it's not your fault at all.So neither you needto feel sorry nor you should apologise it.

Sunaina who felt embaraced due to all this diverted the topic.

Sunaina- guddan, won't you introduce me to your friends?

Guddan- smilingly offcourse.

And Sunaina took her away,Akshat saw her lovingly from back as she was going

Kabir came from back and smiled evilly.

So that's the chapter. Free feel to bash me as likes and comments are declining so I couldn't get is the story going boring or disinteresting?...

Any further expectations or else but kuch toh bolo...

Atleast tell me to stop.. trust me I won't waste all of your's time if t is so.

Thanks!

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Plz Continue and update the next part soon
Nd don't think ur r wasting our tym i just love this story 😊
Edited by Mishti24 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Your stories are awsome but itna late and short update
Plz continue soon and plz make it long

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