Akshan ff ek anokha rishta Chapter 16 Pg 22 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
They themselves have become the Cupid of Akshan😆
Nice update ..continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
I like how AJ refers Guddan as Pari here.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Awesome update dear
Loved it
So guddan neh Woh teddy AJ ko Diya hai
Uff this Durga and Lakshmi are such a devils but good 3 devils Cupid's ki kaam karneh wali hai akshan ki Shaadi Jo karwarahi hai
So will AJ come to see his pati as ladki dekhneh keliyeh
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
Cant wait for them to meet😳
Everytime i read ur story, i imagine a cute cuddly AJ😆 totally different from humanity baba and i totally welcome this change😃
Waiting eagerly for Guddan to come to aj and seedha karo daayano ko😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
Superb update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Chapter - 5
After their plan the three devil went to respective home Kaushalya thought something then call someone then she end the call and smirk soon she reach home then went to fresh up thought to execute her plan at dinner time

On the other hand durga laxmi reach jindal bhawan durga call everyone to hall as it was evening all are present at home all come to the hall ask durga why she is calling

D- mere pass ek achi khabar hai

S- kya khabar hai durga bahu

D- dadi main aur laxmi ne ladki dhund liya hai Aj ke liye

Sa- durga di kya sach main kon hai wo ladki

D- kal hum uske ghar jaayenge tab pata chal jayega

S- jo bhi ho par meri lala ko ache se sambhale aur use thik kar de

D- aisa hi hoga dadi

Then kishor vardaan said that they have works they can't be able to come so they said them to go their then all went to their respective rooms

Gupta house it is dinner time all are having their dinner kaushalya thought to start her plan

K- guddan ke papa apko meri mama ki beti suman yaad hai

B- hann use kya hua

K -kuch nahi wo abhi abhi indore shift hui hai to usne apne naye ghar main pooja rakhi hai usske baad party bhi hai to usne hume invite kiya hai to aap aur ronak chale jayega

B- tum aur guddan nahi chaloge kya

K- ji kal ek bahot badi cake ka order aya hai to hum dono ko rukna padega

Bhusan said ok ronak sense something fishy but shurge it all went to sleep after dinner

Next morning guddan woke up she was feeling very happy she don't know what it is but her sense are saying something really good going to happen today she get ready and went outside and saw bhusan and ronak are ready to go they all h their breakfast then bhusan ronak left guddan wave them bye then she went to kaushalya

G- ma chaliye cake banate hai

K- cake banane ki jarrorat nahi hai ja ye dress pehna ke tayar ho ja

She hand over a packet to guddan

G- ma ye aap kya keh rahi hai cake kyun nahi banani aur yeh dress kiss liye

K- kyun ke tujhe dekhane ladke wale aarahe hai

G- ma apne papa aur ronu ko jhoot bolke gharse bahar bhej diya

K- ha bola jhoot to kya aur iss bar koi gadbadi nahi

Guddan sadly go to her room get ready in. Her mind she planned to do the same thing like she do with other boys unknown to her she was going to be shocked

On the other hand the jindal ladies get ready saru then went to call akshat

L- durga di ye aj ko le jana thik hoga

D- hum kuch nahi kar sakte dadi ki order hai ki aj bhi chalenge

Saru come down stairs with akshat she was told him that they are going out and he immediately got ready as he want to have some fresh air

They reach at gupta house akshat was holding the teddy and look around

A- saru tumne kaha tha hum guhmene aye hai ye kiska ghar hai

Sa- papa yaha na hum kisiko dekhne aye hai thodi der main ghumne jayenge

They went inside kaushalya welcome them
Durga introduce akshat to kaushalya she was bit shocked to see akshat is mentally unstable but thought infront of money these things don't matter they all settle in the sofa

S- ji aap ne to mere bete se mile kya aap sach much apni beti ki shadi karwaengi

K- ji koi baat nahi meri beti akshat ji ko thik karegi

D- to bulaye apni beti ko

Kaushalya went inside come with guddan
All look at her expect akshat as he is busy with his teddy dadi saru immediately recognize who the girl is kaushalya said guddan to look at the boy

When guddan left her head what see saw made her feel dizzy infront of her seating her love her dream man she was seeing him after 4 years then she saw the teddy in his hand she was happy seeing it but confused why he is holding it kaushalya said akshat is the one with whom her marriage will fix

Guddan just don't understand what is going on she remember akshat saying he can't marry any one so why he is here and he not for once looking at her durga said akshat to look whom they come to see when akshat saw guddan his next action give the biggest shock to guddan

Akshat run to guddan hug her tightly the three devil's look at them with confusion while saru and dadi seeing them with hope

A- pari tum yaha hum tumhe milne aye hai kaha gayi thi mujhe chod kar pata hai main kitna roya ye dekho ye chotu tumne diya tha na to main sambhal ke rakha tha

Guddan just looking at him all shocked the man who make her a perfect person was now mentally unstable she don't know would she be happy or cry on her fate

She always praying god to make her meet him but look how she is meeting him
Tears just don't stop flowing from her eyes

Aisa kyu hota hai
Dil yeh kyu rota hai
Jo nahi tha tera
Fir kyu uski aas hai

Jo nahi tha tera
Fir kyu uski aas hai

Koi mann mein hasta koi
Mann hi maan hai rota
Koi mann mein hi dharonda banaye

Kahi chalke khushiyon ke aansu
Kahi roye dukh se naina
Naina yeh samajh hi na paaye baanwra

Dil Parinda
Dhoonde aashiyaana..(2x)

So here is the chapter please comment and like will try to update next chapter soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Amazing update 👏
Akshan milan😳👏

Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Awesome update dear
Really loved it
Kaushalya is such a cheap women
So AJ ko apni pari milgaya hai
Really excited to know what is gonna happen next
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Superb update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Aww mera dil😳
Akshat is too cute beyond reason😆
Update super soon

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