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Posted: 6 years ago
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Bang on..👏 i m still laughing 🤣 3 devils bahu dialouges amazing aj ke soye hue arman😆 and guddan taunting of aj umar seriously because if guddan they trappes in awkward situation .its quite funny🤪 and aj harmones definately he is in control guddu
Please continue soon .
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks😃
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Originally posted by: Secretfollower2

Bang on.. 👏 i m still laughing 🤣 3 devils bahu dialouges amazing aj ke soye hue arman😆 and guddan taunting of aj umar seriously because if guddan they trappes in awkward situation .its quite funny🤪 and aj harmones definately he is in control guddu

Please continue soon .


Thanks for such lovely response.

Will update soon😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Salam and hi... Due to eye injury, I couldn't make Shadi thread 😭
So thought to update this...

Enjoy😃

AKSHAN OS- chapter 3(b) : BARISH
saruuu! AJ ka nashta Tayar hogaya? 10 min bad woh ajayn ge".. Durga inquired while doing usual routine.

" ji didi magar mujhay nahi lagta aj AJ jaldi neche ayngay." Saru responded mischieviously.

Durga couldn't get what she meant.

" didi kal ki RAAt yaad nahi apko. AJ n suhaag raat main to chor diya tha but kal to pakka kuch hua hoga" laxmi responded.

" hmmm... Dekhtay hain .In dono ko neche anay to do." Durga said firmly while someone get anxious behind listening this turn of events.

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His alarm clock stopped with his heavy left hand. It was 5th time it was ringing with a loud sound but he couldn't get up.something was stopping him.as he opened his eyes , he could not move his legs.

" kahin main apahij to nahi hogya!!! Is Umar...ufhhh, jab s yeh guddan MLI hai, itna barhati Umar ka ahsas kabhi nahi hua". AJ assured himself.
No there is something on my legs.Akshat thought. He get up and saw two legs over him in a twisted manner. Moving above a little, he was assured that guddan must be a gymnast before because her one hand was behind her and other one was somehow twisted.her head was almost out from bed and her hair dropped down to carpet. He was about to burst in anger but , it turned into a sly smile when he looked at her face. Her mouth was half open and her hair strands were all over her face. His anger just burst in one second.with a deep breath, he moved forward to make her poster correct.firstly, he removed her legs, then took her hand from behind and while doing this, he forget his own poster.

" yeh kia karrahay ho uncle! " guddan was in utter shock to see uncle right in top of her in morning.

" kahin raat mn kuch ya Sab kuch to nahi hogya" she thought.she burst into tears.

" aap...aap ne phir raat main natak kar k mjhay bed par Sonay k lye convince kar liya aur yeh Sab!!! " she couldn't complete because akshat couldnot bear more accusations and he put his hand on her mouth.

"Chup! Bilkul chup. Main tumhara Buddha kehna bardasht krskta hun magar tharki Buddha nahi. Jab bhi koi aesi situation hoti, tum mujh par yehi ilzam lagati ho."

" main utha to tum is gymnastic angle s mujhay soti nazar ayin.bas tumhain theek kr raha tha. Jao so aese hi . " akshat stood up and was about to leave the bed when he heard guddan saying," MATLAB raat mn kuch nahi hua Na! "

" tumhain abhi bhi confirmation chaye. " akshat was totally pissed off.
" nahi nahi... Mujhay yaqeen aagya.wese bhi agar kuch hua hota to hum itnay kap..."
Akshat eyes just widened with her reason while guddan want to just evaporate into air. She tried to get up and quickly leave the room.

"Ahhh"
" Ab kia hua?" Akshat don't want to talk to her but still asked.

" mere baaal shayad phas gaye hain." Guddan tried to free her.

" ap wahan kahan s karrahay hain. Baal chaddar mn atkay hain gardan k neeche."

" to phir khud hi nikalo. Main phir tharki uncle ka title nahi chata."
Akshat left to washroom.when he came back, she was still struggling.

" please uncle...pleaseee... Bauhat dard horaha." She pleaded.

Akshat went forward and leaned on her tried to keep a distance.he dig into her left side of neck which was in front of door blocking the vision of perv who had stopped from the dialogue "please uncle...pleaseee... Bauhat dard horaha " and was looking from keyhole.

Akshat tried to free her hair and in between all this, guddan hair fall on his face.he gulped down her scent and concentrated on his task.

From keyhole, perv eyes widened with a compromising position of Mr and Mrs akshat jindal and continuous " ahhh, ohhh, ouch" from guddan.

" perv " he sensed durga coming towards the room and he ran on other side.

" ouchhh!" With the release , guddan just thanked god. Akshat lift guddan up from bed and both gets a bit awkward with the whole scenario.akshat quickly left the room while, guddan just stayed in bed watching him exit the room.

Downstairs, the three idiots watched the AJ descending from stairs at 10, exactly one hour above his schedule.

" durga bahu, yeh file sambhal kar rakh Lena."
And durga and other couldn't breathe because they just saw hair strands on AJ shoulder. Akshat looked in their direction and just closed his eyes.

" yeh mujhay kahan kahan sharminda karay GI" he removed hair strands and left home without looking anywhere leaving three stunned.

From the top, perv couldn't help but just think, " kahin main n villain k bajayay Cupid ka kam to nahi kardiya!!!!"
Edited by attiya1.3 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awsome... Hope there relationship progress by time
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Originally posted by: chavi12345

Awsome... Hope there relationship progress by time


Thanks😃


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Guddan ke apni zidagi mein kadam rakhne se akshat ko paralyse wali feelings aa rhi hai😃
Guddan nd uski gymnastix in sleep🤣
Vese bahuon ki nazarein teekhi hain ya Guddan ka hairfll excess hone ke karan, unhone hairs dkh lie AJ se lipte hue!🤣
Badan pr zulfein lapete hue
Oh jaan-e-AJ kahan jaa rahe ho!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nish_vir

Guddan ke apni zidagi mein kadam rakhne se akshat ko paralyse wali feelings aa rhi hai 😃

Guddan nd uski gymnastix in sleep🤣
Vese bahuon ki nazarein teekhi hain ya Guddan ka hairfll excess hone ke karan, unhone hairs dkh lie AJ se lipte hue!🤣
Badan pr zulfein lapete hue
Oh jaan-e-AJ kahan jaa rahe ho!

Jinko ko khabar rakhni hoti hai unki nazrain bhi tea hoti😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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AJ = tharki bhudha 🤣🤣🤣
Ab sab apna ser khujalte rahe 😆


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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
wow beautiful update dear
yeah perv parv nah badi besharam hai
lol tharki budda 😆 yeah aj bi nah kamal hai
so basically bahus koo heart agaya hai
plzz do continue it

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