Guddan's-REVENGE-OS [FF]{chapter 12 updated on December 16}

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Awesome story
Love it
Continue soon

Thank you so much

and keep showering your precious feedback.

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floral

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Awesome updates dear

AJ and guddan are really unique piece

HunwsHu Tom and Jerry jaiseh hai

I loved her cooking stunt aur pinching AJ part

Plzzz do continue soon

When will u update that collage wala story

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: kusharberry
Awesome updates dear
AJ and guddan are really unique piece
HunwsHu Tom and Jerry jaiseh hai
I loved her cooking stunt aur pinching AJ part
Plzzz do continue soon
When will u update that collage wala story

I was waiting for your comment

and offcourse unique piece toh hai who

and sorry as yeh parts ab soon update nahi honge

I am trying it today actually I am just going to update it as after this I will possibly become goongi so enjoy.

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1048973

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Gayatri I just want to say one word

Awsm awsm awsm kya BAAT hai MATLAB mirchi Ka halwa using halwe wali lo khilaya hamare AJ babu ne waah waah 😆

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: kayafever
Gayatri I just want to say one word
Awsm awsm awsm kya BAAT hai MATLAB mirchi Ka halwa using halwe wali lo khilaya hamare AJ babu ne waah waah 😆

Thank you so much kavya, but you was saying one word naa then and offcourse hamare AJ uncle kam thodi hi na hai and yes pehle AJ babu ne khud khaaya phir halwe waali ko khilaaya.

Edited by Gayatri9 - 7 years ago

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Secretfollower

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

It reminds me TSMSP😆..its awesome

It become my addiction to read ff and os daily to most of the writers.but i can quote this is my one of the favourite part jitne ab tak maine read kiye hain.

So continue dear..i wanted to see their nok jhok

And i tell u u described kitchen scene beautifully...guddan taunts waah..aj guddan se dur nahi reh sakte all the time touchy touchy😉

Continue soon

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Omg! That was so funny

AJ bhi Kam nai hai😆

Guddan ko usi ka halwa khila Diya

It reminded me of Tu sooraj Mai sanjh piyaji

But it was sweet of AJ to prepare the halwa n replace it with her's

Do continue soon

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Secretfollower
It reminds me TSMSP😆..its awesome
It become my addiction to read ff and os daily to most of the writers.but i can quote this is my one of the favourite part jitne ab tak maine read kiye hain.
So continue dear..i wanted to see their nok jhok
And i tell u u described kitchen scene beautifully...guddan taunts waah..aj guddan se dur nahi reh sakte all the time touchy touchy😉
Continue soon

😛 2 scenes kya copy kar liye sab ko pure show ki yaad aa gayi

and I had to read the whole update again ki kyaa kyaa taane padwaaye maine guddan se AJ ko

aur AJ toh day 1 se hi guddu ke saath touchy hai .

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

I wonder why I didn't see ur update earlier ... This is so goood😳 I loved it ... Tashan e ishq 😆

Update the next part today pls😃

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Secretfollower

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Posted: 7 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Gayatri9
😛 2 scenes kya copy kar liye sab ko pure show ki yaad aa gayi
and I had to read the whole update again ki kyaa kyaa taane padwaaye maine guddan se AJ ko
aur AJ toh day 1 se hi guddu ke saath touchy hai .

that was the best scene of TSMSP thats why eveyone talking about that show..i m happy that u copied that scene for akshan😆