Guddan's-REVENGE-OS [FF]{chapter 12 updated on December 16} - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Omg! That was so funny

AJ bhi Kam nai hai 😆
Guddan ko usi ka halwa khila Diya
It reminded me of Tu sooraj Mai sanjh piyaji
But it was sweet of AJ to prepare the halwa n replace it with her's
Do continue soon

nahi nahi halwa toh aj ne hi banayaa thaa guddan ne toh sirf namak Mirchi daali aww sabhi ko TSMSP ki yaad aa gayi sweet aap ho issiliye aapko lagaa wanna aj toh Dara huwaa that pata nahi guddan kya khila de
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

I wonder why I didn't see ur update earlier ... This is so goood 😳 I loved it ... Tashan e ishq 😆

Update the next part today pls😃

really I thought you have read it and actually I was updating it but this site it is not even accepting my replies right now and I am really glad that you found it good let's see will try for today but if not it will be after 2 days thanks and keep showering your precious feedback
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Secretfollower

that was the best scene of TSMSP thats why eveyone talking about that show..i m happy that u copied that scene for akshan😆

mujhe toh laga that u will feel bad as it's copied and nothing new but khair it's actually good that u liked it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
Firstly my very sincere apology as this update will be too short as I am updating it from my phone and not to forget I am busy still coming to story
Chapter 7
As AJ went for office Dadi asked guddan to rest as the day is going to be hectic for her.and she has to perform many rituals yet.

Guddan went in room and took some rest before she could sleep Dadi along with 3 DILs arrived in room.
Guddan stood up and greeted Dadi as the 3 DILs has big thaals in their hand she inquired about it.

Dadi- Guddan beta,yeh jundal pariwaar ke pushtaini gehne hai aur in 3 on ki saas aur iss pariwaar ki bahu home ke naate now they are yours but Dadi before she could speak Dadi spoke par war kuch nahi Get ready as the guests will be arriving soon for your mooh dikhai ceremony.
Your 3 DILs will make you ready for the same.before she could speak something Dadi left the room.
The 3 DILs made her ready for mooh dikhai though they didn't want but for sake of Dadi and family's reputation they Did it.

Guddan was indeed looking a queen in her dark green and orange lehenga with royal jwellery but she could not carry the weight as it was too heavy the 3 DILs deliberately put all the jwellery as they knew guddan won't be able to carry it.
To be contd..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65
The above post was trial and error will try to give proper update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
Nice update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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First of all my actually, sincere apologies as this part I was supposed to update yesterday but I couldn't.
Chapter 7

As AJ went for his office Dadi asked Gudddan to take rest as the day will be hectic for her and yet she has to perform many rituals.She followed Dadi's orders and went in room to take some rest. While lying on bed she was still in thoughts of how her life has changed within just last 24 hours.She still couldn't believe that it was actually happening in real life she wonder it should have been a worst nightmare but it was of no use,as now she actually was Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal.

She was disturbed by the sound of opening door.She woke up and saw Dadi along with 3 DILs.The 3 DILs had big thaals in their hand looking at it guddan enquired about it.Dadi replied " Beta yeh sab Jindal Khaandaan ke Khaandaani gehne hai aur Jindal pariwaar ki sabse badi bahu hone ke naate ab yeh tere hai".

Guddan was still amazed and baffled.
Durga-Kya sooch rahi hai saasumaa? Ghabraiye maat bilkul 100 percent pure and original hai.
Lakshmi-Aapne apni zindagi main ab tak dekhe bhi nahi honge.
Before anyone could speak Dadi asked to shut their mouth and make Guddan ready as the guests will be arriving anytime.

The 3 Dils made her ready though they didn't want just for the sake of family's prestige.
Guddan was indded looking a queen in combination of dark Green and oeange lehengaa.and the ancestral jwellery was giving extra charm.

But she felt it heavy and asked the Dils to lessen jwellery as there were still hills remaining and she won't be able to carry all this.The 3 DIls had deliberately put all jwellery as they knew Guddan won't be able to handle it.But it was of no use.
Durga-Isse jyaada toh is ghar ki bahueein pehenti hai and tum toh saas ho.Bahaut shaauk hai na tumhe amir banne ka toh ab bhugtoo.and the 3 DILs left the room.Guddan almost had tears in her eye but she gulped it down.

In the hall-
All the guests has arrived for Guddan's mooh dikhai ceremony. A servant went to call Guddan. The 3 DILs were handling guests. As Guddan tried to step down stairs she was unable to step it down properly because of her hills.heavy jwellery and long veil.When she was about to fall she managed her balance by holding grills.Watching her struggle Mrs Mehra asked Durga Why don't she goes up and help her MIL.
Durga-Help newly wed Dulhan yaani bahu ki ki jaati hai Mrs Mehra par yeh toh hamari saas hai sorry India ki youngest saas hai. Kaayde se toh inhe hume sambhaalna chaahiye .

Within their discussion Guddan arrived in hall.Dadi made her sit on sofa. All the ladies came one by one lifted her veil complimented her beauty gave their blessings handed over gifts and acquired their place.

Meanwhile Siddhi along with Parv arrived for the ceremony. As the ceremony was going Mrs Khurana interrupted Dadi "Important rasm toh reh hi gayi" Dewar dhulaai ki rasm to which dadi nodded sadly but kyaa kare Akshat ka koi Bhai nahi hai aur aaj yahaan uska koi dost bhi nahin hai.

To which Mrs Chopra gave solution as parv.But will parv perform this ritual? Dadi asked Questioningly to which mrs Chopra replied instead of not performing ritual yeh theek hoga ki hum parv se yeh rasm karwaale.Rasm na karna naye jode ke liye apshakun saabit ho saktaa hai and parv aapki baat nahi taalegaa dadi.

Dadi ordered Siddhi and Saru to take parv in hall but he refused to perform the ritual as he is neither Aj's brother nor his friend.
Dadi-But parv beta Shweta ko toh tu Bhabhi address karta tha.
Siddhi too requested him and said he should be thankful as if he performs the ritual he will be the only male allowed in the rasm as this function is exclusively for females.
Saru whispered in his ears- Aaj toh aapko officially Guddan ko cheedne ka chance milega at which his eyes widened.
Parv-Ok, what exactly I have to do?
Siddhi-Nothing you just have to lift Guddan's veil up baaki sab Guddan kar legi.

In between time Durga has handed over a big danda and explained her what she actually has to do.

Parv smiling evilly aaj kahaan bach ke jaayegi chiddiyaa,aaj toh mujhe license hai.
Guddan in mind -"Kyaa soch rahi hai Guddan,Kuch mat soch bass yaad kar ki iss kamine ki wajah se teri chutki ne apni naas kaat li thi.

As he lifted her veil up she thrashed him with Dandaa to which he screamed in pain.Bahut shauk hai naa aao tumhe sabak sikhaate hain and she ran behind him thrashing him.
Everyone was enjoying this scene and parv runned here and there trying to safeguard him.

As she was running behind him to thrash her hill broke and when she was about to fall she experienced a strong support and a hot hand on her waist her hands gripped his shoulder's tightly he was none other than her own husband.
When she managed her balance even he lost in her for few seconds as she was indded looking beautiful.

He was brought to his senses when parv hide behind him asking to save him.
Aj to Guddan-yeh sab kya ho raha hai.
Dadi- Rasm hai lalla,aur tu iss waqt yahaan kya kar raha hai?
AJ- Kuch nahin maa,I just forgot my file and get back home to take it back.
AJ glared parv in his usual tashaan but parv now has been a puppy he literally begged Aj to save him.
Aj whispered in parv's ears I told you to stay away from her but you don't listened me.
handing parv to guddan he said Actually I promised Maa that I won't interfere in rituals and went upstairs while Guddan continued to thrash him.

He took his file and watched the scene from balcony even his lips curved watching Guddan thrashing parv as he noticed guddan has already thrashed him a lot he came in hall and stopped Guddan and announced the ritual was over.


ps-I am not paying any kind of tribute to star's show but it was just that ki mujhe parv ko guddu ke haathoon dhulwaana tha.
and as I am writing after long so bear with it.
and last but not least as I have been told by many forum member's that Ishouldn't care about comments and write phir bhi acchhaa buraa jaisa bhi lage feel comfortable to let me know...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
Kya BAAT dear devar dhulaaai 😆
Maza AAA gayaaa aaj to pls update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#70
Awesome update dear
Loved it alot
i really loved that Parv trashed by guddu😆bahoot Maza aya
this bahus are super annoying
Plzzz do continue soon

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