Guddan's-REVENGE-OS [FF]{chapter 12 updated on December 16}

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Chit15

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Posted: 6 years ago

#71

Good update

Best was Perv ki dhulaayi Guddan ke haathon🤣and AJ enjoying it

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Posted: 6 years ago

#72

Best part perv ki dhulayi & aj somewhere enjoyed it .how he reminds to perv i told u to stay away from her.

I think next time perv guddu ko kam nahi samjhega...enjoyed it.

Continue soon...

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vinlora

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Posted: 6 years ago

#73

Even I want to thrash that kamina parv😡 masth tha yaar😡 parv ki dhulayi tho bhalle bhalle😳

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: kayafever
Kya BAAT dear devar dhulaaai 😆
Maza AAA gayaaa aaj to pls update soon

Actually mujhe bhi mazaa aaya and about soon offcourse I will continue it soon As just a viva is remaining and even my next semester is starting from Monday itself but still it will be some cold during starting days So for sure you can get updates faster Also do check out my new Os Just for me and don't forget to suggest an title for it

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: kusharberry
Awesome update dear
Loved it alot
i really loved that Parv trashed by guddu😆bahoot Maza aya
this bahus are super annoying
Plzzz do continue soon

Thanks! Don't get annoyed from bahus as there will be a twist regarding Durga so don't worry and also check out my new Os Just for me and suggest an opt title for it

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Chit15
Good update
Best was Perv ki dhulaayi Guddan ke haathon🤣and AJ enjoying it

use dhulwaane ke liye hi toh part likha glad you enjoyed as for me your enjoyment is more important than Aj's. Also check my new Os Jost for me and suggest a title Keep showering your precious priceless feedback

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Secretfollower
Best part perv ki dhulayi & aj somewhere enjoyed it .how he reminds to perv i told u to stay away from her.
I think next time perv guddu ko kam nahi samjhega...enjoyed it.

Continue soon...

Kisi bhi ladki ko kam samajhna bhi nahi chahiye I am glad that you enjoyed it as for me your enjoyment is much important than AJs So keep showering yourpriceless feedback and do check out my new Os just for me suggest a title and let me know how ghatiyaa it was andoffcourse thanks aapne hume forum main add karwaaya actually when I read post my name was already mentioned but then I saw your reply toh badawalla thank you for you as aapne hume yaad rakhaa

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: vinlora
Even I want to thrash that kamina parv😡 masth tha yaar😡 parv ki dhulayi tho bhalle bhalle😳

😊😊 mujhe bhi kaafi dinon se use dhulwaana tha but it was just that I was busy in my exams so couldn't post it earlier Thanks for your priceless feedback and also check out my new Os just for me and suggest a title for it or let me know how ghatiyaa it actually was and keep showering your priceless feedback

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#79

Chapter 8

In the evening Akshat returned from office Dadi asked him to get fresh and come in hall as she wants to tell him something important.Akshat nodded in Yes and went to his room freshen up and came in living room.

He passed an irritated expression looking Guddan who was already presented there.Within few seconds the 3 sons along with their wives join them.Dadi has called everybody.

Akshat-What happened Maa?you told you wanted to tell something important.

Dadi- ha lalla, you know as I told you earlier that our panditji has suggested Kuldevi's pooja for better future of this relationship and I asked him to find nearest muhurat. So he has given the muhurat after next 2 days and if this pooja won't happen in next 2 days there is no muhurat in next 11 months.

Akshat- What? Maa It's a bullshit you know na I don't believein these sort of things.

Lakshmi{whispered to Saru}- haan ab dooriyaan bardaasht nahi ho rahi AJ se ,issi liye toh ab yeh kyaa jo Guddan se dur kare who saari baatein inhe betuki hi lageegi.

Dadi- But lalla I do and you knowvery well as I won't tolerate any small mistake in all this.

Akshat- as he knew that Dadi won't listen and Dadi's zid after all she is mother of AKshat Jindal he told OK

Durga- But dadi kulevi's mandir is in manali and it's far away from Indore how will we able to do arrangements.

Dadi- You don't need to worry Durga bahu as I have already informed the head pujari of Kuldevi's trust he will manage everything there.

We just have to make sure that lalla and Guddan reaches there on time and make arrangements for their stay for around a week.

Durga- Ok dadi I will book the hotel online.

Guddan got amazed listening the duration of week.

Guddan- Dadi what's need to stay there for a week I mean it's just a simple pooja.

Durga- in her ordering tone plz remind her yesterday's episodes expressions.

It's not a simple pooja It's Jindal's kuldevi's pooja and about a week 2 days you both will need to reach there the duration of pooja is around 3 days and 2 days to get back so huwaa na week.

Dadi- Durga bahu tell our driver to be ready at sharp 7 am as both lalla and Guddan will leave tomorrow at sharp 7 then there are chances that they will reach there on time.

Dadi had already asked Akshat to pack his luggage and Akshat took Kishore and Vardhaan to explain restraunt's work as they have to handle the restaurant in his absence.

Lakshmi- Dekha Saru ab yeh 2on honeymoon pe jaayenge.

Saru- Are nahi Lakshmi Di who 2 on honeymoon pe nahi pooja ke liye jaa rahe hain aur aapko pata nahi jab tak pooja nahi hogi AJ aur Guddan ek saath nahi reh sakte.

Lakshmi smiled irritatedly- Mujhe pata hai Saru par tune AJ ko dekha nahin Kaise utaawle huyee jaa rahe hain Aur wahaan toh inhe rokne tokne waala bhi koi nahi hoga aur maan bhi liya ki yeh 2 on pooja tak ruk bhi gaye par pooja ke baad.

Lakshmi started to cry pata hai Saru kahin aisa na ho ki hume apne bacchoon ke peeche bhaagne ki umar main apne dewar ya nanand ke peeche bhaagna pade.

Both Lakshmi and Saru imagined the whole scene of running behind Akshan's child.

On the other side Guddan in mind

Phaas gayi beta Guddan ab kya karegi? The whole week with uncle aur who bhi akele she was too much scared that her hands started to shake.

Dadi noticed Guddan

Dadi- Guddan beta you want to say something?

Guddan just nodded in Yes.

Dadi- Beta you don't need to be afraid just tell me what you want?

Guddan- Hesitatingly who actually Dadi I was thinking hum 2on akele kyun jaa rahe hain?It would have been better if remaining members of family too will accompany us.

Dadi- Beta this pooja is for both of you hence just you and lalla will go there. bending towards Guddan dadi whispered in her ear

Dadi-And you both will get time and space with each other.

This words of dadi made her more scared.

Guddan- Dadi but atleast 3on bahuoon ko toh bhejiye as you know I regularly do mistakes and the pooja is important as you told so please dadi.

Listening Guddan's request lakshmiand Saru's face lightened up

Lakshmi and Saru- Haan Dadi waise bhi we have never been on a family vacation or trip so this will be.

please Dadi

Lakshmi-Aur waise bhi Dadi Guddan ne I mean Saasu maa has asked for something very first time after marriage don't you even fulfill her first wish?

At these words Dadi melted and asked all the family members to pack their luggage as whole family will go.

at this Lakshmi and Saru got happy they shared an hi-fi and went to their respective rooms to pack their luggage.

At this Guddan smiled and hugged Dadi and thanked her.

Dadi- you don't need to thank it's me who should be thankful as it's just because of you the whole family is going somewhere together for the very first time.

How much you think for the family. God bless you

Now come on let's go we both has to pack bags and subah jaldi bhi toh niklna hai.

I know it's boring but I thought it's important to take story further So kitna boring laga bataao.