Guddan's-REVENGE-OS [FF]{chapter 12 updated on December 16}

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floral

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Beautiful update

So both did arthi together

I liked the sindhoor part and guddans pov

Would like to see hw she trouble AJ

Plzzz do continue soon

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Secretfollower2
Sorry for the replying late i was busy today is diwali .i m busy with my firecrackers: ). No i dont deel bad i feel ki meri post se u hurt so i just clered ur misunderstanding.mn chill rehna hi jyada pasand karti hn so mjhe critisam word se koi bura nhi laga

Coming 2 ur revrnge os yes it is 1% worthy for me. Yes hn flashback and guddan thought is refreshment.and ye sindoor vala scene is necessary bcoz its a symbol that aj and guddan are made for eath other. Vo dono jitba bhi koshish karle dur jane ki destiny will bring them together

But next part want passion hatred and guddan funny sialouges with 3 useless bandariya bahuein

And i m waitin3g ur next os part.so continue soon

You don't need to be sorry I can understand and by the way can we both take break from this sorry game we are playing it for long time and I didn't misunderstood you. Well u found 1% glad but mujhe laga tha u will find guddu's imagination too new but koi baat nahi.This means that I have to work more hard Sorry for short comment but I am in bit hurry.I hope u will understand.

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan
Nice update 😃
But why are your updates so short 😭😆

short 😕😕 do u think really so if it really is I will try to make it bit long for you but you will always have to tell me is it upto your expectations.

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Secretfollower2

Sorry but I think you will have to wait a bit long I will try if possible I will update it today or else it will be after 4-5 days let's see will I be able to stand upto your expectations but yes do continue telling me.

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: kusharberry
Beautiful update
So both did arthi together
I liked the sindhoor part and guddans pov
Would like to see hw she trouble AJ
Plzzz do continue soon

where was you?

I was missing you. Yes she will trouble him and I am glad you liked last part I don't know why but I felt writing it,it was not part of update but while writing I felt so I wrote and from comments I think all of us liked it.Thanks and keep encouraging me always.

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Anamika

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Gayatri9
You don't need to be sorry I can understand and by the way can we both take break from this sorry game we are playing it for long time and I didn't misunderstood you. Well u found 1% glad but mujhe laga tha u will find guddu's imagination too new but koi baat nahi.This means that I have to work more hard Sorry for short comment but I am in bit hurry.I hope u will understand.

now u start sorry game😆..dont be sorryand yes i find guddan imagination new.flashback part and guddan imagination ilike it very much

And 1% worthy isliye bola bcoz mjhe bhi short laga bcoz mjhe aur padhana tha revenge os

And har baar long comment ki jarurat bhi nhi hai😛

And please one request dont write your os as paragraph .gap is necessary and phke so i like the this os part very much.

So please continue soon dear i want ki akshan ka revenge kaise hoga😉 and also a love flourished ff

Pls continue soon both.i m waiting😊

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Secretfollower2
now u start sorry game😆..dont be sorryand yes i find guddan imagination new.flashback part and guddan imagination ilike it very much
And 1% worthy isliye bola bcoz mjhe bhi short laga bcoz mjhe aur padhana tha revenge os

And har baar long comment ki jarurat bhi nhi hai😛
And please one request dont write your os as paragraph .gap is necessary and phke so i like the this os part very much.

So please continue soon dear i want ki akshan ka revenge kaise hoga😉 and also a love flourished ff
Pls continue soon both.i m waiting😊

Offcourse a final end to sorry game and thanks Ok I will try to ensure sufficient gap may be hence you are feeling it short and I will continue it and also love flourished so don't worry about it but please keep informing me how's it?

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floral

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Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Gayatri9
where was you?
I was missing you. Yes she will trouble him and I am glad you liked last part I don't know why but I felt writing it,it was not part of update but while writing I felt so I wrote and from comments I think all of us liked it.Thanks and keep encouraging me always.

hai dear when are u gonna update next part missed Ur updates please continue soon

Busy with preparations for competitive exams

Edited by kusharberry - 6 years ago

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: kusharberry
hai dear when are u gonna update next part missed Ur updates please continue soon
Busy with preparations for competitive exams

Chalo atleast you missed me! actually I was trying to update it yesterday but there was some proble in connectivity it wasn't connecting to server and as I directly upload it I didn't save it So let's see if possible I will do it,

Competitive exams pehle main regular examstoh theek se prepare kar loon then I will think of competitive exams.

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Gayatri9

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Posted: 6 years ago

#40

chapter 5

As dadi was happy seeing her lalla and bahu performing all rituals the 3 DILs were screaming in anger

After all this guddan bent down to touch dadi's feet to which

dadi stopped.-"Beta abhi abhi toh samjhaaya tha ki ab har kaam jode se".Listening his maa's words akshat too bend down to take her blessings .While taking blessings Akshat's palm were on her hands she filled some different sensation which she hasn't experienced before and he too felt pleasured having her soft hands in his they shared an eyelock. Their eyelockwas broke by Dadi's precious words of blessings

Dadi-Khush raho by placing palm on her lalla's head and sada suhaggan raho on her bahu's head before they stood up dadi placed her both palms on both's heads and blessed them as"Dutoo nahoo putoo phaloo".i.e to have kids soon.

Akshat glanced his mother in disappointment.In order to stop him she ordered chalo beta bhagwaan ka ho gaya ab lalla se aashirwaad le le.

It was a true shock for guddan.Jee dadi she replied questioningly?

Dadi-"Beta pati parmeshwaar ka swaroop hota hain" aur ab yahin tera sab kuch hain. So apni nayi zindagi ki shuruwaat tujhe sabke bhagwaan aur apne bhagwaan donon ke blessings ke saath karni hogi". Chal ab jaldi se lalla ke pair choo.

Guddan in her mind-"Bhagwaan aur ye khadoos,yeh toh monsterbhi kehlaane layaak nhain aur dadi aap inhe hamare bhagwaan bana rahi hai.Aur inke pair hum toh kyaa hamari juti bhi naa chuuye.She was brought to senses by dadi's words beta pair choo rahi hain naa.

Jee dadi she replied with a naughty eyes and went towards AJ lowered herself placed her palm on his feet and pinched him with all the amount of energy she can have he was actually screaming in pain but still he managed to be neutral then she poked her nails into his feet to which he passed an intense gaze to her to his gaze she blinked an eye instructing him not to react.

As 3 DILs were watching ll this drama they noticed guddan blinking an eye to AJ.

Saru whispered to Lakshmi- Lakshmi Di Kyaa aapne bhi wahin dekha jo maine dekha.

Lakshmi- Haa saru haan yahin ki us chuhiyaa guddan ne mera matlab Saasu maa ne Sasur ji ko aankh maari". Listening to their discussion Durga was still murn.

and here AJ hold Guddan's shoulder's tightly made her up while making her up he pressed her neckbone around her shoulders tightly.With an evil smile he replied tum toh meri patni ho,Meri Ardhaangini that means you are equal to me your placeis not at my feets. He bend closer to her ensuring a safe distance not to touch her but for others it seemed a hug he whispered in her ears

"Dobaara aisi harkaat karne ke bare main soochnaa bhi maat or else you will witness the cruelest me".

While seeing this understanding and passion between them dadi was happy taking balliyaan while the 3 DIL's were about to faint.

Jaldi jaldi bataao kaisa lagaa atleast jyaada pak gaye hooge toh yahin kehna ki "Stop writing" but kuch toh kahoo