Guddan's-REVENGE-OS [FF]{chapter 12 updated on December 16} - Page 3

I watched so many serials ...look like same scenes..

Which it happena in other revenge shows beteewn the leads

Your os is good but please try 2 write and imagine a.fresh scene for our akshan

But in this part i can guess ki aage kya hoga bcoz i showed this in so many shows.ur is topic is nice revenge.so it should more and more passionate and little more hatred and love.

Have you seen the movie ishaqzaade .this movie also based on revenge love...this movie was also nice

And my expectation is very high from u.bcoz of love flourished in college part.so dont stop writing.it just a feeeback

I want your revenge os.you should continue but with some more passionate and fresh scenes same as write your love flourished part

Happy diwali 2 u 2.

A very Happy Diwali to all.Let's get back to our story fast as this is Diwali and I request you all to accept this small Diwali gift from me.

Chapter 4

The very next morning Dadi told guddan to be ready at 7. Guddan got ready on time as she didn't want to disappoint dadi and she couldn't sleep even thinking of the turn her life took in a day.She was looking mesmerizing in her red suit,Dadi asked "Yeh kya Guddan beta,It's your first day in Sasuraal and you are wearing suit,why didn't you wear a saree".At this her eyes wen't down and she hesitantly replied Dadi "Woh actually Dadi I would have wore a saree but I didn't know how to drape a saree hence I choose suit,Sorry Dadi but I will learn it,I promise.With her last words Dadi smiled and replied "Koi baat nahi bacchee I know you will learn.Ok let's go as all are waiting for us in mandir for aarti. But dadi mandir ki aarti toh subah 6 baje hi hoti hai She asked innocently.Dadi smiled and said who waala mandir nahi betaji,hamare ghar main jo mandir hai who.OHH she replied and while chatting they both reached mandir. Her smile got paused looking at her freshly Uncle husband but still she managed to be neutral."Guddan beta waise toh ye antara ke jaane ke baad kabhi mandir nahi aata but aaj ye specially tere liye yahaan aaya hai". No I am here just for you maa AJ corrected her.OK OK aarti ka samay ho raha hai and aaj ki aarti hamare ghar ki nayi bahu karegi dadi announced as guddan was about to take diya dadi stopped her bete nayi bahu ka matlab naya joda now as you are married every religious work you will do is with your husband.,Jode se ok lalla will do aarti you just have to hold his wrist.AJ took diya and aarti was started.Guddan couldn't cope up with his speed of aarti.she thought"Yeh uncle bhi na itna gussa late kahaan se hai,Ab bhagwaan se kya gussa".Itne jor jor se ghuma rahe hain bhagwaan bhi inko aake ,inke samne haath jod kar kahenge bas kar pagle mujh par itna bada ehsaan mat kar".and she literally imagined the whole scene. She was brought back to reality when Aj's hands were still they gave aarti to everyone.While giving aarti dadi noticed that guddan's maang was blank."Yeh kya guddan beta aaj pehle din hi teri maang sooni beta ab tu suhagan hai yeh apshagun hota hai.Woh dadi before she could speak dadi answered koi baat nahi lalla teri maang bhar dega.Lalla le is pooja ki thaal ka sindoor bhar de bahu ki maaang main.Dadi main khud hi laga leti hoon.She tried to stop dadi but dadi was not in mode of listening beta jab pati saath ho to suhagaan apne haath se apni maang nahi bharti.Pati hi maang harta hai. But dadi she was left with no option she bend her head down and made space in her hairs with the help of her fingers and AJ filled her maang.[Sindoori rang suhagan sachha song in background]While AJ was filling her maang she reminded.

Guddan was getting ready she has almost put all things a suhagan puts while getting ready and her gaze felt on sindoor she took it but as she was to apply it she thought What's the use of it if I didn't consider him as my husband.Sindoor is the purest thing of the holiest relation I shouldn't make fun of it.

She was brought back to senses by dadi's words " yeh hui na baat ab lag rahi hain tu iss ghar ki bahu,lalla ki patni aur in 3 on ki saas,

How's it? jaldi batao and Happy Diwali

Thank you and sorry if you feel bad for word criticize but I usually use this word.Check the next part and do tell me is it worthy waiting for ypur precious feedback.

Coming 2 ur revrnge os yes it is 1% worthy for me. Yes hn flashback and guddan thought is refreshment.and ye sindoor vala scene is necessary bcoz its a symbol that aj and guddan are made for eath other. Vo dono jitba bhi koshish karle dur jane ki destiny will bring them together

But next part want passion hatred and guddan funny sialouges with 3 useless bandariya bahuein

And i m waitin3g ur next os part.so continue soon

But why are your updates so short 😭😆