Safe Passage...for Rishi..--Scene n Dialogue added

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok its not a secret..that i am hating to see Rishi behavign in this fashion...so have come up with another soultion where they can show him positive..๐Ÿ˜†
What if..When simar will leave..Rishi and Priya will come in his life...one fine day....Rishi wil hear his mum and priya arguing...like..read the discussion..๐Ÿ˜†
Veera : Maine tumhe...Rishi ko simar se bas door karne ko kaha that...but you made him fall for you...so dont provoke me or i will rip you apart infront of Rishi..
Priya..he he he..mummy jee...(even adding laughter๐Ÿ˜†) dont you think..he wil even lose trust over you... so you better keep quiet...
Veera : Are you blackmailing me? ๐Ÿ˜ก
Priya : nahin mummy jee i am just showing you the mirror...
Veera : i wil tell Rishi that you love him only for money and you came in his life...just to ruin his nd simar realtionship...
Priya..mummy jee mera jo hoga woh toh hoga...but you will lose him too...hahaha..<< again laughter added๐Ÿ˜†
Veera : you girl...who has no standing or aukat threating me!!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก...
Priya..nahin mummy jee..i have seriosuly fallen for RIshi....
Then Rishi will enter..with Thunder...lighting in the background...<< adding effects as well๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Rishi : What i am seeing...on one hand i've my mother whom i love more than my life...and brought me up..despite me being..an orphan...nd on the other hand...There is a girl whom i've given everything..even left my wife...๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ˜†
Rishi : I can not stay here a moment more....main ja raha hun.................๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Both Veera and Priya runs after him...........๐Ÿ˜†
He will go in high speed...in his car(Innova...one as i think its a Taxi hired by producers๐Ÿ˜†,Andy must have refused to give his car...like what more i give..me..my mobile and even car..nahinnnnnnnnnn...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†)
He will then bang in..to some tree...or something...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...and there go..Simar back in his life..as Priya will leave...Sorry main aap dono ki grihasthi main ayee...P. <<๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† like..vday card she will only write..P.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Hows my story ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
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๐Ÿคฃ...looweeeeeee your story Nish ๐Ÿ˜†

thats class Nish..I swear that dialogue writer...Meenaxi or something better not come and steal these ideas ๐Ÿ˜†

The best dialogue is when Priya says "no i'm just showing you the mirror" ๐Ÿคก๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..and in this Priya sounds like a sarcastic fhwiu5y34 ๐Ÿ˜†

thunder lightning and rain??๐Ÿ˜†

yeahh the tree ๐Ÿ˜ณ over used and recycled trees in serials ๐Ÿ˜† then he'll smack his head on the steering wheel ๐Ÿ˜† BLOOD..murder...call 999 ๐Ÿ˜†

and that P thing..sounds jokes....today she wants to be pear, next day paper, next day pepper, next day period ๐Ÿ˜†

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by *VaVaVoom14* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *VaVaVoom14*

๐Ÿคฃ...looweeeeeee your story Nish ๐Ÿ˜†

thats class Nish..I swear that dialogue writer...Meenaxi or something better not come and steal these ideas ๐Ÿ˜†

The best dialogue is when Priya says "no i'm just showing you the mirror" ๐Ÿคก๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..and in this Priya sounds like a sarcastic fhwiu5y34 ๐Ÿ˜†

thunder lightning and rain??๐Ÿ˜†

yeahh the tree ๐Ÿ˜ณ over used and recycled trees in serials ๐Ÿ˜† then he'll smack his head on the steering wheel ๐Ÿ˜† BLOOD..murder...call 999 ๐Ÿ˜†

and that P thing..sounds jokes....today she wants to be pear, next day paper, next day pepper, next day period ๐Ÿ˜†

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ๐Ÿ˜†

๐ŸคฃThank you for liking it....burger...๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ...god...its such a fun to ruin this grihasthi....๐Ÿคฃ
Oh meenaxi...stay away from..kiss of love..wooops..i mean..from my dialogues....๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃkiss of love is for Rishi...๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃoh yeah..as remember when she said..with due respect ma'am can i slap you..? โ˜บ๏ธ ๐Ÿคฃ
yeah...nd all those effects..like showing his face...from all the angles...spiderman will do it..he will shoot it from..top....bottom side..left right..๐Ÿ˜†..then..he willl go black and white....nd the only rishi will speak๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃsee..Priya's husband even i can be director...๐Ÿคฃ
oh tree on...so true..banging his head over steering wheel..nd then he will fall from side..like door will open and he will be half..outside the car..nd half inside it...๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
and that P.....well i knwo that sounds jokess............even when written on card..๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i know, i swear serials need to look OUTSIDE the box sometimes and use their wild imagination (if that even exists๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†)

when did she say "can I slap you" ๐Ÿ˜†Veera would say "teri itni himmat............" ๐Ÿ˜†

amateur's all of them ๐Ÿ˜† whatever they show is basic stuff and blow it out of proportion to make it look like they're doing a HARD JOB ๐Ÿ˜†

yeahhh half outside with his seat belt STILL ON ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *VaVaVoom14*

i know, i swear serials need to look OUTSIDE the box sometimes and use their wild imagination (if that even exists๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†)

when did she say "can I slap you" ๐Ÿ˜†Veera would say "teri itni himmat............" ๐Ÿ˜†

amateur's all of them ๐Ÿ˜† whatever they show is basic stuff and blow it out of proportion to make it look like they're doing a HARD JOB ๐Ÿ˜†

yeahhh half outside with his seat belt STILL ON ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ YOUR EVERY WORD IS TRUE SO TRUE ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ..ok lemme control my laughter first...๐Ÿคฃ
oh..dont suggest them...like Wild imagination..or else they will shoot this Grihatshi in jungle..๐Ÿคฃwith their houses on trees...and simar...going from one tree to another...with the help of branch...wohoooooooooooo...Rishi kahan hain aap โ˜บ๏ธ ๐Ÿคฃ
oh that slap you is...sarcastic...remark from my side..๐Ÿคฃ
๐Ÿ‘ for the bolded part...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘yeah..they say we shoot day in day out to make it sucess..dont work so hard...you all rather USE BRAINS๐Ÿ˜Šor you all are airhead ๐Ÿค”..๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
The seat belt part is sooo true..๐Ÿคฃ ...see you all work so hard ๐Ÿ˜ณ and yet we completed a scene in span of few minutes...๐Ÿคฃ
Edited by Nishtha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so if they go into the jungle then that means we will be seeing a TARZAN Rishi ๐Ÿ˜† PPPPPPP where are youuuuu ๐Ÿ˜†....no not Priya, PARROT where are you ๐Ÿ˜† RRRRRRR here ๐Ÿ˜†

working hard is another definition for them, ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† its like showing the easy stuff in a merry go round wayy...whatever floats their boat at the end of the day, its funny ๐Ÿ˜†

LOL @ airhead ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by *VaVaVoom14* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *VaVaVoom14*

so if they go into the jungle then that means we will be seeing a TARZAN Rishi ๐Ÿ˜† PPPPPPP where are youuuuu ๐Ÿ˜†....no not Priya, PARROT where are you ๐Ÿ˜† RRRRRRR here ๐Ÿ˜†

working hard is another definition for them, ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† its like showing the easy stuff in a merry go round wayy...whatever floats their boat at the end of the day, its funny ๐Ÿ˜†

LOL @ airhead ๐Ÿ˜†

yeah...imagine..Tarzan Rishi with his 6 pack abs...๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ I AM DEAD ๐Ÿคฃ calling..P..P...P...P dot kahan ho tum...see this simartoo is behind me......save me na parrot....๐Ÿคฃ
oh..wish they think something else..always chorying ideas from movies..and calling it inspired and working..get a life please๐Ÿ˜Š
well tha airhead...one is. so APT FOR THEM.๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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๐Ÿ˜† well this is possible....
but for once I hope the creative stick at the real concept....a woman oriented serial....so I want veera to side next to her bahu and kick rishi out with alien....simar taking care off the bussines....and becoming a independent woman ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOL and with a BROWN skirt on Nish ????๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† jokes, it would look hilarioussss thoughhhhhhhhhhhhh๐Ÿ˜†

& shali, as much as I'd like to see Simarto as some independent woman and all, I don't think its in her CHARACTER to be someone like that...Duno why, it just doesn't look like it would suit the actress. Oh well, lets see...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shali

๐Ÿ˜† well this is possible....

but for once I hope the creative stick at the real concept....a woman oriented serial....so I want veera to side next to her bahu and kick rishi out with alien....simar taking care off the bussines....and becoming a independent woman ....

shali di....well all this cant happen nd shouldnt happen๐Ÿ˜† as it wil harm my Andypie๐Ÿ˜†..what he will do here without his wife tell me...main toh...bilkul hi toot jaungee..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿฅบ
so...think of something which insure Andypie security...rest who cares or even bother..๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: Burger

LOL and with a BROWN skirt on Nish ????๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† jokes, it would look hilarioussss thoughhhhhhhhhhhhh๐Ÿ˜†

& shali, as much as I'd like to see Simarto as some independent woman and all, I don't think its in her CHARACTER to be someone like that...Duno why, it just doesn't look like it would suit the actress. Oh well, lets see...

yes...Egjaaaaaaaactly.....Burger..wats the language of tarzan๐Ÿค”...something like..hooooo...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Andy will look cute...though โ˜บ๏ธ...dint he when he was doing that pool scene here in Grihasthi it would be just an extension of that..๐Ÿ˜†..chalo...i am officially dead๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Well she can type random letters on her laptop..fixing meeting thro her ifone...nd let me tell u if this would happen na...what shali di written then..ready to see Rishi working as subordinate under Simar๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† or he will struggle in his business whilst..simar will florish...all the oldie crap....which is happening everywhere since we were not even born..actually since...not even our parents were born ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by Nishtha - 16 years ago

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