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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi guys, after ages I wrote an OS, I'm not a regular viewer but i read written updates.

Concept is

Sai is enduring all the pain as she feel that savi needs father love. But what if savi herself decides she doesn't need any one other than her aai?

Please ignore my grammitical and typo errors

Please let me know how is the story so i can write more in.future

And the story starts in savi point of view


Let's start

The first time when imet vinnu dada father i felt some sort of connection. I met him when i was 7years old. I was stubborn girl like my aai sai Joshi. I love her lot she is myeverything. Because of my ziddi nature virat uncle accepted me as daughter and adopted me. This is what i thought. But reality hit me different. Now i am 16.Now i am in stage of understanding the happenings around me.

Today i had decided to confront all. Yes today i decided what i have to do.

My aai Sai joshi, Vinu father Virat and His vinu mother Patraleka and his so called family are in my house. They want to know why i called them all of sudden.

My aai broke the silence

Sai: Savi beta kya hua. Is everything alright. Why you called them to our house.

BK (bhavani) : arey choti jungli mulghi. Tell me why you called us.. Don’t know y this virat is giving to much importance to u. He forced us to come here. We came leaving so much work.

Savi (Me) : aha so much work means gossiping about me and my mom only know?

Bk looked at me with irritation

Me: ok i don’t want to start fight with u let me come to the point.

I turned towards vinu father virat and asked

Me: what i am to u?

He looked at me with confused face

Virat: arey baccha kaise sawal hein yeh. Thum meri pyari si bacchii. My baby daughter.

Me: really? But how?

Sai: beta kya hua.What sort of questions are these

Me: Ma please let me talk.

Before aai can ask any other questions i turned towards vinu father again and asked

Me: how i had became ur daughter. Do u adopted me out of sympathy?

BK: ha yes he adoptedu out of sympathy. U know what even ur mother don’t know who is ur father.

I didn’t surprise as i m hearing these type of taunts from 9 years. But i didn’t understand them at that time. Now i can. And wat hurts me is no one is there to take stand for my aai.Even my aai tired of defending herself. So she too didn’t respond but now she is not alone. I have enough. I can’t spare any single word against my mother

Me: i know Mrs Bhavani chavan. U will utter this gutter from ur mouth. I will come to u next. Let me talk with Mr virat chavan first.

Now all r shocked.They didn’t expect that i will call him with name. I used to call him as abba.

Me: Tell me mr virat chavan how i became ur daughter. Where are the adoption papers. I want to c.

By now i can see tears from his eyes. Even im feeling bad. But now im not in positioning to think about others emotions. I need to be strong for my aai. His tears are nothing for me infront of my aai suffering.

Virat: y should i adopt u beta when ur mine. Ur my blood.

BK: stop it virat. She is not chawans blood. Don’t pollute our chawans khandan ka naam by mentioning her as blood.

Uff now i had enough.I called usha maushi. She came with somepapers.

I thrown papers infront them. BK looked into the papers and shocked

All looked at her confusingly

BK: DNA test papers.That means savi is our blood

She is about to come towards me to hug

Savi: Mrs bhavani chavan don’t dare to come near me r call me as ur blood. I don’t want to pollute my blood by connecting it to so called chawans kaandan

Sai: savi what u had done? DNA test?

Tears rolling from her eyes

Savi: sorry aai i had to do it. I just want to clear things from all their dirty minds. So with help of usha maushi i did all these.

( USHA maushi is not so dumb in my story guys 😜)

Virat: but beta i believe ur my daughter u don’t need to do all these

Me: ohh then what happend to u Mr virat chawan. When ur badi aai is bad mouthing about my aai character just few minutes ago. Ur just standing like dumb n deaf person

At that time the side character who feels like main character reacted

Pakhi: savi is this way to talk about ur father. Learn to respect elders.

I started laughing like hell by holding my stomach

Me: see who is giving gyan to me. By the way who r u to interfere in middle

Pakhi: im mrs viratchavan. And ur badi aai

Me: for god sake i have only one aai and she is sai joshi. Don’t dare to introduce urself as my badi aai

And mrs chavan shall i give a shocking news to u. Ur not Mrs chavan because ur mrg with virat chavan is not legal

Now again same shocking expression on all faces

Me: hey guys don’t over react as u all doesn’t know. As per my knowledge ur family is well educated and also loaded with law and order maintaining officers. But poor thing is u guys try to maintain law outside but violate these in ur own house.U guys r very good at misusing power

Omi: eyy ladki..you are doing too much. Don’t know what i will do if u utter one more word. No not u its ur mom fault for raising u like this

Me: arey ...is ur kaandhan filled with dumb people. First look at urself Mr om prakash before talking about me. If ur so called DGP virat chawan worked efficiently then the first person who will land in jail in ur family is u. For doing illegal businesses and criminal activities.

Omi became silent as he know what i said is correct.

Usha mausi controlled her laugh. As we both only know how much detective work we had done to know about each and every detail of chawans.

Me: and mrs patrlekha virat chawan, krupiya dhyan deejiye. Ur just patraleka not patraleka virat chawan because ur mrg is not legal as mr virat married u without giving divorce to my aai. And for ur kind information. You are the third person in my parents life not my mom.

Now all are shocked with her confession.

Now usha maushi brought another set of papers

I gave them to my aai and to mr virat

Aai and virat shocked:DIVORCE PAPERS

Aai looked at me andgave me “what are u doing baccha expression”

I went towards maa and hugged her. I felt her tears on me

I wiped her tears

Me: no Aai, no more tears, i know u suffered a lot, now i don’t let u suffer that too because me.Please iss bhoj ko nikal dho. Divorce him aai. And just for me u r bearing those so called family taunts and the third person taunts. Y u should bare all these aai. Divorce him. We will go far away from here. I just don’t need these persons who make my mother cry.

A smile appeared in my aai face.

Sai: i didn’t realise my child has grown up

Aai signed papers

I looked towards mr virat. He is in tears now

I said without lookinginto his eyes

Me: Please sign it and give to me

Pakhi: ha virat sign it. What ur waiting for

Me: arey y u are so desperate. Let him breath first

She looked at me with serious look... as if i give damn about it

He came towards me

Virat: sorry bacha. I understand u r so angry at me. But please don’t leave me and go. I cant livewithout u.

Savi: wow sorry ? from great virat chawan mouth. But u know what i don’t need ur so called sorrys.Will ur sorry make my mother suffering disappear? And what u said? U love me?No virat chavan u love only urself. U love ur needs u love ur wishes. And ur love is like 2 minute noodles.Now ur saying u love me. In 2 yrs if u get another kid from ur legal mrg with patraleka u will love her. Ofcourse after urself u love ur ture love patraleka

Virat: bacha please don’t talk like that

Savi: did i say anywrong? U loved pakhi when she married ur brother u loved my aai. I don’t know whether it is love or not. Can i say onething Mr virat. Ur true love is patraleka only. U not only loved her u gave respect to her u trusted her u shared ur feeling with her. But what u gave to my mom, there is no trust no respect no communication.

And you are angry withmy mom for leaving house with my bhayya. Arey what she should do. She should stay in ur house and bare ur taunts u? Should she stay mum when u guys giving my bhayya to theesri person. U called her anath..u chosen ur bhabi than ur wife. When you r so clear about ur choice what choice my aai have other than leaving Let me tell one thing my mom did good thing for leaving this bloody narcissist and misogynist family. A family for whom she did a lot. She freed her mother in law from abuses. She joined the faded relationship between her mother in law and father in law. She felt her mother in law as her own aai but her own aai changes her colors as per her comfort

By hearing this Ashwini and ninad down their heads as.they know they wronged my aai

Me: She stayed with u for 5 years. If i m in her place i will leave this pagal family with in 6 months.

U charcter assassinated her. U linked her with my jagtap mamu. Do u know meaning of mamu? How can u do that Mr virat. I know you are angry as jagtap did sin, killed samrat uncle but u lost only ur brother but my aai lost her brother who treated as his own sister and also her every thing her aaba. How do u think she forgave him and had affair with him. U know what after my mom left this pagal house he is the one who is there for her but she never let him to enter into house she never had a small talk with him because of my ziddhi she allowed him to meet me. She took help from him first time in her life when u got shot while saving me. At that time she asked him to bring blood required for u. My mom kept away the murderer of her father and brother even though her reformed but what u did? U married a person who caused pain for my mom. Who is indirectly reason for my mom miscarriage. Who deceived my mom and became surrogate mother. So if u do wrong it is ok but even if my mom do right she will be wronged. I really don't understand ur rules Mr virat

U know one thing Mr virat u may be good son, good Devar ( i said looking at patrlekha, her face color changed) good father but ur not a good husband. U trust third person more than ur wife, u get easily influenced by your family when it comes about my aai matter. U cannot stand for ur wife. U took stand according to ur convenience. Only thing u know is shouting "bas" that's it mr virat. You are bad no worst husband. Please wish me that i should not get husband who have qualities like u. Please atleast do this for me


He looked at me with tears without uttering any word

I continued

U know what? my mom still loving u so she didn’t let anyone enter in her heart. But what u did. With in 2 years after my mom left u married ur true love. After knowing you are my real father i couldn’t able to see u hugging patraleka with my eyes. I don’t know how my aai managed to see ur so called romance.

Now we had enough. I just need my aai and her happiness. An i know how to make my aai life beautiful. Please don’t come in our life again. We will be happy when you stay away from our life.

I didn’t ask u anything from u till now. Now im asking. Please sign divorce papers and relieve my aai from the burden she is bearing from years.

After listening all this

Virat chawan Ninad chawan ashwini chawan came to me talk but they understood i had decided. And no one can change my decision.

With heavy heart he signed the papers

One by one left my house. I can see happiness in patralkeha as she won trophy but i least bothered about her

The only person i will miss is vinnu bhayya. I already told everything to him and he understood my pain

He held my hand and told he will come to meet me whenever i want to see him without telling to any one


I turned to my aai. She still didn't come out the situation which happened till now. I smiled,


Me: i know aai, so many questions running in ur mind. But let me clear i know u endured all these just for me. U don't want me take away from fathers love so u stayed here even ur not ok with it. But i understood everything ma. You are my priority. From now on ur not only my aai but also aba, i can stay without him but i can't see ur pain. I know my aai is strong. I don't want to be ur weakness. I want to be ur strength.

She hugged me tight and let out all her feelings


Me: Maa lets pack the bags. We will go to Punjab. We have so many plans. You have to open clinic on ur name and i need to study and become police officer. And usha maushi had to prepare my favourite dishes and we will open restaurant also with Usha maushi as master chef

Aai laughed at myexcitement

We trio hugged and decided to start our new beginnings.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I don't know whom to tag n how to tag, if any one read the Os please help me in reaching more people by tagging them. TQ in advance

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Plz do read and comment 🙏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MiniCupcake

I don't know whom to tag n how to tag, if any one read the Os please help me in reaching more people by tagging them. TQ in advance

I'll definitely read this when I have time. I'll tag a few people I know for you ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashmayurfan

I'll definitely read this when I have time. I'll tag a few people I know for you ❤️

Thank you dear 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This os is so so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️ sadly this won't happen in serial... I really want Savi to be with her Aai rather it irritating when she does her baba jaap....

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Originally posted by: Love_Tannu397

This os is so so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️ sadly this won't happen in serial... I really want Savi to be with her Aai rather it irritating when she does her baba jaap....

Thank u so much dear. ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Just too good. Keep writing.

I could feel Savi ka gussa coming out.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagi97

Just too good. Keep writing.

I could feel Savi ka gussa coming out.

Thank you dear ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Itna accha hai, too good to be true jaisa🤗

Savi ko sab samajh mein aane ke liye bada hona padega pehle toh, jisme kaafi saal hai. Even if it would have been otherwise, makers se aise plot ki umeed rakhna bewakoofi hai

Nice os❤️

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