Ice Cream...U Scream - TS Series_You complete me - Completed - Page 4

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.❤️

Hope this one uplifts the mood😊

Thanks a bunch❤️

You are one of the reason why its up on the forum.😉

Got another part before I conclude this story.

This is so good. Very well written. Loved the second part of it as well, loved Pulkit and sunny explaining everything word by word.

Makers just want to play on sairats insecurities by not giving them proper conversation , cos the story does revolve around them but do such a bad job at it , and I don’t think they can handle a sensitive content like this infertility and surrogacy decently, it’s a tool for them to make Sai suffer and make Virat insensitive and selfish. Vankar is gross.

I think your story will give the closure I need away from this show. More than pulkit or sunny, Sai shojld open about her vulnerabilities and her POV to Virat, to the Virat in ur story.

So beautifully written. ❤️I wish they do something like this in the show and expose Paki’s vileness

Nice twist in the tale. Glad that pullu n Sunny have pointed out Virats mistakes.

Thanks a ton❤️

I was waiting for your comments. Where and how much did I goof up with the IVF bit🙈?

Again I cried 😭. So emotional… loved the dialogues. ❤️ Between pullu and ullu (sorry virat) 😛

sai and virat has to develop a bond where they can communicate their silences better! Developing infallible trust is needed for that.
i hope something similar to this happens here too! When they trust each other in such worse situations then it will give more confidence to them.

Its fine re. Creative liberty. 😅

Pp cannot be a surrogate legally. She does not meet the criteria. But the makers will show that trash. And they have heeded no logic in terms of declaring Sai infertile like this. So after all that, your FF is a much better version. But Sai is facing too nuch heartache here n on the show.... 😞

Ideally Sai cannot be out of the loop with anything related to the ivf/surrogacy process because the doctor is obliged to inform her as the biological mother. So having her be unaware of everything going on, is not really feasible. But your twist in combining surrogacy with pp faking pregnancy by accusing V of sleeping with her is a much better twist than showing PP actually become a surrogate.

But even your twist still doesn't explain the need for him to lie to Sai about being ok with the idea of surrogacy. If he doesn't want surrogacy, thats it. Just say so. Period. As her husband he is expected to be honest with her n explain his rationale instead of coming up with lies and playing out such a convoluted drama where he spent all this time "planning" with pp instead of just telling HIS wife what his issue is. the fact that he chose to lie abd do things behind Sai's back involving pp, pullu n whoever else rather than just tell her the truth is not ok. I hope Sai brings that up in the next chapter. This behavior where he repeatedly does things that he thinks are good for Sai/family in his own "self righteousness" needs to stop. He pulled the same stunt during Shruti track- making a decision to lie about everything because he thought he was "protecting" Sai. And now again he has pulled such a major drama in the garb of trying to cater to Sai's wishes. What he has done is honestly disrespectful. He may never cheat on her by sleeping with someone but he had cheated her by hatching this plan behind her back.

Sai was pushing him to make a decision one way or another because she perceives his "need" for a baby and because she feels inadequate, guilty. The solution to that is not for V to lie to her and pretend to be ok with Sai and blame her for "pressurizing" him into agreeing for ivf/surrogacy.

But i will still prefer this over the makers actually making PP the surrogate. Because thats NOT ok.

That woman cannot be tied to Sairat and their child in this "permanent" manner. As long she was being obsessive and delusional in her own head and dreams its still tolerable coz its skippable n can be ignored. But when it becomes tangible and real its unacceptable.

Pp cannot be accepted as a surrogate.

Pp cannot be trusted under ANY circumstances. Even if she was genuinely changed n reformed right now she needs to be kept at an arms distance.

Sairat owe her NOTHING. She cannot have any hold or any place in their life.

And thats why I hate that they are planning this crap.

This track has no relevance to pp. It sucks that they have ghusaoed her in this.

This conflict pertaining to the issue of infertility can definitely be shown by makers without any 3rd angle - especially pp.

I forgot to mention this in the episode review but V's dialogues yesterday were what you did in Part 2. Since I had read it, i could see the alignment.

I wish you were part of the writing team 🤣

And i absolutely loved the second part of part 2.

Yes yes yes... Can totally see this happening. Maja hi aa jayega... Agar aisa hua show main actually. 🤪

Eagerly waiting now for the 'talk' and the 'ice screams' ☺️