Ice Cream...U Scream - TS Series_You complete me - Completed - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Thanks a ton ❤️

Appreciate those beautiful words. Makes the writing all the more worth while.


I actually wanted to explore Virat's mind more through this story, whether justified or not but to tie up his actions. And yes for him to introspect on his on doings and dwell on them. And have a transparent conversation. A bare in all. I too wonder why they don't invest in such poignant conversations between the lead characters.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh My! Finally managed another one mature piece after a while. It actually drains me completely and takes a lot to write something on these lines.

I thought it would be more smoother after the last time. Nah! Its still isn’t coming so easily 🤦‍♀️😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you!! Thank you!! Thank you for those encouraging words ❤️


Wasn't planning on an epilogue, and the current track (now that I read comments here today and saw the precap) has me wary. Will try after a while, but can't promise.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Thanks so much ❤️


Sai as a character is unidimensional. Hence, I find it difficult to make her act unpredictably. Even while I want her to be more strong and stand up for herself this picture that I have of her is so giving and understanding to a fault. Hence it is in her nature to be considerate to others while she keeps hers to herself. She needs someone too and this person should have been Virat and he fails at it miserably. Like you mentioned, her only person..her own was her Aaba.

I have started to dislike V's character to a different level. Every time I write, I'm forced to disconnect form the show.

And that is the reason I'm unable to find her happiness, her ultimate good. Because as a character, she seeks only love, and that is her weakness. But as an individual I feel that love without respect, trust, companionship, sharing & support is not enough...is not worth it. One's self respect should never be compromised. Hence I find myself in the dilemma..just like you.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

Thanks a ton ❤️

So so glad that you enjoyed reading it :-)

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