GHKKPM (FanFic: Part 20 updated on page 19 (04/19/21) - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice one. Hope pakhi dont create any problems.

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Part 12 - Jealousy? :

Hello lovely readers, hope you are doing great. Just a reminder, be safe, and take care.

Happy Reading!

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(Pakhi came out of the room hearing Virat’s name, but by the time she stepped out, Virat was gone inside.)

Pakhi: Virat yahan hain? Kya tu bhi Pakhi, Virat yahan kaise ho ga? Woh toh Gadchiroli mein hain. Aur waise bhi, abhi tu sirif Samrat pe dhyaan de. Samjhi na?

(Pakhi goes inside the room.)

(Change of Scene)

(Virat keeps getting flashes of Sai and Shaurya’s proximity, and how happy Sai was with Shaurya’s company.)

Virat: Itna has has ke toh mujhse khabhie baat nahi ki. Haath toh lagane deti nahin, aur uss Shaurya ko seedha hug kar diya?

(He remembers how she introduced him as Kamal Sir’s student, and Shaurya as best friend.)

Virat: Kaise hug karegi, main toh dost bhi nahin hoon na uska. Itna time saath rehene ke baad bhi. Security karu main, ghumaane laoon main, ar best friend woh. Yeh sahi hain.

(Virat realizes what he was thinking, and brushes off his thoughts.)

Virat: Tujhe kya? Uska best friend hain, itne dino baad miley hain, toh baat toh karegi na? Tu zyada mat soch aur fresh ho jaa. Uske baad dinner ke liye bhi jaana hain.

(Virat goes to freshen up.)

(Change of Scene)

(Virat went to Sai’s room to pick her up for lunch. However, when he knocks the door, instead of Sai, Shaurya opens the door.)

Virat: Tum yahan?

Shaurya: Woh Sai ki tabiyat theek nahin hain toh...

(As soon as Virat heard Shaurya say that Sai was sick, he didn’t let Shaurya finish. He pushed him aside, and made his way into the room.)

Virat: Kya hua Sai ko?

(He then sits next to Sai. Who is laying down on the bed with a pale face.)

Sai: Virat Sir, aapko pareshaan ho ne ki koi zaroorat nahin hain. I am fine.

Virat: Haan, dikh raha hai kitni fine ho. Mujhe bataya kyun nahin? Aur yeh achanak tabyat kharab kaise hui?

Sai: Woh plane se travel kiya na toh shayad isiliye sickness ho gayi. Shaurya waise bhi yahan mere liye khana leke aaya tha toh bas.

Shaurya: Acha hua main yahan tha warna tu kisi ko kuch batati hi nahin.

Sai: Tum faaltu mein itne panic ho gaye. Mujhe kuch nahin hua tha.

Shaurya: Tu meri baat khabhie sunti bhi hain?

Sai: Hawww, main tumhari har baat to sunti hoon.

Shaurya: Toh medicine le, aur rest kar. Kal tujhe kahin bahar le ke jaounga ghumane. Theek hain? Lakin agar teri tabiyat theek hui tabhi. Samjhi?

Sai: Yes Sir.

Shaurya: Khayal rakh apna. Aur Mr.Chavan bhi hai yahan hain toh I guess I should leave. Chal kal milta hoon tujh se main.

(Shaurya leaves the room, leaving Sai and Virat alone.)

Sai: Pura paagal hain yeh. Aur Virat Sir, sorry aapko na batane ke liye

Virat: Tumhare Abba ke alawa koi aur bhi hain jiski baat tum maanti ho? Sai tum meri zimedaari ho. Main tumhe yahan le ke aaya hoon. Toh tumhari safety ki responsibilty meri hain. Please next time se kuch bhi ho toh mujhe inform karna.

Sai: Shaurya daant ke gaya na mujhe? Ab aap bhi mat daanto na?

(Virat was losing his calm whenever she brought Shaurya’s name.)

Virat: Tumhara best friend keh ke gaya hain na, toh ab medicine khao aur so jao.

(Virat gives her the medicine, and puts her to sleep.)

(Change of Scene)

(Samrat asks Pakhi to get ready, as they have to go to Siddhivinayak Mandir. They had to go and get the blessings from Ganpati Bappa for a happy married life. This was instructed by the elders of the house.)

Samrat: Pakhi, jaldi karo. Hummey late ho jayega. Mandir ke baad ghumne bhi toh jaana hain na?

Pakhi: Haan, aa rahi hoon.

(Samrat turns around, and gets mesmerized seeing Pakhi in a green saree with open hair with jewelry, and most importantly, her mangalsutra.)

Pakhi: Kya dekh rahe ho? Ab der nahin ho rahi?

Samrat: Achi lag rahi ho. Actually, bahut achi lag rahi ho.

(Pakhi's blushes after hearing the compliment. Then both of them head towards the temple.)

(Change Of Scene)

(Sai is getting ready, and recalls how Virat cared for her last night.)

Sai: Itne bure bhi nahin hain Virat Sir.

(Sai got ready wearing some denim jeans, a kurti, and earrings with her hair down.)

Sai: Virat Sir abhi tak aaye nahin. Main hi jaa ke dekh ke aaoun kya?

(Sai decides to go to virat’s room to check why he is not ready yet, instead of calling him.)

(Change Of scene)

(Virat was sitting on his bed all ready, but didn’t go. He thought that Sai wanted to spend some alone time with Shaurya. That they both planned some other event, and that he shouldn’t disturb them. Virat goes to open the door when he hears someone knocking.)

Virat: Sai? Tum?

Sai: Haan, main. Aap ready ho toh bahar kyun nahin aaye? Jaana nahin hain kya hummey?

Virat: Tum toh Shaurya ke saath kuch plan kar rahi thi na? Toh main aa ke kya karounga?

Sai: Oh ho mujhe ghumane toh aap le ke aaye hain na? Shaurya toh waise bhi college trip pe aaya hain. Toh maine ussey mana kar diya. Ussey maine kaha ki main uske saath phir khabhie chali jaungi.

Virat: Toh woh nahin aa raha?

Sai: Maine ussey mana kiya hain aane ko toh I don’t think so. Lekin agar uska kaam khatam ho jaaye toh phir woh hummey join kar le ga shaam ko. As of now, no he will not be coming. Ab agar aapke sawal ho gaye ho toh hum chalein ghumne? Nahin toh phir main shaam tak uske aane ka wait karun?

Virat: Nahin, nahin. Hum chalte hain. Tumhare Abba tumhe Bappa ke darshan karwane jaa rahe the na? Toh hum sabse pehele wahi chalte hain.

(Virat was relieved thinking Shaurya won’t be there in between them for sometime. Sai and Virat then both headed towards the mandir.)

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How is the update guys? Please ignore the minor mistakes.

Will Sai-Virat come across Pakhi-Samrat?

Does Virat have feelings for Sai?

Do vote and comment your thoughts.


Edited by Sona03 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's amazing loved it plz continue.

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Great update! Thank you. Look forward to reading more.

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Virat is being jealous... Yess liked the update very much!!!!💜 Continue soon as now eager to read next part...😄😄

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Originally posted by: fathima14

It's amazing loved it plz continue.


Thank you 😊

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Originally posted by: neeraja91

Great update! Thank you. Look forward to reading more.


Thank you so much 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sairat07

Virat is being jealous... Yess liked the update very much!!!!💜 Continue soon as now eager to read next part...😄😄


Yes he is!! Thank you so much ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Superb update

Virat is so jealous

Will they get married in your story or not???

Please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very nice update...👌🏻 Enjoyed jealous Virat...!!! By the way who had seen Virat in the hotel? Want to know desperately...please update the next part soon...👍🏻

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