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PART 7

"Kya hua?" Saraswati looked at Shitij.
"Woh kuch nahi," said Shitij slowly. "Aapko kaise pata hai key aap unse
shaadi karoge..ore woh hai kaun?"
"Hai woh toh Bhavishya hai, mera bachpan ka pyaar. Papa ka business ka
vice president ka beta. Abhi Canada sey vapas aaya hai, apna business
degree poora karke....or ab woh mujhse shaadi karega."
"Aapko kaise pata hai yeh tum se shaadi karega?"
"Bhavishya ne mujhse vaada kiya tha key jab woh Canada sey wapas
aayega woh mujhse shaadi karega...ok main unko milne jaati hoon. Bye!"
Saraswati got up and ran. Shitij sat there shocked and watched his love
run into the arms of his potential enemy.

Saraswati ran into Bhavishya's arms and gave him a hug. Bhavishya slowly
put his arms around her. They stood like that for a few minutes, Saraswati
pulled away but Bhavishya pulled her close again. He kissed her forehead
and smiled at her.
"Bhavishya maine aapko bhot miss kiya. Tumne ek baar phone bhi nahi
kiya! Main bhot naraz hoon tumse!" She turned away with her back
towards him.
"Par maine tumhe bulkul miss nahi kiya. " Saraswati turned around
shocked but saw that he was kidding." BHAVISHYAAAA! Mujhe aise
mazaak bilkul ache nahi lagte."
"Ok sorry jaan...please mujhe maaf kardo." He got on his knees and
grabbed his ears. Saraswati smiled and bent down in front of him.
"Ok...maaf kardiya..par tumne mujhe phone kyun nahin kiya?"
"Agar main tumhe phone karta ..toh uske baad mujhse focus nahi hota.
Isleeyay mujhe pata hota key ek pyaari ladki mere intezaar kareehai. Or
main yeh chaata key sara paraai chorke uske paas chaloon."
"Oh so sweeeeeeeeeet!" She gave him a hug. The end of lunch warning
bell went off and they both stood up.
"Vaise aap yahan kya kareho?" Saraswati asked curiously.
"Of course i came to meet you meri jaan. Chalo aap class jao, byee!"
Saraswati ran off ...she was in seventh heaven...mera piya ghar aaya oh
ramji mera piya ghar ayaa oh ramji.

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PART 8

Laxmi forced a smile. "Oh Canada? Wow so nice."
"Of course its nice...yaheen sey toh better hai." Laxmi realized that her
English had no accent at all but her Hindi was horrible. It sounded so fake
and it made Laxmi laugh. The boy looked up and saw Laxmi giggling.
"Kya hua hai?"he tried to figure out the joke.
"Woh..nevermind main chalti hoon." Laxmi walked away and turned the
corner. She stopped and looked back to see Mini giving him a kiss.
"Oh no maine toh unka naam bhi nahin poocha! Kitni stupid hoon uske
girlfriend key baare mein sab kuch pata hai par unke baare mein kuch
nahin." She decided to walk by Durga's class to see if she had made it
with the driver. She peeked inside the classroom and saw Durga sitting by
herself in the corner staring out the window. Laxmi felt sad. Durga was
her sister but yet she was so different from the other sisters. Saraswati
was beautiful and loved by all. She even had a "boyfriend" Bhavishya who
was in Canada. Laxmi knew from Saraswati that he hadn't called once in
four years but was coming back soon. Gauri liked to be alone so it wasnt
a problem that she didnt have many friends. Her few friends were just like
her and they hung out quite often. Gauri didnt have a boyfriend but thats
because she didnt want one. Laxmi had a lot of friends too. She was
wellknown throughtout the highschool because she was Suryakant
Garodia's daughter but so was Durga. The people who met her thought
she was weird and the people who didnt know her didnt care. It hurt
Laxmi to see her older sister being an outcast because of one stupid
incident that wasnt Durgas fault.

Yuvraj could not stop thinking about that girl. He didnt have any friends
that were girls because he went to an all boys high school. He had his
sisters. He loved them so much and could not figure out why his mom
didnt. Since childhood Yuvraj had always realized the treatment that bari
maa and his sisters had gotten compared to his mom and him. Suryakant
had always given him whatever material possession he wanted. But Yuvraj
didnt care that much. He would rather play outside in the yard with his
sisters then with his toy cars. Yuvraj was close with Saraswati and Laxmi
and would tell them everything. He tried talking to Durga but she was so
hard to get through to and he didnt like Gauri because she reminded him
of his mom. Yuvraj also loved his Bari Maa so much. He sometimes felt
that she understood him better than his own mom and that she would
make a great mom to a son if she had one.
Yuvraj's friends came up to him. "Yaar kahan gaye the? Humse milne key
mood mey nahin the?"
"Ya phir raaste mein Tina mili."
"Shut up..aap log toh jaante hain key main or Tina click nahin karte...or
hum dono ke beech kuch nahin hai."
"Haan haan hum toh jaante hai." They said sarcastically and walked off.
Yuvraj's best friend Shazeb came up to him. "Yuvraj sach mein kahan par
the?"
Yuvraj looked up and smiled. Even though Shazeb and Yuvraj had recently
just met, Shazeb knew Yuvraj inside out. "Woh yaar main ghum ho gaya
tha...but I am happy."
"Happy kyun?"
"Maine ek ladki ko dekha tha...duniya key sab sey pyaari ladki ko."
"Wow Yuvraj kahan mili?"
"Us jage ka naam nahi aata...hmmm aaj school key baad kya kare ho?"
"Main toh kuch nahin kara."
"Chalo hum us ladki sey milne jayenge or uske baad aap mere ghar
dinner karoge."
"Nahin yaar ladki ko milne zaroor jaaonga par dinner ke liye apna ghar
teak hai."
"Yaar aap mere ghar kabhi nahin gaye...please aao na..main tumhe sab se
milwaoonga."
"Teak hai..main sochta hoon."
"Isme sochne vali kya baat hai..aap aaoge or woh final hai."

Gauri sat on a bench outside the school. She had skipped math class and
was sitting outside. She hated school so much and only came here
because her parents made her. Gauri liked to stay by herself and didnt
like to be interfered with. She had a few close friends and her sisters but
she didnt like them very much. She got along with her stepmom quite
well but she had more fun telling her off then actually talking with her.
But Gauri didnt really have a real friend who she liked to talk to and
spend time with. She acted like she was tough and she didnt need anyone
but at heart she was a softie and just needed a friend. Her thoughts were
interrupted when a boy came and sat beside her.
"EH main yahan pey behti hoon."
"Haan or main yahan par behta hoon toh?"
"Nahin main yahan par pehle thi."
"Toh ab main bhi hoon."
"Tum apne aap ko kya samajte ho?"
"Aap apne aap ko kya samjti ho?"
"Main Gauri Garodia Hoon!"
"Toh main kya karoon?"
Gauri was disgusted..what a rude boy! She hated people like him.
"Dekhye main aapko phirse boloon ge..main yahan par pehle behti thi toh
please aap jaye."
"Tumhare Papa ka bench hai kya key main yahan se chala jao?"
"Actually yeh mera Papa ka bench hai!" She pointed to a label on the
bench, ' Donated By Suryakant Garodia and Family.' Dekha yeh mera
bench hai."
"Toh kya hum share nahi karsakte? I am sure your Papa wont mind."
"Tum pagal ho kya? Ofcourse my Papa will mind. Main ustra kee ladki
nahin hoon jiske koi aage peeche koi nahin hai.Mere paas, papa hai-
mama hai, choti maa bhi hai, 4 behene hai or ek bhai ..or agar main unko
bulaao woh foran aayenge!"
"Toh main kya karoon? Mubarak doon? Chalo Mubarak ho aapko key
aapki family mein itne log hain.
"TEAK TUM NAHIN JAOOGE TOH MAIN JAAONGI!!"
"Toh jao...main tumhe nahin rokhne wala."
Gauri picked up her bag and walked off angrily and she left she stepped
on his foot hard. He bent down,"OUCH!!"
"Oh sorry!" she said sweetly and walked off. The boy watched her go. 'Ek
teekhi teekhi se uff karadi see ladki...'



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PART 9

Laxmi walked into Saraswati's room.
"Di, kahan ho? Laxmi looked in the bathroom attatched to Saraswati's
room. She looked around counfused, where could she be? All of a sudden
Laxmi heard laughter from the terrace. She slowly walked towards it not
knowing who was there. She peeked out and saw Saraswati standing and
talking to someone who was on they other side of the railing. From where
Laxmi was standing she couldnt figure out who it was. She walked out
and tapped Saraswati on the back. Saraswati turned startled.
"Laxmi aap? Mujhe toh laga ta aap Maa ho!" Laxmi shook her head no and
looked at the guest.
"Bhavishya jeeju aap?!" Laxmi was so excited to see Bhavishya.
"Jeeju...ab bulaane lagi ho? Teak hain main bhi aapko saali kahoonga."
Bhavishya said winking at Saraswati. Saraswati smiled and looked down
shyly.
"Of course, toh aap yahan terrace par kya kareho, or woh bhi railing key
doosre side pey?"
"Tumhari pyaari Di sey milra hoon or ghar key andhar sey toh nahin aa
sakta isleeyay aapke Papa mere Papa ko batainge key main Saraswati se
milne aaya tha." None of the adults knew that Bhavishya and Saraswati
loved each other.
"Oho so sweet...Just like Romeo and Juliet balcony pe."
"Haan bilkul!"
"Toh aap mere liye Canada sey kya leke aaye ho?"
"Suprise...par mere saath nahin hain..jab main or Papa milke aayenge tom
main leke aaonga..par abhi ke leeyay aap mujhe or meri jaan ko akela
chorde please...mere paas waqt bhot kam hai."
"Teak hai chali jaati hoon par Saraswati Di jab Bhavishya Jeeju chale
jaenge toh maine aapse zaroori baat karni hai."
"Haan teak hai Laxmi, I'll come soon." Laxmi left the terrace after saying
bye to Bhavishya. Saraswati looked at Bhavishya.
"Bhavishya main darwaza lock karloongi please is side pey aa jao. Main
curtains bandh karoongi taake koi tumhe na dekh sake."
"Koi mujhe na dekhe...mujhe toh laga ta kuch ore sochre thi!"
"Bhavishya baadmash aisi koi baat nahin hain mere dil mein..sirf shaadi
ke baad!"
"Oho shaadi key baad so boring!Shaad key baad maza nahin aata..isleeyay
phir to allowed hai..part abhi risks like hota hai na..toh zyaada maza aata
hai."
"BHAVISHYA YAHAN SE CHALE JAO! KITNE BESHARAM HO!!"
"Teak hain chalta hoon but only after one kiss." Bhavishya stuck out his
lips towards Saraswati...she shook her head no and turned his head so
that his cheek was facing her and gave him a small peck.
"Main toh ore nahin maang sakta isleeyay aap bologi SHAADI KE BAAD."
"Bilkul." Bhavishya climbed down and left.

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PART 10

Saraswati watched as Bhavishya climbed down the side of the wall. She
loved him so much and just wished for the day she would be married to
him. Saraswati tunred around and walked back into the room.
"Hmm mujhe Laxmi sey milne chaaiye...woh mujhse baat karna
chareetee."
Saraswati walked out and knocked on Laxmi's door.
"It's open andhar aa jao."
Saraswati walked in and saw Laxmi lying on the bed. She went and lay
down beside her.
"Kya baat karni thi Laxmi?"
"Di bhot saare batein hai...kahan sey shuru karoon?"
"Jahan sey aap shuru karna chaati ho..main toh sab kuch sune tyaar
hoon."
"Teak hai pehli baat- main bhot parshaan hoon Durga Di ke liye...uska
toh koi haal nahin hai."
"Laxmi jo hadsaa uske saath hua tha...woh kuch aise cheez nahin hai key
chaldi bhool sakte hain."
"Haan Di main samaj sakti hoon par phir bhi..uske liye kuch nahin kar
sakte? Use toh ab hasna nahin aata, muskrana nahin aata, basically jeena
nahin aata."
"Mujhe lagta hai key Durga zyaada tension leti hai unke aane wale kal key
vaja sey...ore Maa, Papa, Choti Maa bhi issi vaja sey tension lete hai. Maa
iss baat sey tension leti hai key ab Durga sey shaadi kaun karega, or Papa
yeh chaate hain key kisi ko yeh baat na pata chale...or Choti Maa apni
izzat ke liye dartee hai."
"Durga sey toh koi bhi shaadi karlege...jo hua tha unke ghalti nahin thi.
Yeh woh purana zamana nahin hai jo is jaise hadsaa ko sirf ladki ki ghalti
kahen...times have changed."
"Laxmi waqt kitna badle..log nahin badalte...yeh log puraane soch lekar
ghoomte hain..or hm kuch nahin karsakte."
"Main nahin maanti Di key hum kuch nahin karsakte..agar hum kabhi
koshish nahin karte toh hume kaise pata hoga key humse kuch nahin
hoga."
"Laxmi yahan par womens rights itne nahin chalte...or ab toh paanch saal
bhi hoge hain...hum kuch nahin karsakte." Saraswati sat up and gave
Laxmi a sad look. She knew that it was hard to explain to Laxmi that
nothing could be done when Laxmi was so persistent.
"Laxmi aap ko tho pata hai ke Durga is incident key baare mein baat
nahin karte."
"Nahin Di ..woh baat isleeyay nahin karti kyun key kisi ne usse kabhi
poocha nahin hai key woh raat pe kya hua tha. Aapko yaad nahin hai kya
hua tha us raat?"
Flashback: Everyone was sitting eating dinner with the exception of
Durga who went to hang out with her friends and still wasn't back yet. It
was dark and Yuvraj, Saraswati, Laxmi and even Gauri were playing a
game together. They were upstairs when they heard someone banging on
the door downstairs. They saw their dad run to open the door but he
yelled for everyone else to stay away (god knows who was at the door).
The children stayed quietly and hid upstairs to watch the scene.
Suryakant opened the door and found 3 police officers, one of whom was
Suryakant's close friend at the door. The last police officer was carrying
Durga in his arms. Suryakant asked them in and when he saw Durga he
could not believe it. She had mud on her clothes, blood stains, bruises
and cuts all over her body. Suryakant took them into his private office and
shut the door. The children were scared Laxmi and Yuvraj started to cry
seeing their Di hurt. Saraswati the rational one tried to keep them calm.
When Suryakant came out of his office an hour later, he saw the
policemen to the door thanking them. He came up the stairs carrying a
frail, knocked out Durga. He took Savitri into his room and started talking
to her in private. The children could hear Suryakant yell about something
and went closer to hear. The end result Durga had been raped and found
by the side of the road. The police had offered to help Suryakant file a
case but he refused to save his fame and honor.

"Dekha Di..kisi ne Durga ko poocha nahin tha ke uss raat kya hua tha?
Abhi bhi woh sachaai ka dard uske dil mein hai."
"Haan Laxmi... ore Papa ne apne izzat bachane ke liye...yeh nahi socha
key main apni beti ko bachao..ya uska dard dekhoon."
"Humain kya patta? Woh zaleel abhi bhi zinda ho sakta hai..issi shehr
main..ussi kaam mein."
"OMG Durga ko toh pata hoga woh kaun hai? I cant believe kisi ne usse
kabhi poocha nahin hai!"
"Hum bhi apne izzat or Papa key dar mein pagal hoge hain."
"Laxmi ...aap kehri thi key koi bhi Durga se shaadi karega... yeh baat sach
nahin hai. Jo ladkiyan rape hui hain..sab unhe bhot neeche samajthe
hain..or kehte hain ke unke ghalti thi...isleeyay pehle hamare society male
dominant thi...or hum keh sakte hain key ab zamana badal gaya hai..par
woh choti choti baatein abhi bhi log maante hai. Koi ladka jinke ghar wale
status ya izzat wale log hai..woh to ek paak ladki sey apne bete ke shaadi
karenge."
"Toh Di humain yeh badalna parega! Kya tum mere saath doge?" Laxmi
stuck out her hand. Saraswati looked at her Laxmi's expression, an
expression of true desire to achieve something and she at that minute
that they would succeed. She put her hand on top of Laxmi's and smiled.
"Yeh hum Durga ke liye kare hain...or woh saari ladkiyan jinke saath naa
insaafi hui hai!" Now who could stop to girls who are so determined?


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PART 11

It was later on that evening when Yuvraj and Shazeb met up to find the
beautiful girl. Yuvraj lead Shazeb into a middle-class area that he had
found his way into the first time.
" Yuvraj tum kahan rehte ho..yahan se dhoor hai?"
"Nahi woh yahan sey itni door nahin hai...jab aap mere ghar dinner ke liye
jaoge..to main aapko dekha tha hoon."
The boys kept walking until they came across that place the girl was
standing.
"Haan woh ladki yahan par kari thi."
"Iss jage ka naam kya hai?"
"Usne mujhe nahi bataya...maine usse poocha bhi tha..par usne mujhe
bola key agar mujhe is jage ka nahi pata...toh mujhe jaana chaye."
"Shayad woh sey kehri thi...yahan par koi nazar nahi aara."
Yuvraj looked at the empty alleys. "Hum uss side par chalte hain..woh
wahan baag kar gaye thi." The boys walked down the alley until they got
to a place that had beautiful lights, the sound of music, talking, laughing,
payal and chooriyan. To Yuvraj it was beautiful. Shazeb immediately
realized where they were, being a middle-class boy, he knew about
places like this. Yuvraj who had had a sheltered childhood wouldnt.
"Yuvraj chale."
"Nahi yaar aisa jaga maine kabhi nahi dekha...bhot khoobsoorat hai."
"Yuvraj kabhi kabhi jo khoobsoorat lagta hai uska sachai utna hi
bura.Chale na!"
"Shazeb kya jaldi hai? Abhi aaye hain..or maine abhi tak uss ladki ko bhi
nahin dekha."
"Yuvraj ye...." Shazeb was about to explain that they should leave
immediately before someone sees them was then interrupted by Yuvraj.
"Woh dekho!...woh ladki wahan par hai...chale!"
Yuvraj started off in the direction of the girl as Shazeb tried to stop him.
The girl saw Yuvraj coming and turned and walked inside the house.
Yuvraj knew it was here because of the chadar she was wearing.He
followed her inside as Shazeb tried to grab his arm. Yuvraj kept going.
Inside the house was a long hall and smaller rooms off to the side. The
girl turned into the last room a the end of the hall. Yuvraj followed her
and stopped at the door. He peeked in and did not see the girl.
"Shazed kahan hai woh?"
"Yuvraj woh jo ladki samne gold kapre mein karee hai..yeh ladki wohi
hai."Yuvrah saw that her chadar was put too the side and she was now in
the middle. When he saw her, he stopped. His first love was none other
then a prostitute and that is what Shazeb tried to explain to him.
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Yuvraj turned around and slunk to the floor. That beautiful innocent girl
he saw that other day was none other than a prostitute in a brothel.
Shazeb bent down in front of Yuvraj..."Chale?" He helped him up and they
both left quietly to Yuvraj's house for dinner.

The girls were in the kitchen helping making dinner. Gauri was putting
dishes out for the servants to come and take while Laxmi and Saraswati
were supervising cooking. Durga sat and stared out the window. Laxmi
nudged Saraswati and they both looked at Durga.
"Pata hai kya? Durga akelapan mehsoos karti hai." Saraswati whispered to
Laxmi.
"Toh hum unhe company denga."
"Hamare company kaafi nahin hain...isse kisi ore ka pyaar bhi chaaye.
Matlab koi ladka."
"Haan Di such kehre ho...par kaun?"
"Sochna parega...koi ho jo Durga ka past bhi accept karle."
"Mushkil kaam hai."
The girls both stopped talking when Reetu walked in.
Reetu looked at them," Jee woh Chote Saab or mehman aage hai..toh aap
log bhi table pe aa jao."
The girls all left the kitchen and sat down on the table with their family.
Yuvraj came and cleared his throat.
"Yeh mera dost Shazeb hai." Everyone looked up at Shazeb. Savitri smiled
and welcomed him. Saraswati and Laxmi said hi while Gauri just nodded.
Durga sat quietly at the end of the table. But Menka and Suryakant looked
at Shazeb strangely.
"Shazeb naam hai aapka?"Suryakant looked at him icily.
"Jee unclejee." Shazeb knew what was coming.
"Ajeeb naam hai...kahan sey ho?" Yuvraj looked up and gave his father a
confused look that Suryakant didnt see.
"Woh main yaheen sey hoon..."
"Hindu ho?"
"Nahi unclejee main Musalmaan hoon." Shazeb was very uncomfortable
and Yuvraj could tell.
"Papa Shazeb bhot acha ladka hai...or mera dost hai."
"Ajeeb baat hai..ab Musalmaan sey bhi dosti hone lagi hai."
"Papa...woh." Suryakant gave Yuvraj a look that shut him up.
Shazeb was uncomfortable and could not look in the direction of
Suryakant. He realized that he hadnt paid much attention to anyone else
at the table and looked up at everyone, carefully avoiding Suryakants
gaze. He made his way around the table but stopped when he saw Durga.
She was beautiful. 😳

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