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Awesome work mahiya, really well done 👏 👏
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PART 3
Saraswati tried her best to ignore Shitij and he tried his best to get her
attention. She had mostly succeeded but now the upcoming event would
make her have to open up to him. She entered the classroom before Shitij
hoping she could convince the teacher she could not participate.
"Nahi beta aap ko yeh karna parega...its only fair." Ms Sherawat explained
to Saraswati. Saraswati sighed and turned away, no point fighting with a
teacher. She walked to Shitij and sat down angrily. He looked at her face
and knew she was not enjoying. 'Hmmm yeh toh itni tense hai? kya
karoon jisse iska mood teak ho jaye?'
Ms. Sherawat explained the activity. It was simple -there are cards with
questions on them in the basket and you had to ask your partner the
questions. It was just a game to get to know each other and that is why
Saraswati hated it most.
"Should we start?" Shitij smiled at Saraswati.
"Well hume yeh karna parega toh shuru ho jaate hain." Saraswati hated
this game, and Ms. Sherawat for making her play this game and Shitij
because...well she doesnt really have a reason.
"Ok first question...love marriage or arranged marriage?
Saraswati looked up startled...if there was something in the world that
she was sure of it was this. "Arranged marriage -koi shaq nahi." She
looked up at Shitij who gave her a funny look.
"Kya hua maine kuch ghalat bola hai?"
"Nahin aisi koi baat nahin hain...your answer just surprised me..bas yehi
tha?"
"Kyun isme surprise hone waali kya baat hai?
"Nahi baat yeh hai key aap itni influential family sey hain... so modern..or
phir bhi aap arranged marriage karne chaat hain?
Saraswati looked at him curiously. "Tumhe mere family key baare mein
itna kuch kaise pata hai?Tum koi stalker to nahi ho?"
Shitij burst out laughing,"Aap itni parshaan kyun ho? Newspaper nahi
parti? Har subah aapke Papa key baare mey kuch aata hain? Or kabhi
kabhi aapki photo bhi. Or vaise bhi Chandigarh mein sabne Suryakant
Garodia ka naam suna hai."
"Oh acha ...par vaise main newspaper kum parti hoon. Sirf jab Bha..never
mind." Saraswato stopped quickly and looked down, her face red.
" Nahin bolo na"...Shitij realized how embarassed she was.." Aap jab
sharmatee hain bhot achi lagti hain" he whispered but Saraswati never
heard. "Haan next question?"
"Ab main poochoongi." "Kabhi tumne kisi sey pyaar kiya?"
"Haan maine kisi se pyaar kiya."
"Kis se?"
"Woh bhi card par likha hai?"
"Oh no sorry woh main vaise"....Saraswati was now uncomfortable. She
didnt like talking to this stranger and she didnt like getting into this
intimacy with him. She didn't like the way he looked at her and she didnt
like being this close to him. "Well aap toh mere family key baare mein
kaafi kuch jaante hain? And your family?
Shitij looked distressed,"Um woh meri koi family nahin hain."
Saraswati was so embarassed, "Shitij I am so sorry mujhe yeh poochna
nahin chaye tha."
"Saraswati, aap bhot lucky hain ..you have a loving family."
Saraswati looked at him sadly and started to shake her head no, "Nahin
Shitij main lucky nahin hoon...woh jo family tum newspaper mein dekhte
ho...woh sirf ek act hain. Meri family itni achi nahin hain." She got up and
left the room with tears hers in eyes. She kept running aware that
someone was following her. She ran out the doors into the courtyard and
sat on a bench.
Shitij caught up with her," Saraswati Mujhe pata hai key hum aaj pehli
dafa mile hain..par phir bhi mujhe ek dost samaj kar agar aap mujhe kuch
batana chaati hain to please tell me."
Saraswati was vulnerable ..she took his kindness and friendship to
heart ..never in her life did she feel more loved. But it was strange love..it
was love from an almost stranger. "Mere papa kabhi ghar nahin hote..ore
hote bhi toh kaam mey busy hain. Meri maa baat nahi karti kisi sey..woh
sabse darti hain. Choti maa wo toh saaf saaf humse nafrat karte hain or
Gauri ko istemaal kartee hain. Durga, woh bachpan ka incident ney use
pagal rakha hai. Laxmi ore Yuvraj ache hain par mujhe itna pata hain key
woh bhi ek na ek din sab ke tar ban jayenge. Its not perfect and I am not
lucky."
Shitij cupped Saraswati's chin in his hand and wiped her tears. he was
about to say something when the last bell rang signalling the end of the
day. Saraswati got up and left leaving a confused Shitij behind. She
walked to the car and sat down behind the driver and it was not until they
drove away when she realized what she had just done.


Okay so this is the third part. I hope you enjoyed it..i know it was all
focued on Shitij and Saraswati but other characters will come soon..
PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS__THEY ARE ACTUALLY THE THINGS THAT MAKE
ME CONTINUE TO WRITE 😊
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thanx jaanlover it seems you are the one of the few people who actually
reads this lol and i will continue tomorrow 😊
Edited by mahiya_f - 17 years ago
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Well I like your story!!
Keep going on..Can't wait 😉
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PART 4
The car ride home was silent. When they finally reached home the girls all
ran up to their rooms. Lakshmi was dazed, never in her life has she seen
someone so amazing, so handsome. She wished she could have said
more and vowed that the next day she would thank him more properly.
She started to daydream about this mystery man of hers until she heard a
knock at the door. She sat up in her bed, "kaun?"
"Woh Choti Sahiba main Reetu.."
"O Reetu...haan andhar aa jao." Reetu opened the door and came in. She
walked to the bed but didnt sit down.
"Kuch chaye tha?"
"Nahi Choti Sahiba woh, baat yeh mujhe aapki bari behen nahi
milre..aapko pata hai key woh kahan par hai?"
"Saraswati di? kamre mein hogi."
"Teak hain main phir se check karti hoon." Reetu walked off slowly she
felt bad about disturbing Laxmi. As she came out of the room she walked
into someone. She looked up, it was Yuvraj. "Oh Chote saab aap? Sorry
meri ghalti thi."
Yuvraj looked away,"whatever." He walked into his room and shut the
door.
Reetu looked on. She was so embarrased. She had a chance to sa
something to YUVRAJ and she had said sorry meri ghalti thi."Hai main
kitni stupid hoon!"

Saraswati was crying on the terrace. "OMG maine kya kiya? Mujhe us Shitij
key baare kuch pata nahi hain or maine use saare ghar ki baate bata di.
Woh tho abhi kisi newspaper ko phone karke bata ra hoga. Main kya
karoonge?"
"Choti Sahiba, aap yahan ho, main toh poora ghar phir phir ke thak ge
hoon, Hare kya hua hai?"
"Kuch nahin." said Saraswati turning her face.Reetu sat down beside
Saraswati on the swing."
"Saraswati."
Saraswati looked up at Reetu. It had been years since Saraswati had heard
her name from Reetu's mouth. She had stopped calling her Saraswati
when she was kicked out from highschool and had gotten a job at the
Garodia house. Saraswati still didnt know what had gotten her kicked out
or why Yuvraj had helped Reetu get a job at their house.
"Saraswati ..duniya mein koi bhi cheez aapko achi na lage, mujhe batana
main badalne ki koshish karoonge."
Saraswati started to cry why was this Reetu talking about duniya when
everything she hated was in her own house. Saraswati stood up, She was
about to tell what had happned but realized that this wasnt the same
Reetu that used to give Saraswati a shoulder to cry on or the same Reetu
that would help Saraswati get out of trouble. That Reetu was Saraswati's
friends and this Reetu was Saraswatis maid.

Savitri sat in the corner room all by herself. This was her place, no one
knew about it in the whole house, She opened a box and took out the
contents. She sat and cried as she looked the the toys, clothes and
pictures of her baby boy Raj, Savitri knew that if Suryankant found out
about this box he would have burned it and so she took it out when he
wasnt home. That horrible incident had stopped her from living. She was
now living for the sake of living and not the want to live. She digged
deeper into the box and found the last pcture that was taken of her son
after he had died, and cried more. She sat there trembling with the
picture to her chest and cried till there were no tears left to shed.

Menka and Gauri sat sipping tea and gossiping. They talked about
everyone in the house and the neighbors and family friends.
"Gauri aapko Tina kaisi lagti hai?"
"Choti Maa mujhse toh achi nahin hain but shes not bad."
"Baat yeh hai key mujhe lagta hai key Yuvraj ko ussi key saath shaadi
karna chaiye."
"Par kyun?"
"Oho woh ameer hai, khoobsurat hai, educated hai, or agar Woh Yuvrak
key saath shaadi karegi toh aapke papa ky business deal be fixed ho
jayega or zyaada paise aa jayenge."
"Wow Choti Maa I am impressed. Aapne toh apna poor case tyaar kiya hai,
Yuvraj naa kaise kehsakta hai, woh dekho arra hai, unse poochlo."
Menka looked up as Yuvraj came down the stairs. He walked past them
when Menka called him back."Yuvraj beta idhar aao."
Yuvraj turned around,"Jee?"
"Kahan par jarey ho?"
"Dosto se milne Mama and I am getting late." He turned to leave when
Menka said,"Aap Tina ko phone karke kyun nahin poochte agar woh
aapke saath jaana chaati hai?" Yuvraj was furious.
"Main Tina ko bilkul nahin phone karoonga, uske apne dost nahi hain?
Mama aap hamesha istera kartee hain! Main TIna ko kyun leke jao, Kya
lagti hai woh meri. Behen?" He left the house slamming the door.
"Oho Choti Maa, agar Yuvra itna ghusa milne ke baare mein kara hai to
shaadi ki baat abhi kaafi door hai." Gauri left the room smirking. Menka
was so embarassed," yeh to kaafi mushkil kaam hai." She said nodding.

Yuvraj was still mad and could not focus. I started to rain lightly but he
was too angry to care. 'Mama mujhe apni beheno sey baat nahi karne deti
par is Tina ko toh!" Yuvrah looked up. "Main kahan pey aa gaya hoon?"
The buildings were not familiar and nothing looked recognizable. He took
out his cell phone to phone his friends but there was no service. He
started to walk in one direcion in hope of getting service. He kept walking
until he saw a girl. She was dancing and singing.
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www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBpuCbHAS3Y
She was breathtaking
possibly yhe most beautiful girl he had ever seen. Yuvraj stopped in his
tracks. WOW! She saw him and stopped dancing. She looked scared.
Yuvraj called her," Excuse me Zara Suniye! Please idhar aao. " She walked
to Yuvraj with her head down. Her dupatta was wrapped around her head
tigtly and she looked scared. She came in front of him bu said nothing.
"Haan woh yahan par koi phone milega? Mujhe service nahi milre."
"Nahin yahan par phone nahin milega."
"Teak hai..aap mujhe itna bata sakti hi, main kahan par hoon? Matlab agar
mujhe phone mila or maine kisi ko phone karna tha to main is jaga ko
kya bulaata?The girl looked up in suprise. Yuvraj was speechless, she was
beautiful. She quickly looked down when she saw him staring and
wrapped her dupatta tighter.
"Agar aapko is jage ka nahi pata, to main suggest karti hoon key yahan
sey chaldi chale jaye." The girl walked leaving a dazed Yuvraj.


Well this is part 4 ...i really hope u like it!! 😳 leave comments plzzz
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Wow Great job 👏 👏 👏
It's a very interesting story..keep continue
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PART 5

The girl turned away and ran. Yuvraj could hear her payal. She turned
once and saw that he was still standing there staring at her. She pointed
in the direction he came from and ran off. Yuvraj stood there. He could
not move and he could not decide what to do. He could either run after
the beautiful girl or turn and walk to way she had directed him to. In his
heart he wanted to follow the girl but he knew he had to go home. It was
already too late and his mother and father would be worried about him.
Yuvraj tunred with a heavy heart and started to walk.

The whole house was in turmoil. Menka had started another dilemma.
"Mujhe to bari fikar horahee hai, woh mera beta kahan hai?"
"Choti Maa tension na lena, woh aara hoga,"said Saraswati.
"Haan Menka behen, Yuvraj samajdaar hai, woh aa jayege." Savitri came
and sat down beside Menka.
"Tum sab log aise he bolte jaooge...tumhe mere bete ke kya fikar? Aapna
bacha khoke bhi mere beta ka fikar nahi karsak te." Suryakant looked up
at everyone. "Main gaari leke dekta hoon."
"Papa bhot dher ho gayee hai, Yuvraj aa jayega..waise kahan dhoondoge
use."
"DEKHA!!Yeh tumhare biwi-betiyann yehi chaate hain key tum mere betre
ko dhoond ne naa jao!"
"Choti Maa aisi baat nahi hai!"
"SARASWATI!"Suryakant yelled. Everyone turned to look at him. Menka
and Gauri eyed each other and started to laugh.
"Tumhari himmat kaise hue key aap apni Choto Maa se laraiy karke!"
"Woh Papa..."
"BAS or nahin suna chaata yeh bataameeze tumhari." Saraswati turned
and ran up the stairs. Laxmi followed her taking Durga's hand. Savitri
went towards the kitchen helpless. Suryakant grabbed his umbrella and
called the driver. As Suryakant walked towards the door. It opened and in
came a soaking Yuvraj. He came inside and walked up the stairs not
looking at anyone. He there saw Laxmi banging on Saraswati's door."
"Di please darwaza kolo!"
"Kya hua Di ko? said Yuvrah with concern.
"Woh Yuvraj, Papa ne Saraswati Di ko bhot daanta.Or woh bhi tumhare
vaja sey."said Durga quietly.
"Mere vaja sey?"
"Saraswati Di, kya aap apne ek lothe bhai ke liye darwaza nahi kologe?"
"Haan Di please kolo na!"
Saraswati opened the door and let them in. Laxmi adn Durga told Yuvraj
the whole story.
"Main abhi jaake sab kuch teak karta hoon!"

Yuvraj ran out of the room and went downstairs. He confronted he mom
and dad.
"Mama, Papa, Saraswati Di ney jo kuch kiya sey kiya. Socho, agar aap
Saraswati Di ki baat mante toh is mey problem tha? Main toh ghar aa gaya
hoon." and walked off.

The next morning, Laxmi went to school early to say thank you to that
mystery boy. She got dressed up in a dress like this:
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She culred her hair in loose curls and went onto the terrace. Laxmi knew
that if her mom caught her like this she would flip, Savitri though being
exposed to modern things since she was young was conservative, so
Laxmi had to go down from the terrace. She reached the bottom of the
ladder smiling that she had not been caught. When she turned around
she walked right into Yuvraj."
"Oh itni subah meri pyaari Di kahan jaa rahe hai? Oh woh bhi in kapro
mein?"
Laxmi blushed she knew Yuvraj was kidding but she was nervous.
"Woh main....main...main.."
"Relax Di, I am just joking, aao main tumhe aaj school choroonga."
Laxmi was hesitant but finally agreed. When they got into the car, Yuvraj
drove off.
"Toh woh kaun hai?"
Laxmi looked up shocked. Yuvraj looked at her and she quickly turned
the other way.
"Mujhe nahin pata key tum kiske bare mein baat karahe ho."
"Oho blushing."
"Yuvraaaaaaj!!!!" Main blush nahin kari, woh aaj subah maine blush laga
tha!"
"Teak hai par kyun?"
Laxmi gave up, she knew Yuvraj would keep asking her. She told him the
whole story and how she planned to talk the "HIM" today.
"Oho meri Di ko pyaar hua hai! Wow congrats! Ab main bhi tumhe ek baat
batana chaat hoon." Yuvraj told Laxmi about that girl he had seen.
"O No mere bhai ko pyaar hua hai!"
"Oh no?"
"Haan Tina ka kya hoga?" said Laxmi laughing.
"Tina ka toh main..!"
"Lo aagaya tumhara school. Chal bye"
"Bye Yuvraj!"

Laxmi walked inside the school and went to her locker. She did not know
where to start. Her school was HUUUUUGE adn she had no idea where to
find him or even who he was! She decided to ask around. Laxmi was well-
known throughout the school because of her dad's contacts.
She asked so many people but no one knew who she was talking about.

She finally walked back to the spot where she crashed into him and sat
down on the floor. A few minutes later she saw a pair of shoes in front of
her. She looked up slowly. IT WAS HIM. He slowly stuck out his hand.

OK this is part 5-- i hope you enjoy ---so far we have a few stories going
-Yuvraj and mystery girl
-Yuvraj and Tina
-Savitri and baby
-Saraswati and Shitij
-Saraswati and Reetu
-Yuvraj and Reetu
-Laxmi and mystery boy
-Durga and her childhood incident
-Menka and Gauris masti
-Suryakant and his family

If you like a particular story plz tell me i will try to add more of it in my
next part!! 😊 v=l3BcSlIsXcs&feature=related">songwww.youtube.com/watch?v=l3BcSlIsXcs&feature=related">song
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The whole story is brilliant so far... looking forward to more 😃
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thank you jaan-lover ad rukhaya
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Laxmi put her hand in his hand and he pulled her up. They both started
talking at once.
"Maine suna tha..."
"Woh main tumhe"
"Sorry go ahead..."
"Um woh main vaise kehre thi key main aapko dhoondree thi"
"Haan woh sab mujhe kehre the.Koi problem hai kya?"
"Nahi woh i just wanted to say thank you."
"Thank you??"
"Haan kal aapne mujhe help kiya jab hum dono girite."
"Oh woh! Aapko thank you kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain. Woh tho mera
acha kismat tha key maine Laxmi Garodia ko help kiya." Laxmi blushed.
"Or aapka naam?"
The mystery was about to answer when...
"Aap yahan ho? Poora school tumhe dhoondre hoon! Vaise aap junior
section mein kya kareho?" Laxmi stared at the girl. Was this his sister?

"And you are?" she said giving Laxmi a dirty look.
"Oh main aap dono ko introduce karta hoon. Mini yeh Laxmi hai, hum kal
milite, or Laxmi yeh Mini hai."
"I'm his girlfriend or main abhi abhi Canada sey aayi hoon."


Sarwaswati got out of the car and watched the car drive off. As she turned
towards the college door, she heard someone call her name.
"Saraswati!" Sarswati turned it was Shitij.She quickly turned away to avoid
him but he came up to her.
"Saraswati lunch time par kya kari ho, busy nahi ho toh mujhe courtyard
mein mile na please?" He quickly turned off leaving a worried Saraswati
behind. She turned into the college and ran to her class. That morning
Saraswati could not focus, she did not now what to do adn before she
knew it lunch time had come.
"Saraswati cafeteria aaogi?"
"Nahi yaar woh thora sa kaam karna tha." Saraswati left the class quickly
and went outside into the courtyard. She reassured herself that she wasnt
here because she wanted to be but because she had to be. Shortly after,
Sraswati heard someone coming towards her. She knew it was Shitij so
she didnt turn around.
"Hi! Main toh bhot khush hoon key tumne aane ka socha hai."
"Haan woh actually mera baar kaane mein zyaada maza aata hai."
"Oh, chalo acha hai."
They sat a few minutes in awkward silence.
"Toh Shitij kuch kaam tha?"
"Haan woh kal aap kaafi parshaan lagri thi hamare baat karne ki baad, toh
main vaise aapko kehna chatata key aapke sara baatein mera paas
rehenge-kisi ko nahin bataoonga." Saraswati looked up at Shitij and
smiled. They both started to eat there lunch quietly and Shitij started to
dream. [URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mbHcd1rWMMg]Song[/
URL]
He snapped out of his daydream and looked at her, He saw that the wind
had pushed a piece of her hair into her face,and reached over to push it
behind her ear. As he stuck out his hand, Saraswati got up and gasped.
"Shitij woh dekho!!" Shitij stood up too. She pointed towards a white car
with black tinted windows. Shitij looked up and saw a man about his age
get out of the car.
"Kaun hai?"
"Yeh woh larka hai jisse main shaadi karna chaati hoon. "
Shitij sat back down in shock.

here it is --Not much happened bu i m sooooo busy i will try to do some
tomorrow..hope u enjoy---leave yur comments

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