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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 26

Laxmi entered the lunch room. She looked around and saw her friends at
her usual table. Durga looked up and waved but Laxmi avoided eye
contact. She knew that Durga would not let her eat at Satyakaam's table.
Laxmi headed in the opposite direction. Satyakaam saw her coming and
stood up.
"Hellooooo Laxmi."
Laxmi smiled, "Hi."
"Here have a seat..main aapko sab se milwaata hoon...Everybody
suno.This is Laxmi ab yeh hamaare saath lunch kayegi or main nahin
chaata key koi isse tang kare. Samjhe?"
The people at the table nodded their heads, some said hi and some
smiled. Mini gave Laxmi a dirty look. "Hi I'm Mini.We met before."
"Gee hum pehle bhi miljuke hain."
Mini turned and walked to the other end of the table.
Satyakaam smiled and sat down across from Laxmi. "Maine bola tha
na..Mini kuch nahin kehgi."
"Hmm..." Laxmi smiled.
Satyakaam stared at Laxmi as she ate and laughed and smiled. He knew
that this was exactly what he had wanted. She was perfect.As the lunch
bell rang Laxmi got up. "Chalo main chalti hoon. Bye!"
"Wait main aapko class thak chorde tha hoon." Satyakaam and Laxmi got
up and walked out of the cafeteria. "Toh Friday ko milenge?"
"Kya?..maine toh kaha tha..ke ek poora hafta ke liye main lunch kaongi
aapke saath..or phir baar jayenge."
"Haan..par mujhe nahin lagta ke main ek hafta intezaar karsak tha hoon."
He leaned over and moved the strands of hair from her face.
Laxmi could feel herself blush. "Umm main chalti hoon. Bye"
Satyakaam grabbed her hand and pulled her close. "Bye."
Laxmi turned and entered her class dazed.

Gauri sat outside in the courtyard on her father's bench. She remembered
when that boy had come and sat down beside her and when she met him
again before going to the mall. Gauri felt lonely and wished he would
come again. She remembered that one time she was crying because she
had missed her mom, Saraswati had told her if you close your eyes and
picture that person they will come. Gauri sat on the bench and closed her
eyes. A few minutes later she heard something moving. She opened her
eyes slowly. Staring right at her was that same boy.
"Aap yahan kya kareho?" Gauri was shocked that her trick had worked.
"Actually main yeh check kara tha key doctor bulaane ki zaroorat hai ya
nahin?"
"Doctor kyun?"
"Aap toh behosh lagri thi."
"Oh nahin main yuheen kuch soch ri thi!"
"Mere baare mein?" Gauri blushed and quickly shook her head no.
"Main mazaak kara tha." He sat down on the grass in front of her.
"Aap bench par kyun nahin beht the?"
"Bench pe? Aap ne khud kaha tha yeh aapka father ka bench hai...toh
isleeyay."
"Oh woh main sorry....uss din mere mood kaafi kharaab tha."
"Kyun?"
"Ab toh mujhe yaad nahin hai. Par aap bench pe beht sakte hain."
"Thank you...btw my name is Karan."
"Gauri."
"Gee uss din aapne bola tha na?"
"O yes."
Gauri turned around and smiled. She felt weird. Something about the way
he looked at her made her feel as if she was floating.

After school:
Laxmi was lying on her bed thinking about lunch that day when she
heard a knock at her door. She sat up. "Come in."
"Laxmi?"
"Durga Di? Aao."
"Laxmi aaj lunch pe kahan thi?"
"Woh main apne friends ke saath behti thi."
"Laxmi woh aapke friends nahin hai..jo hamare table behte he woh aapke
friends hai."
"Durga Di...yeh bhi mere friends the."
"Chalo jo bhi hai....aapko bataake jaana chaaye tha."
"Kyun? Main bachi hoon kya?"
"Nahin par main akeli."
"TOH KYA?..AAP TOH MUJHSE BHI BARI HAIN OR BACHI KE TARA
HARKAATE KARTI HO..JUST GROW UP!! JISKE SAATH MAIN BETNA CHAATI
HOON MAIN BEHT SAKTI HOON!"
Durga looed upset. She ran out of the room slamming the door behind
her. Laxmi sighed and closed her eyes.

Saraswati sat on her terrace with Bhavishya. "Bhavishya hum shaadi kab
karenge? Batao na!"
"Mujhe nahin pata..jab se waqt aayega...Saraswati shaadi ke baad log
badalte hai...or main nahin chaata ke yeh hamaare saath bhi ho."
"Nahin hoga...tum samajthe kyun nahin ho? Ab main jawaan hogi
hoon...agar aab mera haath nahin maangenge koi ore maangle ga.Phir
kya karoge?"
"Aapke saath chori chori affair karoonga."
"Kya?Affair? Hosh mein ho?That's so wrong!"
"Haan main sach kehra hoon. Isleeyay main aapko itna pyaar karta hoon."
"Toh shaadi karlo."
"Saraswati mujhe sochne ka time chaaye...vaise bhi mere sawa tumse
shaadi kaun karega?:
"Bhavishya..aapko nahin pata par mere liye log jaan bhi dete hain.Mere
pyaar ke liye sab kuch qurban karte hain."
"Teak hain..toh aap unse shaadi karlo." Bhavishya was angry.
"Main karoongi."
"Karlo."
"Main sach mein karoongi."
"Karlo."
"Teak hain...toh chale jao yahan se. Main tumhara chehra nahin dekhna
chaati.Tumne mujhse vaada kiya tha ke aap mujshe shaadi karenge..par
aap jhoot bolre the." Saraswati was nearly in tears.
"Haan main jhoot bolra tha...or main bhi tumhe dekhna nahin chaata...jao
un ladko ke pass jo sab kuch aap ke liye qurbaan karenge."
"Jaongi!"
"Jao par ye yaad rakhna ke mere paas roke na aana."
"Nahin aaongi." Bhavishya got up and left.
Saraswati watched him go. Tears were rolling down her cheeks and she
thought it was the end.


ok heres the next part hope u enjoy!!! plz leave comments 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
Superb, and mindblowing 👏👏. I enjoyed a lot reading it. Do write more.. can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great story...wel done..
Keep going on..I will wait.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
PART 27

The next day at lunch:

Saraswati walked confidently through the boys college gate. She felt the
stares of the boys on her but ignored them. She had come for one
purpose and she would only leave when her work was done. Shitij was
sitting on a bench with his friends. He saw Saraswati before she saw him.
"Yaar main abhi aaya...Saraswati?"
Saraswati turned around and smiled.
"Shitij main aap ko dhoond re thi."
"Kyun...koi kaam? Dekho maine bola tha ke woh chiti maine mazaak se
likha tha."
"Shitij mujhe pata hai...chiti ke baat choro...kya hum akele mein baat
karsakte hain?" Saraswati knew to get what she wanted she would have to
be nice to him.
"Toh kya baat karni thi?"
"Haan actually mujhe chota sa favour chaaye tha?"
"Favour....kaisa favour?"
"Baat yeh hai ke....teak hai main saaf saaf kehde thi hoon. Kal mere or
Bhavishya ke beech jagra hua tha. Or woh aise stupid baatein kara tha toh
maine ghuse mein kehdi ya ke bhot saare ladke mujhpe marr the hain.
Par main jhoot bolri thi. Or ab Bhavishya ko phir se paane ke liye maine
uske saamne pyaar ka nataq karna hai tha ke woh jaljai or jaldi se mere
paas wapas aaye."
"Oh toh main kya karoon?"
"Haan toh pyaar ka nataq ke liye mujhe apne pyaar chaaye so basically koi
ladka..par problem yeh main ke main itne ladko ko jaanti nahin hoon."
"Saraswati abhi bhi mujhe samaj nahin aara ke main kya karoon."
"Kya aap woh ladka banenge?"
"KYA? Pagal ho? Mujhse nahin hoga!"
'Shitij please sirf acting hi toh karni hai."
"Nahin."
Saraswati knew how to deal with boys. She turned on the waterworks.
"Ab main hamesha ke liya Bhavishya ko khoya hai. Main hamesha akeli
rahoongi. Koi mujhse shaadi nahin karega. Main marr jaongi."
"Teak hai stop crying."
"Karoge?"
"Saraswati mujhe nahin...."
"Main phir se cry karongi."
"Teak hai main karoonga....just stop crying."
"OMG thank you." Saraswati threw her arms around Shitij.
"Haan ek baat or hai. "
"Oh no...kya hai?"
"Main itni bhi buri nahin hoon..of course main aapko paise dhoongi.It's
like a full time job."
"Nahin.....its ok."
"Nahin mujhe bura lage ga...teak hai main chalti hoon. Aap mujhe apna
phone number doh or main shaam ko phone karoongi."
"Teak hai."


short part hope u enjoy
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
Great part! Mahiya 👏 👏 👏 sorry for not commenting on previous part was pretty busy

pls cont. sooooooooooooooooon 😛 and thanx for the pm 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
thanx aspatel ...and np about the pm
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#97
Another brilliant part 👏 keep it up! 😃
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Wow..great part...I really like it..
Great work 👏 👏
Keep it up..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry i have been so busy but here it is

PART 27
Laxmi stood outside of the lunchroom. There was only one more day until
this deal was up and she could freely hang out with Satyakaam. She had
apologized to Durga the night before about their fight on Monday but she
could tell Durga wouldnt forgive her until she gave up the idea of
befriending Saytakaam.
"Laxmi?" Laxmi swirled around.
"Oh Durga Di aap." Laxmi tried to hide her disappointment.
"Laxmi aap baar kyun kari hain? Andhar kyun nahin gaye? Mera intezaar
kari thi?"
Laxmi was hesitant to answer.But before she could say anything someone
called her name from behind. Durga turned around to see Satyakam and
his friends walking towards them,she instantly realized that Laxmi was
waiting for them and not her.She gave Laxmi a disappointed look and left
quickly.
"Durga Di! Please wait."
"Laxmi who was that girl?"
"O actually that's my..."
Mini started to laugh,"She looked like such a loser!" Everyone joined by
making comments about Durga and laughing. Laxmi felt a sting. She
wanted badly to ignore their talking but somehow was not able to. It hurt
her even more to see Satyakaam, now being the center of attention,
laughing the hardest. Once everyone settled down they started to make
their way into the lunchroom.
Mini stopped Laxmi from entering. "Laxmi....mujhe nahin pata key aap
kya chaati ho ya phir Satyakaam aapse dosti kyun karna chaata hai par ye
yaad rakhna -I am Satyakaam's girlfriend and you are just his friend. And
if you try to get near him and take my place mujhse bura koi nahin hoga.
Mini turned and entered the lunchroom.
Laxmi slowly followed but wondered if this was all worth being able to
hang out with Satyakaam for one evening. And what would happen when
that one evening was over...would life go back to the way it was? She
came to the table and sat down. 'Main yeh sab kyun kari hoon?" She
looked up and Satyakaam. He turned and smiled at her and she realized
that it was all so simple. She had started to fall in love with him. The
person she had prayed to meet every night was sitting right in front of
her and she decided it would all be worth it.

AFTER SCHOOL AT HOME_ THE GARODIA MANSION:
"Reetu!!!!!" Reetu came flying up the stairs into Saraswati's room.
"Gee Choti Sahiba?"
"Zara yeh number dial karo...or jab koi line peh aayega kehna key aap
SHitij se baat karna chaati hai.Nahin bolo key aap Mister Shitij sey baat
karna chaati hain."
Reetu took the phone and followed the steps. She handed the phone to
Saraswati and started to leave but Saraswati grabbed her hand and told
her to sit down.
A few minutes later Shitij came on to the line. "Hello?"
"Shitij?"
"Gee haan or aap kaun?"
"Woh main Saraswati bolri hoon."
"Oh Saraswati how are you?"
"Main teak hoon." There was an akward silence that lasted about 30
seconds when Shitij finally said," Koi kaam hai?"
"Oh yes well aapke job shuru hone waala hai."
"Oh...." Shitij sighed.
"Haan I know for a fact that Bhavishya has a business meeting tomorrow
at a beautiful restaurant. Or hum dono bhi wahan jayenge."
"Ok..toh main wahan kya karoon?"
"Fikar na karo Shitij....just dress to impress and pretend that you are
madly in love with me...o haan aap dinner ke paise ka fikar naa karna..I'll
handle that.OMG koi aara hai.Bye" Saraswati slammed down the phone.
On the other end Shitij put the phone down slowly. "Saraswati mujhe
pretend karne ke koi zaroori nahin hai..I think i love you."

Yuvraj sat in his room confused..it had been weeks since he had first saw
the girl dancing in the rain. It had also been weeks since Shazeb told him
she was a tawaif. But Yuvraj still had some doubt in the back of his mind.
"How could such an innocent looking girl be such a horrible person?"
Yuvraj had always lived such a sheltered life but somehow he had
managed to find out about all the horrid things too. His family had so
much respect in the city that he knew if he was caught going there he
would be disowned or worse. But still he needed to find out. he decided
that tomorrow would be the day to find exactly who this girl was.

That's all for now but the next part should be very good here's a precap..
Shitij and Saraswati go out for dinner....and Bhavishya sees.....
Laxmi ends up going with Satyakaam to......Durga meets
Shazeb.......Yuvraj goes to the kotha......the whole house is a mess with
the arrival of a new character...........well i hope u enjoyed this part bcuz
its the leading part to a (hopefully) intense part
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Posted: 17 years ago
Well done.. 👏 👏
Great part...Can't wait what will happen next...
Nice precap 😉 ..
Please continue soon...

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