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PART 24
The next morning:
Yuvraj,Laxmi,Saraswati,and Durga came down the stairs in their nice
clothes hoping that they could just go out without being questioned. But
where Menka and Gauri are there's always trouble. Menka and Gauri sat in
the living room watching a serial called Maayka. Menka looked up to see
the girls and Yuvraj heading towards the door. She smiled at Gauri.
"Yuvraj?"
Yuvraj sighed,"Haan Mama?"
"Kahan jaara he ho?"
"Mama..Papa ne hum sabko kehdiya hai ke hum jaa sakte hain...Gauri aap
hamare saath jaana chaati ho?"
Gauri shook her head no and turned back to the t.v.
"Mujhe pata hai Beta...par main Maa hoon mujhe toh fikar aati hai
aapki...bataona Beta kahan jaara he ho?"
"Mama woh..actually....um..."
"Choti Maa..ek cultural show pey jaare hain."Saraswati quickly stepped in
to help her brother.
"Haan Mama..cultural show."
"Oh cultural show? Itne sajh dajh ke? Kuch khaas show hoga?"
"Haan...Mama hum chale?"Yuvraj was surprised that his mom had so far
not tried to keep the girls home.
"Ek minute Beta..main abhi aayi." Menka turned around, winking at Gauri
before she went into the study. She came back with a camera.
"Yuvraj ...aapko show ki photos leni chaaye."
"Nahin Mama...main nahin lena chaata...kya hum ab jaa sakte hain?"
Menka looked towards the door. "Beta abhi toh sirf 7:00 hain..show itni
jaldi shuru hoga?"
"Nahin Mama...par agar hum late gaye...toh ache seats nahin
milenge...isleeyay humain nikalna chaaye."
"Yuvraj woh..." Someone rang the bell and Menka smiled." Haaye itni
subah subah kaun ho sakta hai? Gauri jaake darwaza kolo."
Gauri headed to the door and opened it. "Aap ..aap yahan kya kari ho?"
Yuvraj turned around to see who it was but Gauri was blocking his view.
The person at the door looked confused. "Woh Menka Aunty ne mujhe
khud bulaya hai."
Gauri tried to hide the answer. "Chalo chodo baat.Aap andhar aaye."
Menka looked up. "Tina aap yahan?" Menka tried to act surprised.
"Menka Aunty aap ne khud..."
"Wow kya baat hai...ek minute Tina aap busy toh nahin ho aaj?"
"Nahin Auntyjee."
"Yuvraj..Gauri ke jaga aap Tina ko saath kyun nahin leke jaate?"
Yuvraj looked up angrily. It all made sense now...his mom had just been
stalling them until Tina came. "Nahin Maa..mujhe nahin lagta ke Tina ko
maza aayega...you know she's from London toh isleeyay isse culture ka
kya pata hai?"
"Isleeyay toh jaana chaaye...apne sanskar seekne. Tina aap bhi jaogi."
"Auntyjee main cultural show mein aise nahin jaa sakti." Tina looked
down at her jeans and t-shirt.
"Oho is ghar mein ladkiya kam hai kya?..itne saare kapre hain. Laxmi
jaake koi ache se kapre Tina ko doh."
Laxmi nodded."Aao Tina.
Yuvraj was angry he hated set-ups.
Half an hour later Tina came down with Laxmi. She looked very beautiful
in her ghagra choli. She walked up to Saraswati and Durga and smiled.
"Ab toh main bilkul aapki behen jaise lagti hoon. Am i right?"
Saraswati touched Tina's should. "Aap toh hamaari behen hi ho."
They all headed out the door with Gauri and Menka seeing them off.
Saraswati, Durga and TIna were walking slightly ahead of Yuvraj and
Laxmi. Laxmi pulled Yuvraj back. "Yuvraj...Tina bhot achi ladki hai..aapko
usse ek chance dena chaaye."Laxmi ran up ahead to be with the girls
leaving an angry Yuvraj behind. They all got into the car. Yuvraj was
driving with Saraswati beside him. The other three girls sat in the back.
"Toh cultural show kahan par hai?" Tina looked out the window excitedly.
Laxmi laughed." Oho Tina hum cultural show pe nahin jaare..humne toh
cultural show ka bahana kiya hai..taake hm Eid pe jaa sakein."
Yuvraj looked into the rearview mirror."Haan Tina or agar aap ghar jaana
chaati hain..toh i understand."
"Nahin Yuvraj..EId manane main bhi aaongi."

They reached Shazeb's house soon enough and rang the bell. Maryam
threw open the door and smiled."Yuvraj Bhai! Itni dher lagaay
tumne..hum sab aapka intezaar kare the.Aaye aaye." Yuvraj entered the
house with the girls following.He introduced Maryam, Shazeb and their
parents to his sisters and Tina.
"Sach mein beta humein bhot acha laga key aap hamaare saath Eid
manane aaye hain." Shazeb's mom smiled.
Everyone was talking and laughing but Yuvraj could not focus, his eyes
searched for Fatima. Finally she came out from the corner room. Yuvraj
felt surprisingly like a groom feasting his eyes for the first time on his
bride. Fatima looked like a delicate angel in her pink lengha. Yuvraj
started to daydream.
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Yuvraj snapped out of it and stood up. "Um yeh Fatima hai....Shazeb ki
behen..or Fatima...yeh meri behene hai, Saraswati, Laxmi or Durga. Or
yeh Tina hai...umm...inki saheli."
"Toh chale?" Shazeb gestured towards the door.

Later on that day:
Yuvraj walked towards Fatima at the meena bazaar where she was trying
on churiyan."Fatima...aap bhot achi lagri hain."
"Thanks Yuvraj." She turned the other way shyly. Yuvraj smiled and
walked off. Tina had been watching from the other stall and walked over
to Fatima. "Yuvraj kitne ache hai na?"
Fatima nodded.
"Main toh bhot khush hoon ke meri shaadi unke saath hone waali hai."
Fatima looked up surprised." Oh mujhe nahin pata tha...Yuvraj ne kabhi
zikar hi nahin kiya."
"Haan aapko toh pata hai ke ladke kaise hote hai. Oh shawls! Main abhi
aaye." Tina turned and walked away.
Fatima stood their in thought."Jo bhi sapne the ...saare toot gaye...main
bhi kitni stupid thi...Yuvraj itna high class ka ladka hai..or main
toh...shayad sey hua hai...Allah nahin chaata tha ke main ek Hindu se
shaadi karoon...chalo jo bhi hai."

Shazeb stood watching Laxmi and Durga at the jewelry stall. Laxmi was
busy trying on earrings with Durga watching quietly. Occasionally Durga
would nod her head no or yes. "Pata nahin kyun yeh itni chup rehti hai?"
Saraswati who had walked up behind Shazeb had heard his question.
"Hamari Durga shock main hai."
Shazeb turned around embarassed. "Saraswati woh main yuheen dekh ra
tha...key yeh aap dono se kaafi alag hai..kya main jaan sakta hoo..ke kis
hadsaa ne isse aisa kardiya hai?"
"Rape...kisi ne Durga ko rape kiya tha jab yeh 13 saalon ki thi. Shazeb
main aapko bataari hoon..isleeyay mujhe pata hai ke aap imandaar
hai...or kabhi bewafaai nahin karsakte...kaash Durga ki duniya mein koi
farishta aaye khushiyan leke...you know she's a sweet girl...and a
beautiful dancer...par hadse ke baad sab kuch chor diya ..muskuraana
bhi."
"Saraswati aake mujhe please help karo. I don't understand anything."
Tina grabbed Saraswati's hand and dragged her away. Saraswati turned
back and smiled at Shazeb.
"Aap fikar na karo Saraswati woh farishta aa gaya hai...or main hi Durga ki
zindagi mein phir se roshni laonga."

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PART 25
Next Morning
Reetu knocked on Saraswati's door. "Choti Sahiba kolo na!! Maine aape
kapre isteree karni hai. Please."
Saraswati groaned she had enjoed her holidays and did not want to return
to school. "Nahin Reetu main nahin kolna chaati...jao yahan se."
"Par sab doosre tyaar hore hain...aap late ho jaogi."
"Main school nahin jaane chaati."
Reetu sighed, sometimes she felt like she was dealing with children
instead of college students. She turned and wondered what to do. She
saw Rajju (another servant) coming up the stairs with a broom. "Rajju
Bhaiyya..aap ke paas chaabi toh nahin hai?"
"Nahin behenji woh maine Chote Sahib ko diye the."
"Teak hai...main usse le leti hoon." Reetu turned and walked towards
Yuvraj's door. She knocked but no one answered. After a few knocks she
pushed the door open and walked in."Chote Sahib?" Reetu looked around
the room for Yuvraj but couldnt find him. As she left she heard a noise
from the balcony. She looked out and saw Yuvraj standing in a towel
singing. Reetu's face turned red and she quickly turned around walking
into the table and making a loud noise. Yuvraj turned around quickly and
came in.
"Tum,tum yahan kya kare ho?!"
"Woh main..main...actually...."
"Knock karna nahin aata!"
"Nahin...woh...main..."
"Stupid...sharam nahin aati...chalo jao yahan se."
"Woh mujhe ki kamre chaabi chaaye thi."
"Kyun?"
"Choti Sahiba darwaza nahin kolri ..or usne school bhi jaane hai."
"Teak hai ye lo...or chaldi se chali jao...or agli baar knock karke
aana....warna main..."Yuvraj yelled loudly.
Reetu started to cry.
"Tum roh ri ho?"
"Nahin." Reetu shook her head no as the tears dripped down her face.
"Reetu please suno na..stop crying." Reetu continued to cry. "Mujhe aisa
nahin kehna chaaye tha....bas karo na."Yuvraj looked worried.
"Reetu..please mujhe maaf karde na...main ghusa bhot jaldi karta
hoon...please stop crying yaar....tum rote hue bilkul achi nahin lagti."
"Main toh kabhi achi nahin lagti." Reetu cried some more.
"Nahin aisa baat nahin hai jab aap smile karti ho...bhot pyaari lagti
ho..bilkul Aishwarya Rai ki tara."
Reetu wiped her eyes and looked up."Sach?"
"Haan yaar main jhoot kyun boloonga? Chalo ab aap jao." Yuvraj turned
around, faced the mirror and grabbed his brush.
Reetu left the room with a smile on her face as if she had just seen
heaven.
"Yeh ladkiyan bhi na...jhoot bolo teak ho jaati hai."
Reetu unlocked the door and walked in. "OMG aap abhi thak leti ho...oto!"
"Reetu main school nahin jaana chaati."
"Kyun?"
"Woh main Shitij se baat nahin karna chaati...jab se usne woh chiti
liki...mujhe uspe bhot ghusa aaya hai."
"Teak hai toh usse avoid karo..par school toh jaana parega...kya
pehnoge?"
"Woh purple churidaar...or haan woh chiti bhi box sey nikalna....maine
faisla ki hai school jaane ka..thaake main uss Shitij ka ilaaj karsak thi
hoon."
"Itni jaldi faisla kiya hai...good ab jao."

Laxmi and Durga's High school-
Laxmi walked down the hall. She saw the mystery boy drinking water
from the fountain and turned the other way. After meeting his girlfriend
she had no intention of talking to im again. She sat down on a bench i he
hall and looked through her bag. The mystery boy had noticed her and
sat down beside her...he cleared his throat."Um ...hi."
Laxmi looked up pretending to be surprised. "Oh hello." She looked back
down.
"Pechaana?"
Laxmi looked up again..she very well knew who this was but didnt want
him to get to her that fast. "Nahin sorry...kya hum pehle bhi kahin mile
hai?"
"Haan yaad hai ...we crashed into each other."
Laxmi pretended to think. "Hmmmmmmm...haan ab yaad aaya hai...tum
Mini ke boyfriend ho."
The boy looked surprised." Haan woh...my name's Satyakaam." He stuck
out his hand.
Laxmi smiled and shook his hand."Laxmi...Laxmi Garodia."
"Haan mujhe pata hai."
"Oh."
"Kya tum mere saath school ke baad coffe peene chalo gi."
Laxmi was surprised....he was so forward but she kne she wouldnt be
able to go unless she wanted her dad to kill her."Main coffee nahin peeti."
"Haan aap chai peene waali ladkiyon mein se lagti ho."
"Main sirf ghar ka chai peeti hoon."
"Teak hai...koi juice ya soft drink."
"Nahin mujhe nahin lagta ke main aa sakti hoon."
"Kyun?"
Laxmi did not want to make a fool out of herself by saying her dad would
kill her so she decided to turn the tables on him. "Woh mujhe nahin lagta
ke aap ki girlfriend ko acha lage ga...sorry."
"Aap unki fikar nahin karna...woh kuch nahin bolegi."
"Main nahin maanti."
"Nahin Laxmi, Mini sach mein kuch nahin bolegi."
"Teak hai hum isteraan karte hai...aap mujhse school ke andhar andhar
baat karlo..or agar woh kuch nahin kehgi..main tumhare saath kuch
kaane peene ke liye jaongi...par agar woh kuch kehde thi hai..phir nahin
jaongi."
"Teak hai..to basically..you can hang out with my friends and I for one
week...or agar Mini kuch nahin kehti toh aap mere saath jaogi?"
"Haan...aaj Monday hai..agar woh Friday ke end thak kuch nahin
bolegi..main Friday school ke baad aap ke saath jaongi."
"Teak hain...chalo main chalta hoon...see you at lunch."
"Lunch?"
"Haan lunch...aapko hamaare saath lunch toh kaana parega.Bye."
Laxmi watched him go and slowly whispered bye.

Saraswati and Gauri's College-
The lunch bell went off and Saraswati and her friend came out to the
courtyard. Saraswati immediately saw Shitij and turned around.
"Oh no!"
Her friend looked around. "Kya hua hai?"
"Woh Shitij yahan par aaya hai...maine tumhe woh letter ke baare mein
bataaye hai na..ussi ne lika hai."
"Oooo or aap milna aara hai."
"Woh yahan pey toh nahin aara na?"
"Aara hai chalo main chalti hoon."
"Nahin mujhe chor ke mad jao."
Saraswati turned around and saw Shitij smiling at her. Saraswati walked
past him towards a bench. He came and sat down beside her. She quietly
held up the letter. Shitij looked confused but soon realized what it was.
"Shitij yeh kya hai?" Saraswati looked up angrily.
"Yeh...yeh kuch nahin hai."He grabbed the letter.
"Kya matlab kuch nahin hai?"
"O haan letter hai."
"Tumne aisa kyun likha hai? Kisne tumhe haq diya tha?"
"Saraswati pyaar mein koi haq nahin hota...matlab kisise pyaar karo toh
izhaar karna chaaye."
Saraswati looked up furiously. "Kya!?"
Shitij burst inti laughter." Yaar Saraswati main bore ho gaya tha kitchen
mein..aap sab party mein the...toh maine socha ke aap ke saath mazaak
khel tha hoon. Maine yeh love letter likhi ..or Bhavishya ka naam likhne
waala tha....par aadat se main apna naam likh liya."
"Sach?"
"Haan Saraswati...or koi baat nahin hai."
"Good mujhe laga tha..key aap sach mein aisa kehre the."
"You have to admit Saraswati...I write good love letters."
"Haan sey kehre ho..chalo mujhe jaana hai...meri dost intezar kari hai...or
phir se istera ka mazaaq naa karna. Bye."
"Bye." Shitij watched Saraswati leave quietly. As soon as she was out of
sight he said," Saraswati jitna mera dil chaata hai ke aapko apni dil ki baat
batao utna shayad mere dil ne kabhi kisi or cheez ko nahin chaaha..par
aaj jab main aapka ghusa dekha..main darne lagya..ke apni dil ki baat
bataake main tumhe kho toh nahin jaonga." He folded the love letter and
closed his eyes.


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PART 25
Next Morning
Reetu knocked on Saraswati's door. "Choti Sahiba kolo na!! Maine aape
kapre isteree karni hai. Please."
Saraswati groaned she had enjoed her holidays and did not want to return
to school. "Nahin Reetu main nahin kolna chaati...jao yahan se."
"Par sab doosre tyaar hore hain...aap late ho jaogi."
"Main school nahin jaane chaati."
Reetu sighed, sometimes she felt like she was dealing with children
instead of college students. She turned and wondered what to do. She
saw Rajju (another servant) coming up the stairs with a broom. "Rajju
Bhaiyya..aap ke paas chaabi toh nahin hai?"
"Nahin behenji woh maine Chote Sahib ko diye the."
"Teak hai...main usse le leti hoon." Reetu turned and walked towards
Yuvraj's door. She knocked but no one answered. After a few knocks she
pushed the door open and walked in."Chote Sahib?" Reetu looked around
the room for Yuvraj but couldnt find him. As she left she heard a noise
from the balcony. She looked out and saw Yuvraj standing in a towel
singing. Reetu's face turned red and she quickly turned around walking
into the table and making a loud noise. Yuvraj turned around quickly and
came in.
"Tum,tum yahan kya kare ho?!"
"Woh main..main...actually...."
"Knock karna nahin aata!"
"Nahin...woh...main..."
"Stupid...sharam nahin aati...chalo jao yahan se."
"Woh mujhe ki kamre chaabi chaaye thi."
"Kyun?"
"Choti Sahiba darwaza nahin kolri ..or usne school bhi jaane hai."
"Teak hai ye lo...or chaldi se chali jao...or agli baar knock karke
aana....warna main..."Yuvraj yelled loudly.
Reetu started to cry.
"Tum roh ri ho?"
"Nahin." Reetu shook her head no as the tears dripped down her face.
"Reetu please suno na..stop crying." Reetu continued to cry. "Mujhe aisa
nahin kehna chaaye tha....bas karo na."Yuvraj looked worried.
"Reetu..please mujhe maaf karde na...main ghusa bhot jaldi karta
hoon...please stop crying yaar....tum rote hue bilkul achi nahin lagti."
"Main toh kabhi achi nahin lagti." Reetu cried some more.
"Nahin aisa baat nahin hai jab aap smile karti ho...bhot pyaari lagti
ho..bilkul Aishwarya Rai ki tara."
Reetu wiped her eyes and looked up."Sach?"
"Haan yaar main jhoot kyun boloonga? Chalo ab aap jao." Yuvraj turned
around, faced the mirror and grabbed his brush.
Reetu left the room with a smile on her face as if she had just seen
heaven.
"Yeh ladkiyan bhi na...jhoot bolo teak ho jaati hai."
Reetu unlocked the door and walked in. "OMG aap abhi thak leti ho...oto!"
"Reetu main school nahin jaana chaati."
"Kyun?"
"Woh main Shitij se baat nahin karna chaati...jab se usne woh chiti
liki...mujhe uspe bhot ghusa aaya hai."
"Teak hai toh usse avoid karo..par school toh jaana parega...kya
pehnoge?"
"Woh purple churidaar...or haan woh chiti bhi box sey nikalna....maine
faisla ki hai school jaane ka..thaake main uss Shitij ka ilaaj karsak thi
hoon."
"Itni jaldi faisla kiya hai...good ab jao."

Laxmi and Durga's High school-
Laxmi walked down the hall. She saw the mystery boy drinking water
from the fountain and turned the other way. After meeting his girlfriend
she had no intention of talking to im again. She sat down on a bench i he
hall and looked through her bag. The mystery boy had noticed her and
sat down beside her...he cleared his throat."Um ...hi."
Laxmi looked up pretending to be surprised. "Oh hello." She looked back
down.
"Pechaana?"
Laxmi looked up again..she very well knew who this was but didnt want
him to get to her that fast. "Nahin sorry...kya hum pehle bhi kahin mile
hai?"
"Haan yaad hai ...we crashed into each other."
Laxmi pretended to think. "Hmmmmmmm...haan ab yaad aaya hai...tum
Mini ke boyfriend ho."
The boy looked surprised." Haan woh...my name's Satyakaam." He stuck
out his hand.
Laxmi smiled and shook his hand."Laxmi...Laxmi Garodia."
"Haan mujhe pata hai."
"Oh."
"Kya tum mere saath school ke baad coffe peene chalo gi."
Laxmi was surprised....he was so forward but she kne she wouldnt be
able to go unless she wanted her dad to kill her."Main coffee nahin peeti."
"Haan aap chai peene waali ladkiyon mein se lagti ho."
"Main sirf ghar ka chai peeti hoon."
"Teak hai...koi juice ya soft drink."
"Nahin mujhe nahin lagta ke main aa sakti hoon."
"Kyun?"
Laxmi did not want to make a fool out of herself by saying her dad would
kill her so she decided to turn the tables on him. "Woh mujhe nahin lagta
ke aap ki girlfriend ko acha lage ga...sorry."
"Aap unki fikar nahin karna...woh kuch nahin bolegi."
"Main nahin maanti."
"Nahin Laxmi, Mini sach mein kuch nahin bolegi."
"Teak hai hum isteraan karte hai...aap mujhse school ke andhar andhar
baat karlo..or agar woh kuch nahin kehgi..main tumhare saath kuch
kaane peene ke liye jaongi...par agar woh kuch kehde thi hai..phir nahin
jaongi."
"Teak hai..to basically..you can hang out with my friends and I for one
week...or agar Mini kuch nahin kehti toh aap mere saath jaogi?"
"Haan...aaj Monday hai..agar woh Friday ke end thak kuch nahin
bolegi..main Friday school ke baad aap ke saath jaongi."
"Teak hain...chalo main chalta hoon...see you at lunch."
"Lunch?"
"Haan lunch...aapko hamaare saath lunch toh kaana parega.Bye."
Laxmi watched him go and slowly whispered bye.

Saraswati and Gauri's College-
The lunch bell went off and Saraswati and her friend came out to the
courtyard. Saraswati immediately saw Shitij and turned around.
"Oh no!"
Her friend looked around. "Kya hua hai?"
"Woh Shitij yahan par aaya hai...maine tumhe woh letter ke baare mein
bataaye hai na..ussi ne lika hai."
"Oooo or aap milna aara hai."
"Woh yahan pey toh nahin aara na?"
"Aara hai chalo main chalti hoon."
"Nahin mujhe chor ke mad jao."
Saraswati turned around and saw Shitij smiling at her. Saraswati walked
past him towards a bench. He came and sat down beside her. She quietly
held up the letter. Shitij looked confused but soon realized what it was.
"Shitij yeh kya hai?" Saraswati looked up angrily.
"Yeh...yeh kuch nahin hai."He grabbed the letter.
"Kya matlab kuch nahin hai?"
"O haan letter hai."
"Tumne aisa kyun likha hai? Kisne tumhe haq diya tha?"
"Saraswati pyaar mein koi haq nahin hota...matlab kisise pyaar karo toh
izhaar karna chaaye."
Saraswati looked up furiously. "Kya!?"
Shitij burst inti laughter." Yaar Saraswati main bore ho gaya tha kitchen
mein..aap sab party mein the...toh maine socha ke aap ke saath mazaak
khel tha hoon. Maine yeh love letter likhi ..or Bhavishya ka naam likhne
waala tha....par aadat se main apna naam likh liya."
"Sach?"
"Haan Saraswati...or koi baat nahin hai."
"Good mujhe laga tha..key aap sach mein aisa kehre the."
"You have to admit Saraswati...I write good love letters."
"Haan sey kehre ho..chalo mujhe jaana hai...meri dost intezar kari hai...or
phir se istera ka mazaaq naa karna. Bye."
"Bye." Shitij watched Saraswati leave quietly. As soon as she was out of
sight he said," Saraswati jitna mera dil chaata hai ke aapko apni dil ki baat
batao utna shayad mere dil ne kabhi kisi or cheez ko nahin chaaha..par
aaj jab main aapka ghusa dekha..main darne lagya..ke apni dil ki baat
bataake main tumhe kho toh nahin jaonga." He folded the love letter and
closed his eyes.


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PART 25
Next Morning
Reetu knocked on Saraswati's door. "Choti Sahiba kolo na!! Maine aape
kapre isteree karni hai. Please."
Saraswati groaned she had enjoed her holidays and did not want to return
to school. "Nahin Reetu main nahin kolna chaati...jao yahan se."
"Par sab doosre tyaar hore hain...aap late ho jaogi."
"Main school nahin jaane chaati."
Reetu sighed, sometimes she felt like she was dealing with children
instead of college students. She turned and wondered what to do. She
saw Rajju (another servant) coming up the stairs with a broom. "Rajju
Bhaiyya..aap ke paas chaabi toh nahin hai?"
"Nahin behenji woh maine Chote Sahib ko diye the."
"Teak hai...main usse le leti hoon." Reetu turned and walked towards
Yuvraj's door. She knocked but no one answered. After a few knocks she
pushed the door open and walked in."Chote Sahib?" Reetu looked around
the room for Yuvraj but couldnt find him. As she left she heard a noise
from the balcony. She looked out and saw Yuvraj standing in a towel
singing. Reetu's face turned red and she quickly turned around walking
into the table and making a loud noise. Yuvraj turned around quickly and
came in.
"Tum,tum yahan kya kare ho?!"
"Woh main..main...actually...."
"Knock karna nahin aata!"
"Nahin...woh...main..."
"Stupid...sharam nahin aati...chalo jao yahan se."
"Woh mujhe ki kamre chaabi chaaye thi."
"Kyun?"
"Choti Sahiba darwaza nahin kolri ..or usne school bhi jaane hai."
"Teak hai ye lo...or chaldi se chali jao...or agli baar knock karke
aana....warna main..."Yuvraj yelled loudly.
Reetu started to cry.
"Tum roh ri ho?"
"Nahin." Reetu shook her head no as the tears dripped down her face.
"Reetu please suno na..stop crying." Reetu continued to cry. "Mujhe aisa
nahin kehna chaaye tha....bas karo na."Yuvraj looked worried.
"Reetu..please mujhe maaf karde na...main ghusa bhot jaldi karta
hoon...please stop crying yaar....tum rote hue bilkul achi nahin lagti."
"Main toh kabhi achi nahin lagti." Reetu cried some more.
"Nahin aisa baat nahin hai jab aap smile karti ho...bhot pyaari lagti
ho..bilkul Aishwarya Rai ki tara."
Reetu wiped her eyes and looked up."Sach?"
"Haan yaar main jhoot kyun boloonga? Chalo ab aap jao." Yuvraj turned
around, faced the mirror and grabbed his brush.
Reetu left the room with a smile on her face as if she had just seen
heaven.
"Yeh ladkiyan bhi na...jhoot bolo teak ho jaati hai."
Reetu unlocked the door and walked in. "OMG aap abhi thak leti ho...oto!"
"Reetu main school nahin jaana chaati."
"Kyun?"
"Woh main Shitij se baat nahin karna chaati...jab se usne woh chiti
liki...mujhe uspe bhot ghusa aaya hai."
"Teak hai toh usse avoid karo..par school toh jaana parega...kya
pehnoge?"
"Woh purple churidaar...or haan woh chiti bhi box sey nikalna....maine
faisla ki hai school jaane ka..thaake main uss Shitij ka ilaaj karsak thi
hoon."
"Itni jaldi faisla kiya hai...good ab jao."

Laxmi and Durga's High school-
Laxmi walked down the hall. She saw the mystery boy drinking water
from the fountain and turned the other way. After meeting his girlfriend
she had no intention of talking to im again. She sat down on a bench i he
hall and looked through her bag. The mystery boy had noticed her and
sat down beside her...he cleared his throat."Um ...hi."
Laxmi looked up pretending to be surprised. "Oh hello." She looked back
down.
"Pechaana?"
Laxmi looked up again..she very well knew who this was but didnt want
him to get to her that fast. "Nahin sorry...kya hum pehle bhi kahin mile
hai?"
"Haan yaad hai ...we crashed into each other."
Laxmi pretended to think. "Hmmmmmmm...haan ab yaad aaya hai...tum
Mini ke boyfriend ho."
The boy looked surprised." Haan woh...my name's Satyakaam." He stuck
out his hand.
Laxmi smiled and shook his hand."Laxmi...Laxmi Garodia."
"Haan mujhe pata hai."
"Oh."
"Kya tum mere saath school ke baad coffe peene chalo gi."
Laxmi was surprised....he was so forward but she kne she wouldnt be
able to go unless she wanted her dad to kill her."Main coffee nahin peeti."
"Haan aap chai peene waali ladkiyon mein se lagti ho."
"Main sirf ghar ka chai peeti hoon."
"Teak hai...koi juice ya soft drink."
"Nahin mujhe nahin lagta ke main aa sakti hoon."
"Kyun?"
Laxmi did not want to make a fool out of herself by saying her dad would
kill her so she decided to turn the tables on him. "Woh mujhe nahin lagta
ke aap ki girlfriend ko acha lage ga...sorry."
"Aap unki fikar nahin karna...woh kuch nahin bolegi."
"Main nahin maanti."
"Nahin Laxmi, Mini sach mein kuch nahin bolegi."
"Teak hai hum isteraan karte hai...aap mujhse school ke andhar andhar
baat karlo..or agar woh kuch nahin kehgi..main tumhare saath kuch
kaane peene ke liye jaongi...par agar woh kuch kehde thi hai..phir nahin
jaongi."
"Teak hai..to basically..you can hang out with my friends and I for one
week...or agar Mini kuch nahin kehti toh aap mere saath jaogi?"
"Haan...aaj Monday hai..agar woh Friday ke end thak kuch nahin
bolegi..main Friday school ke baad aap ke saath jaongi."
"Teak hain...chalo main chalta hoon...see you at lunch."
"Lunch?"
"Haan lunch...aapko hamaare saath lunch toh kaana parega.Bye."
Laxmi watched him go and slowly whispered bye.

Saraswati and Gauri's College-
The lunch bell went off and Saraswati and her friend came out to the
courtyard. Saraswati immediately saw Shitij and turned around.
"Oh no!"
Her friend looked around. "Kya hua hai?"
"Woh Shitij yahan par aaya hai...maine tumhe woh letter ke baare mein
bataaye hai na..ussi ne lika hai."
"Oooo or aap milna aara hai."
"Woh yahan pey toh nahin aara na?"
"Aara hai chalo main chalti hoon."
"Nahin mujhe chor ke mad jao."
Saraswati turned around and saw Shitij smiling at her. Saraswati walked
past him towards a bench. He came and sat down beside her. She quietly
held up the letter. Shitij looked confused but soon realized what it was.
"Shitij yeh kya hai?" Saraswati looked up angrily.
"Yeh...yeh kuch nahin hai."He grabbed the letter.
"Kya matlab kuch nahin hai?"
"O haan letter hai."
"Tumne aisa kyun likha hai? Kisne tumhe haq diya tha?"
"Saraswati pyaar mein koi haq nahin hota...matlab kisise pyaar karo toh
izhaar karna chaaye."
Saraswati looked up furiously. "Kya!?"
Shitij burst inti laughter." Yaar Saraswati main bore ho gaya tha kitchen
mein..aap sab party mein the...toh maine socha ke aap ke saath mazaak
khel tha hoon. Maine yeh love letter likhi ..or Bhavishya ka naam likhne
waala tha....par aadat se main apna naam likh liya."
"Sach?"
"Haan Saraswati...or koi baat nahin hai."
"Good mujhe laga tha..key aap sach mein aisa kehre the."
"You have to admit Saraswati...I write good love letters."
"Haan sey kehre ho..chalo mujhe jaana hai...meri dost intezar kari hai...or
phir se istera ka mazaaq naa karna. Bye."
"Bye." Shitij watched Saraswati leave quietly. As soon as she was out of
sight he said," Saraswati jitna mera dil chaata hai ke aapko apni dil ki baat
batao utna shayad mere dil ne kabhi kisi or cheez ko nahin chaaha..par
aaj jab main aapka ghusa dekha..main darne lagya..ke apni dil ki baat
bataake main tumhe kho toh nahin jaonga." He folded the love letter and
closed his eyes.


here it is..hope u enjoy i really love it..plz leave comments
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PART 25
Next Morning
Reetu knocked on Saraswati's door. "Choti Sahiba kolo na!! Maine aape
kapre isteree karni hai. Please."
Saraswati groaned she had enjoed her holidays and did not want to return
to school. "Nahin Reetu main nahin kolna chaati...jao yahan se."
"Par sab doosre tyaar hore hain...aap late ho jaogi."
"Main school nahin jaane chaati."
Reetu sighed, sometimes she felt like she was dealing with children
instead of college students. She turned and wondered what to do. She
saw Rajju (another servant) coming up the stairs with a broom. "Rajju
Bhaiyya..aap ke paas chaabi toh nahin hai?"
"Nahin behenji woh maine Chote Sahib ko diye the."
"Teak hai...main usse le leti hoon." Reetu turned and walked towards
Yuvraj's door. She knocked but no one answered. After a few knocks she
pushed the door open and walked in."Chote Sahib?" Reetu looked around
the room for Yuvraj but couldnt find him. As she left she heard a noise
from the balcony. She looked out and saw Yuvraj standing in a towel
singing. Reetu's face turned red and she quickly turned around walking
into the table and making a loud noise. Yuvraj turned around quickly and
came in.
"Tum,tum yahan kya kare ho?!"
"Woh main..main...actually...."
"Knock karna nahin aata!"
"Nahin...woh...main..."
"Stupid...sharam nahin aati...chalo jao yahan se."
"Woh mujhe ki kamre chaabi chaaye thi."
"Kyun?"
"Choti Sahiba darwaza nahin kolri ..or usne school bhi jaane hai."
"Teak hai ye lo...or chaldi se chali jao...or agli baar knock karke
aana....warna main..."Yuvraj yelled loudly.
Reetu started to cry.
"Tum roh ri ho?"
"Nahin." Reetu shook her head no as the tears dripped down her face.
"Reetu please suno na..stop crying." Reetu continued to cry. "Mujhe aisa
nahin kehna chaaye tha....bas karo na."Yuvraj looked worried.
"Reetu..please mujhe maaf karde na...main ghusa bhot jaldi karta
hoon...please stop crying yaar....tum rote hue bilkul achi nahin lagti."
"Main toh kabhi achi nahin lagti." Reetu cried some more.
"Nahin aisa baat nahin hai jab aap smile karti ho...bhot pyaari lagti
ho..bilkul Aishwarya Rai ki tara."
Reetu wiped her eyes and looked up."Sach?"
"Haan yaar main jhoot kyun boloonga? Chalo ab aap jao." Yuvraj turned
around, faced the mirror and grabbed his brush.
Reetu left the room with a smile on her face as if she had just seen
heaven.
"Yeh ladkiyan bhi na...jhoot bolo teak ho jaati hai."
Reetu unlocked the door and walked in. "OMG aap abhi thak leti ho...oto!"
"Reetu main school nahin jaana chaati."
"Kyun?"
"Woh main Shitij se baat nahin karna chaati...jab se usne woh chiti
liki...mujhe uspe bhot ghusa aaya hai."
"Teak hai toh usse avoid karo..par school toh jaana parega...kya
pehnoge?"
"Woh purple churidaar...or haan woh chiti bhi box sey nikalna....maine
faisla ki hai school jaane ka..thaake main uss Shitij ka ilaaj karsak thi
hoon."
"Itni jaldi faisla kiya hai...good ab jao."

Laxmi and Durga's High school-
Laxmi walked down the hall. She saw the mystery boy drinking water
from the fountain and turned the other way. After meeting his girlfriend
she had no intention of talking to im again. She sat down on a bench i he
hall and looked through her bag. The mystery boy had noticed her and
sat down beside her...he cleared his throat."Um ...hi."
Laxmi looked up pretending to be surprised. "Oh hello." She looked back
down.
"Pechaana?"
Laxmi looked up again..she very well knew who this was but didnt want
him to get to her that fast. "Nahin sorry...kya hum pehle bhi kahin mile
hai?"
"Haan yaad hai ...we crashed into each other."
Laxmi pretended to think. "Hmmmmmmm...haan ab yaad aaya hai...tum
Mini ke boyfriend ho."
The boy looked surprised." Haan woh...my name's Satyakaam." He stuck
out his hand.
Laxmi smiled and shook his hand."Laxmi...Laxmi Garodia."
"Haan mujhe pata hai."
"Oh."
"Kya tum mere saath school ke baad coffe peene chalo gi."
Laxmi was surprised....he was so forward but she kne she wouldnt be
able to go unless she wanted her dad to kill her."Main coffee nahin peeti."
"Haan aap chai peene waali ladkiyon mein se lagti ho."
"Main sirf ghar ka chai peeti hoon."
"Teak hai...koi juice ya soft drink."
"Nahin mujhe nahin lagta ke main aa sakti hoon."
"Kyun?"
Laxmi did not want to make a fool out of herself by saying her dad would
kill her so she decided to turn the tables on him. "Woh mujhe nahin lagta
ke aap ki girlfriend ko acha lage ga...sorry."
"Aap unki fikar nahin karna...woh kuch nahin bolegi."
"Main nahin maanti."
"Nahin Laxmi, Mini sach mein kuch nahin bolegi."
"Teak hai hum isteraan karte hai...aap mujhse school ke andhar andhar
baat karlo..or agar woh kuch nahin kehgi..main tumhare saath kuch
kaane peene ke liye jaongi...par agar woh kuch kehde thi hai..phir nahin
jaongi."
"Teak hai..to basically..you can hang out with my friends and I for one
week...or agar Mini kuch nahin kehti toh aap mere saath jaogi?"
"Haan...aaj Monday hai..agar woh Friday ke end thak kuch nahin
bolegi..main Friday school ke baad aap ke saath jaongi."
"Teak hain...chalo main chalta hoon...see you at lunch."
"Lunch?"
"Haan lunch...aapko hamaare saath lunch toh kaana parega.Bye."
Laxmi watched him go and slowly whispered bye.

Saraswati and Gauri's College-
The lunch bell went off and Saraswati and her friend came out to the
courtyard. Saraswati immediately saw Shitij and turned around.
"Oh no!"
Her friend looked around. "Kya hua hai?"
"Woh Shitij yahan par aaya hai...maine tumhe woh letter ke baare mein
bataaye hai na..ussi ne lika hai."
"Oooo or aap milna aara hai."
"Woh yahan pey toh nahin aara na?"
"Aara hai chalo main chalti hoon."
"Nahin mujhe chor ke mad jao."
Saraswati turned around and saw Shitij smiling at her. Saraswati walked
past him towards a bench. He came and sat down beside her. She quietly
held up the letter. Shitij looked confused but soon realized what it was.
"Shitij yeh kya hai?" Saraswati looked up angrily.
"Yeh...yeh kuch nahin hai."He grabbed the letter.
"Kya matlab kuch nahin hai?"
"O haan letter hai."
"Tumne aisa kyun likha hai? Kisne tumhe haq diya tha?"
"Saraswati pyaar mein koi haq nahin hota...matlab kisise pyaar karo toh
izhaar karna chaaye."
Saraswati looked up furiously. "Kya!?"
Shitij burst inti laughter." Yaar Saraswati main bore ho gaya tha kitchen
mein..aap sab party mein the...toh maine socha ke aap ke saath mazaak
khel tha hoon. Maine yeh love letter likhi ..or Bhavishya ka naam likhne
waala tha....par aadat se main apna naam likh liya."
"Sach?"
"Haan Saraswati...or koi baat nahin hai."
"Good mujhe laga tha..key aap sach mein aisa kehre the."
"You have to admit Saraswati...I write good love letters."
"Haan sey kehre ho..chalo mujhe jaana hai...meri dost intezar kari hai...or
phir se istera ka mazaaq naa karna. Bye."
"Bye." Shitij watched Saraswati leave quietly. As soon as she was out of
sight he said," Saraswati jitna mera dil chaata hai ke aapko apni dil ki baat
batao utna shayad mere dil ne kabhi kisi or cheez ko nahin chaaha..par
aaj jab main aapka ghusa dekha..main darne lagya..ke apni dil ki baat
bataake main tumhe kho toh nahin jaonga." He folded the love letter and
closed his eyes.


here it is..hope u enjoy i really love it..plz leave comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
Well done..Great work..
Keep it up..I wish you all the best 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part, and thanx for the PM, please cont. sooooon 😊

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