MG FF - Indebted Part 45 May 19 Pg 152 New Thread Link Pg 1, 153 - Page 25

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Omg!! Too heart wrenching !!! Feel so so bad for the both of them. So many misconceptions on both sides. Both thinking the other person never loved them.

On one side Maan after the Rohan fiasco thinks geet never loved him and it was all a show. So he does not want to go there at all and also feels her family would have contacted him if his help was needed for geet and he cannot refuse. Since they have not contacted he thinks all is well in that family and with geet. He just does not want to believe or even spend time to think about her changes or her. He does not trust her at all.

He has absolutely no idea what all geet has gone through these past years. It has always been only him like she always claimed. There was no show there. Also how much she has secluded herself from everyone e and everything

her penance for treating him so badly

I so sis blame her parents. They could have help her back right in the beginning. In fact they are the ones to blame completely. They made geet feel she owned him and they treated him like a servant too. Grr. No wonder they are suffering now

geet on the other even thought hurt at maans reaction to her feels terrible with his ignorance of her. He does not even give her an iota of time or thought

just the realsation makes her feel even worse. She is nobody to him. And she feels she does deserve this. But what is worse now is her assumption that he never loved her only tolerated her because of his debt. Makes her self loath herself even more. Poor girl

Maan not fair at all. Now it’s her turn to be hurt

but then before atleast what happened between them was sweet to some point

oh man. Feel Terrible. just hope geet does not do anything crazy. Thinking she is punishing herself

when she goes away thinking she will make him Impure by her mere touch — that was touching

hope he gets to know about her parents and how she has been !!!!

loved that her siblings told her to go and make friends elsewhere knowing maan has lived ahead

but sad right geet just continued her life just thinking about him

While he continued his life doing fun things spending time with family making friends etc while one corner of his heart still thinking of her

Part-16

Nice update..

Waiting to read more..

Geet family now get to know she's leaving lonely in London it's hurt them but they know they were the reason behind Maan distancing from them

But still they have provide so many things to him that he able to stand on his feet and now that family princess there in his city he should at least get info about her safety

Annie complain about not visiting her and see her work she praise about Geet intelligence but Maan ignore and next day went to see his sister work and Geet saw how he is seeing Annie work with interest and not even once look at her trainer gave break of 15 min but Maan told half hour it's hurt Geet she directly went washroom and her tears didn't stopped on his ignorance Sasha get worried but Geet manage hr

But after Geet start thinking it's her illusion she thought he too loved her but he just doing bz he was debt to her family but than thought went to Rahul incident how Maan got angry

Maan to not able to digest about knowing her simplicity and she attracting him again but he stopped him self and thought if she need help her family being asked him uncle able to arrange everything for his princess

But both not happy with this present situation they really loved each other and Maan misunderstood her totally but in past he was the one whom understand her very well and she did many things to show him down bz of her anger jealousy and so on and Rahul is also from her that act yes her parents stopped him to meet her it's not Geet they think Rahul is better choice for their daughter who think of an orphan but Geet she showed him how much she loved him and desperate for him he must listen her once as Pari too advice him

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Heart wrenching update…. remarkably written ⭐️👏

sad seeing living like that...... she is alone and lonely

at least she was honest with her family regarding Maan and how he has changed

great that Meera and Brij told Geet to make new friends and explore the city

good that Geet is trying to be strong

of cos Maan is shocked confused hat Geet diligently completes her assignments

he is aware that Geet did brilliant in college

This Geet is different from the Geet he knew

while he was exploring life and doing many other things, Geet focused on her studies and remembering him

what a contrast.....

I knew Maan was avoiding Geet

well Annie upset with him forcing him to to check on her training

Geet was indeed happy seeing Maan but hurt seeing his ignorance

he was only there for Annie and his actions reflected that making Geet feel unwanted

feeling for Geet

finally she breakdowns.....

Geet's thoughts are well portrayed

she remembers the past and how Maan was always there for her

This Maan is completely different

nice that she accepts that she hurt him and he has a right to be angry

as expected, she cannot take his indifference

so Maan never voiced out that he loves her

now she questions whether he ever loved her?

can understand that she feels guiltier

she feels that he bore everything cos of the debt to her family

Geet is shattered and hates herself

upset that she thinks it was like raping him

oh no she feels she deserves a bigger punishment

worried about Geet.......
hope she does not do anything drastic

seeing Maan's behavior and reflecting on the past, she thinks that he never loved her

one thing for sure was that she always thoughts that he was hers

Maan's anger and actions seeing Rohan touch was justified.....

that clearly indicated Maan's feelings

why did she allow Rohan to touch her?

loved that she felt Maan's touch was balm on her pain

dismayed that she feels she is a curse on Maan

if only her parents did treat Maan like that and allow Geet to humiliate Maan

hate that she feels her touch would impure Maan

Maan's dilemma seeing Geet is reasonable

I was correct that Maan still loves Geet

he is clearly protecting himself from been hurt by her

Gosh Maan feels that Geet never loved him and all that happened was a part of debt

glad that he did love her.......and was broken when he saw her with Rohan

Maan is also still in pain......

he may portray that he is strong but he is broken inside

dismayed seeing them both suffer

now both have misconceptions about each other

however Maan will never approach Geet nor get to anything about her

not surprised with his assumptions

disappointed that he thinks that Geet is shrewd

he has seen a different Geet............

seems like her parents told Maan to keep away and especially from Geet

I then cannot blame Maan for not checking up on Geet or her family

yet now Ranoo wants Maan's help

Geet's parents are selfish

they are also to blame for everything

no wonder Maan thinks that her dad must have taken care of everything for Geet

alas this is far from the truth

Maan berates himself from thinking about Geet

wish that would somehow talk........

update soon

Very very sad update. It was so so emotional..

Geet let’s her family know that Maan is faaar away from her reach now. They are being supportive telling her to meet ppl. But Geet is not interested so stalling. Annie mentions abt Geet’s diligence to her brother. Maan is surprised with this information.. Geet has only thought abt him after he left, almost like lived in his memories studying hard like he would have wanted.. while he enjoyed life on the other hand.
his visit to the office to see his sister’s progress, while he totally ignored Geet like another trainee. This prt was very painful. Why why is he not taking the signs he’s getting? She working alone in a foreign country, in HIS office of all places, she’s still unmarried. But he’s made up his mind abt her character and not falling weak.

Geet realised she’s so unwanted in his life, but what’s more painful is she now feels all that in the past was just her molesting him & him tolerating it bcoz he owes them😭 heart wrenching this was.. she feels disgusted with herself.. this is not nice.. so much of grief she’s carrying at such a young age, she seems to be carrying a lot of burden, & now the new realizations of self loath apart from the guilt. She’s so lonely 😭 she did wrong but what is he doing now??? Is he not doing the same? Behaving like he’s superior to her coz of his position. Atleast she was younger when she made mistakes. Anyways… reading his side of the story is giving new perspective.. he’s equally hurting. They both now feel the other never loved them!! So many misconceptions they have will it even solve?! They have totally misunderstood each other! What exactly happened in the past that broke Maan so badly & made Geet feel guilty of her past actions altogether! Must be something big. Noone’s at fault between these 2 , it was Geet’s parents who are wrong from the beginning! I hope these 2 realize this… pls update soon as I always ask. I wait so eagerly for these updates..

Chapter 16

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Nice update

Waiting for next update....

At least dadi understands that Pari has good reason to say no.

Pari is not about to compromise on love. Maan thinks he can.