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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely update

Waiting for next update ...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for updating!


Chapter 15

Magnificent update….pleasantly written

The Chopras and Khuranas share a close bond

so everyone knows that Maan proposed to Pari and that she rejected the proposal

great that Sudhir knows that Pari has reasons for rejecting Maan's proposal.

liked that Pari confronts Maan about missing Brij and Meera

of cos Pari does buy Maan's response

she knows Maan was remembering Geet

but Maan denies

no wonder she is his best friend

when will she get to know that Geet is London

I feel that Geet still exists for Maan.....

that's why he got drunk

Gosh Maan wants to marry Pari as they will make a wonderful couple and they understand each other

her question regarding love and passion was reasonable

they are indeed friends....

great that she knows that Maan still loves Geet.... his actions show this

hate is a form of love

she had a point that Maan should not take any action without knowing the truth

she was bang on that Maan wants to move on to prove himself

at least Pari is sure that Geet did not marry Rohan

Maan clearly cares about Geet

glad that Pari is not interested in Maan

agree with Pari that has has always been Maan and Geet

will Maan ever try to find out the truth

what happened between Geet and Rohan?

why did Pari says Rohan used Geet?

nice Pari supported Geet

Pari's efforts to lighten the atmosphere

pleased that Geet has settled into her apartment

not surprised that Geet does not interact much with Anwesha

looks like Maan is travelling to avoid Geet

as expected Geet denied to go for lunch with Anwesha

Maan is naturally surprised not seeing Geet in the group that was at the café with Anwesha

well Maan sees Geet sitting alone at the canteen

at least he noticed how different she looks and the loneliness surrounding her

it does prick his heart!

hmm so Maan is thinking about Geet

Maan smartly asked Annie why Geet did not go for lunch with her

yet again he is amazed with Annie's response

his curiosity is justified

alas he brushes it off

hope he does speak to Geet or tries to find out what happened

loved that Geet sensed that Maan was looking at her during lunch

its understandable that she thinks its her imagination

Geet knows Maan is out of her league....

she resolves to cherish that old Maan her entire life and live in his memories

Geet has repented for her actions and is remorseful

good that she wanted to prove her love

but seeing Maan's behavior she will not do that

and she is trying to accept this

the old Geet would have done something to get his attention

sad seeing her in so much pain

admire that she tries to be strong and keeps herself occupied

Geet is now a responsible and mature person and her behavior shows this

she is handling everything so well


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for such a beautiful update. I read it thrice already. Few things we came to know in this.. I almost forgot Pari was his classmate whom Geet was jealous of! And so she seems to know Geet and quite a bit of their past. Their friendship has continued over the years, & seems like Maan has openly been proposing her & getting rejected.

Pari is so nice, she understands Maan’s inner feelings so well. She knows Maan gets disturbed on remembering the past & proposes her in desperation , he knows she’ll reject hence going ahead with this facade. He wants to prove he can move on too like someone.

Its like even she has understood Geet’s nature but not him. Even without seeing her she knows Geet wouldn’t have married anyone. But Maan is too hurt to even think abt it Or listen. One side I feel he never really understood Geet very well. Why she did things she did in the past. Core of it being wanting him for herself & anger/ jealousy/ possessiveness.
Geet being invited for lunch by Annie, she declined as expected.
One, I feel Geet has matured so much she understands Maan wouldn’t appreciate her gelling with Annie.

Two, she painfully understood that she wasn’t welcome here 😢 My respect for Her had increased so much for how she’s conducting herself. Maan never even saw her after that one time, & gradually she made peace with the fact that she will never get to see her Maan back; the old Geet would have acted desperately but here she has maintained her dignity by not following him at all! It’s like she doesn’t want to prove her love to him anymore😢 How much can Maan act unaffected. That scene with the canteen brought tears in my eyes. It Reminded me of ‘Aaoge Jab Tum’ song from JWM. Maan felt her loneliness, but he has so much prejudice abt her it is so painful to see him shrugging off everything, convincing himself this is just an act. I’m so eager to read the next. Pls pls update soon this one. Will keep refreshing the page!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Same yaar exactly you have put my feeelings as well in your response ...update this one pls,pls,pls

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Posted: 3 years ago

Fab update

Loved it

Pari know about maans life everything and she has guessed something from past s troubling maan ..

Why maan s continuous proposing pari for marriage but hold no such feeling for maan ....

Anise took all her office friends for lunch geet decline the offer but maan s searching geet in that crowd ..

Geet s living loneliness...

Hope maan understand geet soon

Continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 16: Apprehension


Step 1: - Please press like and then proceed to read.😆

Step 2: - Place big comment there or come back here

Fact 1 - Thanks in advance for liking and more numbers of likes will motivate me for quick updates.😊

Fact 2 - Big comments will motivate me for bigger updates. 😳

-Anu 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 16 above.

Thanks all 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 16 - tagging more readers 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

wow finallyyyyy!!!!!!

gonna read it😎

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Oh my good .The update was literally too Heavy Girl.Read it twice already need to read more to digest it...

the feeling of selfloath that geet had for her has intensified more She came to the understanding that the love she tought he has was all part of his indibedtness, and maan is confident that she is shrewd girl and her family can keep her.


Maan is so rude to her in saying 1/2 hr hurted her a lott.😢 😢 😢

Geet is in a lot of pain and pure hatred for herself for loving him.


While maan on the other hand took the love that he had for her as myth with just one incident.he made friends and he expanded himself while geet kept herself restrained.


Maan is under so many asuumptions that everything is right with them.


I am not able to put all my feelings for this update girl. YOU ROCK...


You have beautifully potrayed both their emotions.No matter waht the situations in the past maan is carrying them till now.

Edited by pulvi16 - 3 years ago

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