MG FF Oh Saathi re.. thread 2 updt Epilogue pg 45 Apr 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Maan is being unfair to Geet. Mansi can not be put in a protective bubble all her life. They were just playing.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Finally even Maan had to accept that Geet was not at fault.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Thank goodness..


Maansi is safe..


Geet n maan ki nokjhonk interesting hai..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Endearing and Fantastic Update


I truly cannot blame Maan and Geet too should understand

that anything can happen with the little girl

but I'm glad that Mansi is safe

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

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nice update

hope soon mansi come back to her family

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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

Great part

Glad mansi was fine

Loved maaneet’s banter and arguments

Cont soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#87

Part – 93

Next day…..

Maan comes back and Geet is waiting for his return…

Maan goes to see Geet, she is looking dull…

Geet: Maan, Mansi kaisi hai?

Maan: Geet, ye kya sawaal hai? Tumne usse kal hi dekha tha, woh bahut kush hai yahan aake

Geet: mein toh dar gayi thi, I’m really sorry Maan, mujhe aur dhyaan dena chahiye thi, mere wajhe se aapko kitni pareshaani hui, aur Mansi ko bhi

Geet might have fought with Maan that it was not her fault but she is feeling guilty…

Maan knows that it’s because of him getting angry that she is feeling guilty…

Maan: toh tum ye sochke pareshaan ho rahi thi?

Geet: haan, aur aap bhi paas nahi toh meri pareshaani badthe jaathi

Maan pulls her into a hug….

Maan: tum kamakaam apne aap ko takleef kar rahi ho aur mere bache ko bhi, iss mein teri koi galti nahi hai, agar mein bhi tummari jagah hotha toh bhi Mansi yahi karti, haina?

Geet: aap mujhse naraz nahi ho na?

Maan: nahi Geet, tum aaise kaise soch sakti?

Maan understands that his getting angry with Geet does affect her a lot though she always puts up a brave face and starts fighting with him immediately… that’s her way of making him talk to her someway or the other…

Maan thinks that he should be careful to control his anger for he doesn’t want to put Geet under any kind of pressure…

Geet: woh aap bahut tension ho gaye

Maan: par Geet, mein teri wajha se tension nahi hua, tum toh jaanthi haina ki ye case ki tensions

Geet: ye bhi mere wajhe se hua, na hi mein itni jaldi shadhi karne ki karti aur na hi Mansi ki wapas aane mein itna problem hoti

Maan: tumme ho kya gaya hai Geet? Ye jo bhi ho raha hai usska pura ka pura zamedhar mein hoon, mein toh yahi sochke dartha tha ki shadhi hothi toh tumme bhi mere saath ye sab ko sehna padtha, mein nahi chahta ki tumme mere wajhe se koi bhi takleef ho Geet, you are a very good and happy soul, you don’t deserve this, I just want you to stay the way you are, you are the reason for my happiness Geet, I want to be the reason of your happiness , but I could only give you my worries and make you too unhappy, that’s my unfortunate fate

Geet feels bad that she has made Maan more hurt instead of cheering his mood…

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai, mein bahut kush hoon Maan, aap nahi jaanthe ki aap ne mujje kitni kushi di, meri kushi toh sirf aap ke saath hai, aap mujhse dhoor jaathe toh mera mann kabrane lagtha, ab aap wapas aagaye na? Ab meri kushi ki koi kami nahi hogi

Geet hugs him back tight….

Geet tries to change the topic…

Geet: Maan, aap baby ke liye kya laye ho?

Maan always gets Geet her favorite homemade chocolates from a particular bakery in Shimla…

But this time he has forgotten that…

Maan: I’m sorry Geet, mein toh bhool hi gaya, mein teri itni si khwahish ko bhi pura nahi kar sakta, chalo hum abhi jaake tummare mann pasand ke chocolates lekhe aathe hai

Geet: Maan, ab baby keh raha hai ki woh aap ke haathon ka hi kuch kayega

Maan: what?

Geet: aap hummare liye kya banaoge?

Maan: mujhe cooking nahi aatha Geet

Geet: Maan, ye kya hai? Aap ab ek nahi, do do bachchon ke baap ban gaye ho, aur kehte ho ki aap ko cooking nahi aatha? Sharam aane chahiye aapko, aap ko maloom hai ki woh Mr. Gill apne pathni ke liye kitne swaadhist tandoori banathe hai, uss din hummare pregnant claas mein sab ne unka khana kaya aur woh kitne achche banathe hai, lucky Mrs. Gill, aur Mrs. khurana ko toh aaise halat mein bhi apne mann pasand ka khana nahi milta, babaji, ye kaise ho sakta? MSK Mr.Gill se har gaye?

Maan is charged up…

Maan: Geet, MSK apne pathni ki kushi ke liye kuch bhi karega, abhi bathao, tumme kya chahiye?

Geet: wait, I’ll ask the baby

Geet pretends to be talking to the baby…

Maan: Geet, baby abhi tumse baat bhi kartha hai kya?

Geet: ye andar ki baat hai, aap nahi samjhoge

Maan: babaji, ye kya nayi musibat hai?

Geet: aap babaji se baat karte?

Maan: kyun? Babaji sirf tumnare hai kya?

Geet: jaldhi, babaji ki madat lekhe humme choco lawa cake banakke do, aur haan, it should be goey like a perfect choco lawa cake, warna hum aap ko fail kardhenge

Maan: kya? MSK kabhi fail nahi hotha

Geet: pehle banao, phir dekhte hai, chalo, chalo

Maan: kahan?

Geet: kitchen

Maan: abhi?

Geet: nahi, parson

Maan: par Geet, mujhe thoda time toh chahiye seekhne ki

Geet: aap kyun chinta karte ho, you tube haina?

Maan: teek hai, tum aaram karo, mein banake aatha

Geet: nahi, mein bhi aaoongi

Maan: Geet, tum aathi toh sab kadbad ho jayega

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tum yahi raho, aur mujhe aaram se cake banane do, warna baby will get upset

Geet: teek hai, we’ll be waiting

Within half an hour Maan comes with hot lava cake…

Geet couldn’t believe it…

This man can do anything… why did he leave Mansi with Tara, he would have outdone any mother in baby care…

Geet always admired the way Maan took care of Mansi, he does everything for her, from brushing to dressing, even helps her in potty, doesn’t allow anyone else to do it…

Geet: Maan, ye kaise karte ho aap? Pehle attempt mein expert ban gaye ho aap?

Maan: MSK hai hi an expert in every field, warna tum aaise bhaagte bhaagte mere peeche nahi aathi

Geet: woh toh hai, MSK jaisa koi nahi hai

Maan: ek baat bathaoon Geet

Geet: haan bathao na Maan

Maan: agar tum aaise zidd pakadke mere paas nahi aati toh kya hotha?

Geet: kya hotha? Iss waqt mein kissi aur ke bahon mein hothi

Maan: nahi, aaisa kabhi nahi hotha, mein aaisa kuch nahi hone detha, agar tum nahi aathi toh mein tummare paas aatha aur tumme apne saath lekhe aatha, uska thoda waqt lagta, par tum toh itna bechain thi ki ek din bhi mujhse dhoor nahi reh sakti thi

Geet: mein koi Rajkumar ke liye wait karnewali stupid ladhki nahi hai, mein apna Rajkumar ko pass kudh aagayi, agar aap nahi manthe toh mein aapko kidnap karke jaathi

Maan: achcha?

Geet: koi shak?

Maan: bilkul bhi nahi, tum toh kuch bhi kar sakti ho Geet

Geet: itna toh samajh aagaya haina? Mein bhi MSK ki biwi hoon

Maan: biwi ko apne pathi ki yaad hi nahi aathi

Maan gets closer and hugs her from behind…

Geet: Maan, ab kya kar rahe ho?

Maan lifts her in his arms and takes her to the bed… mahiii…

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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

Nice update. Geet managed to bring back Maan mood.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

Part 93

glad that Maaneet had this discussion

at least Maan realised that Geet was affected with his anger

so Geet also realised she hurt Maan

admire her efforts to cheer him up

wow Maan made hot lava cake for Geet

MSK can do indeed do anything

liked that Maan does everything for Mansi

he is an amazing dad

good question from Maan

loved Geet's response


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

Wise realization by Maan. every word he says affects people around him.

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