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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow seriously for a man who is so well endowed in al respects would know how to talk. Really taking about leftovers and giving her a fine night in a designer dress. Could he not have put it more refined.

No wonder she was so hurt. But interesting too that she felt she is not in any harm from him hmmm


tjat sameera. Really is like a ugly frog

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet wearing designer gown invited for dinner was visualizing Beauty and the Beast 😄

Geet nervous understandable and Sameera not helping the cause.

Maan being blunt as ever 🙄 fine culinary experience in designer clothes seriously.

Sparks fly as expected and something has changed between them and Sameera also can sense it.

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

I'm again late to comment sorry about that


Chapter 11


A Confident and Curious Chapter


Does Maan trust Geet to some extend because he was confident enough

that she will not say anything about the murder in the Alley

I enjoyed Geet's thoughts as she just wanted to be free and away from Maan

but the moment she spoke she could not rat out Maan

he wants her to have dinner with him now that is rather interesting

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Posted: 4 years ago

Chapter 12


Fascinating Chapter


I loved this Chapter , hints of jealousy and yeah there was sparks

of attraction too


Geet all nervous as she has to dine with Maan but she was surprised

seeing Sameera also there

and surely Sameera did not take kindly to Geet's presence

yet she cannot go against Maan

Maan does not really appreciate Sameera been disrespectful towards Geet

oh now why would Maan want to thank Geet for both Neil and the police episode

while he actually humiliates her with words

so now Maan knows that Geet lived on the streets and I want to see

if this fact actually makes him to want Geet to stay back

so jealous Sameera why had she come between Maan and Geet's fight

I wanted to see more

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just read this in one go!

Loving the story but Maan’s been a mystery so far!

I am hating Sameera already 😡 She’s super mean!

I hate Maan’s condescending tone towards Geet and I am unable to understand as to why didn’t Geet speak up when in front of the officer?

Btw where’s the setting? Which city? I am assuming I probably would have missed it 😕

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Posted: 4 years ago

chapter 9

Nail's father does not seem to want him around. Is it because of the lisp?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nail probably doesn't connect with many people. He found a friend in Geet though.

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Posted: 4 years ago

chapter 10

Geet is already looking out for Neil. Even going as far as questioning Maan.

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Posted: 4 years ago

chapter 11

Whats the police doing there now? She was questioned already.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Looks like I read chapter 11 and skipped 10 somehow.

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