MG FF: The Innocent - Chapters 20-27 on p. 41 - Complete - Page 15

How are you?

thank you for the update

Chapter 11

Tremendous update, wonderfully written

I am sure the convo between Maan and the police officer related to what happened

of cos Geet is nervous when Maan motions her to join the convo

Geet was also set to reveal everything but lied that she was with Maan's place the entire night

well Maan must be relieved but expected Geet not to say a word.

not surprised that the police officer warns Geet of covering up for Maan

Geet's thoughts well portrayed..

she could have had her freedom but alas

so she did all that for Neil....

he has certainly stuck a cord in Geet's heart

at least Maan thanked Geet even though he knew she would not breathe a word

Gosh Maan did not have to threaten Geet

agree with Geet that he could have been nicer

liked that Maan told Geet to have dinner at the dining room

hmm he will even have clothes delivered to her

Geet's reaction is reasonable

Maan is indeed arrogant

hate how he just dismisses her

he liked to have the last word

update soon

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geet is little surprise why she dint ask help from officer when is asking her .

geet is shock n hurt with maan's ungrateful behavior after keeping mouth shut before office.

Why didn’t geet say anything to the officer. Yes she is giving excuses to herself about Neil but is that really the reason

Was it fear of maan and what he might do if she opens her mouth? Or something grabbing her attention. Does she feel

Protected? Hmmm

let’s see

wow must be a first. Maan apologizing. And now she has earned the trust. So sh
She is allowed in the dining room!!
what exactly does maan do

Thank you for the update. I hope it’s just Maan and Geet who will be dining together. Try and keep the third wheel away... lol! Seems like Maan already has a lot of trust in her. I guess he doesn’t want her to stay cooped up in her room especially as he intends to keep her with him now. Dinner should be interesting. Can’t wait. Give us another update soon. Thanks

Even if Geet had spoken up, where would she have gone? She has no place to go. She is probably safer where she is.

Geet could have revealed to the officer but didn’t, wonder if Neil is the only reason? Or does she fear Maan? Or factually she’s got a home now and she’ll become homeless once again so kept shut.. whatever the reason it was cute to see Maan ungratefully thanking her

Geet kya kardiya. She had a nice opportunity to escape.

She is indeed a good hearted girl. She thought of Neil and didn't escape.

The Aura and authority Maan holds is really very intimidating but nice to see Geet holding her ground.

LOL Maan ka thanks was with lot of effort 😄

He seems to slowly change his opinion and trusting her.

Waiting for next.

Haha that was quite a convo loved it geet likes neel in a meeting itself and so geet didn't open her mouth superb waiting for next

Nice update. Maan is too arrogant so he is a criminal as per what the officer said. Geet had a chance to escape why didn't she.

Part 10

Humorous update !!!

Maan seems suprised by geet’s ability to make Neil laugh ....... perhaps no one else has done that before

The beetle full comment was cute & funny

I feel sad for Neil , his parents are separated & his dad does not have time for him & he has a gangster uncle . You can tell he has made a soft corner in geet’s heart.....,,,,,, b/c he is so adorable!!

Maan is right , the girl who fainted w/o out talking is interrogating the crime lord 😆.....,,, she is becoming gutsy.. 👍🏼

Uh oh , ,now there is trouble at maan’s door

Thank you