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wow maan share his past with geet surprising geet also insist geet to stay back for neil

geet wonder , what is the reason behind all sharing past

So Geet is all set to go back and Maan even is okay but he request her to stay back and told about his life and also mentioned she could take care of his nephew who misses his Mom what is Geet going to do. Surprising to see Maan like this.

thanks for the update

Chapter 13

Tremendous update... perfectly written

Sameera is so possessive of Maan

can understand why Geet did not want to have dinner

seems like Geet is indeed affected by Maan's touch and closeness

not surprised that Geet decided to leave

Maan has perfect timing

well Maan should have knocked instead of barging in

liked that Geet did not fear Maan and courageously said that she was leaving

she was shocked that Maan did not stop her yet told her to have dinner

Gosh he even said please

so Maan asked to reconsider her decision

Geet's reaction was reasonable

of cos Maan pointed the obvious that she has no where to go

will she be safer there?

Like Geet I am perplexed as to why Maan opened up to Geet

She is a complete stranger

what possessed Maan?

Maan's father was a gangster

great that Maan achieved success with his business

sad that Maan had to take over the mantle after his dad's death

Why is Maan adamant that Geet to stay?

He even used Neil and Neil's situation to sway Geet

wow Sameera and pleasant

Can understand Geet's confusion

What will Geet decide?

update soon

This is soo good, I’m loving how the story is going! So Maan is not a total baddie.. it was really sweet how he tried to convince her to stay.. I think he regretted what he told her abt having not experienced any such tngs in life, that was in a really bad taste what he said. I felt so bad when Geet cried coz of that.. hope to see some sparks in between them after this..

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Nice ff Ioved each and every update.

Well you seems to good writer.Maneet ffs I love them soo much .Thank you for writing such a great ff. All updates were mindblowing, damakedaar. Maan has a dark personality .While geet was stuck in rain and accidently saw the scene .Maan took geet to his house and decided that she would stay here until he chooses to .Sameera always sticks up to him and not ready leave his side .Neil also liked geet at first meeting and she took good care of him .Maan hurted geet unconciously to which she decided to leave but maan tries his level best to make her stay and told her his past .And she will be staying and she left with sameera as she demanded her to drop.I think geet started having liking towords maan and so do will he .

I will be waiting for more updates 😍😍😍

Interesting..

I feel there is more to the story than the eyes can see..

Why is maan so bothered about geet?

Chapter 13

Wow that was incredibly...... Unexpected to happen but it happened.... She's all set to walk away from him and yet he came in to talk her out of her decision of leaving him... Erm his castle I mean....🙄. Why does he give me the typical Mafia vibes when he's all rude and then it's totally different when he's really opening up to her... Like he confided in her with his past. Aisa laga ki usse ek ache dost mila joh unhe zindagi me kabhi nahi mile the. Unhe sab kuch hai lekin woh kush nahi and he's pressurized to carry the family mantel as the Mafia heir. So there is more to it than what it looks like... And he's convincing her to stay with him he didn't threaten her like he did in the past but it really felt like a plea of a lonely little boy who was trying to stop his only friend from leaving him alone in the darkness....🥺 I think it's okay to give a second chance for him to prove that he would be good with her... And I don't trust Sameera bahar Geet ko aise dekha ki usse kha jayega ab Maan se baat aise kar rahi hai jaise teeno ki bich kuch nahi hui... And Maan is really confident ki Geet ghar chod ke nahi jaugi... Lekin she's still thinking about what he said didn't confirm anything....😋.so he's still hanging on a thin thread.... Excellent writing... 🤗

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Interesting story.

Awesome updates.

Geet ready to go but maan stopped her saying y she want to go he is giving her shelter and food

He also shared how he came in this mafia to protect his bro and him self

He also make sure geet not go bed empty stomach

Sameera was their seeing maan geet she interpret them she want maan to drop her

Great update hope geet understand maan better