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Chapter 5

Varun and Yash followed Geet in their car to her house after they’d ate dinner together. When they arrived, they headed inside and started working on moving the appliances and setting it up. Geet headed upstairs with Nyra giving her a quick shower and changing her into her pyjamas then tucked her daughter into bed.

Geet joined her brothers downstairs making them cups of coffee and handed it to them as they put together dining room table.

It took them a couple of hours but they had finished setting up the ground floor appliances and set the living room with the sofa, coffee table and ottoman. On one side of the living room across the corner, they had set up a desk with a large chair where Geet could work from.

Yash and Varun slumped on to the sofa yawning.

“Why don’t you just spend the night here?” Geet suggested placing bottles of water on the coffee table. “It’s nearly midnight now” she said glancing at the clock.

“We’ve got to be up early for work so we’re going to head home. I need to shower as well” Yash said grabbing a bottle of water and gulping down half the bottle in one go.

After they’d quenched their thirst and cooled down, they’d bid bye to Geet and waited until she locked the door before they left.

Geet checked in Nyra once more before she retired to her bedroom.



The next couple of days, Geet had seen Maan only briefly and that too through the window. Nyra stood by the window waving madly at Maan and Pepper as they went for their walk. She had begged Geet to let her go with them, but Geet reminded her daughter, they were neighbours and not friends. Also, Geet had some work to catch up. Geet was a graphic designer which allowed her to work from home, it definitely helped with her pregnancy. With the last couple of weeks of finalising the divorce and moving, she hadn’t taken on any work from any new clients.

Now that things were slightly on track, she rummaged through her emails and tackled them signing on 5 new clients with deadlines in 3 weeks for each of them. Each design takes her typically 10-20 hours depending on the size of the project but juggling a new home with a toddler and pregnancy stretched her very thinly.



Geet sat at the desk going through the agreement she had with one of her clients and started making the draft sketch of what they wanted. She handed Nyra her colouring book with new crayons to keep her occupied. Geet glanced over her shoulder time to time to check in on her daughter.

“Mama do you wike my papa?” Nyra ran up to her showing her drawing of scratched lines.

“Is that Pepper?” Geet feigned excitement.

Like her grandfather’s habit, Nyra bobbled her head up and nod. “That Papa”

“Pepper” Geet corrected.

“I say dat mama” Nyra responded. “That me” she pointed to a scratched lines of a ball.

“Aww you look beautiful” she gushed cupping her daughter’s cheek and kissing her. “You’re soo cute, I think I want to eat you” she opened her mouth mockingly eating her cheeks. “Nom. Nom. Nom”.

“Mama” Nyra squealed laughing and ran away. Geet stood chasing her daughter slowly as she couldn’t run as actively as her daughter. “Nyra” she laughed as Nyra skipped out to the garden. “Come here. I’m hungry”.

“You can’t eat me, mama” Nyra screamed laughing as she ran from one side to the other.

“I have to…” Geet exclaimed.

Woof. Woof.

Nyra halted and yelled excitedly. “Papa!” she rushed closer to the fence holding the white wooden fence and tiptoeing. “Papa”.

“Nyra” Geet tugged her back and looked around for Maan but couldn’t see him anywhere. “Oh baby, has your daddy left you outside?” she asked Pepper.

He barked in response waggling his tail and tried jumping up.

“Mama, he alone. Papa!” Nyra squealed stretching her arms out trying to reach for him.

“Nyra…” Geet huffed pulling her back. “He isn't your doggy”.

“But Nywa want Papa!” she exclaimed. “Papa” she screamed.



“You rotten son of a bitch! Who’s out there?”

Geet’s eyes widened, and she quickly snatched Nyra close to her trying to hide her daughter behind her seeing the anger etched on the woman’s face.

“Sam, listen to me” Maan followed behind an angry storm.

“Who are you?”

Geet frowned and darted a look at Maan.

“She’s the neighbour” he stepped in front of Sam blocking Geet from her anger.

“Neighbour! Then why is she calling you papa?” she screamed.

Geet pressed her lips together and looked at Nyra who also quietened in shock.

“She’s calling Pepper” Maan informed calmly and looked nonchalant. “Not Papa”.

Pepper barked sticking his tongue out and wagging his tail at his name.

“Shut up, Pepper” Sam screamed.

“Papa!” Nyra cried out hearing him being shouted at.

“See!” Sam yelled smacking his chest.

“You’re scaring the kid for goodness sake” Maan cut her off trying to pull her away inside. “You already scare half the men in the town, now you’re scaring little kids too”.

“Let go of me, you rotten b*stard” she snagged her arm out. “I can’t believe you’ve been hiding a kid!” she smacked his chest and stormed out.

Maan walked out and noticed Geet crouched, cuddling Nyra to her soothing her and raised his brows seeing that Pepper was on the other side of the fence rubbing his face on Nyra’s stomach. “I lifted her over the fence” Geet informed. “You kind of owed me for Nyra crying” she added. “So, who was the screaming devil?” she looked amused.

“A regret” Maan smiled bashfully leaning against the fence watching Nyra interacting with Pepper. “Too drunk to remember but she apparently didn’t forget” he rolled his eyes.

Geet chuckled. “I see”.

“How have you been?” he asked.

“Good, you?”

“Yeah. Busy with work” he nodded. “What about you? Haven’t seen you much. Seen a lot of Nyra standing by the window every time we went for a walk”.

“I was catching up on my own work, between moving and Nyra, I hadn’t had much time to take on new clients” she responded. “I’m a graphic designer” she added with a smile.

“Oh, nice” he nodded. “That’s a good industry to be in. There’s demand for it”.

Geet nodded. “What about you?”

“Construction. My dad runs it, my brother and I work with him in the firm” he replied and tiled his head staring at Geet. “Should you be crouching down in your condition?” he asked.

“I’m not an invalid” she laughed grabbing the fence and hoisted herself up. “My papa says the same thing” she added in amusement.

“Your papa is a wise man like me” he winked.

“Are you saying you’re wise? Really? After that drama” she mocked.

“I’m not responsible for crazy women” he held up his hands in surrender.

“Bhai!”

He whirled around and smiled seeing his young sister walking towards him. “Kiara”.

“Sam called to say you’ve got a kid” Kiara frowned and looked across to the next door garden at Geet and Nyra.

“Sam misunderstood like always. She’s crazy, don’t listen to her” Maan huffed in exasperation. “You didn’t call dad or mumma and tell them that did you?” he asked narrowing his eyes.

“Well… I…” Kiara smiled slowly looking embarrassed.

“Maan!”

“F*ck sakes” he yelled.

“Are you insane?” Geet snapped gesturing to Nyra whose eyes widened.

“Stwanger you say bad word again” she gasped covering her mouth with her tiny hands.

“Baby girl say bye, it’s time to go” Geet said clasping her hand and tugging her away from the family drama that was about to unfold.

“Papa! Nyra yelled. “Mama I wanna palay” she complained.

Pepper looked across to where Maan was and trotted behind Geet following her inside.



“Traitor” Maan muttered seeing his puppy waggling his tail and following excitedly.

“Sam was right wasn’t she? That girl is calling you papa” Kiara stated throwing her hands up in the air. “Dad is going to kill you”.

“You’re dead to me” Gurvinder snapped walking out. “What is this I hear about you having a child?” he yelled.

“I don’t have a child” Maan sighed heavily.

“Don’t lie! I just heard her calling you papa!” Gurvinder poked Maan in the chest with his index finger angrily.

“Ow”

“Where’s my grandchild?”

“You don’t have any!” Maan cut in angrily. “That’s my neighbour. She moved in a couple of days ago” he pointed in the direction of her house. “She’s got a kid. Her kid is… I don’t know, 3 or 4 years old and can’t say Pepper so she calls Pepper, papa!” he sighed deeply and pinched the top of his nose. “Bloody heck! That f*cking sam…” he cursed.

“She’s my friend” Kiara smacked his arm.

“Well choose better friends than that devil” Maan countered. “She made a mountain out of a molehill and twisted everything like Cersei from Game of Thrones”.

Kiara rolled her eyes.

“So, you haven’t been hiding any grandkids?” Gurvinder questioned sceptically.

“No, I haven’t. And I’m not stupid to kill myself by having kids” he responded.

“You’re going to give me grandkids someday” Gurvinder announced as a statement.

“Keep dreaming” he replied walking into the house seeing that Pepper wasn’t going to be coming home anytime home seemingly.

“I am and so is your mother” he followed his son with Kiara. “You better not upset your mother” he warned.

“Are you about done now?” Maan asked pulling open the fridge and grabbed himself a bottle of water. “Sam’s lying and I have no kids. You got your answers and now doors there” he pointed to his front door from where they’d entered.

“I didn’t drive here so I can just shout and go. Get me a tea. A ginger tea” he told his son entering the living room and settling down on the chair and switching on the cricket match.

~ Maan's family ~

Gurvinder aged 55 years old

Shalini aged 55 years

Maan aged 27 years old

Vicky aged 24 years old

Kiara aged 20 years old

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Geet is managing her time well being an employee and a mom. Looks like Nyra is a artist like her momma. Leh ho gaya syapa. Poor Nyra is like who is this freak of nature. poor thing wants to play with Pepper and everyone is interrupting her. Oh boy poor Maan one poor innocent word and he has half a entourage at his doorstep wanting answers. Very entertaining.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey, thanks for the update...

Geet is a graphic designer, a very cool career to have. Thankfully she can work from home. I'm glad Nyra is not a cranky kid, nahi toh Geet ko usske aage picche daudna padta..

Ohhh, didn't know Sam would enter Maan's life. But am glad he thinks she is a regret already. And now because of her Maan's family is already thinking Nyra is his kid..😆

Will this confusion drag forward and make officially Geet, Khurana khandan kii bahu..???

Aisa hii lag raha hai...

But I crazy want love to blossom between the neighbours soon...

Waiting for next...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter 5


Interesting


Maan and Geet speak again , as Geet was playing around with Nyra

when Nyra sees Pepper and calls Papa

oh hell Sam so she must be Maan's girlfriend and very possessive , someone that seems

to be dumb too

she could not understand that a child is calling Pepper as Papa she already made calls to

Maan's family

well then Maan certainly must be in a serious relationship with her though he says

Sam is a regret

so Maan and his brother works at his father's construction business while Geet is a Graphic Designer

waiting for the friendship to bloom between Maan and Geet

Edited by taahir004 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice part

Finally geet's home is set and she is back to work

Nyra is crazy about pepper but geet is not allowing her to meet him much.

Sam misunderstood Nyra is maan's kid and created a mini war.

Maan's dad is dreaming about grand kids

Waiting for the next part update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations for the new story..


Interesting concept...


Geet was married to rahul, with a daughter n another child on its way..


She married him against her family, but he cheated on her..


I loved to see geet taking a stand n getting a divorce instead of just staying an going through all the sh**


Her family supports her n loves her lot..


Good to see her moving on being independent..


Maan is her neighbor.. Their first encounter was interesting...

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Part 3 & 4 ..


Interesting...


Geet n nyra are having great time...


They got along well with maan n pepper.


Rahul is a complete a****le


How can he just blame geet for everything he has done? Seriously , he expected her to forgive n forget about him cheating her n move on like nothing happened..


What is it was geet who would have cheated on him, would he have done the same? No, right just because she is a woman she is expected to sacrifice.

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Part 5 ...


Looks like maan has a forced girlfriend Sam, n she is a b***h...


She misunderstood nyra calling pepper as papa n blew it all up n informed his family that he is having a kid.

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so loved the updates....


maan's family is crazy but not more so than geet's ....but how much they care for each other right...


loved that these two are living independently inspite of having their family close by...


great that maan and geet got talking pretty freely and telling each other about their lives ex's and reason why nyra was crying....


nyra can see the future...she meant papa for the dog, but in reality am sure maan will become her papa...


wow wahta crazy person that sam is ....is she really maan's girlfriend...please no....and she tells and the whole family comes down to quiz him...and it did not help that nyra kept calling pepper papa...lol

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Posted: 4 years ago
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appreciate the updates!

love how this story is progressing


Chapter 5

Entertaining update.... wonderfully written

Geet shares a lovely bond with her family

great that her brothers helped her

can understand Geet's reluctance to allow Nyra to go with Maan and Pepper

wow Geet is graphic designer

Nyra is a pleasant child and she does not disturb Geet

loved the moments between mother and daughter

aww Pepper aka papa and Nyra are excited to see each other

Gosh this Sameera is so dramatic

hate how she speaks to Geet

as expected she assumes Nyra is calling Maan as papa

at least Maan tried to clear this up

clever Pepper acknowledged that he is papa

Maan is correct that she is witch

finally Maan and Geet interact

what's the eqaution between Maan and Sameera?

he says she is a regret? why can't she leave Maan alone?

so Maan is in construction

liked Maan's concern for Geet

enjoyed their banter

well Maan's sister arrives after Sameera's informs her that Maan has a kid

Maan exasperation is justified as now his parents assume that as well

of cos Nyra berates stwanger for saying a bad word

ha ha Pepper has changed sides.......

Poor Maan lol now his dad arrived

everyone assumes Nyra is calling Maan papa

yet again Maan has to explain

seems like Maan does not want to have kids

wonder why??

Gurvinder is hilarious - one minute Maan is dead as he has kid and the next wants Maan to give him grandkids 😆

its defn not Maan's day


update soon.... cannot wait for next chapter

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago

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