SS ~ Heart on the Line ~ Note page 44 - Page 4

thanks for updating

Chapter 3

Fabulous update.... awesomely written

Geet is a wonderful mom....

Adore how Nyra keeps herself entertained

but Rahul is a terrible dad....

what can be more important that Nyra?

Hate Rahul's attitude.

Gosh its weeks since he saw Nyra and it does not bother him

did he really expect Geet to give him a chance after what he did?

Omg he cheated on Geet with her best friend

wonder what Geet saw in him?

in all this Nyra is suffering

how dare he blame Geet and manipulate Nyra?

Geet's anger is justified

hate that Rahul does not see what he has done

feeling for Nyra

at least Geet managed to pacify her

great that Nyra is now happy as she is playing with Pepper

ha ha Maan's used Geet words

liked Maan's concern for Nyra

glad that he agreed that Nyra can play with Pepper and asked them to join him

Chapter 4

terrific update.... beautifully written

great seeing Maan indulging and helping Nyra

Maan seems like a nice person

well did start off on the wrong foot but now they get to know each other

oh so Maan is not fond of kids except for adorable Nyra

at least Geet was honest with Maan and was able to share her frustration with him

agree with Maan that Rahul is an ass

hmm so its just Maan and Pepper

curious about Maan.... where is his family?

Geet has an amazing family

ahh Pepper will always called as papa by Nyra

Nyra is indeed a princess

Ha ha mama bear and stranger danger.....

seems like Maan and Geet are now friends

liked how Nyra keeps herself busy

glad that Geet went to visit her mom and dad

enjoyed the banter

Viraj's anger with Rahul is reasonable

Geet's parents are awesome

not surprised she told them about Maan

I am sure that Rahul will disappoint Nyra again

Enjoying this story..... thanks so much for posting😊

already waiting for next updates 😃

Fabulous updates superb

Loving the story so far. Looks like Rahul lives in his own world and think he has not done anything wrong. Disgusting no one wants to go back to bed with that. Nyra will learn her father is an ass. Awww glad papa made Nyra happy and full of giggles and I guess Geet made a new friendly neighbor now. Geets family is over Rahul and she has a great support system to move on.

Gosh Rahul is such an A_____e 😠

Cheating Blaming Geet and then poisoning the child's mind. Such a low life.

Feel for Nyra so heart broken.

Stwanger and papa time was cute.

Neighbors slowly becoming friends 😁

Another kid on the way.

Waiting for next

Chapter 3

Realistic and so Excellent

The aftermath of a divorce leaves a child grunting for both parents

like Nyra misses her father but he seems to concerned by the blame game

instead of making time for his child

and Geet is also expecting another child of his child I just cannot imagine

what he would do then

oh Nyra she hears her father saying its because of her mother that her father can't be

with Nyra and instantly she blames her mother as she has no idea

what is right and what is wrong and her father is taking that advantage

Pepper too has become friendly with Nyra

so Geet and Nyra will be taking a walk in the park with Maan and Pepper

Chapter 4

Warm and Relaxing

Maan and Geet get to talking

and he finds out that she is divorce , but surprisingly he hasn't really thought

about children or perhaps he dislikes

I like that Maan thinks Rahul is an ass

Geet's parents are so different they truly are what parents must be

just there for their child without throwing any bad words towards Geet

Nice updates

Rahul was suppose to pick Nyra but he is busy and still blames Geet for going away though it's was his doings which pushed geet to take the step.

He is trying to poison Nyra's feelings for geet such a creep.

Maan agreed for Pepper and Nyra's play date and both Maan and Geet shared about their family little bit.

Waiting for the next part update soon

Nice updates..

Rahul did not came to spend with nyra..

Geet asked maan to let nyra to play with pepper..

Waiting for next update..

Congratulations for new story dear

Amazing start

Geet cheated with her husband

Feeling vary bad for geet and her daughter

Maan is geet neighbor

Nayra missing her father

Watting for update