Star Commentor Award (Part 41)
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Part 42
M-Yes. I am good enough to stay with...but not good enough to date!! You confuse me, Geet
Geet sarr pakad leti hai
G-I never said you are not good enough to date!
M-Geet, you know what! if you would have been a man then you would have been a f*ckboy
G-Whatttttt??? how dare you Maan Singh Khurana???
M-I don’t understand you Geet
G-Yes, you don’t!
She snaps
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Dono ghar pohonchte hain
They change into sleeping suits and all
M-I am sorry. I shouldn’t have spoken to you like that
G-I am also sorry
She said coz she doesn’t want any general unpleasantness between them
He nods
G- Waise you did good. I am proud of you
She says about him refraining from alcohol
He nods again
G-I have a surprise for you
She says gleefully
M-What surprise?
He is a little taken aback. He didn’t expect it
G-I will tell you tomorrow
He nods
G-Lets go to bed. Tomorrow is a big day
Maan nods in agreement and lays down on the bed
Geet sochti h kya kare.
Apna saaman leke sofe pe sone jaati hai, jo uska initial plan tha
M- Geet! Cut the crap
G-ok
Wapas bed pe aajaati hai
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Subah hoti hai
Geet is nudging him ki utho utho
He wakes up
M-uh...uh?
G-Utho- utho. She is waiting outside
M-Who?
G-Your mom!
Maan gets up with a start
M-What???????
He frowns hard
M-You....? You contacted my mom!
He buries his face into his palms
Geet is surprised seeing him not happy
G-But I....
M-What did you tell her about me?
Geet is blank
M-You told her everything???
She nods her head lightly
M-F*ck!
He squares her shoulders
M-Do you even realize what you have done??? What will happen now
She is looking at him blankly
She thought this will make him happy
M-This all...everything will end
G-But...but...I thought...she is your mom so....
M-So what? She will think I am a lunatic addict ...who can’t make any sane decisions....
Geet is confused...kya kare kya kare
She has no other option other than opening the door
The doorbell is ringing incessantly
Geet opens the door
Maan’s mom walks in
She is in some designer saree, full tip-top dressed with makeup on
But she looks motherly and not how Maan described
Geet is confused, who is right who is wrong
Her book says sometimes addicts lie
She is wondering whether she should believe Maan
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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