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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 41

Omg what a brilliant update !!! 👏👏👏

Their conversations were out of this world !!! Loved them 💗

I like how you described the scene where they are walking to geet’s place . You created a very vivid image .

They are totally enjoying the tranquility of spending time together while they are leisurely walking & actually having a pleasant conversation

It was the calm before the storm but this conversation was long overdue

I am so proud of maan for pouring out his emotions............

geet is totally clueless about his emotions or anyone else’s for that matter 😆

Maan’s last comment was funny

Hoping now the fog will clear out of geet’s head 😆

Thank you soooooo much for updating the story , you could write a comedy sitcom for these two 👍🏼

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Edited by Creampuff - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 41)

Winner: Creampuff ,

Runner-ups: Alamelu, Khwaishfan

Special Mention: ferdouz

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): NeenaDd, Kkiran, Sanum23

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s

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1. The guessing game, the song game & the QnA is still on so please feel free participate in any or all of them. Let’s have fun together! You can also suggest any game or anything for more interaction and fun

2. Thanks to the silent readers who have become active and started to comment. Really appreciate it. Those who are still silent readers, I request you to at least write a one-word comment. This would mean a world to me

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Special Thanks for reading & commenting on my story even when I unable to PM.

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Part 42

M-Yes. I am good enough to stay with...but not good enough to date!! You confuse me, Geet

Geet sarr pakad leti hai

G-I never said you are not good enough to date!

M-Geet, you know what! if you would have been a man then you would have been a f*ckboy

G-Whatttttt??? how dare you Maan Singh Khurana???

M-I don’t understand you Geet

G-Yes, you don’t!

She snaps

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Dono ghar pohonchte hain

They change into sleeping suits and all

M-I am sorry. I shouldn’t have spoken to you like that

G-I am also sorry

She said coz she doesn’t want any general unpleasantness between them

He nods

G- Waise you did good. I am proud of you

She says about him refraining from alcohol

He nods again

G-I have a surprise for you

She says gleefully

M-What surprise?

He is a little taken aback. He didn’t expect it

G-I will tell you tomorrow

He nods

G-Lets go to bed. Tomorrow is a big day

Maan nods in agreement and lays down on the bed

Geet sochti h kya kare.

Apna saaman leke sofe pe sone jaati hai, jo uska initial plan tha

M- Geet! Cut the crap

G-ok

Wapas bed pe aajaati hai

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Subah hoti hai

Geet is nudging him ki utho utho

He wakes up

M-uh...uh?

G-Utho- utho. She is waiting outside

M-Who?

G-Your mom!

Maan gets up with a start

M-What???????

He frowns hard

M-You....? You contacted my mom!

He buries his face into his palms

Geet is surprised seeing him not happy

G-But I....

M-What did you tell her about me?

Geet is blank

M-You told her everything???

She nods her head lightly

M-F*ck!

He squares her shoulders

M-Do you even realize what you have done??? What will happen now

She is looking at him blankly

She thought this will make him happy

M-This all...everything will end

G-But...but...I thought...she is your mom so....

M-So what? She will think I am a lunatic addict ...who can’t make any sane decisions....

Geet is confused...kya kare kya kare

She has no other option other than opening the door

The doorbell is ringing incessantly

Geet opens the door

Maan’s mom walks in

She is in some designer saree, full tip-top dressed with makeup on

But she looks motherly and not how Maan described

Geet is confused, who is right who is wrong

Her book says sometimes addicts lie

She is wondering whether she should believe Maan

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Agg lag jaye iski book ko. I swear she sucks at reading people everything is a damn manual for her. No Maan dont apologize to her she needs to hear it. She barely has an appropriate diagnosis for him and here she jumping to conclusions. She should have atleast found out more about his mom and then think about is it appropriate for her to reach out but ding dong here doesnt think like that because the book didnt say. Someone get her a new book please LMAO

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 42

Electrifying update !!!! smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

Sparks are flying with their intense argument/convo

They both lose their cool smiley7

But it is so cute how they make up & apologize to each other smiley20

& they share the bed smiley2

They are sounding more like a married couple each day smiley36smiley36

But geet surprising maan with his mom has exploded in her face , maan is upset

& geet is confused what to do smiley5

Her heart was in the right place b/c she cares about maan but I think she should of stuck to ironing out their relationship 1st.

Now what is the whole deal with maan’s mom .?.,,,, how did she abandon him?? Is it his real mom or stepmom?? Or did his real mom remarry ?? If she finds out maan is doing drugs will she disinherit him ?? Geet treated her before but I am assuming she did not talk to her ?? I am really confused with his mom’s scenario . And I don’t think maan is really an Addict b/c he would not have lasted this long w/o his vices & he has been coherent & functioning normally not like an addicted agitated junkie who cannot think clearly ...... in fact maan is thinking clearer than geet smiley36smiley36

Maybe things will get cleared up soon ??

Can’t wait for next update smiley42

Thank you smiley31

Edited by Creampuff - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

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maan is not happy as geet call his mother n share about his addiction

geet is confuse whom to believe maan or the way his mother looking as loving person

as per geet's books maan is lying about his mother

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wonderful update superb

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 42


Fabulous and Surprising


Maan is annoyed with Geet , and he is also right

she can live with him , help him through his addiction

yet she finds fault in dating him all because he is rich

oh I just enjoy when Geet has to decide whether to sleep on the couch

its Maan that tells her to sleep , like they already a serious couple as if

she should know her place is on the bed by his side

Geet had contacted Maan's mother thinking it would be a surprise

yet she is aware that his mother abandoned him then why without

thinking this decision through she just went ahead and contacted Maan's mother

Maan feels that everything is over and now I'm looking forward to seeing why

he feels if his mother knows about his habits that everything will be over

Edited by taahir004 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations on your new story dear 😊

Sorry couldn't read it till now but will surely read and comment....

What a start dear maan and geet are in full form....

Geet is in full tashan tried to dhamkao maan and he signed the papers...

Thank u for the pm dear 😚

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 2

Wow geet is a doctor and also treated maan....

Maan is half fida over her but is set to revenge her...

Wonder what will he do?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 3

Wow kiss pe kiss what type of revange is this..

Revange kam flirting jyada lag raha hai....

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