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Posted: 4 years ago

Chapter 34

Absolutely Beautiful update !!!! 👏👏👏

Loved♥️❤️💕💗maneet spending beautiful moments together

So maan suprised geet by eating in the little shop whereas geet thought he wouldn’t b/c being rich he would think it is beneath him ........ interesting how she compared him to piyush ....... & of course piyush would never slum down

So cute how geet gets caught lost staring at maan ....... her internal dialogues are hilarious 🤣. I can picture geet with two mini geet’s on either shoulder talking to her ..... her brain vs her heart 😆

Super funny how she blames her mixed signals to maan his fault 😆😆...... if only maan knew what transpired in her pretty little head 😆

The grocery shopping spree was funny how she took advantage of her muscle maan 😆 carrying everything for her

But I like how admist the comical relief you show glimpses of geet’s concern over maan not sleeping

However I am suprised that geet is judging maan due to being rich ...... is it b/c piyush was like that .?...... she should know better than to judge a book by its cover & she should try to get to know the real maan b/c I think there is a really nice guy lurking behind all the facades .

Now maybe if they could work out their undergarment situations ie boxers , bras etc ....,,, maybe they could all get a good nite sleep 😴 😆

Thank you so much for the update

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Edited by Creampuff - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

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maan is teasing geet n enjoying her reaction with little smirk.

seein n hearing maan geet think she is right in thinking that maan is not man of bharosa

geet checking maan's comfort level by taking him to normal shops near by

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Posted: 4 years ago

Haww Yeh Geet bhi na 😋

Khud confused hai and giving mixed signals to Maan.

Bandi smart hai testing him if he can adjust in any situation.

Let's see if Maan passes her expectations 😅

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for updating so soon


Part 34

Amazing update..... terrifically written

Geet cleverly handled the situation

great that she accompanied him

glad that Maan decided to eat at the small shop

of cos Geet was pleasantly surprised with this

well thank God she is not with Piyush

its natural for Geet to compare Maan and Piyush

Geet assumed Maan would find it below his standard

liked that she admires Maan

her turmoil well portrayed.....

why is she giving him mixed signals?

Ha ha she blames Maan.......

loved her concern for Maan

Ha ha loved him teasing her

adore her reaction.........

he knows how to make her speechless

at least she got him to carry the parcels

so she does not want to date Maan cos of the standards

Maan was unperturbed going to the grocery shop or that small shop for food

hope that seeing this Geet will change her mind!

Maan maybe rich but he seems simple

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Maaneet spending time together but not yet fully

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 34)

Winner: Creampuff ⭐️

Runner-ups: Alamelu, khwaishfan

Special Mention: Ferdouz

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Alamelu,Creampuff, aparna3011

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Part 35

Geet jaan bujhke Maan ko nukkad wale grocery store mein le aayi thi, she wanted to see how he would react being in her standard of living

She has her own mindset that rich guys are fed in silverspoon, they don’t know struggles of life

That’s why she didn’t want to date Maan

She knew dono ka standard bohot different hai

Maan ko laga tha ki bole chalo drive pe chalte hain baharlunch kar lenge

Par ab ye bojha utha uthake uski khud ki jaan jaa rahi hai

Geet toh aaram se naachte naachte jaa rahi hai, with a smile on her face like what a lovely day

G- Bank bhi chal hi...

M-Nahi!

G-Par..mujhe

M-Jo bhi kaam hai online kar lena

She nods

Maan ka mann kia bole ki you look good in Indian wear (she was wearing a casual kurti & chudidaar)

But phir chup ho gaya ki, Geet phir ye wo bolegi, usko toh main villain hi lagta hoon

He looks at at

M-Why are you so self-satisfied & smug today? If I can ask

G-You are doing good!

She says, wrapping her arm around his shoulder

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Maan rakhta hai samaan ghar pe

Aur jaake bed pe let jaata hai thak ke

More than 24 hours without sleep

He is pretty tired

Geet saaman rakhne lag gai, aur kitchen se cheekhne lag gai

G-Nahaa lo! Geyser chala dia hai! 5-minute mein nahaalo warna geyser phatt jayega

She wonders ki ye Maan nalayakon ki tarah answer kyun nahi kar raha hai

Geet aati hai room mein

G-Nahaalo…

She stops mid sentence seeing Maan dozed off on the bed

His legs are dangling out of the bed in sitting position, rest of the body is on the bed

Geet paas aake dekhti hai ki sahi mein so raha hai

Ab Geet toh Maan ko theek se leta nahi payegi toh rehne deti hai

She goes and draws the curtains

Kuch der baad sochti hai kya karu kya karu

Apni medical ki book leke baithti hai

Par dhyaan toh baar baar Maan ki aur jaa raha hai

She thinks, kitna innocent lag raha hai sote hue

zara paas se dekh loon

She walks a little closer to him

Oh he has a little stubble

Thoda paas aur aayi

Zara touch karlun?

Pata chalega kya?

Thoda paas aur aayi

Their noses are almost touching

Maan is in a deep slumber

She touches the tip of her fingers to his cheek

Ek side pe soft phir stubbly

She is gazing intently on his soft lips and then the stubbly upper lip & chin...wondering about the contrasting texture...going back to the times they kissed

That time he was without a stubble

How would be the Stubble experience?

Geet is in her thoughts while aimlessly gazing at his stubble & lips

Maan sleepily opens his eyes and finds himself surrounded by a veil of dark sweet-smelling tresses around him

She was in her world so could not react fast enough

Maan turns, moving his arm on her back pinning her to his chest and trapping her there again while going back to his slumber

Ab Geet chillaye to Maan uth jayega...and he will accuse her again

She thinks ki haan abhi thodi der mein nikalne ki koshish karegi, abhi acha sa soft & comfy hai...bass 5 min...kisko pata chalna hai

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Aww. Is geet testing maan here. Taking him to small stores in inside gully. Hmm. She is surprised to see him eat comfortably in the small idli store. She thought it would be too beneath him to be there. Reason for suggesting to pack. But then surprised by him

so loved their comfort talking like maan having no shame in telling her that dgdvgid not pack his boxers. Haha


has it been just one day - or two since he has been with geet. Feels like Many many more


how long is geet going to keep him. How long does it take to get out of the drug effect??
csn she handle him and herself. him. Can he handle himself


thought of something when I was sleeping last night — is no one at work looking for maan. Is he not running an empire? Surprised he is sitting peacefully with her without thinking of work? Hmm Geet has his phone right. Or has she taken care of that too



Thanks for the wonderful comment & thinking about my story during the night. That makes me feel really special

Coming to your questions: Its been around 3 days, day he came, day of his sleepless night & today


Well Geet is checking him for symptoms & all. She fairly knows whether he is clean or not


Yes, he has a business but due to his party & all he was missing out work & working from home & stuff so office people have become used to his physical absence. Else, he was on his laptop working from Geet's home even. Geet brought his phone when she took him with her, but she has handed over his phone to him since


Hope this clears your doubts

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Posted: 4 years ago

Chapter 34


He doesn't have any problem in accompanying her and also to eat at the tea shop,here her theories became wrong,and she is thinking,and also don't know what to do with all these,like whom to listen her heart or mind,it's so cutey update...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Omg geet,she is such a rare one,her antics and monologue 😂,loving it more and more...

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Posted: 4 years ago

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geet is testing maan

maan feel tired with carrying all bags n go to sleep in siting position not responding what geet asking him to do

geet get trapped in maan's arm when geet is observing sleeping maan.

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