Great part
Will maan be able to share his feelings with Geet
Also Geet heard maans confession
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Great part
Will maan be able to share his feelings with Geet
Also Geet heard maans confession
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Star Commentor Award (Part 32)
Winner: Creampuff ⭐️
Runner-ups: Taahir004
Special Mention: khwaishfan
Early BirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): sanum23,kkiran,NeenaDd
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Part 33
M- Are you not upset that I didn’t respond to your love confession?
She shrugs
G- No. I just responded to your confession
He frowns
M- What?
She plays a recording where Maan's drunken voice is confessing his love to Geet
Maan is pale and embarrassed hearing it
M-Why did you record my call?
G-I wanted a proof, in case you forgot or just flip side
She answers smugly
M-Why don’t you become a criminal lawyer!
Maan says rolling his eyes
She is smiling gleefully
M-You didn’t even want to date me
He mutters
G-Concentrate on the movie!
She yells
G-Look straight! Don’t look at me
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Geet so gai movie dekhte- dekhte
Movie khatam hui toh Geet so rahi hai dekha Maan ne
Maan soch raha hai kya kare
Maan ne laptop utha ke apni jagah rakh diya
Geet bed pe tedhi hokar padi hai
Maan soch raha hai khud kahan lete?
Yaa, yeh mauka hai chala jaaye yahan se?
Is he even supposed to sleep on the same bed, he wonders?
Uske upar, Geet bed ke beechon beech tedhi hoke leti hui hai
Kuch der tak sochne ke baad aur Geet ko ghurne ke baad Maanlet jaata hai, ek pair bed ke bahar latkake, covering his eyes with his arm
She looks surreal while sleeping
He has an urge to touch her and pull away that rogue strand of hair falling on her face and obstructing his view
But he is afraid that if he touches Geet and she would wakeup
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He is struggling with insomnia (part of withdrawl)
Poori raat Maan kabhi karvat badalta
Kabhi room mein ghoomta
Kabhi book padne ki koshish karta toh Geet ki moti-moti bio & medical ki book
Kabhi terrace pe khada ho jaata
Aah agar ek cigarette mil jaye aise sleepless night par
How easier night will become
He wonders
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Ab subah hui toh madam ki neend khuli
But Maan was used to it, Geet poori raat mein multiple baarankh kholti rahi, phir soti rahi
Now this doesn’t alarm him anymore
Geet uthke baith gai, khade khade baal leke
Phone dekha, time dekha...phir so gai
Then she notices Maan, who was sitting next to her working on the laptop
She gets up with a start gazing at his laptop screen
M-I am working
She gives a content toothy smile
Again, goes to sleep
Then again gets up
G-You didn’t sleep?
M-No
Maan hears her stomach growl
G-It’s me
She confesses
G-Make me some cornflakes & coffee please
She makes a puppy face
M-Should I go & get something from outside?
He asks
She sits up
G-Yes....No!
M-I won’t run away...
Geet is thinking what to do
Crazy them,them and their antics❤😍
Looking forward to further...
Originally posted by: Creampuff
Part 32
Stellar update !!!! 👏👏👏👏
These two never cease to amuse me . I especially love ❤️ their quick retorts to each other & the conversations that go on in their head !! 😆 Great job allowing us to read their minds 😆
Their chemistry is fantastic !!! 👍🏼
Their conversations & actions & even their quick retorts are definitely like a couple that have been together for a long time . They should stop denying the inevitable & spill their guts to each other so they can enjoy their crazy life together with each other’s company . Let’s face it , these two were made for each other ..... doesn’t everybody agree !!
So glad that maan turned off his phone when geet told him that his druggie acquaintances are not his friends.
But I am baffled by geet’s saying that she responded to his confession.... did maan confess ?? I don’t remember that part . I remember geet confessed . Maybe I should reread for fun 😆
Thank you so much for pm & updates
Double updates deserve double hugs 🤗🤗
Their conversations & actions & even their quick retorts are definitely like a couple that have been together for a long time .
Great observation dear. These were the points I based thier characters on ki both are intelligent witty and the whole charm & masala of their relationship is ki dono ek se badhkar ek hain. Hence surprise each other each time
Also they are so subconsciously comfy with each other, hence to bystander might seem like a married couple
Originally posted by: akkub.92
Both parts are awesome
Geet doing everything for maan hope maan also corporate with her and he get normal soon and there love story begin
Can't wait to see there response
Glad to read your comment after so long. Keep commenting dear
Originally posted by: taahir004
Congratulations to all the Winners
of Part 31
Part 32
Warm and Endearing Part
Maan did not say anything to Geet's confession
but why is it because when he thought he can have a serious
relation with Geet , she just avoided him
but I admire her that she did not get sad or cry just tells Maan
she responded to his confession
good that Geet tells Maan his friends are not really his friends
hope he sees it soon that they all just use him
Geet needs to make Maan busy with interesting activities not just relaxing
because at some point he will get over bored and try and escape
is it because when he thought he can have a serious
relation with Geet , she just avoided him
This is a great point
Part 33
Omg... 🤣🤣🤣..they are behaving like an arranged marriage couple that trying to get to know each other after marriage... This is so awkward at the same time funny as well.... And Geet is really smart to have recorded everything that happened with Maan's drunken state.... Wait a minute ab doctor hai toh chaku leke hamla kiya tha agar criminal lawyer hoti toh murder karke kab ka body dispose ki gai hogi.... Maan kuch bolne se pehle samne dekh or do teen baar flash back jaake dekh.... Koi normal ladki nahi hai hamare Geet woh toh chalti phirti phul chadi hai.... But Geet is really cute after waking up in the morning.... And she's ordering Maan to bring breakfast for her... 🤣Maan was like mein bahar jaa kar khana lati hun pehle Geet haan kardi phir naah kardi Maan ne uski man padh liya ki don't worry mei bhag nahi jati... 🤣...funny update Di... 😂
❤
Nice update
If they love each other then why can't they live like couple and waiting to see what geet say will she allow him to go out or not and what will be maan reaction
Chapter 33
Dynamic update di !!!! 👏👏👏
Di I am loving 🥰 their masala filled relationship & of course these masala filled updates 😆
We do not know which way these characters mood will change according to the direction of the wind ....... very entertaining & purely unpredictable...... leaves you wanting to read more 😃
So maan confessed when he was drunk & geet recorded him 😆.... I do not expect anything less from her ....... but just as this conversation was steering in the right direction about their feelings geet makes a u-turn & steers into her safe zone which is either a comical retort or redirecting the conversation......... maybe we can duct tape her mouth for a bit while maan spills his guts about his feelings ....... I know he can break down her resolve with his charm 😉
Poor maan suffered a sleepless night suffering from withdrawal & not knowing where to sleep , whereas sleeping beauty has a very unusual sleeping ability 😆....... I was secretly wishing that they feel asleep cuddling together 🥰
Now the beauty demands breakfast but will maan be allowed out of his captivity???
Thank you so much di for pm & another masala filled update 🤗
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nice
maan was confuse but letter sleep beside geet
maan feel embrace when geet play maan's call recording when he confess his love for geet
maan dint run away when he get chance when geet is asleep
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