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Posted: 4 years ago

He knows that she is risking many things by helping him,let's see now wt will he do with the party group,is he going to continue or not...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan please don’t answer your so called friends. After everything geetbis doing for you don’t please.

Maan realizes geet is going beyond Whatvis required because she cares truly cares. Especially after hearing about the landlord. Also will maan let geet go that easily hmmmHe has not had that probably ever


let’s see what happens

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan knows geet care fr her she risking everything only fr him so he thought not to leave her

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi Nilanjana, how are you?

thanks for updating


Part 31

Brilliant update..... wonderfully written

not surprised that Maan knew what was happening

of cos Maan is shocked that she will be moving out of the city

she loves him so much.....

why can't they just talk?

Maan's question is justified.

he knows her so well.

like her care for Maan

admire her efforts to help him...

at least he was ready to talk

so what made him self destruct?

well its all new to Geet.....

great that they watched a movie

Maan's thoughts are well portrayed

glad that he knows Geet cares and trusts him

loved that he does not want to break her trust

hope he gets better soon

oh no did his so call friends have to message him?

can understand that Geet wants to know who messaged!

will he be honest with her?

I am sure he will not attend the party


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

His party friends are calling. Lets see what he will do. The moment of truth.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Chapter 31

Impeccable update !!! 👏👏👏

Geet & maan have such a unique relationship

I like how they are awkward at times when talking but still are so comfortable in silence in each other’s presence like an old married couple 😃

Maan is blown away that geet is actually getting evicted due to helping him but she still wants to help him

He even ponders why he is still staying when he could leave but he knows that geet is doing a lot of him, so he should hold his end of the bargain

Geet’s counselling session was hilarious 🤣🤣, looking at her phone under the table for what to say 🤣

Horror movie sounds exciting but his addict friends are calling

I hope maan makes the correct decision now that he knows someone cares 😃

Thank you so much for the update ♥️


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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 31)

Winner: Creampuff ⭐️

Runner-ups: khwaishfan

Special Mention: Alamelu

Early BirdA ward (For readers having first 3 comments): maangeet.gmmg,aparna3011,NeenaDd

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s

Special Announcements:

1. The guessing game, the song game & the QnA is still on so please feel free participate in any or all of them. Let’s have fun together! You can also suggest any game or anything for more interaction and fun

2. Thanks to the silent readers who have become active and started to comment. Really appreciate it. Those who are still silent readers, I request you to at leas twrite a one-word comment. This would mean a world to me

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SpecialThanks to readers for reading the story and commenting on it even when I couldn’t find time to PM you guys

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Part 32

He comes out of his thoughts when he notices his mobile pinging incessantly

It’s his party group that is expecting him

G- Who is it?

M-My friends

G-Which friends?

M-The ones from the party

G-They are not your friends. Concentrate on the movie

Maan phone silent kar deta hai

He murmurs "so dominating"

G-I heard you!

M-Good

“God knows what sort of therapy this is”

He mutters under his breath

A failed one

She answers in her mind

+++++

Geet pauses the movie Nth time

G-Ruko mujhe bathroom jaana hai

M-Tum sirf paani piiti rehti ho phir bathroom jaati rehti ho

G-Tumhe kya? Light jalao!

M- Yaaaaaar

He grunts

M-Ye lo light

He switches on the mobile flashlight

M-Use this. Baar- baar light nahi jala raha

Geet huffs & puffs and goes to the bathroom

Maan ignores her agitations

She comes back

G-Chalao chalao

The movie ke aise thrilling part mein Geet subconsciously holds his hand….that was the only warm thing around

Just lightly her hand his placed on his

Maan also doesn’t make a hue & cry about it

G- Maan

G-hmm

G-Can I ask you something?

He nods

G- Why did you get drunk that day?

He asks referring to the day the hotel

M- I was disturbed

She is looking at him to tell more. But he doesn't

He is stoic and stone faced

M- Geet

G-Hmm


M- Are you not upset that I didn’t respond to your love confession?

She shrugs

G- No. I just responded to your confession

He frowns

M- What?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Chapter 30

Riveting update !!!👏👏👏

You have us readers glued to our screens wondering what this dynamic duo will do next

They are so unpredictable......... but still relatable ..... (well maybe not the chainsaw part 😆)

two unique individuals that are successful in their careers but lonely in their personal lives ......... they seem tough & confident to the outer world but they both have their insecurities........... & they are afraid of being heartbroken

Again their conversation was awkward but they still seem to understand each other , they have this innate ability to render each other speechless at times ...,, love ❤️ that about them

So maan is going though withdrawal & geet is tolerating his behaviour b/c she cares about him

I liked her gesture of placing her hand on his to show that she will support him through this withdrawal ordeal ....... it was sweet ...... silent reassurance

Uh oh ........, how did the landlord find out about maan moving into the apartment....... was it the nosy neighbors 😡

Yikes!!! Geet has to vacate her apartment in 2 weeks ...,....... what will she do now ???

Possibly move in with maan ?? 😉 Just a little suggestion 😆

Loved the update ......, eagerly awaiting the next part

Thank you for the pm & update di !!


two unique individuals that are successful in their careers but lonely in their personal lives ......... they seem tough & confident to the outer world but they both have their insecurities........... & they are afraid of being heartbroken


This is such an apt analysis. This touched my heart

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 29


Fabulous Update


So Maan did hear and registered Geet's confession

and that is the reason he ask her why she dates

other man

his question was correct as he wants to know where

he stands in Geet's life

and her comeback to him is he too was busy with some

girl

instead of Geet been serious and speaking her mind her feelings

she starts beating around the bush

Maan also says he is no addict but can he be trusted on that


instead of Geet been serious and speaking her mind her feelings

she starts beating around the bush


Hahahahhaa thats her innate quality naa

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations to all the Winners


of Part 29


Part 30


Awesome and Heart Yearning


Of course Maan would say and feel that

he is no addict but if a person uses drugs 3 times or more

than surely their are a user and an addict

and yes its now not his fault as slowly his affression will

come out

I just feel Maan is so alone and needs someone or people

always around him

hopefully Geet treats him normal and also helps him

get off both alcohol and drugs

but I guess it will be a tough road ahead

it seems like Geet's landlord has an issue with Maan staying

at Geet's apartment


he is no addict but if a person uses drugs 3 times or more

than surely their are a user and an addict ------ Great research


I just feel Maan is so alone and needs someone or people

always around him -----This was such a beautiful line


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