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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations to all Winners


of Part 28


Well Done everyone !!!!!

Edited by taahir004 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 29


Fabulous Update


So Maan did hear and registered Geet's confession

and that is the reason he ask her why she dates

other man

his question was correct as he wants to know where

he stands in Geet's life

and her comeback to him is he too was busy with some

girl

instead of Geet been serious and speaking her mind her feelings

she starts beating around the bush

Maan also says he is no addict but can he be trusted on that

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations to all the Winners


of Part 29


Part 30


Awesome and Heart Yearning


Of course Maan would say and feel that

he is no addict but if a person uses drugs 3 times or more

than surely their are a user and an addict

and yes its now not his fault as slowly his affression will

come out

I just feel Maan is so alone and needs someone or people

always around him

hopefully Geet treats him normal and also helps him

get off both alcohol and drugs

but I guess it will be a tough road ahead

it seems like Geet's landlord has an issue with Maan staying

at Geet's apartment

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Posted: 4 years ago

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great geet is great taking good care of maan

she is consulting other doctor to treat maan

geet is niticing maan's withdrawal symptoms

geet ready leave her place for maan but not ready to leave alone

maan confess that he is not addicted but took drugs if he is disturb

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 30

marvelous update.....well written

at least she trusts him

glad that he conceded that he was disturbed seeing her with that guy

this obviously shows his feelings

Gosh Geet did realise this?

she had a point that his reason was not good enough

so he wants to smoke

how will he manage?

of cos he is frustrated as he feels he is prisoner

well can understand why she is cautious

hate that he thought she was lying

if that was the case why would she bring him to her house?

glad she is with him and supporting him

Geet's thoughts are well portrayed

she is doing what is best for him

nice that she gave him his phone

great that she does not react to his taunts

liked that she takes care of him

oh no her landlord gets to know about Maan

now she has leave within 2 weeks

will she tell Maan or will he get to know?

perhaps Maan will tell her to move in with him


Question to Maan

why are you taking drugs?


Question to Geet

Will you confess to Maan again that you love him?


update soon


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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh no is geet being evacuated thinking she is living with a guy so ulta pulta happening?? Really. Poor girl

she is doing her best to get maan outta this drug thing.

So disappointed in maan. Thought he would be more mature as a businessman. But ever since he met geet he had been acting immature or so unlike himself. It’s almost as if she is there to take care of him so he has let himself go??? Confused about him

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Geet’s landlord got to know

But will maaneet’s come close

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 30

Arre baapre.... yeh kya hua ab...? Geet ki toh musibat khatam hi nahi horaha hai pehle Maan ki tension aur uper se uske har baat pe thaane suna... Ab landlord ki problem... Woh ek doctor hai why can't she just have a nice house.... Ab pata nahi kya hoga.... Geet is really stuck now... Piche kua aur Agey kai... Ab kya hoga....

Fantabulous update Di... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 30)

Winner: Creampuff ⭐️

Runner-ups: taahir004

SpecialMention: khwaishfan

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Part 31

She walks out to speak to the landlord so Maan cant hear her

G-wo...wo mera...

G- friend hai

G- Aapko kisne…?

G- Nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti

G- Haan 2 hafte ka notice hai naa.. tab tak ghar khali kardungi

She hangs up and comes back inside

M- Who was it?

G-Nobody

M- Your landlord is chucking you out because of me. I can move out to a rehab

G- No need. I am anyways moving out of the city

M- What? Why?

G- Work

M- Where?

G- I don’t need to tell you everything

He stares at her intently and smiles while shaking his head

M- You are taking it all this upon yourself because of me. Why?

G- Even if I am. I can’t accomplish anything without your help, Maan

Tabhi doorbell bajti hai ki khaana aa gaya

Dono chup chap lunch kar lete hain

Geet lunch ke baad, Maan ko medicine deti hai

M-What is this?

G-This will help

M-With what?

G- I am a doctor, trust me

Maan stares at the medicine

Geet is staring back at Maan

He looks at her then gulps it down with some water

She sits near him

G-Do you wanna talk?

M- About?

G-Anything

M- So you are trying to counsel me

Maan burst out laughing

M- You suck at it so much!

Geet scowls

M- Okay let's try. Come on. You should make me feel comfortable

G-Yes. Be comfortable

M- Hold my hand

G-What?

M- I feel comfortable that way

She holds his hand

M- Start. What do you wanna know?

She wants to know that why he turned to self-destruction

Table ke neeche she is referring to her phone on what to do as a therapist or counselor

Maan looks ki kya kar rahi hai

He gets up ki lets watch a movie

G- But...

M- You prepare first...next time

He says patting her head

Dono bed pe baith jaate hain movie chalake

G- Horror movie dekhte hai. I can never watch them coz I am alone...puhleaze

He nods

Maan turns off the lights

He thinks to himself.

Why isn't he leaving, he can leave anytime

Geet can’t possibly stop him

He wonders why he is not going.

He was doing all this coz he felt kisi ko farak nahi padta whatever happens to him

But here he knows Geet ko farak padta hai, she is risking everything just for him.....she trusts him

He can’t just ruthlessly break her trust

Then he will prove himself to be that what the world thinks of him

He comes out of his thoughts when he notices his mobile pinging incessantly

It’s his party group that is expecting him

G- Who is it?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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very nice

maan thinks that he can leave geet's place any time then why not leaving, further he find that he dint want to brake geet's trust who is the only one person who care for him

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