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Star Commentor Award (Part 53)

Winners: Creampuff

Runner Ups: Alamelu

Special Mention: Kkiran

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): NeenadD,Alamelu, Creampuff

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Part 54

M-No. My turn. Spoon me!

He demands

Geet spoons him, rather struggles to

G-This is not spooning. This is rock climbing for me

She grumbles

Geet nudges him after a while

G-Maan

M-hmm

G-We will pretend whatever happens in these few weeks never happened, after I go back

M-You want that?

G-Yeah. You?

M-Okay

She is back to her habit of to build walls to keep her heart safe

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Ab subah hoti hai,

Early morning Maan gets up

He spends rest of the morning just drinking the sight of her face while she sleeps in a dreamy happy manner, her tresses falling gorgeously over her face

She in an angelic slumber

Rhythm of her breath like music

She, too was in a deep slumber and did not wake up once like her normal self

As if bohot dino ki neend puri kar rahi ho

Maan slowly glides the tip of his fingers over her wrist...her skin feels so soft

Slowly he also drifts into a peaceful slumber

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Jab neend khuli toh its afternoon

Maan ne dekha Geet nahi hai aas-paas

Bass note hai-

Bye. see you soon

Maan thinks- What the hell?

Maan seriously feels like the typical girl who is with atypical f*ckboy in a one-night stand, jo commit nahi karta, leaves in the morning and all

He calls Geet

Geet is in a bus

Wo call dekhti hai but uthaati nahi

She felt so incessantly happy with him that she had to leave;coz there can’t be any scope of any happiness anymore

Before it turns to something ugly, she chose to walk away

In her mind, she was saving that beautiful moment

Maan is pissed off but he knows Geet is weird like that and he also didn’t contact her for months, so he has no right to complain

Maan hi raat ko message karta hai Geet ko ki- 'goodnight'

She replies - 'gn'

She messages again saying-

“My friends are planning on xyz pub. Do you wanna join?”

Maan replies-“ok”

Geet calls him after a while

He picks up

G-Are you my boyfriend?

He is little taken aback

G-I was wondering...wo pub mein friends puchenge who are youtoh...friend keh dungi

Maan soch raha hai, ek side ye kehti hai ki iss trip ke baad vaasta nahi rakhna hai, aur ab ye sawaal

M-I can be whatever you want me to be

Ab Geet chup ki wo kya bole

She says after a while:

G-Okay...so for your cousin's wedding , am I your girlfriend?

M-Yes. You are my date

Her checks acquire a color

G-I would like that...Mr Maan Khuraana

M-Okay...Geet Khur-Handa. Message me the address.

G-Yeah okay

Geet ka heart flutters

Usko wo cute lovey dovey gf-bf wali feeling aa rahi hai

She always fantasized about a cute romance, how her friends had

A man, who would cherish her

But she stops her heart from over-doing stuff

She makes her heart understand that it’s just make believe for a time, not real

Originally posted by: Kkiran

Talk about awkward I felt like I was sitting in the room with them as third wheels spectator. I cant with these two kitni baar Maan you look hot/nice/sexy bolega my goodness dil ki baath to bol ughhhh! --hahahah tumhe kya lagta hai kya bolna chahiye Maan ko Atleast kapde to diye yeh stupid sidhe headlight pe paunch gayi iska dhimak ka koi filter nahi. -hahaha yeh to hai Dono hi baesharmi ki hadh toh par chuke hai. -- ab ek dusre ke saath besharmi ki hadd paar nahi karenge to kiske saath karenge dear? 😉Yah go commit sin I cant deal with whatever this is between them.--hehehhe they totally frustrate you

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97

Part 51 & 52

Ok so that girl at the door was Mona as in Maan's cousin... OK..... So now she will be playing cupid for this two.... Bandha bachgaya... baal baal bacha hehehe But the question remains how does Mona knows about Geet and all...well our suspect is Maan Like she just came in and say hi Geet like they knew each other for a long time.... It's a little confusing aur yeh Maan ki saare raaz Geet ke samne khol diya... Uske baad thoda awkward hogai but aagey tho surprised hui kyonki Maan Geet ko rehne keliya rukaya hai. But the funny thing is jab Maan ne Geet ko apne kapde di hai aur Geet ne kaha her headlights can see... 🤣now they are all cuddly bear... Hopefully aagey se sab acha hoga... Wah Maan babu ek kiss aur ek pajama se humari Sherni ko choti cute kitten bana diya... dekha Maan ka asar, he knows how to handle sherni Cute and funny update Di. Now Geet will not whoop Maan's ass for the time being... 😆

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Originally posted by: Creampuff

Chapter 52

Sinfully delicious update 😆.... not to mention humerous!! 👏👏👏 Thanks

Woah !!!! Bring the firehose , geet is on fire after maan’s kiss 😆 Absolutely. Ab kiss tha hi itna hot

Maan’s little confession was cute when he didn’t want geet to leave ...... 💗so, I also like his words, short sweet but effective

he seems to be stuttering & fumbling around her 😆 our munda is a goner --Pyaar humein kis modh pe le aaya

Who would have imagined this was the same arrogant , pretentious business man that we first met..... he has done a 360 degree turn & seems like a insecure teenager fumbling to tell a girl he likes her but in this case it would be that he loves her . -Oh i love this sentence. thats the whole idea n theme of the story ki see how characters are transforming with each other & with time

But I like this maan ..... it shows his human side that he is just like the rest of us , not perfect but just wants to be loved & cared for -aww so true. he is just good at hiding it or was till Geet madam appread in his life

It was cute how they were laughing at each other’s outfits & maan was caught looking at geet’s headlights & fumbling 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣--heheheh ab aise situation mein banda kya kare

Maan is right b:c they are avoiding each other afraid of heart break but suffering meanwhile

Hoping that since they are closing the physical distance in their relationship they will be able to close the emotional distance as well !!! -Physical distance they are able to surmount coz of the force of attraction between them is stronger than anything their supressed sexual tension from the moment they met on that fateful day. Emotional distance is more of where they have to work on each other and self to get overtheirr fear & insecurities

Absolutely superb update !!

This one really rocked !!! Loved it 💗💕More than the update I absolutely & thoroughly enjoyed reading your comment & your analysis

Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats to the winners

thanks for the pm

Part 52

delightful update..... excellently written

so he does not want her to go

liked that Maan was upfront about his feelings

well he had a point that been away from each other is breaking their hearts! true

wow what a reaction to his kiss

at least they had a moment...yup more than a moment☺️

ah they look adorable in boxers in t/shirt/shirt

enjoyed their banter

glad seeing them comfortable around each other yup that they are

loved Maan's definition re adulting

hmm well what happens that room stays between them

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Definitely wired conversations. They don’t make sense to anyone but them. islie toh they are apt for each other 😉But in between they become serious and tell the truth. ye bhi toh hai naa, serious conversation karne baithenge toh both will flee Like maan saying how hard it was for him to not contact her. it is true sometimes it is good to live in the moment and not worry about the future

And in the end wow. Geet does like to order maan around does she not. Hilarious their tslks yup, Geet bhi order karti hai & Maan bhi sunnleta hai. Lets her boss around

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 53

These two are definitely birds of a feather & should stick together 😆 hahahah absolutely

Admist their absurd conversations , they finally have a somewhat serious conversation ........, confessed how they felt during the six months & actually could laugh at how they met & their initial interactions ....., yup, isnt any couple adorable who could laugh together❤️

I was thinking 🤔 if they did finally tie the knot & have kids , you can imagine all the interesting stories about their courtship they could share with their kids ....... &considering how interesting these two are , can you imagine the personalities of their children..... forget the chainsaws & guns there would be bulldozers & canons 😆😆- OMG!!! I was thinking exactly the same, just imagine like Ted in How I met your mother, Maan telling the story, so this kids is How I met your mother, and the kids have theirr jaws hanging😆

Sorry I am jumping the gun ....,, I should focus on the present --no no this is so great, we can create and imagine such scenarios, that would be so much fun

Maan & geet sharing a bed & spooning 😳

& as maan said living in the moment

Looking forward to geet being maan’s plus one for the wedding 😊

Thank you 🤗 Thank you for the super comment, its always a delight

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the pm

Part 53

Beautiful update.... wonderfully written

these two are certainly unique lol

so they intend to live the moment....

I am sure their will be no regrets

at least they have decided to go with the flow

not surprised that Geet wants to go the wedding with him

so she wants Maan to meet her friends

glad he agreed

great that they were able to share their feelings

I think these two are made for each other--why do you think so?😉

enjoyed their banter

wow they are spooning

loved their convo regarding spooning

update soon

Uhmm someone needs to start breaking those walls. Geet you know stay away from him is hard and appreciate Maan is like I am willing to be whatever you want. I feel she bugging him more than me lol.

Maan too not understanding geet weird behavior but accept what she want