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Posted: 5 years ago
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MG OS :

Prologue

Maan's first love since childhood is Geet. But Is Maan Geet's first love? Maan is longing for Geet. But does Geet feels same?

PART 1

Maan came back from USA to Delhi

In KM,

Dadi: Abhi to aaye ho kaha chal diye?

Maan: In Khurana colony Mere friends se milne dadi. Mom dad se keh dena main shaam tak aa jaunga.

In Khurana Colony,

On the way he saw Geet. Maan waved hand but Geet ignored him.

Maan met Yash.

Yash: Hi Mr. Khurana. Looking like imported item.

Maan: Kuchh bhi Yash.

Yash: You are back from foreign. Aur kya kahu.

Maan: Chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye main wahi tumhara Bachpan wala Maan hu.

Yash: Achha laga Jan kar ki tum nahi badle.

Maan: Par yaha Sab badle najar aa rahe hai. Khas kar Geet she saw me. Par kuchh react nahi kiya. Pehle zagdti thi. Kitni masti karti thi. Tum main Geet aur Dev. Are ha ye Dev kaha hai.

Yash: Kya maan waha koi aur hot girl nahi mili? Abhi bhi Geet ke bare me sochte ho. Tum.

Maan: Ek baar dimag ko samjha dunga. Par ye dil ko kaise samjhau?

Yash: Tum un dono ke bare me na puchho wahi thik rahega. Geet pehle wali Geet nhi rahi badal gayi hai. Aur dev us din ke baad bohot kam baat karta hai.

Maan: Matlab kya hai?

Yash: Last year Geet kisi ladke ke sath bhag gayi thi but aagayi dusre din return. Us din se colony me Geet se koi baat nahi karta. Isliye bol raha hun mat soch uske bare mein.

Maan : Par Dadi ya Maa papa ne kuchh nahi bola mujhe.

Yash: Unhe pata hai. But they don't think its big issue like you think. But phir bhi use dur raho Maan. Wo ajib behave karti hain. Maine koshish ki is bare me baat karne ki par usne dosti hi tod di.

Yash: Kaha jaa the ho?

Maan saw she is coming.

Maan went behind her.

Maan: Hi Geet . Bhul gayi mujhe. Hum childhood friends. Main Maan. Kitni masti ki humne.

Geet: Main yaha kisi ko nahi janti. And please mujhse pehchan dikhane ki koi jarurat nahi hain.

She left

Yash: Kyun Maan dur raho usase. Aise hi behave karti hai wo.

Maan: Nahi. Wo aisi nahi hai. Uski aankhe Dekhi kaisi dikh rahi thi jaise ki apne aap se lad rahi ho. Galti to kisise bhi ho Sakti hai par sab Jo is Sarah ki saja de rahe hai wo uski galti se bhi badi galti hai. Waise bata sakte ho is waqt kaha jaa rahi hai wo?

Yash: Dance class.

Maan: Abhi tak wo dance Sikh rahi hai.

Maan smiled

Maan: Yash do you remember tum main aur Dev Geet ko uske dance class tak follow karte the uska dance dekhne ke liye.

Yash: Yes Maan. But ab wo sikhti bhi hai aur sikhati bhi hai.

Maan: You mean dance teacher.

Yash: Yes dance teacher

Maan took address and went to the academy where Geet teaches

Maan saw Geet coming.

Maan: Hey Geet listen.

Geet: tum kaun ho? Kyun mere piche pade ho?

Maan: Dekho main janta hun tum mujhse baat nahi karna chahti. But kuchh hai Jo tumhe dena hai. Main koi karj rakhta nahi. Ye lo chocolate.

Geet: For what?

Maan: Bhul gayi tumne mujhe bola tha jab main US se aaunga tab tumhare liye chocolate lau. Ye bhi bola that ki yaha ke Mall se nahi. from USA. So take this after that tum chaho to fek do.

Geet: Give me. Ho gaya

Maan: I don't know tumhare past me kya hua tha but trust Me. You can call me anytime. I still consider you my best friend.

Geet: Bye.

Next morning

Khurana colony

In geets home,

Geet:Mujhe dance class Jana hain . Salsa sikhane ke liye new choreographer aa rhe hai

Mohinder : Jana hai to sham tak wapas aao.

Geet: unhe apke hisab se time nhi de sakte.

Maa: kyun baap beti jhagad rahe ho

Mohi: Samjha Rano waise to ijjat uchal chuki hai.

Rano: aap pohcha diya karo aur wapas bhi ley aya karo

Papa: Mere pas itna waqt nhi hai

Geet: Agar mujhe koi drop karne aur receive karne aye to permission denge.

Papa: Haa.

Geet: Ok.

Geet went to colony's temple. As expected maan was there afterall it was their childhood habit.

Geet: Maan

Man was surprised

Maan: Hi Geet. I was just praying ki mujhe meri friend chahiye and you are here.

Geet: Maan, tum ne mujhe kaha tha ki tum mujhe best friend mante ho.

Maan: Haa.

Geet: Then prove it. Agar meri friendship chahiye to meri tin conditions manani padegi.

Maan : Yes I will.

Geet : Pehle hi haa sun to lo bad me decide karo.

Maan: Say.

Geet: Abhi me Jo song play karungi uspe dance karna hoga.

Geet plays song.

Maan dances very horrible.

Geet: tumhe nachna aata hi nahi

Maan: Tumne ye nhi kaha ki achha dance karna hai bas dance karne ke liye bola tha. Dusri shart?

Geet : Tum mujhe mere past ke bare me kuchh bhi nahi puchoge agar pucha to main tumhari meri pehchan khatm main tumse baat nahi karungi.

Maan: OK aur third.

Geet: Is condition ke bad tum samajh jaoge ki am selfish

Maan : Wo baad me decide karenge

Geet: Mujhe salsa sikhna hai. Hamare dance class me choreographer aa rahe hai. Par raat ko 8 baje. Papa ji ek hi condition pe ready hai ki koi mujhe receive aur drop kare.

Maan: To tum ye chahti ho ki main tumhe drop karu aur receive Karu.

Geet: But main tumhare sath kisi vehicle par nahi aungi neither bike nor your car . Tumhe walk karna hoga cause it's walking distance. You can take your time .

Maan: I agree.

Geet:Tum thik to ho ye. dosti bas ek selfish motive hai mera.

Maan: I know but main OK hun.

Geet: OK today 7:30 PM.

Maan: Can I be audience there?

Geet: OK. You can.

In evening

Maan arrived Geet's home

Rano saw him. Tried to remember

Rano: Aap....Maan

Maan: Yes aunty

Rano was so happy

Rano: suniye . Dekhiye kaun aaya hai.

Mohinder: Kaun hai rano

Maan: Mujhe bhul gaye uncle main maan.

Maan touched Rano and mohinder feet

Mohinder: Beta aap.Kab laute

Maan: Kal hi uncle?

Just then Geet come out of room.

Mohinder: Maine mana kiya Na

Maan: Main Geet ko class ke like le jaunga aur ghar drop kar dunga

Rano: Aapke parents ko para hai?

Maan: Yes unhe koi problem nhi hai.

Mohinder: ok

Geet: Lets go

They were walking together, Maan started to speak.

Maan: Hey Geet tum aise silent hi chalne wali ho kya? Kam se kam baat to kar sakte hai general

Geet: kya problem hai tumhari I can't waste my energy by talking.

Maan: Ok .

They reached class

Geet told Maan to sit.

Geet: Hi sir, I am Geet.

Veer: Call me Veer.

Geet: OK. Veer.

Veer: Let's start Geet

Veer started teaching Geet

Maan sat there

Maan was watching Geet's practice. She was not comfortable with close dancing

Veer: Geet I think tum comfortable nahi ho.

Geet: start again please. Am OK.

Veer: No Geet be comfortable or we can start from tomorrow

Geet: Itna close dance

Veer: I know tum classical dancer ho. Dheere dheere Sikh jaogi. You will be soon comfortable

Maan was observing her and thought " sirf dance kar rahi hai to bhi comfortable nahi hai. Aur Sab ne ek judgement karke use bol diya. She is characterless.

Just then

Veer: Can we start?

Veer told her to take position

Maan was watching them

Veer wrapped his hands around her waist. Geet felt uneasy but she composed herself.

Started following instructions

After sometime

Veer: You did well today

Geet: Thanks sir.

Veer : tum mujhe Veer bol sakti ho.

Geet: But

Veer: Geet just difference is you are classical dancer aur main western dancer hun

Geet: OK veer, Good night

Veer: Good night

Maan and Geet left

While walking

Maan: Geet tum itna uncomfortable kyun feel kar rahi ho. You dance very well

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Posted: 5 years ago
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interesting starting.......


something is dere hidden.....geet is just avoiding maan so dat no one tell anything to him.......dekhte hai age kya hota hai.........


loved it........

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Congrats on the OS!

Part 1

nice update... well written!

so Maan loves Geet.

oh Geet has a reputation.

she and Maan meet but she lays he condition

Maan takes her for the dance classes

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Congrats for new os. Nice start. Maan is back from USA. He went to meet his friends. He saw Geet but she ignored him.He met yash who told him that Geet ran away with some boy and now no one has good view about her. Geet wanted to learn salsa. Her father aloowed her if someone will pick and drop her. Geet met with Maan and made him agreed to pick and drop her to dance school.

Waiting for next.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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What happened exactly in the past? No one talks to Geet? Thats so unfair.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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congrats for os

interesting

maan n geet are childhood friends

but now geet is avoiding maan due to her past as maan come after years finishing his education.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting. Very none sided love looks like. Maan believes geet to be innocent of any wrong doing. He wants to know what happens to make her change

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice one ..

This was a different update geet in silence mode as of in trouble ...maan loves her then why didn't he confess ..hope so geet soon tell the truth

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Posted: 5 years ago
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please post Part 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
#10

Fascinating OS


Maan returns from USA and finds that Geet

broke her friendship with Yash

Maan on the other hand wanted to be friends again

with Geet

it almost seem like she is hurt that people called her characterless

Maan watching Geet dance and realizes she is so uncomfortable

dancing close to her instructor

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