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yasmeenali24
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Originally posted by: dhrastimaan
yasmeenali24
I saw what you write and I deleted it.
Please don't waste your time for writing this much long comment...
I saw what you write and I deleted it.
Please don't waste your time for writing this much long comment...
i am sorry if my comment hurt you
all I was trying to part 1 was great concept and amazing start
and i like enjoyed reading it
Thank u for pm.
I alreafy comment on blog.
Adi and Geet got opportunity to study in elites collage but all seeing them like dirt they also restrict them
But both brilliant students and on first day of first class teacher praise them fr their intelligence and it's irked to some students
Ahana disturb them and using spell to show them they were superior adi told to complain about them but this time Maan use his spell fr show them their place but Geet able to escape from his spell and spin him and Maan felt insulat and here start their enmity he not going to leave them in peace without taking revenge waiting fr magical nokh jhok of Maan Geet
Nice update
Arpita say new students adi and geet intro to all
Adi and geet orphans their talents make her here
Ahana jealous With geet
Ahana used her wand make geet feel
Adi say ahana I saw u used ur wand I complet to principle
Maan comes and used his wand make him hanging up in down
Geet say maan make him down but maan say no
Geet angry her cast a spell adi down
Waiting for next update
Part 2
A Magical and Action Filled Part
I just loved this Update
Maan's mother introduces both Adi and Geet
as the fortune students to study at such an elite college
but this made Maan annoyed that again poor orphans
will be studying with him and he even calls them dirt
Maan's parents are extremely wealthy , he is not spoilt but
pampered and thus made him think people that are not wealthy
are simply dirt , though its wrong but at the moment both
Geet and Adi are at a disadvantage , while Maan has the best of everything
its natural he will think Geet and Adi to be dirt .
Aahna is the one that broke the rule by using her wand to cast a spell
on Geet and when Adi comes to rescue her , its Maan that casts a spell
on Adi making Geet furious and in her anger it was Maan that was insulted
before his college mates and now he will surely get her back but worst
he is going to hate her and take some kind of revenge
I'm actually excited to see the war between Maan and Geet and to see
how will they firstly be attracted towards each other then fall for each other
Geet n adi gt selection in magical school
Ahana n maan played pranks in them
Geet stops maan uses her magic maan ego gt hurt wat will happen know this all started by tht ahana 😡hope adi n geet not got punished bcz of them geet seems to be powerful to control maan who is her senior n kniws more maggic well hope to get the ans soon
Thnks fr pw di update sooon
Part 2..
Superb update....
Adi and Geet are new students who got entry to this college of elites and arrogant.. and so called elites including Maan treating Geet and Adi just like dirt. College put some restrictions on Geet and Adi. As expected that bitch Aahna and Maan disturbed Geet and Adi bcoz they seems to be intelligent in their class and Adi told them that he will complaint to principal but Maan does magic on Adi and forced Geet to use her magic power, and she taught a good lesson to Maan and obviously he was very angry bcos of his insult in front of all.....
Thanks for the pm dear....
Waiting for next update.....
Nice update.
Adi and geet got the opportunity to study in elite school. They even made good impression by answering all the questions. Others are jealous and want to problem them. Nice geet broke the spell and maan fell down.
Of course this did not went well with him.
Hello Richa... update when you can... thanks
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