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Posted: 4 years ago

Part – 112

At Hoshiarpur….

Next day….

Maan is very happy and content after so many years of being alone….

He is just taking his time and enjoying every moment with his sweet family….

He doesn’t think about anything else at the moment…

Geet is also equally happy though she had not been anticipating this kind of a miracle…

She is now happy for Maan more than she is for herself or Aditi…

Whatever it may be, the two have been together like a tiny family and with someone like Dev around Aditi barely missed a father figure…

But whatever that may have been, only Geet knows the difference between a life without Maan and the life with Maan, not only for her but also for Aditi…

Maan is the one with whom she can exercise her rights as a daughter without any reservations….

Geet already knew that Aditi is missing a lot without Maan by her side as a father, for Geet knows how Maan has taken care of her like family and stood by her everytime when she needed the backup…

If he could do this for Geet, even as a stranger, what wouldn’t he do for his own daughter?

Geet was all the while mad just because she knows what Aditi has been missing, that pampering and overwhelming love that Geet had experienced with Maan… she regretted every day that passed without the love and care that Aditi deserved from her father…

Now Maan will give her double that love and care for sure…

Geet is thinking about what next….

She has spoken to Dev… fortunately the conversation was possible on the phone else Geet would not have had the guts to speak with Dev directly watching the emotions on his face…

She is still not ready to tell this to Gayathri whom she respects just like Ranno…

Geet should talk about this to Maan… how good it is to have Maan back, now Geet mees not face anything alone… it’s always better to have someone by your side…

Maan is also aware of the situation, he wanted to tell everything to Dev when he found out about Aditi…

But he didn’t think that he has any right to own Aditi just b’coz he is the biological father, he knew how Dev has fulfilled the responsibilities of a father in his absence…

Moreover he first wanted Geet to approve their reunion and accept him back in her life, only then he gets to own his daughter….

Maan also had a plan B if at this plan A failed…

He was on the idea to target Dev instead of Geet…. Maan always wished for Dev’s happiness and kneey that he deserves someone better than Geet…. Geet is forever Maan’s according to him… so, Geet is someone already taken…

Maan understands Dev’s love for Geet and in all these years it has only grown into this beautiful relationship of unconditional support and a true friendship that even Maan envies….

It’s really unfortunate that Geet had to undergo all this but she is very fortunate to get someone like Dev at the moment when she needed a friend desperately….

Maybe it all started as a normal love story for Dev, starting with a crush and turning into a passion that was crushed when he learnt about Geet’s wedding plans…

When he thought that everything is over and he started looking for a closure, a new, mirage like, hope of getting back his love emerged…

later the relationship matured over time after Aditi’s birth… now all that he wanted was to be a part of that family and give a official recognition to their family….

Maan knew that Geet was insane to announce their wedding, he knows that she was going to ruin whatever pure relationship she had with Dev with her foolish decision…

Maan was anyhow going to tell the truth to Dev, if Geet still didn’t understand the reality, and stop the wedding….

Maan wanted Dev to understand that it’s impossible for Geet to move on and Dev should get a life of his own and remain Geet’s friend forever….

Maan was going to tell Dev that his doors are always open for Geet and whether she accepts or not she is his family and he’ll keep waiting for her till eternity… he doesn’t want her to feel left alone at any point of time and she should always have the confidence that there is someone waiting for her in the end…

Maan had an idea that Pari being such an innocent girl, who has lost her love and is looking for that elusive love that has been snatched away from her unfairly deserves all the pure love that Dev is capable of providing…

Dev on the other hand needs someone who values his love the way he wants… not in the name of friendship or any other relationship….

Maan thought that they would make a perfect pair and so indirectly tried to set them up by sending them together back that day….

He was selfish for he wanted to be with Geet without Dev, that’s why he made a winning plan to send Dev with Pari while that will give him some time to be alone with Geet…

He had also hinted the return of his lover to Pari and he also told Pari that they are back together to save Pari from any unwanted disappointment…

Maan’s plan B was Dev’s marriage which would free Geet off her guilt of being ungrateful…. he wanted Dev to have a successful relationship this time for which he was looking for a girl who deserves all his love…

That’s when he thought of Pari…

Maan is the one who has been constantly asking Dev to take care of Pari in his absence…

He asked Dev to go and meet her at the hotel and bring her back to his house, Maan asked him to do it as a favor as he could not accompany Pari to Mumbai as planned earlier….

At first Dev thought that Maan deliberately stopped Geet from going with Dev but then he realised that Maan never identified himself as Geet’s past and was not jealous of Dev’s relationship with Geet, so much confidence Maan had in their relationship that he knew that no one can take his place in Geet’s life, only he can, else that place would remain vacant forever…..

The only time that Maan crossed his line was on that night when he was highly intoxicated and had no control over himself….

Dev is happy that by knowing the truth he has at last got closure with Geet….

Dev first thought that he is only helping Pari for Maan’s sake but then he started liking her company and wants to spend more time with her….

As things have changed a lot in these past few days Geet is thinking about how this would affect everyone else, specially Gayathri and Dadima….

How will the Khurana pariwaar receive Aditi? They all think of her as Dev’s daughter…. How will they react when they know that Aditi is Maan’s daughter and they had been kept away from the truth all these days even after Geet met Maan and came to Delhi and stayed with them….

Geet is thinking deeply when Maan and Aditi come back from their play…

Aditi: maa, maa, look what I have got

Aditi has got a small bouquet of flowers from the garden that she made with the help of “Aditi papa”, Maan…

Geet comes out of her thoughts and turns to look at Aditi…

Geet finds that she has been playing in the puddles and so her dress is dirty….

Geet: what were you doing Aditi? Haven’t I told you to stay away from the dirt and mud? Look what you have done with yourself?

Maan immediately understands that Geet is disturbed by something…

Maan lifts Aditi who stands there looking at her mother with disappointment and takes her closer to Geet…

Maan: look at the beautiful flowers Geet, Aditi got it specially for you, and she made this herself, nobody helped her, haina Aditi?

Maan holds Aditi in one hand and hugs Geet with the other to help her get out of her upsetting thoughts, whatever that might be….

Geet then realizes her mistake and takes the flowers form little Aditi with a smile…

Geet: that’s so lovely beta, I love it

Geet bends and kisses Aditi…

Maan: Geet, even I helped Aditi a lot in making this, haina darling?

Maan looks for his share of appreciation…

As he moves forward in anticipation of receiving it, Geet Pat’s his chin and lauds his efforts…

Geet: very good job Maan

Maan: that’s it?

Now Maan is disappointed…

Geet: chalo chalo, donno jaake nahaalo

Maan doesn’t want to leave her alone…

Maan: Geet, tum bhi chalo, yahan akhele beitke kya karogi?

Geet: mein dinner tayaar karti hoon

Maan: tum abhi hummare madat karo, phir hum tummare madat karenge

Maan forcefully takes her with them….

After dinner Geet puts Aditi to sleep…

Maan comes to see them…

Maan: Aditi kya kar rahi hai?

Geet: shshhh woh sogayi

Maan: sogayi?

Màan takes a close look at her… she is fast asleep….

Maan then hugs Geet from the back….

Maan: toh Geet, hum apne kamrein mein chalthe haina?

Geet: Maan, chodo mujhe, aaj mein Aditi ke saath hi rehna chahti hoon, aap jao, aur sojao

Maan: aur tum raat bar jaagthe rahoge kya?

Geet: aap kya baat kar rahe ho?

Maan puts his fingers on her lips…

Maan: chup, bilkul chup

Geet looks at him puzzled…

Maan: chalo mere saath

Maan takes her out to the hall…

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 110


Beautiful Update


Maan and Geet enjoying their time together

and yes he is grateful to the Pandemic

at least he got his Geet his Misty back


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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 111


Interesting Update


Dev finally accepts that he was the one that loved Geet

but it was one sided

and he has no grudges he now wants to move forward

while Pari is surprised that both Maan and Geet have been in love

with each other though they have been separated

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 112


Fantastic Update


Wow so it has been Maan match making for Dev and Pari

and now it seems that both Pari and Dev do like each others company

well that is already a good start

they just need to spend much more time together and get to know each other

yes Geet is right by been worried about what the entire Khurana family will

do or say about the fact that Aditi is Maan's daughter

Maan he knows Geet so well and knows that she is disturbed

hope she tells him her worry

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Geet is thinking how to break the news to Gayathri and dadima..

Waiting for next update..

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm

Part 112

Majestic update... superbly written

great seeing Maan and Geet happy

Maan is with his family and that is all that matters

Maan and Geet's thoughts well portrayed

so Maan had everything planned

of cos he wants Dev happy

Dev and Geet would never had been happy

liked how Maan sent Pari deliberately with Dev

he knew that they are perfect for each other

at least Dev likes Pari

can understand Geet's thoughts regarding Aditi

loved that Maan knew Geet was disturbed

nice that Maan made Geet realise what she did

ha ha Maan takes every opportunity

what has Maan planned?

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

112

great update

geet is thinking how will khurana's react after knowing that aditi is maan's daughter

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan never want geet and dev ruins their life by marrying each other

He knows geet doing blunder by announcing her and dev marriage he have many plan to stop this marriage

Now geet loving her time with maan she always want aditi to b with her father but afraid what maan family think afer knowing about aditi

Maan know by looking at her she's disturb so he want to talk to her

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Maan playing Cupid for dev and Pari

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part -113

Geet is astonished to see how Maan reads her mind so easily… .

Now she realizes what she has been missing….

It’s not just like anyone’s company for that matter, it’s MSK’s that she missed…

That MSK who has vouched for her happiness from the moment he saw her….

Maan: tum ye kya kya sochke kamakaam pareshaan hoti ho Geet?

Geet: mein kahan pareshaan hoon?

Geet doesn’t want to ruin Maan’s happiness, which he rightly deserves after all the wait, with her own worries…

Maan: mujhe patha hai ki tum teek nahi ho, kya hua Geet? Tum Dev ke barein mein soch rahi haina? Tum fikar mat karo Geet, mein kal hi Dev se baat kartha hoon

How well this man knows her?

Geet: nahi, woh toh meine kal hi Dev se baat karli

Maan: Dev ko bahut bhura laga hoga, issiliye tum pareshaan haina?

Geet: mujhe patha hai ki meine sabko kamakaam pareshaan kiya hai, par Dev toh bahut samajhdar hai, woh dhere dhere sab samajh jayega

Maan: phir tum kyun itna sochke apne app ko dukh pohanchati ho Geet? Mere hothe hue tumme koi bhi mushkil ko akhela samna nahi karna padega, aur mein itne din se tumme aaise udaas dekhne nahi par kush dekhne ke liye hi taras raha tha

Geet goes and hugs him tight…

Geet: I know Maan, mein abhi bahut kush hoon, bahut

Maan kisses her forehead…

Maan: I love you Geet, ab tum akhele nahi ho Geet

Geet: I love you too Maan

Maan: tuh bathao, kya soch rahi thi?

Geet: woh Dadima ko kaise bathayenge? Aur Gayatri maa ko mein kaise keh sakthi hoon ki mein wapas aapke saath jaana chahthi hoon?

Maan knows how difficult it would be for Geet to tell Gayathri ji…

Even Maan can’t just go and tell her that he wants his Geet back…..

Maan tightens his hug….

Maan: tum fikar mat karo Geet, hum sabko ye baat batha denge, aur kissi ko bhi isse koi problem nahi hogi, sab tumme kush dekhna hi chathe hai

Geet: kash aaisa hi hotha, par ye itna aasaan nahi hai Maan

Geet pauses and looks very much worried…

Maan: kya hua Geet? Mujhe bathao, mein hoon na, mein sab teek kar doonga Geet, tum bas mujhpe barosa karna, iss bar koi galti nahi hoga, par tum mujhe pehle bathao ki kya hua hai, mein ek aur galatfami ko bardaast nahi kar saktha hoon Geet

Geet can see how Maan is affected by her, how he is worried about them, he really can’t afford to stay far from them even if it’s for a day…

He is so concerned about her happiness that he can’t see her hurt even for a moment…

Geet: aaise koi baat nahi hai Maan

Maan: abhi bhi tumme mujhpe barosa nahi haina?

Geet: aap kaise baat karthe ho?

Geet goes and hugs him…

Geet: mein wapas jaane ki barein mein sochke pareshaan hoon Maan

Maan: mujhe bhi yahan se jaane ka mann hi nahi hai Geet, kya na hum aaise hi yahi settle hi jaye, sirf mein tum aur Aditi, kitna achcha hoga?

Geet: aap baat ko samjho Maan, mein Mumbai jaane ki baat kar rahi hoon, kal Gayathri maa se baat hui thi

Maan then remembers that Geet is still living with them…. They are like her family now…

Maan: par ab toh hum jaa nahi sakte na?

Geet: woh bahut pareshan hai, Aditi ko bar bar pooch rahe the, aur jaldi wapas aane ko bola hai, shadi ke intrezar kar rahe hai

Maan can’t believe it…

Maan: tumne kya kaha Geet?

Geet: woh

Geet struggles to say for the fear of hurting him…

Maan: bolo Geet

Geet: meine kaha ki hum jaldi wapas aayenge

Maan knows that she has only said what she had to… but still the thought of seperation terrifies him…

Maan doesn’t know what to say….

Geet: Maan, ab hum kya karenge?

Geet bhi ab Maan se dhoor nahi reh payegi….

Maan: sab kuch sahi hoga Geet, tum bas dekhthe rehna, ab tum dono meri zamendari hogaye ho, ab tum ye sare pareshaaniyan mujhpe chodo aur bas iss kushi ko bina koi dikkat ke apnalo, aakhir tum itne din se issi ka intezar kar rahe the na, ab uss kushi ko sweekar karne se kyun darthe ho Geet? Ye tummari haq hai, ab se Aditi sirf tummari zindagi nahi, hummari zindagi hai, aur tum sirf meri ho Geet, MSK ki Geet, kissi aur ko koi haq nahi hai, samjhi tum?

Geet forgets all her woes, she just keeps admiring Maan… she is finally free of worries, she doesn’t have to fear anymore, for she has got Maan to accompany her for the rest of the journey…

Maan gently lifts her as she keeps staring into his eyes with relief and total surrender… she is finally returned to where she belongs, in his protective arms…

Maan takes her and makes her lie beside Aditi while he lies down beside her….

Geet turns and looks at Aditi…

Maan helps her cover with the quilt as he too slides inside it as he cuddles close to Geet….

Maan: good night Geet, ab sojao

Geet sleeps peacefully under his warmth…

Next day….

Geet is getting Aditi ready…

Maan comes in searching her…

Maan: Geet Geeet

He seems very happy….

Geet: Maan, kya baat hai? Aap toh bahut kush ho aaj, subha subha kya kush kabri milli hai?

Maan: meri kushi ki kya kami hai Geet? ab mein akhela nahi hoon, apne pariwar ke saath hoon, isse achcha kush kabri toh ho hi nahi

Geet: I know, par aaj zyada hi kush lag rahe ho

Maan: haan Geet, iss lockdown extend ho gaya

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan ab humme koi disturb nahi kar saktha

Maan lifts her and swirls around to share his joy…

Geet: Maan, aap kya kar rahe ho?

Aditi stands there and stares the both of them… she must be wondering who is the kid here?

Aditi doesn’t like Maan lifting her mother like that much…

Maan: mein bahut kush hoom Geet, ab mein tum aur Aditi saath hi rahenge

Geet: aap pagal ho gaue ho Maan, mujhe neeche utharo

Maan puts her down…

He lifts Aditi this time…

He throws her up and catches her back…

Aditi is happy to be playing the new game….

Maan: haan kushi se pagal hi gaya hoon

Geet: Maan, sambalke

Maan doesn’t hear her at all…. He is enjoying how Aditi laughs everytime he catches her….

Geet: sare duniya iss pandemic ko lekhe pareshaan hai aur ek aap hai jo kushiyan mana rahe ho

Maan: meri kushiyan abhi mujhe wapas milli hai, mein usse enjoy karna chahtha hoon, bas

Geet: woh toh hai, ab mei bhi aapko rokhna nahi chahthi

They have a family hug together…. Aditi doesn’t mind Maan hugging Geet now….

Maan needs them to stay here at least for Aditi to adjust herself in this new world of their’s ….

Maan would love to fly off to Canada with these two anytime soon but he can’t just do that for Geet would come only with the acceptance of the two families which is also the right thing to do….

After all dadi was the first one to recognize Maan’s love for Geet and propose their marriage, which is when Maan himself found out that he wants to spend the rest of his life with this girl only…

Gayathri on the other hand is still dreaming about her son’s wedding with Geet… they can’t just shatter her dreams in a moment, she is a hypertension patient and they have to slowly make her understand their position…

Maan is not in any hurry this time, he would like to take them back to Canada proudly with all respects and honor.. he wants everyone’s blessings and good wishes.. specially Dadi’s and Gayathri’s….

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