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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 109


Fabulous Update


Great that finally Geet gets the courage and tells Dev

everything about herself and Maan

and yes though its sad but he understood that she will never love him

while Pari is there and she wishes for someone like Dev

hope the two of them too find love in each other

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Posted: 4 years ago

So glad geet told dev first. And she was honest this time. Hope maan makes everything ok. Now par s as md deb should ge together too

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Posted: 4 years ago

Its dev right to know truth and geet knows she wronged him in involving in her and maan matter dev behaved like good gentleman and friend both try to honest with each other

Pari liked dev goodness and impressed with him

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Posted: 4 years ago

chalo atlast geet told dev the reality..........feeling bad fr dev..........but dev always knew na...........may be its good fr dev ...........now he can get his true love who is made fr him only n will love him whole heartedly...............


lovely update........


loved it............

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Dev getting to know about maaneet and the way he says to pari..

guess new love story starting as well

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Updated MG FF - Meine Pyaar Kiya...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5190347?pn=57#156182678

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part – 110

At Hoshiarpur…

Geet wakes Maan up in the evening with coffee…

Geet: good evening Maan

Geet had no time to take a bath in the morning with our playboy Khurana in action the whole day….

After Maan slept with Aditi, Geet went to take a shower and has returned with coffee in a hurry without even drying her hair properly…

She looks so beautiful and irresistible in that wet avatar…

Maan just keeps admiring her…

Geet: Maan, coffee?

Maan takes the coffe from her and keeps it aside…

Geet: Maan, aapko coffee nahi chahiye?

Maan nods his head… nahi…

Geet: aap ko chai chahiye?

Maan: nahi

Geet: aapko kya chahiye?

Maan catches hold of her and pulls her down…

Geet falls on him…

Maan hugs her tight… : mujhe tum hi chahiye Geet

Geet: Maan, chodo mujhe

Maan: nahi chod sakta Geet

Geet: ye aaj aap ko kya ho gaya?

Maan: tum jaanthi nahi ki mujhe kya ho gaya?

Geet looks at him and blushes… nahi jaanthi

Maan: tum kab se joot bolne lagi ho Geet

Geet: Maan, sharam nahi aathi aapko aaise apni beti ke samne peshaane ki

Maan: uss ko patha hona chahiye ki mama kitni lucky hai

Geet: achcha, mein lucky hoon toh aap kya bumper prize ho?

Maan: aaisa hi samjho Geet, paanch saal ki bakhi hai, jitna ho sake utna jaldhi wasool kardho Geet, patha nahi mera mood kab kaisa badal jaye?

Geet: aap ka mood jaise bhi ho mein usse teek karna jaanthi hoon

Maan: haan meine bhi dekha na, kal subha, bathroom mein

Geet: Maan, aap bahut chalak ban gaye ho

Maan: you lost another golden chance Geet

Geet: what chance?

Maan: you should have taken me along for the shower, then you would have had a better chance

Geet: Maan, chodo mujhe, mujhe Aditi ke liye dhoodh lana hai

Maan: she is still sleeping Geet, abhi hummare paas bahut time hai

Maan tightens his hug…

Geet: Aditi, dekho papa kya kar rahe hai

Maan: Geet, abhi tumme sharam nahi aati ki tum apni beti se aaise baatein kar rahi ho?

Geet: aap pagal ho gaye ho

Maan: chalo abhi tumme chod tha hoon

Aditi has got up and is looking at them…

Maan let’s her go…

Geet picks up Aditi and leaves..

Maan follows them with the coffee…

Maan: Geet, ye coffee toh tandi ho gayi hai

Geet: ye meri galti nahi hai

Maan: Geet, mujhe coffee peena hai

Geet: Maan, dekho ab mein Aditi ko sambaloon ya aapki seva karoon

Maan snatches the glass of milk from Geet…

Maan: aao beta, hum bahar jaake kabootar dekhte hai

Geet: iss waqt koi kabootar nahi aayega Maan

Maan: Geet, tum kitna samajhdar ho?

Geet: haina?

Maan: apne samajdhari apni paas hi rakho aur mere liye ek strong coffee banake aao

Geet: kya?

Maan: please Mishti

Maan pleads and Geet agrees…

Maan takes Aditi with him outside..

Geet joins them with the coffee and they spend the evening playing with Aditi…

Maan has to thank the pandemic for giving him a second chance and letting him enjoy whatever he had missed all these years….

After playing for a long time Aditi falls asleep soon that night…

It’s a beautiful full moon day and Geet wants to have a moonlit dinner after a long time…

Maan is happy to fulfil her wish….

There’s no fancy dinner as such but just Geet’s favourite Paneer katti roll and left over halwa for dessert…..

Geet keeps watching the moon…

Maan: Aaj chand ko pehli baar dekh rahi ho kya?

Geet: kuch aaisa hi hai, it’s been more than 5 years since I cared to look at the moon’s beauty, I’m always fascinated looking at the night sky specially on a full moon night, isn’t it so beautiful?

Maan: Not so beautiful as you Geet, my beautiful world starts with you and ends with you, I have been living in a dark lifeless world all these days

Geet: it’s so strange that suddenly the whole world looks wonderful and lovely

Geet looks at Maan and smiles…. She is really happy…

Maan: I’m happy that I could at last bring back that beautiful smile of yours Geet, I was feeling so guilty that I have stolen that from you and when I saw you without that smile I was determined to return it to you

Geet: though I was obviously very angry with you, there was not even a single day that I didn’t wish to see you again

Maan: when I got to know that Aditi is our child I understood that it’s only fair of you that you were really mad at me

Geet: I don’t even remember if I had actually fallen in love with you then, but I know that I have fallen madly in love with you this time, thanks for coming back and never giving up on me, thanks for making me fall for you

Maan: thanks for giving us a second chance Geet, I know nothing can separate us now

Geet: I love you Maan

Maan: tell me something that I don’t know Geet

Geet: Maaaaan?

Maan: just kidding

Geet starts to shiver as a cold wind blows…

Maan: chalthe hai Geet

Maan gets up while Geet is still sitting…

Maan: utjao Geet

Geet: mein nahi utoongi

Maan: tand lag jayega

Geet: aap mujhe lekhe jao, mein bhi dekhthi hoon ki aap kitna dhoor mujhe utaake le jaa sakthe ho?

Maan: Maan Singh Khurana ko challenge karthi hi

Geet laughs… haan

Maan lifts her up carried her down…

Geet puts her arms around his neck and keeps staring into his eyes…

Geet: there is something magical about these eyes Maan, whenever I look into them I forget myself and get lost in them

Maan: you should start writing dialogues for bollywood Geet

Geet: I really mean it Maan

Maan: I thinks it’s a very old dialogue

Geet: don’t spoil it Maan, I’m really in a very romantic mood

Maan: that I can see

Geet: aap ko kya lagtha? Mein aapko aasani se chod dhoongi?

Maan: toh tum kya karoge Geet?

Geet: mein toh paanch saal ki bakhi interest ke saath wasool karoongi aap se, samjhe app?

Maan: tum aaise baatein karthi toh mujhe bahut kuch hotha hai Geet

Geet smiles…

Maan hurries to the bedroom…. He can’t wait any longer… mahiiii….

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice romantic talk and both interested in fulfill five year gap

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Posted: 4 years ago

awesome update.........


loved it very much..............


atlast geet ne apni dil ki baat bata di.............

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 110

Incredible update.... well written

Loved Maan teasing Geet

great seeing them happy and content

awesome moments

at least they confessed

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago

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