MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 73

Part 103

A Lovely Update

Pari is back in Mumbai and Dev goes and brings her

to stay at the Khanna house

Dev is very kind , hope he finds someone that can truly love him

Pari too she needs someone that can accept her fully

Dev's mum seems surprised seeing Pari

Part 103

eloquent update..... superbly written

Dev and Pari make a perfect couple

seems like Dev is falling for Pari

liked that he took her to stay at his house

his mom was surprised seeing her

of cos Pari was nervous

so Dev knows Geet has not forgotten her love

hope Dev gets his happiness soon

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very nice update

Dev insist to take pari home and his mom too welcome her seeing her son happy

Dev knows geet don't love him hope dev get his true love

Nice update. Does Dev like Pari.

Part - 104

Geet thinks of ways to seduce a man and gets a clue from movies....

Mohini tried to seduce vishwamitra, haina?.....

Woh kaise karthe hai?...

Maan ke chakkar mein bechari Geet ko kya kya karna padta hai?...

Hot kapde, haina?.....

Geet is looking through her wardrobe as to what she should wear...

Geet comes across the dress that Maan got her the other day....

Geet thinks about what happened that day.....

Geet was arranging her dresses and Aditi's dresses seperately....

Maan has got her size so right but a couple of dresses he got for Aditi seem like a bit too big for her....

Geet takes those and thinks they are definitely not going to fit Aditi in the next couple of years too....

When Geet tries to put them along Aditi's dresses Maan who had just come stops her by holding her hand and taking it towards her cupboard...

Geet turns and looks at him strangely....

Maan just says... "This is for you Geet", without showing any expressions

Geet thinks he is trying to fool her...

Maan: those are strech tops Geet, they'll look good on you....

Geet: how do you know?

Maan: I can see you in these tops just by closing my eyes

Maan closes his eyes....

Maan: see, you look so sexy

Geet instantly looks herself in the mirror... She is looking normal only....

Maan: what? I can imagine you in which ever way I want, you can't stop my imaginations

Geet stares him.....

Maan keeps those tops along with her dresses....

Geet aaise chote chote kapde kabhi nahi pehenegi, aur abhi ye Geet ko fit bhi nahi honge....

Geet now gets an idea.... Shayad Maan'll get the clue when she wears one of the these.....

Geet looks at them to find which would fit her most.... Looking for the somewhat bigger one....

She chooses one denim shorts with pastel pink color top(that strech top) which is Maan's favourite color..

She thinks maybe she'll wear it that evening....

Geet wears it with much difficulty for its little tight for her....

She puts it on somehow and goes looking for Maan....

Maan is in his room....

Geet goes and knocks the door....

Maan: andar aao Geet

Maan ko patha hai ki yahan sirf ye donno hi hai, Geet ko knock karne ki koi zaroorat bhi nahi thi.....

Geet gets in and Maan is busy combing his hair.....

Maan looks at Geet's reflection on the mirror....

Maan can't take his eyes off her....

She looks so hot and happening...

Maan turns and moves towards her....

Geet is looking down not able to face him....

As Maan gets closer and closer Geet starts to hyper ventilate and she couldn't breathe properly for the top is too tight for her....

Maan: Geet, ye kya hai? Tumme abhi isse pehen ne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Maan tries to help her open her top buttons so that she could breathe easily....

Geet steps back and feels embarrassed for her foolishness....

Maan gets out of the room and locks the door...

Maan: Geet, get rid of them immediately, I'll get you another dress

Maman goes and gets her dress....

Maan comes back and knocks the door....

Maan is facing the other side and expects Geet to open a little so that he could give her the clothes....

But Geet opens it wide enough for him to get in....

Maan is surprised and finds out that Geet has changed into his t-shirt then....

Geet tries to get her dress when Maan is not ready to give it to her...

Geet thinks that Maan would demand her to give back his t-shirt and starts staring him already....

Geet: give it to me Maan, ye kaise mazaak hai?

Maan just catches hold of her and takes her to the mirror....

Geet looks into the mirror and Maan's t-shirt looks good on her...

Maan: why do you have to change Geet? You look great in my tee

Geet: hmm

Maan: I know you would like to wear those tops, that's why I got them for you, but Geet you have to loose a kilo or two for that, I think you can start taking evening walks too

Geet turns back and looks at him angrily....

Maan: don't worry Geet, I'll give you company

Geet is just scared of his company know.....

Maan: waise ab mere t-shirt hi tumme fit karthe hai, you can wear them if you wish

Geet takes a second look at herself in the mirror.....

Maan: but it doesn't mean that you can stay like this itself, I will love to see you in that top soon, I don't mind seeing you anyways

Maan keeps staring her as if he could see through her clothes....

Geet is again angry.... She is only faking it and Maan too knows that she enjoys his teasing as much as himself

Maan: I mean in any clothes or would it matter if you are even wearing something or not, not for me

Maan winks.....

Geet pushes him and goes out of his sight immediately....

Geet badly wants his warm hands to grab and hold her.....

What does he want her to do? Go and cling on to him 24*7.....

That's not going to happen, not even in his dreams....

Though Maan might be teasing her, he is maintaining a decent distance from her which is troubling her more and more.....

Ye Maan apne aapko kya samjhthe.... Yahan mein soch soch ke pagal ho rahi hoon aur woh toh aaise behave karthe jaise woh mujhe pehle bar dekh rahe hai aur mein unko galat samjhoongi agar woh mere paas aaye toh, mein kyun naraaz ho jaathi? Mein toh kab se taras rahi hoon aur inko toh mujhe aaise tadpakke aakhir kya miltha?

Geet is getting restless....

She keeps thinking of how to get out of this strange problem?

Aaise kissi ke saath bhi nahi hua hoga? Mein pehli ladhki hoon jisse ye sab karna padtha.....haina? Warna hamesha ladhke hi ladhkiyon ke peeche padthe hai....

Yahan toh sab kuch ulta hi ho raha hai.... Itne din ke baat milthe hai aur ek ladhki isse zyada kaise ghir sakthi? Taubha mein bhi kitni besharam ho gayi hoon....

Ab mein kaise uss chalaak Maan ko samjhaoon ....

Toh ye plan bhi flop ho gaya hai Geet....

Next day.... A new day and a new plan....

Geet is thinking about how to beat Maan....

She thinks of another idea while she is in her shower....

Kehthe haina ki achche se achche ideas shower mein hi milthe hai....

Geet grabs the towel and wraps it around....

Geet gets out of the washroom, quickly goes and opens the bedroom door and peeps out to find where Maan is....

Maan is nearby only playing with Aditi....

Geet them keeps the door wide open, gets back to her showers and keeps the washroom door also unlocked....

She then screams at the top of her voice.....

Geet: Maaaaaaaan

Maan comes running fearing that Geet might have slipped and hurt herself....

But Geet is enjoying her shower and as soon as Maan enters the washroom she goes and hugs him tight....

Maan is taken aback for a second but manages to remain cool and composed....

Maan: what's wrong Geet?

Geet: woh wahan ek cockroach hai

Maan knows her plans....

Maan: kahan Geet?

Maan too hugs her back and moves towards the shower so that he is also completely wet.....

It's hard for him to resist his urge but he is MSK....

Geet toh bigal jaathi.....

Maan holds her in his embrace for a few seconds and let's her enjoy the trailer.... Just the trailer....

Maan: ye cockroach nahi hai Geet

Maan has taken the investigation too seriously....

Geet: haan

Geet knows it already.....

Maan looks at her as if he is too innocent....

Geet: Maan, I am too scared of the roaches you know

Geet is waiting for his next move eagerly.....

Isse aage Geet kuch nahi kar sakti... Self respect naam ka bhi koi cheez hoti haina?

Maan: maybe the cockroach left seeing you scream

Geet: aapko abhi bhi sirf cockroach ki padhi hai

Maan smiles....

Maan: meine aaise kya kardhiya Geet?

Geet: sach mein Maan, ek bechari ladhki ko aaise tang karthe hue aapko sharam nahi aati?

Maan blinks as I'd he doesn't know anything about what Geet is saying....

Geet: aap bhool gaye ho ki mein ek ladhki hoon aur sharam naam ki koi cheez bhi hothi hai, aap besharam ho gaye ho jo mujhse aaise kaam karwa rahe ho

Maan: Geet, ye toh naainsaafi hai, mein yahan tummare madat karne aaya hoon aur tum kudh mujhe yahan bhulakke mere upar aaise jootha ilzaam lagathe ho, tum besharam ho

Maan scans her from top to bottom there by tickling her senses....

Geet splashes the water on him to try get his eyes off her....

Maan holds her hand and stops her...

Geet freezes.....

Maan wipes the water droplets off her lips and inches towards her....

Geet keeps staring him completely lost by his touch....

Maan gently pushed her aside to reach the tap....

Maan: Geet, I think the water is too hot, you may need a cold shower now

Maan turns off the hot water knob and leaves Geet disappointed....

Geet stands there under the water for it looks like she has to be content with this as of now.....

That night Maan is playing Aditi sitting on the bed when Geet comes after finishing her work in the kitchen....

Geet stands there for a while without disturbing them.....

It's a beautiful sight watching Maan becomes a kid when he is with Aditi....

Many a times Aditi dominates Maan so much that it's hard to tell who the parent is and whi the child is ...

Geet is very happy to see this Avatar of Maan.... She can't imagine how Maan would have pampered Aditi had he been there from her birth...

Geet just can't get over the fact that babaji has not only played with the lives of Maneet but also poor Aditi too...

Geet is happy that the family is reunited and that Maan is here to stay with them forever....

Maan is in good mood when he is with Aditi... This is the right time to try the next plan....

Geet goes and sits near Aditi, opposite to Maan....

Maan pretends as of he has not noticed her....

Geet gets annoyed by that..... She lifts Aditi and puts Aditi on her lap....

Ab toh Maan ko dekhna hi padega...

Geet: Aditi aap kya khel rahe ho? Mama bhi aapke saath khel sakthi na?

Aditi: haan mama, Aditi gives a doll to Geet....

Geet: Aditi aap akhele khelke bore ho rahe haina?

Aditi doesn't understand much....

Samajhne wala samajh jaatha toh teek hai....

Geet continues.....

Geet: aap nahi chathe ke aap ke saath khelne ke liye koi ho, bill aap ke jaisa ek chotu sa baby

Maan knows that Geet is indirectly conversing with him only.... Ab ye baat aage kahan jayega, ye toh Maan ko bhi patha hai, kitna purana idea hai, Geet kuch naye sochthi toh aur maza aatha....

Geet: aap ko boy baby chahiye ya girl baby?

Aditi: boy baby

Geet: kyun? Aap ko girl baby pasand nahi hai kya?

Aditi: mein girl baby hoon, boy baby nahi haina

Maan thinks that even Aditi is smarter than Geet.... Achcha hua Aditi got Geet's looks and Maan's brains.....

Geet: Aditi ko boy baby chahiye, suna aapne Maan?

Maan gets up and leaves all of a sudden....

Geet is worried that Màan got angry for no reason....

She was just trying to tell him that she is happy to be a part of Maan's life again....

What's wrong in that?

Geet puts Aditi to sleep and goes to see Maan in his room....

The door is open and Màan is sitting on the bed showing his back to Geet...

Geet gets near him....

Geet: Maan, kya hua? Aap teek toh haina?

Maan turns around and hugs Geet who is standing beside the bed in front of Maan....

Geet is confused but she realises that Maan has become a puddle of emotions....

Geet places her hands around his neck and gently runs her fingers through his hair to comfort him....

Maan is almost in tears.....

Geet has never seen Maan getting so senti...

She doesn't know what hurt him so much....

She was just playing along as they were just fooling around for fun....

Geet pulls his head closer and Maan too rest his head on her tummy and holds her tight....

Geet places her head over Maan's head still running her fingers into his hair slowly.....

Maan: I love you Geet

Geet: I love you too Maan

Maan: I missed you so much Geet

Geet: I know Maan, meine bhi aapko bahut miss kiya tha

Maan: I promise you that I would never leave you alone Geet

Geet: I won't let you go, aaisa kabhi sochna bhi mat

Maan kisses her navel and brings her down to the bed as he lies down on his back, Geet looses her balance and falls over him.....

Maan is holding her tight as her rolls her over to the other side and starts kissing her everywhere....

Geet doesn't fall behind and she picks up from there as she too jumps into action.....

Maneet are back together and are ready to take the rest of the journey in each other's company....

Geet has a victorious some int the end....

Maan: aaj mein bahut kush hoon Geet

Geet: mein bhi

Maan: do you know why I'm so happy Geet?

Geet: kyunki hum phir se saath hai, issiliye

Maan: woh bhi hai, par meri kushi ki wajha kuch aur hai

Geet: aap naraaz nahi hue?

Maan: what?

Geet: mujhe laga mere bathon se aap naraaz ho gaye ho, aur issiliye wahan se chale gaye

Maan laughs..... : You always misunderstand me Geet

Geet: Toh aaise achanak kyun chale gaye the?

Maan: I was so happy that I wanted to just hug you and kiss you and I don't know what else I would have done, Aditi was there and so my hands were tied, I thought it's better to leave for I couldn't have controlled myself

Geet: so my talks about another child worked pretty well, issiliye aap ko bhi mood aagaya?

Maan: ye baat toh nanis aur dadis karthe hai

Geet: aap kush toh hue na?

Maan: tumne laga tummare iss stupid baat se mein itna kush ho gaya tha?

Geet: phir ye sab kaise hua?

Maan: tumne Aditi se kya kaha tha?

Geet: wahi stupid baat, haina?

Maan: uske badh tumne kuch kaha Geet

Geet: uske badh aap chale gaye the

Maan: tumne Aditi se kaha...."Agar aap ko baby boy chahiye toh aap apne papa se kaho ki apne mama se pyaar se rahe, tabhi toh baby milega aapko"

Geet: haan, meine socha isse aap mere mann ki baat ko samajh jaoge

Maan: tumne pehle bar Aditi se mujhe papa kehke adress kiya tha Geet, tumne mujhe Aditi ka papa maanliya Geet, bas mein yahi sunne ke liye taras raha tha, ab isse zyada kushi mere liye kya ho sakthi?

Geet realises how Maan has been waiting patiently to get his rights as a father without getting angry with Geet for all the restrictions she imposed on him.....

She knows how badly he would have wanted to own his daughter....

Geet: mujhe maaf karoge na?

Maan hugs her and kisses her....

Maan: I love you Geet

Geet is so happy.... She hugs him back tight as if she wants to keep him for herself in that hug forever

Maan: you know what Geet? I did enjoy your nautanki so much, I thought I'll enjoy for a couple of more days, I really wanted to know what else you could do

Geet: aap bahut badmaash ho gaye ho

Maan: Geet, mein chahtha tha ki iss bar hummare rishtey ka status tum decide karo, I was just waiting for you to give the green signal, bas ek aankhon ka isare se hi ye kaam ho saktha tha, par tum ne tob mere baat ko galat samajh liya tha, ek bar meine tummare baat ko galat samajh liya tha aur ek bar tumne, we are even now, you can't keep blaming me anymore

Geet: what?

Maan: waise tumne bahut achche se koshish kiya tha, I loved all the drama, you nearly caught me in the washroom, you should have tried without the towel, shayad kuch hotha

Geet hits Maan.... Agle bar aap karo, without towel chahiye aapko?

Maan: mein toh tayaar hoon

thanks for the pm

Part 104

Phenomenal update... beautifully written

well Geet wants to seduce and tries all possible means

Maan certainly has immense control

glad that she has accepted her feelings and wants to move on with Maan

can understand Maan's emotions....

will Aditi to get to know Maan is her dad?

loved their heart to heart chat

fabulous moments

finally things are well between them

they are together

update soon

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lovely

finally both confess n open up in front of each other

maan told geet that he was waiting for green signal from geet

maan is happy that geet accept him as father of aditi

Lovely update ..

Continue soon..

Maan this time want her to take first step in their relation but he make hrr try many times its every time obvious to him but he teasing her and enjoying het dramas both finally confess